Hello Everyone. I'm RagingLoony and new to the Forum. I'm a BIG Trials HD fan so decided to get hooked up on the forum with some new tracks, and hopefully to share some of my own. I have made my first track entitled: Escape The Base, in which you do as the title said, escape from the base lol. the track itself is not one of the tracks that is fast paced, it is more of a timings track. I AM however making another track which should prove a great challenge to those of you who love a challenging track.
I'm creating this thread to get my track out there, but I would love it if people do get it then come back and leave me some constructive criticism on where I can improve and what they though of the track
Now, don't get me wrong, compared to most track creators my skills are... lacking... to say the least, this is my first track so don't expect anything fantastic or mesmerising but I think its decent enough to get posted here.
add my Gamertage RagingLoony and accompany it with a message just saying your looking to get my track so I no it isn't a random invite.
Please and thanks!
RagingLoony
Note: NO trolls or anything like that please. just looking for some constructive criticism and general comments.
Tracks:
1: RL- Escape The Base
2: coming soon.
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Alright mate, as a first effort I think you've done ok here. Looking forward to seeing what you do with the next one, more of a technical rideline'd be nice
Played your tracks and they need a lot of work the driving line needs tested more there are a lot of obsticles that aren't very fun and a repetitive play the in game tracks more too many blur glitches make sure to fix them it makes people like me not even want to play the track. Floating peices make sure u make it make sense give obsticles structure. Add more checkpoints work on your backgrounds last. And finally spend time in the editor the more time the better the tracks imo
well i asked for constructive criticism and in a sense i thank you for it. what i don't thank you for is that you go about being, in my opinion and i don't mean this to be offensive but, you say things like such a ***** at times, yes it is useful what you say (most of the time) but there is no need to go about, basically demoralizing and demeaning people that A: aren't as good at making tracks as yourself and B: are looking to better themselves by coming to the forum, posting up and asking around. i asked you nicely if you would try it, you did, you gave me feedback. thanks for that. but there was no need to message me saying "Terrible i cant even play them sorry". if you had come out with something like "played your tracks, didn't enjoy them myself but here is where you can improve..." i would be a bit more understand to the matter, but it just seems you go off with an 'Elite-st' attitude which, in my opinion, doesn't really help many people as it would just put them off trying again. its my first track using the editor and I'm new to it. i no it isn't a perfect track and is way off what people like skumbag, murdoc, yourself (the list goes on...) but i thought it was a decent try at it for a first go. yes i understand about the floating objects, BUT, i hit the object limit and couldn't find anything else that wasn't necessary to have in to take out to put more objects in so they aren't floating, but i will go back and re-edit the track to try and correct it. again, not trying to make an *** out of myself but a little consideration goes a long way. so thanks for the feedback, it is appreciated. thanks for your time.Originally Posted by oROTTENo
oh, and PS. that's not how i usually converse with people, as to me what i just said makes me sound like a bit of a **** lol, just thought i would see how you like it rofl. not being a nut rider, but don't get bent out of shape with what I've said, just my opinion, everyone's is different, that's just mine. will be looking forward to playing some more of your tracks when you have rotated/get round to re-adding people. please and thanks. lol
RagingLoony
