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    New track by xMotionSickness - Lost World

    Estimated 40 hour build. Please find it on Track Central.

    Feedback, good or bad, most appreciated.

    Have fun.
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    Re: New track by xMotionSickness - Hanged

    rly great driving line mate, when you hit all the flow right its very rewarding although i havent quite managed to pull off the end bit very well yet lol this has a great challenging line and i had fun trying for a good time. At the start there is a little light issue where it starts to get all big pixels for a second doesnt effect your riding at all but you could fix this by either removing the light that is causing it or just turning the intensity or the range down a little,

    very fast flowing track which deserves a lot more rates but hopefully in time mate, great work
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    Re: New track by xMotionSickness - Hanged

    Thanks Smeghead, your feedback is very much appreciated. It's funny but I don't recall the lighting issue, perhaps it varies slightly from console to console (or maybe I was focussing too hard on the driving line all 10,000 times I started from the beginning haha, hope it doesn't detract too much from the aesthetics of the track.

    1800 downloads but only 50 or so ratings, strange because I thought it was very easy to finish.
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    Re: New track by xMotionSickness - Hanged

    Loved the track but it could have done without the curved driving line at certain sections. It just makes it harder to set up for next obstacle. Also i thought the track was pretty lit so it wasnt necessary to activate the bike's headlight- this just completely blinds you from the bike during flipping.

    Wouldnt mind goin back tho, that is...if anyone beats my time.
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    Re: New track by xMotionSickness - Hanged

    Will play/rate after work, never heard/saw anything about this one for some reason.
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    Re: New track by xMotionSickness - Hanged

    @Motion, your turn.

    Really wish you would remake this driving line with no curves in it!
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    Re: New track by xMotionSickness - Hanged

    @ Retribution, you're on!

    That's some useful feedback too, thanks mate. I built the line around the map, I won't make that mistake in the future.
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    Re: New track by xMotionSickness - Hanged

    Originally Posted by Retribution
    @Motion, your turn.

    Really wish you would remake this driving line with no curves in it!
    Unless the track curves really sharply or to the right, I dont see how curves would be an issue tbh. But I'll look for this when I get on and see what its like.

    EDIT: Yep, those curves were awful I'm afraid! Also, I have no idea what time of day you were going for because the moon was out but the sky was blue. All of which means the lighting and atmosphere weren't executed very well imo.

    There were also several places where the track lagged which you may want to learn from for future tracks. Most of this was probaly cause by the grass variant you used I think.

    Smeg mentioned the light blocking at the start, this could have been prevented by turning off the CP lights and turning off/down the headlight too.

    But the general deco was quite nice and judging from better riders replays, the line is very good. Hope you take this feedback as constructive, I've been a bit fussy just to try and help you for future tracks.
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    Re: New track by xMotionSickness - Hanged

    Had a bit of fun with this one. The curves didn't bother me too much - i agree the track would be better with out them - there was one jump where the camera momentarily blocked my view of the landing, that was more bothersome to me. Nice track with those adjustments it would be even nicer.
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    Re: New track by xMotionSickness - Hanged

    Honestly, the curved DL killed it for me. I really like the line, but the curve made it unbearable. Maybe I'll come back to it.
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