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    Constructive Criticism?

    Hey guys, I would really appreciate it if you would watch my new episode I edited for a friend of mine. I ended up having to take it down from the original channel because of copyrighted music. However, I uploaded it to my personal channel just so it would not go to waste. It would be great if I could receive some constructive criticism to help better myself. Thanks guys!


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    Re: Constructive Criticism?

    Far too over-edited for my liking.
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    Happyflow's Avatar Senior Member
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    Re: Constructive Criticism?

    I don´t want to offend you but you should get better material than this for a montage.
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    Re: Constructive Criticism?

    Not bad... what i didn't like was the color hue change.. the orginal colors might be better? And it was bit dark it seemed.
    Too short... Id prob try and wait until you can get maybe 2-3 minutes of solid clips?
    Ending... ended really abruptly after the last clip and i was just like "is it over? or is there more?"

    Other than that, i thought it was pretty cool. Better clips than I could ever get myself!
    I hate the trick shots tho.. but hey, thats just my preferemce
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    Re: Constructive Criticism?

    I thought it was pretty good. Specially the start. Then it became dulled in the sense that it continued to glorify death and what looked like a very effective auto aim.
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    Re: Constructive Criticism?

    Originally Posted by Humba
    Then it became dulled in the sense that it continued to glorify death and what looked like a very effective auto aim.
    ...glorify death?

    Isn't that what any shooter game does, just about? moral***

    And no, the clips you saw weren't that hard to get. lol
    I can do these, and I know the player... he doesn't use any hacks or anything...
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