shakey claret - NEW TRACK - Container Yard mk5 (7b1t) | Forums

[Smeghead89]

sorry dude took longer then an hour but thats only because I was enjoying myself, your lines are very fun and I don't rly think you need much advice in that direction because you seem to have acquired a nice technique and eye for a good line already. I played Lap of the town, Redlynx Custom DLC, and Champion City which I really enjoyed, the lines are well thought out and a good challenge with nice flow. You have pretty good scenery in them too but a lot of your tracks ( I watched replays for some other tracks) have the same environment settings with the mid day blue sky and sun etc, try to mix it up a bit and take full advantage of the use of the environment editor. It takes some practice to master but if you can get familiar with all the things you can do with the environment settings it will enhance your tracks a lot. Try creating some weather, fog rain ect, and different times of day like dusk and dawn or a misty blue evening or something but create the colours and settings yourself don't use the default settings. Choose some good themes to work with too and this will rly make your tracks stand out from the rest, maybe try a horror theme or a futuristic theme or industrial etc, throw in some nice effects like fog, smoke, fire, dripping water etc, maybe make a dark track and light the line and certain areas up with pointlights can look effective, just try all sorts of different things to do with visuals and when you find something that works well throw it together with one of you sweet lines and you'll have a very nice track indeed.

oh and I think I noticed that the same music was set on a few tracks, try to remember to choose a fitting tune or set of tunes for each track ones that go with the theme. and also make sure to place supports to any objects that are raised from the ground, in Out of the cave you have some floating drivingline objects.

I rly enjoyed all the tracks I played mate and gave each 1 a good bit of time, keep up the good work

[shakeyclaret]

Thanks for the feedback Yeah the enviroment is something that I want to play about with, especially for my new track, im quite impatient so normally release it soon after the dl is done
I'll look into the music too, usually I just have it on random.
I appreciate you taking time to give me this feedback, negative feedback will always help me to improve my tracks overall,
Thanks again

[shakeyclaret]

Thanks also to Camzarcar, nice to chat to you this morning

[shakeyclaret]

New track out ppl, its a speed run and also a xmas track called The Secret Christmasyou will need to look for xmas if you really want it!
Positive and negative feedback welcome.
I hope you enjoy if you play

[xXdean09Xx]

nice track buddy

heres a vid http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Rx2XXiGKhKw

[shakeyclaret]

Thanks Deano

[Camzarcar]

Nice track shakey, I played it for 5 mins, I didn't find the xmas thingo, but I liked it, very good line for some fun speedrunning

[shakeyclaret]

Nice track shakey, I played it for 5 mins, I didn't find the xmas thingo, but I liked it, very good line for some fun speedrunning

Thanks mate, yeah speed running is my favorite
Im glad you didnt find the hidden areas, it means I hid them well (all 9 of them)

[shakeyclaret]

Thank you to everyone who took the time to play my track, sounds like some of you had fun finding all of the secrets
Nice run by Ikes, currently top on the 450, also a great run by Spinalfluid, the fastest on the phoenix(3rd)

[ozy]

Thank you to everyone who took the time to play my track

Thank you for building it mate,
Really nice line! I think I found all your secret rooms so now I can concentrate on climbing the LB
Awesome job...cheers