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(XBONE) Invasion 2420 - xDoc GreenThumb
Just uploaded this new track. Took a few weeks to complete so I'd appreciate it if you would check it out please. I think it's a lot of fun to play and looks pretty sweet.
http://youtu.be/xnZHwaLt9tk
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It looks cool man. However, I would reccommend making a track thread and combine all of your tracks into that one post. Instead of making a new thread every track. The thread would be called GreenThumb_874's tracks, or something like that. About the track, it is an improvement over the previous track, and the moving objects are cool and give a nice affect. But the track, in my opinion, looses alot of realisim when you are riding on floating platforms. Instead, I would have the platforms on skyscrapers. The driving line is more consistent, however, there are a decently large amount of shady parts that don't seem to flow too well. Like the parts where you go in the loop and you land before you finish going around the whole loop and you sometimes land on flat surfaces too much, instead going from one ramp to another. One more thing, I think the track is a bit too long. Most tracks, in my opinion, should be between 20 seconds and a min, unless it is a more scenic track. If it is your second published track, you are making progress. Keep on building. Remember to make a track thread though.
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Cheers
I take your point about the length and starting one single thread for my tracks. On the realism front, I think with a track about futuristic alien invasions you get a lot of poetic licence!