Could you give me some advise on my track (VIDEO) | Forums

[rlmergeuser]

Alright im kind of new to the editor but im getting better at it... anyways i want some feedback on my map (THIS IS MY FIRST MAP EVER MADE) so i just need feedback on the looks of it at the end... im going to make it look more destroyed n such but yeah tell me what you think

VIDEO - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-lwHL9YGkOY

[jhop420]

Visually, the track looks good, especially if it is your 1st track. I am impressed with the detail. However, the most important thing would be how the drive line feels and I can't tell from this vid how the rider will react to the enviroment, how obstacles flow, if there any obstructions in your field of view, ect. I suspect this drive line will be fine, it is just hard to tell by this vid.

[eH reH eH reH]

For the lazy peoples -



If this is really your first track, it's really impressive. However, you might want to post a video of you doing a 0 fault run on it. The driving line imo is what makes or breaks a track, so a run would be a good way to show that. The background/foreground surpasses anything I've made and I've spent countless hours in the editor, so I don't think you need help with that. The best thing to do would be getting some friends to test it for you. Just by looking at it there seems to be 2 routes. 1 for completing it and 1 for speed running it. It has the makings of a good track, but I wander at a couple parts if you'll hit your head on a fast run, because the roof is so low.

Edit: just noticed a third route, but do they run smoothly is the question.

[rlmergeuser]

Thanks for the feedback guys ill make a video as soon as i can... do u know where i can find a place that will teach me how to make a good driving line?

[RetiredRonin]

There isn't really a place to learn good driving lines. Just build and play it, if you like it, then other people will.

Don't get too caught up with the decorations at the expense of the driving line.