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    Toboe's Tracks: New track "Evidence"

    Hello everyone, would appreciate anyone riding/rating my track.

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    Difficulty: Hard
    Track: Evidence
    Release: 12/15/2012

    Thank you for any feedback you have on my track, I'd like to know what to improve on.
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    morrillo's Avatar Senior Member
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    Re: Toboe's Tracks: New track "Evidence"

    I liked the driving line/obstacles, it was well done. Better decor could have created a better atmosphere though. Also, the ending felt a little odd ducking between to finish.
    Overall a nice track. It is clear you can make a DL, try and up the decor maybe next time?
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    Re: Toboe's Tracks: New track "Evidence"

    Thank you. At the end I was trying to make it so you didn't just drive off, but needed to slowdown a little to drive down the ramp, or land going down it. I can see now after how it ended up a little clunky there. I felt the decor wasn't my strongest suit, so I'll try and improve on that and hopefully create a track with a better atmosphere next time.
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    Re: Toboe's Tracks: New track "Evidence"

    Yep I agree with morrillo on this one. The driveline is great! Very fun.. but the atmosphere and decor is very "meh". I'll definitely be playing this one again though to improve my time and upload a video at some point though.
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    Re: Toboe's Tracks: New track "Evidence"

    Originally Posted by Nytmair
    Yep I agree with morrillo on this one. The driveline is great! Very fun.. but the atmosphere and decor is very "meh". I'll definitely be playing this one again though to improve my time and upload a video at some point though.
    It does have that 'one more go' factor, I agree!
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    Re: Toboe's Tracks: New track "Evidence"

    Originally Posted by Nytmair
    Yep I agree with morrillo on this one. The driveline is great! Very fun.. but the atmosphere and decor is very "meh". I'll definitely be playing this one again though to improve my time and upload a video at some point though.
    "Meh" is a massive understatement. The decoration isn't "meh," it is non-existent. The first thing you need to do before you make a track is pick a theme. Even if its a really boring theme, such as a warehouse, its better than some floating concrete in the sky.
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    Re: Toboe's Tracks: New track "Evidence"

    Originally Posted by Nytmair
    Yep I agree with morrillo on this one. The driveline is great! Very fun.. but the atmosphere and decor is very "meh". I'll definitely be playing this one again though to improve my time and upload a video at some point though.
    Thank you as well, and a video would be awesome and appreciated.

    I understand now I really should try and add in a theme/scenery/decoration, I'll definitely work on all the aspects if I make another track. I'm glad to hear the DL is enjoyed and alright.
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