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Feedback on my first two tracks.
just looking for feedback on my first two tracks. i am a complete newb to editing. giving it a go though. Just wanna make fun tracks. Any and all feedback welcomed. GT: Oxysmo add me as friend. I played trials HD alot...never made a single track. I am always up for a race!
Track 1: first track ever
Track 2: second track ever
Also I have been looking around the site...is there any threads on advance tutorials for editing?
thanks in advance!
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Re: Feedback on my first two tracks.
I went ahead and tried your tracks here is what i think...track one,too long imo...at two min mark i lost interest in the rest of the track, way too much open space between obstacles, jerky curves with driveline, seemed really random...no theme, jumps seemed to line up for the most part...track two, same problem as first.. too much space between obstacles, driveline was a lot more smooth this time, checkpoints were not spaced out properly, had a theme this time just not enough decor to make it interesting, track three, much better theme, not as much space between obstacles, bad camera...seemed to change right before i was about to hit a jump and throughout the climb up the volcano, physics didnt work correctly at bottom of mountain or at top, driveline seemed good, ran into some lag near top of volcano....well seems as if your getting better as time goes on, check out the tutorials for redlynx at youtube...good luck