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    Hey, I gave "Blue Cave" a go yesterday, as well as some of your other tracks, (I kind of stuck to the hard tracks, I'm not great at extreams).

    Blue cave was a nice track man. My favorite one of yours that I played. I found the DL a tad bumpy in places but that could of easily just of been my lack of familiarity with the track.
    I liked the background decor in the cave. personally found the steel ramps distracted from the theme, but that's just me...
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    Thanks man

    Ya that´s right i notes this a little bit to late. -.-
    The steel ramps is wrong in the area, i think rock ramps would be better. -.-

    I think i build more of this track. the next track coming soon.
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    New track "SHOG" (Medium)
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    Nice little track Breity. I like the theme, your good at the cave type environments.. Personally I feel that it was a bit too short, but that's just me. I was just getting going then you hit the finish.
    Even so, I enjoyed the track.. I got the platinum and first place on my first run, woo! Ill see how long I can defend it lol.
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    Thanks, that was intended,
    But a few seconds, was better.
    This art of theme need a lot of material and memory.

    When i build too much, is the framerate to bad. That´s my problem. -.-
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    Originally Posted by Breity-one Go to original post
    Thanks, that was intended,
    But a few seconds, was better.
    This art of theme need a lot of material and memory.

    When i build too much, is the framerate to bad. That´s my problem. -.-
    I can appreciate that, I always like good detail and thought in track decor.
    The next track ill be uploading suffered from a similar problem. There was a ton of things I wanted to add to it, but had to leave out and cut because of the complexity due to the deco/theme....

    Happy building.
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    Hehe yeah thats a mind war, deco, and obstacles.
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    New Track "Dirty Job"
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    Great job on the new track Breity.. The theme was cool, and the DL is fun. I think this may be your best track so far. In my opinion..
    Keep it up man.

    I will be going back to improve my time, that last jump kept tripping me up.. darn you lol...
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    Yeah thanks.

    The last part is a little bit tricky.

    hehe Mission complied.
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