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    (xboxone) complex custom tracks

    Hi Guys, im here to show you my new Track and I also want use this Thread for all my other and upcoming Tracks.

    My newest Track is called : Laboratorium

    Take care and Have Fun and please let me know what you think about it!




    My older Tracks :

    Black aNd Red



    Ruins Vol I



    Woobadidum!

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    Xracer500's Avatar Member
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    Very well designed tracks!!!!!! I like all your tracks, but Laboratorium is my absolute favorite. I think that some of your tracks could benefit from a faster drivingline but in general these are quite incredible hands down amazing man
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    Thank you XRacer, yeah its also my favorite woobadidum and ruins vol1 were my first and second track without any technic oder special things..ok maybe a little.....blacknred and laboratorium was fun to create, and after blackandred some people here give me feedback and i tried to do this in Laboratorium...no lifts or waiting fo something and allowing the pit viper :P
    Thanks buddy for youre Feedback
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    Hey, thought your latest track deserved some feedback, think you did a great job.

    I like the theme and most of the obstacles, you are clearly very competent in the editor, well done.

    If I did have a few pieces of advice, they would be:
    1- at 0:21 I thought this obstacle disrupted the flow of what should be a speedrunnable (!) hard track;
    2-at 0:31 and 1:06 you have the rider going through a tunnel - personal preference perhaps but i never like the rider or driving line to be hidden;
    3-at 0:56 the rider has to wat on the moving platform, bit like a lift I never like to have to wait on a track as it kills the flow, may be personal preference again though;
    4-wow, I wonder if at 1:11 you might give some people a shock? didn't mind this flashing myself, but it is very powerful;
    5-camera change at 1:19, again many don't mind but I know a lot of people do not like strong cam changes mid track
    6-waiting again, at 1:50 you nudge the platform and wait for it to fall, not my kind of obstacle really, kills the flow.

    I thought you did a great job overall, and with some tweaks it would be even better, much of my suggestions are personal preference also, so ignore if you like.
    I was impressed with obstacles, theme, physics working well off the driving line, good job!
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    Hey mate, nice feedback and im very thankfull for this. Yes its a lot personal preferences you wrote down but its ok i like that and never would ignore this. I will remember youre words in my next track of course! Its hard to create a track that everyone likes but what can i say , there are always some things people dont like , im trying my best and i have to say that maybe im building tracks too much more then i like or i want to drive then other people...i dont like fast tracks, i like tracks with pauses or stops...but really Thanks for youre positive and negative Feedback


    I hope you understand what i mean...im a little confused if i used the right words to explain the part how i build...like i say im german :P
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    I completely agree with you: build what makes you happy, we all have different tastes and like I said it was a good track and I will definitely play your next
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    hey guys, im done with my next track i hope you enjoy and would be happy if you try it out, thx a lot

    The Track is called, Rustroad

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