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    My Poem About The Creed

    Why can't I fly?
    I asked the priest.
    So God can lead you from the beast.

    Why can't I fly?
    I asked the captain.
    To restrain you from your course of action.

    Why can't I fly?
    I asked the the king.
    To prevent you from suffering

    Why can't I fly?
    I asked the Mentor.
    Don't worry young eagle,
    I will teach you how to soar
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    This is good don't know why it hasn't been commented on.

    Perhaps try to add some cool references into the games.
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    What do you mean by that? In addition to or into the poem?
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    I love me some poetry. Nice work
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    Actually, I kind of like how it doesn't directly reference the games. It easily fits in to the Assassins Creed series without becoming too cheesey about it.

    Nice job!
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    The old man on the mountain who seems to have all the answers.

    I really like it too. Thank you for sharing.
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