ZeroFault - 7/1/2013 - "Velo City" | Forums

[ihazfaults]

Please check out my creations! Feedback is always welcomed. Thanks

Creator: ZeroFault

Velo City - Released 7/1/2013
Medium - Platinum @ 44 seconds - High Speed/Scenic/Realistic/Jumps
No video yet

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Thanks to vladiiiiiiii for the video!

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[Barrybarfly]

Tagging this so I remember to try it.

[Barrybarfly]

OK, this isnt a particularly good track tbh. There's little/no scenery and the obstacles seem more awkward than difficult or they are very easy. There's no consistency to them imo. It basically looked llike something that you threw together in a couple of mins/hours. I would say you need to take a LOT more time with your next track and make sure that it has more scenery and a better lline to it.

Sorry if this sounds harsh, but I'm trying to be constructive with what I have said.

[ihazfaults]

Thanks for trying it out man!

I appreciate the review and I see it as constructive criticism, not harsh at all!

[Barrybarfly]

Thanks for trying it out man!

I appreciate the review and I see it as constructive criticism, not harsh at all!

Oh good, thats how it was intended. Keep at it, my first few tracks were awful, but I've got a lot better after being criticised a lot and listening to it. So I just hope I've helped in some way.

[Retribution]

OK, this isnt a particularly good track tbh. There's little/no scenery and the obstacles seem more awkward than difficult or they are very easy. There's no consistency to them imo. It basically looked llike something that you threw together in a couple of mins/hours. I would say you need to take a LOT more time with your next track and make sure that it has more scenery and a better lline to it.

Beat me to it. My sentiments exactly when i played the track a few days ago. I played for 5 minutes just to try to beat ZeroFault's time but i couldnt bring myself to finish it.

[rlmergeuser]

I liked it. I thought the obstacles were fairly challenging, as hard as Hard should be, but yeah the scene was a little lacking. Overall I thought it was pretty good though.

[ihazfaults]

Amp, ya I was looking for your GT on the leaderboard and never saw it show up so I figured that is what happened!

Thanks Taz!

I thought it was fun at first (most likely because I made it) but the more I play it I realize it needed a lot more work to be considered good. Attention to detail is now my top priority!

[ihazfaults]

OP updated with newest track. Let me know what you guys think! Did I improve at all??

[emcee]

Just played 9 to 5 and thought it was pretty good...enjoyable line and made me want to play again. Wasnt mad keen on firehawk the riding line felt a bit choppy and was a little too minimalist for my taste. Keep building and sharing because you will improve no end mate!