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[rlmergeuser]

Hey,
I published my 2nd track just a few hours ago and was curious to see what people thought?
Track name - HydroFiltration
My Gamertag: Dr iNCOGNEETO

[rlmergeuser]

Sorry i forgot to mention a description.
This tracks theme is a water treatment filtration facility and a dam, you ride through the main area in the facility, and end up on top of the dam. The end of the track is a sewage system that has small jumps and water to slow you down

[luthanick]

Nice track. Had a fun line to it and some good decoration with a theme. Some small things that bugged me were the occasional random objects on the driving line (objects that seemed out of place random) I'll run it again later and try to give some better feedback.

[rlmergeuser]

Thank you. i appreciate you trying the track and letting me know about some of the issues. I cant fix them but i want to know so for future tracks i dont make the same mistake

[luthanick]

Hey man, Just had a long session on your track with Buttcheekofdeth. We both agree that the line is good. The piece with the ramp falling into place is a bit tricky sometimes, and the part at the second checkpoint where the two ramps are (one for a clean jump and one for a short jump) is unneeded. Having the curved ramp there I think would be better, it just looks bad seeing the ramp flash into place. I didn't notice all the details you put in the first few times, but there is a lot of nice stuff here. There is also quite a few not nice visuals though: the wood under the rider at the very start, the changing walls inside the first interior section, the copy and paste rock arch ,the z-fighting near the arch in the final tunnel, some floating/almost floating obstacles (the wooden pallet after the falling ramp), and some lag at the water explosion.
If you had cleaned up the visuals just a bit more it would be a great track. I thought it was 4 stars, but could have been 5 with polished visuals. I really enjoyed the driving line. It had a lot of options at certain points and was generally quite easy to find the line on. Overall the visuals were pretty good, but just stopped short for me. Get some testers in to spot things that you overlook and your next one should be sweet. I'm always up for testing if you need.