The Evolution of a Song [Feb. 16th - SONG COMPLETE!] | Forums

[rlmergeuser]

Amazing. Ye the first minute sounds like a bad 16-bit video game. That needs some spice. I'd put a very subtle hint of the crystals at the start, then the end will be a logical continuation of the start.

It's funny you said that, because my girlfriend had very similar feedback... I actually spent HOURS trying to "fix up" the intro by adding something that could be like "a hint of crystals", but anything I added just sounded strange and clashed with what was already there, so I would end up deleting it. I literally couldn't find anything that worked, so I left it alone...

Glad you enjoyed the rest of the song though!

[Colors_of_Life]

Amazing. Ye the first minute sounds like a bad 16-bit video game. That needs some spice. I'd put a very subtle hint of the crystals at the start, then the end will be a logical continuation of the start.

It's funny you said that, because my girlfriend had very similar feedback... I actually spent HOURS trying to "fix up" the intro by adding something that could be like "a hint of crystals", but anything I added just sounded strange and clashed with what was already there, so I would end up deleting it. I literally couldn't find anything that worked, so I left it alone...

Glad you enjoyed the rest of the song though!

[rlmergeuser]

The longer the work, the harder it is to refine it. Maybe trim the first minute. I too thought having a start with crystals would be hard, but when I give feedback I say the first things that Jump into my head.

[rlmergeuser]

Mal: Are you gonna get this up on iTunes? I wants it!