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    (XBOXONE) compleckz Black aNd Red

    Hey Trials Community

    First I want to say Hi to everybody, im new here and want to show you what i have done
    Im from Germany, 30 Years Old and a Big Trials Fan.

    Now im Finished with my third Track and im happy to release it now. I spend a lot of Days in this Track an hope you like it. For me it was very hard to do some trials but i think its a good Track where you can also have Fun and not only get angry hehe Please let me know what you think about it and maybe you want to let me know what i can do better
    If you want also check my first and second Track

    My Gamertag : compleckz

    My New Track : Black aNd Red

    My First and Second Track : Woobadidum! & Ruins Vol I Fixed

    Take care and have Fun (sry for my english i dont write this language very ofthen)
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    morrillo's Avatar Senior Member
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    Hi,
    I played this briefly today so thought I would offer a little feedback:

    You are clearly competent in the editor, and have some nice obstacles.
    I have 2 issues, and both may be personal choice, but only having the Roach for a hard track seems odds/annoying to me, and also I personally thought all the "lifts" destroyed any flow you could build up on the track while you simply waited to be lifted up/down. Otherwise, some good decoration and obstacles.

    I will play your next track for sure.
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    Thx mate

    Yes...i played this track again and again and then i thought 1 lift also would be ok youre right, it maybe destroys a little the flow. Thanks for youre feedback

    Heres a little video

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    morrillo's Avatar Senior Member
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    Like I said, it's not a criticism just my personal taste...I don't like waiting around on a track for either lifts or doors to open. Like the obstacles and it's clear you can build, well done!
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    Very nice looking track, looks like it took a ton of time.
    Like morrillo said, you obviously know what you're doing with the editor. Just way too many lifts and mechanisms for my taste.
    Although lifts, automatic doors, etc look really cool, they destroy the flow of the track.
    And, you got to allow the pit viper! Can't stress that enough, especially for a hard track.
    But overall your track looks very cool, and ill definitely check out your future tracks
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    I agree with what they both stated previously. It is a cool looking track. However, the pit viper is heavily recommended.
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    Thx Guys

    im allready creating new track and i will not forget youre feedback , no lifts...i promise :P and of course the pit viper

    Could a moderator pls rename this Thread to (XBOXONE) compleckz Custom Trials ?
    Thx a lot
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    Im sorry for the doubleposting, Could a moderator pls rename this Thread to (XBOXONE) compleckz Custom Trials ?
    Thx a lot

    And delete this message
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