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Nice work hobs, looks good and rides well! 5* from me.
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I liked this track but had some issues with it. It flows nicely but it seems that with everyone and their grandma using ruin pieces for the majority of the track, it takes more for it to truly stand out. Maybe if you had played more with the lighting and camera effects, it would've felt more original. Also, I think it's near the end but there's a checkpoint floating in mid-air. These really bother me lol.
Still though, solid track
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5* like Ive given the majority of TEBC entries to push 'em up the feeds.
Pretty good feel and atmosphere, thought the line was rough around the edges, but still a 5* from me.
hey thanks guys for the feedback and the comments appreciate it. been playing a few of the tracks that have been built for the comp when i have had some time and everyone has made some cool stuff, im loving TC right now
Hey kalinius, I just read ur post again and didn't see that last thing about the checkpoint, that was overlooked by me, that's really **** I missed that, cheers for the comments mate
Somewhat contrived, some redeeming features such as atmosphere. The archaic theme was appropriately utilised without resorting to gimmicks. There were no inconsistencies within the general flow of the track. The ending however lacked impact and needed to be reworked. The establishment of the track's title opens the track up to ambiguity which in this case is a very positive aspect. The name of this track was fantastic and sold it to me.
hey guys, i appreciate everyone's feedback and comments, cheers i hope u all enjoyed the track and im keen to get working on the next one, cheers
Coming soon: the mewing, located in a secret underground laboratory, a uphill hard track
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great news, hope 'soon' is not too longOriginally Posted by hobs3Coming soon: the mewing, located in a secret underground laboratory, a uphill hard track
