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    [PS4] Piratenippie's custom tracks, feedback appreciated!

    Hey everybody! PSN ID: Piratenippie (add me as a friend if you like!) Here's a few tracks I've worked on, please check 'em out and tell me what you think!

    Updated June 4th 2015 with Naturesphere:

    Naturesphere: Here's another track, I'm very happy with it. ~14 checkpoints, extreme difficulty



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    Shape Up: Just floating shapes, but I think it plays pretty well.

    (video removed to make room for other videos!)

    Frosty Failure: I'm mimicking the theme of Frost Bite (2nd to last extreme track), I really like the look of it and this was a good chance to practice adding flair to my tracks



    Rocky Failure: Here's a third I've finished!:

    (video removed to make room for other videos!)

    The Water Factory: Extreme diffuculty, not insane or anything:



    Derpy Derby: Extreme diffuculty, my first shot at a curved driving line with lots of the terrain tool



    Tricky Temple: tried using "welcome to the abyss" DLC parts and I'm pretty happy with the end result. Extreme diffuculty.



    FUNDOME: Extreme diffuculty, longest track I've done, awkward obstacles that I want you to feel are somewhat unique. Abstract floating stuff style but I think it looks interesting enough. (personally I think my best track). Please excuse my bad run of my own track:



    I text each of my checkpoints pretty rigorously to make sure each obstacle is exactly how I want it to be. Generally I aim for high hard or early extreme difficulty.

    Check' em out!
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    Hey!

    Still looking for feedback on these. I've been working on that snow track some more and am nearly done with it.
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    Shape Up seems nice, the color palette resembles the GameCube's lilac block on black background, and the driving line seems challenging but not unbearably so. Yet, your second track interests me far more, as I too am a fan of Frost Bite's aesthetic design. I believe the track is coming together well, albeit short at this stage of progress, keep up the good work.
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    morrillo's Avatar Senior Member
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    Shape Up: your obstacle placement/DL is really quite good, I enjoyed the ride. I personally like to have DL and Decor in a great track so that black background was a shame, didn't like that aspect. Personal opinion though obviously.

    Will certainly try your next release.
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    Thanks for the comments! I've finished that track:



    Please go search for it!
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    Glad to see you've followed through and completed Frosty Failure, although I'd say it's a success, the track has a clean look and appears challenging enough to stay interesting.
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    Not bad at all but I feel like the first half is way harder than the second half. I guess I prefer a track that slowly builds in difficulty but still enjoyed playing this nonetheless.
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    Here's a bump with another track I've been working on that isn't done yet

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    Here's a bump because Rocky Failure is uploaded:



    Please go check 'er out!
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    Rocky Failure was great! Nice, challenging driving line!
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