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Looking at the floor in the changing room... White Lightning, his eyes glistened with fear a tear drops to the floor... he seemed afraid of what was to happen. He could hear the chanting in the background, calling him. Their voices echoed in his head. He grabs his gloves and sighs. "Now is the time... to shine." Placing his gloves on he could see the sweat on his palms. One after another... then he saw his white helmet by the bench next to him places it on his head tightening the straps, he felt ready.
The crowd still chanting, he walks to the stage. The chants getting louder and louder, his heart pounding. He felt great feeling the challenge burning up inside of him. He came to the stage seeing all their faces all cheerful, going wild. The Trials Rejects by the side. Red Rocket, Blue Fox, Urban Cobra, Arctic Wolf, Purple Stane, Green Giant, Black Magic, Golden Phoenix, Pink Puma. All standing side by side, clapping their hands. White Lightning walked over to them. "Go on son!" saying Pink Puma, smiling back he couldn't help it, his visa still up, you could just see his teeth grinding together. "Show em who's boss, ok?" Urban Cobra patting on White Lightning's back. Blue Fox giving the thumbs up. White Lightning, nodding to them all. "I'll give it my all!" The crowd calming down... the anticipation is kicking in once again. White Lightning walked away. The Judge giving White Lightning a hand shake, "Good Luck!" he just nodded back. His heart racing as he recieved his bike, the White and Black Phoenix...
He closed his eyes, trying to forget the fear. Surrender was no option. He gets on his bike, Revving his engine up, he felt great... He was feeling better again. Everyone staring upon his glistening bike and clothing... The crowd jumping up and down shouting, the judge nods to White Lightning, "I'm ready." The Judge counting down... "3...2...1...Go!" He was off, to a brilliant start, up the ramp that laid before him, the 3 containers he clipped with his back tire bouncing over the 3 boxes afterwards. His heart racing as he struggled to control his bike for a split second.
Keeping the balance he was ready for the next obstical, back and forth manouvering over the wooden floorboards upto the racked wooden plank, he jumped over, racing ahead to the plywood over the stacked bombs. The Crowd shocked, surprised at his patience and determinaton. Urban Cobra gazing upon White Lightning on his bike... he was impressed by his control and skill. "Impressive." The red lights getting in White Lightning's eyes he glanced at the next object, knowing there was a fall he took a breather then was off again, jumping onto the planks of wood, hoping on them watching them smash beneath his tires, he made it across. A sigh of relief from the crowd, still knowing he wasn't finished they gripped the railing tight.
White Lightning revved his bike, ready to hop the tires as he saw fit... Pulling back and using his skills to hop the tires he makes it over, leaping down the boards below to hop the explosive barrel, he managed to get up easily. He was calm for now. Now before him was the scaffolding of boards stacked up. He engaged swiftly hoping the boards until he landing on a scaffolding plate with the board flicked up at a 45 degrees angle, a bit further along a massive drop with boards just barable to get your back tire on. He revved up, pulled back and leaped forward over the massive gap. Placing his bike on the wood he made it, barely... The Trials Rejects were holding hands, "He's gonna do it... please make it." Whimpering Pink Puma he held his head high in courage for White Lightning.
Into the next hell hole he confronted the ramp, slid down and road back up like it was nothing... over to the next big thing the hardest was now, he cracked his knuckles, he felt the presure now. Everyone chanting even more their voices echoing, he let the fear in for 5 seconds then it was gone... he opened his eyes. "Now!" he gave his war cry as he hopped the next load of ramps, flicking himself forward over the head over light onto the scaffolding again, glass panes was set right behind him with a platform below... he knew there wasn't much left to go through. He reversed back and span his bike backwards, the flip he landed perfectly, everyones faces gaped, they were stunned. He then road down the stairs and leapt the next gap before him, he was close he could taste it... his victory was so close now, the barrels laid ahead the fan cooling him down to his left... He set himself to hop the first barrel, then span himself round on the second, everyone turned away thinking he failed... His bike echoed on the boarding below.
The crowd turned around they saw him, giving the thumbs up, "He made it!!!! he made the landing!" Shouting Red Rocket, White Lightning kicked in his nitro for the uphill battle and crossed the finish line then falling off. All the Trials Rejects rushing towards his body laying there on the floor. "Oh my god is he ok?" Urban Cobra rushing towards White Lightning. He was laid the there laughing, saying "I've done it... I've done it... hahaha..." The Trials Rejects picked him up and took him over to the judge. The Judge clapped and said, "Quite the performance, only so many have done this... 1:39:410 was your time, placing you with a Platinum Medal Award..." The Judge placing the medal around his neck, everyone was cheering. The Trials Rejects took him to his dressing room, shattered they laid him down with a glass of water. He was done for now...
This is Diabolic...
Well I did it guys, 0 Faulted Diabolic.494th Place.
That is a very dramatic way to say you 0 faulted diabolic
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STOP QUOTOING LONG POSTS!
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It put me in so much pain, I was grinding it for 4 hours man... just to get 0 faults lol...
Felt like a story had to be made.
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nova that was epic beyond belief mayne!! huge congrats, plat on diabolic is a big step
Man i keep forgettingOriginally Posted by EuanSTOP QUOTOING LONG POSTS!
good job dude
Wow, that was very dramatic and inspiring
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i enjoyed that.
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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=F_7baOCYg-Q&ob=av2n
I Made It!
Good job!
And no your rider isn't okay he broke his neck i watched the Replay!
