Originally Posted by Blackbird56695
Hi, this is my first attempt at a track so i think im in need of some much needed criticism/tips for improvement for future maps.. thanks for your time guys..
Track name: Endure: 1 Tire
Creator:Blackbird56695
P.s. there a quite a few uploads of this just ignore the ones with no ratings on they where uploaded when i didnt understand the 22checkpoint limit....
Thanks again...
Hey, i tried your track - 2nd Place - anyway, it seems like to make it you just laid a random driving line all over the place without much attention, there are some ridiculous sharp bends with no warning, there are no driving lines on the dirt to give you an idea of where you're going to go, there is a stop sign and a taxi that clips the rider as he whips round a sharp bend, and my bike spazzed out a few times due to there being nowhere to properly land after a big jump. also the explosions that prevent you from seeing where you're going and caused horrible lag were pretty annoying, and the one part with the two vertical ramps that you have to land perfectly to have just enough speed to make it under the falling crap, if you don't land perfectly you just get crushed, seems very harsh for a medium track.
You look like you have got a good handle over the triggers and physics and what not, so i think you'll be able to improve, you just need to concentrate more on the design of the track and driving line, rather than just making a really long track and placing explosions everywhere.
Sorry if i sound quite harsh, but i think you could greatly improve if you're given the truth, compared to if i had of just said "yeah it's ok i guess".
My first track, 'The Island..." is pretty basic, and not very well laid out, but i improved, and i think you can too.
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