It's your best try yet Mike!
But I don't see the point of making a statement about the penalty for kidnapping. Presidents didn't exist in medieval times, also.
It's funny, if unrealistic, so... we're getting there.
I declare myself the winner of the competition.
I've found another rubbish statement at the beginning of a chapter. I open the door to the community for a second chance to be featured in my novel.
Let the light flow in!!
PS. The fantasy book in part is about war, oppression, sadness, escape, inspiration, horror, and GIRLS.
I released a book about a woman who experiences insight, love, overcoming oppression, light, kindness, confidence, and hope. People bought it for the pair of boobs on the cover....
