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    ll ManOnFire ll -- hard version of filth released

    hi everyone if any of you have played my latest tracks could you post what you think of them here? will be greatly appreciated and it will help me become a better track creator in the future. if you are unfamiliar with my tracks i will post videos of my latest ones so that you can check them out here
    cheers!


    Track 1: Tainted
    Difficulty: Extreme
    Video
    Description: if you enter the soulKeeper your soul will be trapped for eternity.

    Track 2: Dragon`s Den
    Difficulty: hard
    Video
    Description: A dragon`s den usually has treasure in it... doesnt it?!?

    Track 3: Dracula`s Revenge V2
    Difficulty: extreme
    Video

    Track 4: Westwood Farm
    Difficulty: Medium
    Video
    Description: the owner of this Lumber Farm is a trials fan so he built this track to show it.

    Track 5: Underworld
    Difficuly: medium
    Video
    Description: the underworld. year 3000, population 5k decreasing, 6 years after the great nuclear meltdown

    Track 6: Plagued
    Difficulty: easy/hard
    video
    Description: a deadly plague has consumed this murky old woods..

    Track 7: Tainted 2 "ZanWrath`s Throne"
    Difficulty: easy/Extreme
    Video: not available.
    Description: a grand track, fit only for the persian king zanwrath and his intelligent lizard guardian.#

    Track 8: Rottingwood Hill
    Difficuly: medium/hard
    video
    Description: a nice, tricky little track with a few multi-route DL objects and some nice western scenery.
    Also has a little "wheres wally" style search game where you have to find a the head on the "Wanted" sign found at the beginning of the track.

    Track 9: The Dark Days
    Difficulty: easy/Extreme
    video
    Description: This hellish place is home to "Zortex" the infamous King Black Dragon from my track "Dragon`s Den"
    i made the Medals extra easy so that less experienced riders could stand a chance. and pros and ninjas could go for the speed runs everyone is happy then!

    Track 10: Jungle Monkey
    Difficulty: medium/extreme
    Description: Deep in the jungly jungle the jungle monkeys jungle...
    my first bmx track.. thought id try something a little different. just a simple track with a tricky xtr DL. nothing too complicated or special.

    Track 11: Merky Woods (Remake of plagued)
    Difficulty: Medium/ Hard
    video
    Description: This woods was used by the germans in the war. Gas chambers can be found in caps here.

    Track 12: Damnation
    Difficulty: Medium/ Extreme
    Video: Not available.
    Description: A dark priest condemned this holy place to burn for eternity; and so... Damnation begun.

    Track 13: Moonshine
    Difficulty : easy/Begginer
    Video: not available
    Description: A nice short and easy track; Complimented by some simple woody scenery..

    Track 14: the great fire 2
    Difficulty: hard/ Extreme
    Video:not available
    Description: not available

    track 15: Surreal
    Difficulty: easy extreme
    Video:
    Description: I woke up cold i the darkess.. how did i get there? was it a dream? it just.. felt so real.
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    LukeMSki's Avatar Senior Member
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    Re: ll ManOnFire ll Pure Trials Tracks

    You made Tainted right? If you did, I love that track, sick line and nice background details, no complaints. Haven't had a chance to check all of the others out yet.

    A tip to make your thread better, organize all your track something like this.

    Track 1 Difficulty Video
    Description

    Track 2 Difficulty Video
    Description
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    Re: ll ManOnFire ll Pure Trials Tracks

    I've really enjoyed your tracks, especially Tainted. After I saw that on the RedLynx Picks video a few weeks ago I always check out tracks with your name when I see them in the feeds and they've all been good. I love your environments and details and drive lines are quite fun as well. Great work.

    If I had to give some criticism I'd say you could maybe use some more variety in the look of your drive lines. It seems like you often use the same objects to create your line which can make it kind of boring. You usually make up for it with good variation in background but some more variation in drive line look could be nice too.
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    Re: ll ManOnFire ll Pure Trials Tracks

    Originally Posted by LukeMSki
    You made Tainted right? If you did, I love that track, sick line and nice background details, no complaints. Haven't had a chance to check all of the others out yet.

    A tip to make your thread better, organize all your track something like this.

    Track 1 Difficulty Video
    Description

    Track 2 Difficulty Video
    Description
    hi yeah i made Tainted Glad you enjoyed it! i will organise the videos as you instructed btw. but how do i post the videos??
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    Re: ll ManOnFire ll Pure Trials Tracks

    hi, thank you for playing my tracks. im Glad you enjoyed them and i will certainly work on using more variation of DL objects for future track! thnaks for being honest too.
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    Re: ll ManOnFire ll Pure Trials Tracks

    Originally Posted by ManOnFire
    Originally Posted by LukeMSki
    You made Tainted right? If you did, I love that track, sick line and nice background details, no complaints. Haven't had a chance to check all of the others out yet.

    A tip to make your thread better, organize all your track something like this.

    Track 1 Difficulty Video
    Description

    Track 2 Difficulty Video
    Description
    hi yeah i made Tainted Glad you enjoyed it! i will organise the videos as you instructed btw. but how do i post the videos??
    The best way to do it is like this: [code:j2h037og]Video[/code]
    So it would look like this: Video
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    Re: ll ManOnFire ll Pure Trials Tracks

    Originally Posted by LukeMSki
    Originally Posted by ManOnFire
    Originally Posted by LukeMSki
    You made Tainted right? If you did, I love that track, sick line and nice background details, no complaints. Haven't had a chance to check all of the others out yet.

    A tip to make your thread better, organize all your track something like this.

    Track 1 Difficulty Video
    Description

    Track 2 Difficulty Video
    Description
    hi yeah i made Tainted Glad you enjoyed it! i will organise the videos as you instructed btw. but how do i post the videos??
    The best way to do it is like this: [code:37vgdyxx]Video[/code]
    So it would look like this: Video
    okay done. did i do it right??
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    Re: ll ManOnFire ll Pure Trials Tracks

    I've edited your post so its done correctly. You should now be able to click edit and see how I did it so you can do it in future.
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    Re: ll ManOnFire ll Pure Trials Tracks

    Love your tracks mate especially your extremes,the atmospheres you create look sik
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    Morfyboy's Avatar Senior Member
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    Re: ll ManOnFire ll Pure Trials Tracks

    your tracks are very neat and tidy, with some great ideas..ive enjoyed them up to now..just dont rush man..your doing fine...im sure you will start to get feedback from now on about your tracks..
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