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    Please try my track "Throat of the World"

    Gamertag: psycho42069
    "Throat of the World"
    Trials
    Extreme
    Scenic, themed, hillclimb

    I had to remove a few checkpoints to make it stop freezing at the finish line, so the beginning can be a bit daunting at first. Good players should have no problems until the later stages where you must climb the tallest peak in Skyrim, battling fierce winds on the way to High Hrothgar. Just watch out for the dragons!

    By the way feedback is welcome and wanted. This is actually my first ever attempt at a track, and I put a ton of time into making it the best I could. I really enjoyed it and would like tips on how to improve.

    Flaming also accepted!
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    Re: Please try my track "Throat of the World"

    Bump because I would like a to hear from someone who has completed. I have only recieved hate-mail from the ones who can't make it. I would like tips on how to make future tracks better.
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    Re: Please try my track "Throat of the World"

    Marked. Will try and leave feedback when I get home.
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    Re: Please try my track "Throat of the World"

    It is a cool track but too empty and too repetitive
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    Re: Please try my track "Throat of the World"

    Nice but too many steps. And that wind section doesn't seem possible on the pheonix. Ya gotta make sure every allowed bike can finish the track.
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    Re: Please try my track "Throat of the World"

    Very repetitive map... Also visually often irritating.. Btw. A little colour in some sections would not have hurten.

    @bobozilla I played the entire thing through with the phoenix. Wind section is super hard
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    Re: Please try my track "Throat of the World"

    Thanks for the feedback! Yeah it's SUPER tough at the end on the phoenix, but very challenging earlier for the scorpion. I made sure the phoenix could do it and it sucked! I only included the donkey so people could try....I havn't!

    As for the steps, it was kinda the overall theme, "Path of 10,000 steps" and all. I didn't want steel girders and ramps all over "Skyrim" so the rocks, pillars, and logs were about all I could think of to work with. Although I neglected that logic alltogether by leaving the buildings at the start!

    I used the cold filter to get the look of the snow right, but I guess that compromized the rest of the colors a bit.

    All in all I'm satisfied with my first effort at track building and hope to be making many more, shorter, tracks to enjoy!
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