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[rlmergeuser]

Hello! I was quiet pleased with my track A Grand Day Out, but I would like to know what other people think.

Thanks in advance,
Jef

GT: Jef Crisis
A Grand Day Out PNX
Trials
Medium
can't remember the date..

[Barrybarfly]

I'll lead off! If you fancy trying out 2 of my tracks I'd love to hear what you have to say.

GT: Barrybarfly
Track: Trials industry and Trials industry SX
Difficulty: Hard

Look forward to following this thread as well as Jon's! Thanks for offering to do this for the community!

Thanks for the kind words.
Trials Industry
Nice track this has a nice flowing line that I enjoyed a lot.
I'll be back to zero fault this one. Nice attention to detail in the background not to much but not bare either. I did notice that there was some flashing parts Due to pieces overlapping I believe. Maby attach the platforms to something they seemed like they were floating in the air at some points. Liked the little physics things you had on the bridge works well. I personally would have put less direction signs because I like to find my own way but that's personal.
All in all nice track with a good flow and nice to look at.
I'll say 3.75 but may change due to you being the first rating.
Trials Industry SX
Nice work changing this to a supercross track. The little changes to the line are good and i think it will be fun to race on. Did notice an additional flashing wall at the finish.
I'll finish this one when I get a chance to race it multiplayer and also see if it holds up to local multiplayer.
monsta bonza

Thanks man! Glad you liked it and had enough fun to want to replay it. The issue with the fire escape not always being attacthed to the buildings is simple to explain. In order to maintain a smooth line without sharp turns, it curves way earlier than you can tell before it gets to the railway line. Hence, the straight buildings get further away from it and I couldnt attatch the fire escapes after a certain point! lol I'll start to keep more of an eye out for flashing items and see if I can prevent them from cropping up in future tracks. Thanks again!

[Ojotango]

Oh, hey! Jon did a review of my latest track, but I wonder if you'd like to review my first?

GT: Ojotango
Track: Hitting it yard

As I say it was my first track, but I'd like to hear what you think of it. I labelled it as Extreme, but it's really just Hard with maybe 2 obstacles that are a bit more of a challenge. Also, I know I was really tight with medal times, and that's something I need to work on!

Thanks in advance!

[H3X23]

Massacre Mountain
Hard
H3X23
Thanks in advance

[IFTHISTHENTHAT]

Would appreciate anything you say about my track.

Gamertag: IFTHISTHENTHAT
Track Name: Subterranea

Thanks.

[rlmergeuser]

GT : EncreMission

Track : TRITANOCARROT

Ok
This track has a nice driving line that flows and the scenery feels good like I'm outside the old factory. Did notice it has some frame rate issues Maby due to lights and not setting scenery to scenery but this didn't take away from the rideability of the track. Had some flashing panels in walls, i think this is from them overlapping to much. Also two of the white pipes dont line up but i dont even know how i noticed that. I think this is probably a hard track with some of the obsticals that are faced. They seem a little harder than the ingame mediums. Probably an easy hard track in my opinion. The medel times seem a little easy on the track and maby lower faults a little as well but can't remember exactly what they were.
Can see sub 30 seconds on this track I'm going to have a crack tomorrow just to see if I can.
Give this a 3.5 but again this may change as you are the second.
monsta bonza

Thank you very much for this review .

[rlmergeuser]

Could you review my track??

GT: Offfspring
Track: Urdjungel
Difficulty: Extreme

Any feedback is apprecciated, i want to learn from my mistakes!

[rlmergeuser]

Hi dude you can take a look at my stuff if you want. Ive had a little feedback from some players and randoms but nothing actually constructive Thanks

(avoid Bandit rides again + rides again(fixed) neither work and will crash your xbox )

Hi
Just played Brick Breaker.
I was instantly drawn to this because I love the old arcades (im still trying to beat my dk and pacman goals). I think you did really well with this, it was fun tho the camera goes a bit weird sometimes maby you could move it back a little and focus it on a glue point in the middle of the board may work. And you need more boards maby something like thiswill work,a filter for when score =45 reset checkpoint or something like that I don't really have anything going I can check formulas on. I'm just trying to think of a way that is easy.
All in al this is a fun breakout clone.

[rlmergeuser]

Just uploaded my newest:

GT: psycho42069
Hot Boxin'
Trials
Extreme
5/11/12

Nice again. I like the theme with the boxes dropping doesent leave much room for error at all.
Good length of track took me 2min 8,with 16 faults choked on the last checkpoint, But there are 3 sub 1min on there so that's a good indication. Inside is nice only one bit of flashing on the ground and the final wall i noticed a panel. nice layout out. Then when we get outside things get a bit more difficult. This has good checkpoint placement. I feel there could be a little more in the background outside. I liked the cars driving past and in both directions too. And I noticed you put mounts on the bottom of all steel poles. Good detail there. Just feel it need something out side some parked cars or some seating maby but up to you.
Say this is a 4 star
Just need to keep an eye on the overlapping of stuff to stop flashing I know how much of a pain it can become myself trying to line stuff up right but we gotta do it
monsta bonza

[Morfyboy]

Check out UP THE CREEK plz by morfyboy..nice n fast.
http://youtu.be/jiuEOv3ruX8