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    zoidberg747's: Rollercoaster to hell w/ new PVR vid

    please delete me once you get all of my tracks if you want new ones just look here and message me and ill get you back on. If you want a certain map just message me or post here and ill put it up.

    Any feedback or advice is appreciated



    Blackout- Hard
    Dark map thats fairly challenging
    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vu1kbeKz_0g

    The River Styx- medium
    Map that resembles the river to hell
    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oONIKKZ2d3A

    Blue dream- beginner
    First attempt at alternate routes also my easiest map
    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gglOQU-4CoY

    Space race- another easy map thats in space
    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RJbyZONE-Ok

    KABOOM- hardest map no real theme to it
    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YWLJSwSxgIQ

    Look out!-Experimental map where i tried a couple things, pretty random
    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=R29P54Bufxk

    Incan Barrel Run- Map almost entirely made of barrels and all the decor is based off of buildings similar to incan design, also my hardest map. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tnqzESj5Hoo

    This is sparta-Easy map were you go past a couple of soldiers,

    Box trials- The idea is you ride through a warehouse were everything is made of boxes, not that much deco but that's the point

    Satan's toybox- A level of satan's toybox when he was a kid, also my hardest map so If you get frustrated easily I would suggest playing one of my easier maps.
    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZyPiCO1L83k

    Construct fail- easy map that is easy to beat harder to fast run, also cool fatality at the end http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0by-vDZO17M

    Natural escape- Easy short map that has you running through nature, very short but fun to speed run.
    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RnTHsKEqVpw

    Golden pipes- Harder map that has you riding across golden pipes might be fairly challenging
    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VyjwYotFbJg

    Star wars- Short map that resembles star wars it isn't perfect but its pretty fun and it looks okay, not sure if platinum is possible yet but it is still very fun. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uZjhtN144BA

    Matrix- Matrix themed map cameras arent great hopefully they dont mess up the map terribly. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tKcnjc5fCXM


    ULTIMATE WHEELIE- my first ninja-ninja lite track that has you using wheelies to get past obstacles.
    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MoxV_0ok_ck

    INSANE WHEELIE- Sequel to ultimate wheelie http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=02Ik_JWBPmE




    Park-walk through a park, with alligators and black bears http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Sk0Y0wJ2ZjI

    Overload-Does not compute http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=m8wP_YbuyMc



    EVIL WOOD- wood is so evil... especially when it ninja

    Nightmare crete-no more dreams http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RIddgXvUuFQ

    Trial by fire- burn baby burn http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=osxKC-1XKb0

    Rock n hop- ninja rock n drop http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=04fuHpZK76I

    Super high- youll be trippin on sunshine and puking rainbows http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Uo6iD1d_nhc

    motocross madness- realistic motocross http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZBeYyxtJdmM

    TF2- TF2 fun based map http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=blXYGFsyWsk

    Industrial hell- Industry devil http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FotqsBKJo5M

    Excitebike- trip down memory lane http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=a3X2uQCiatE

    The metal- cant kill the metal http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UaQ_De1nEH0

    weapon warehouse- not a place to take your kids http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JPoeerdmMOk

    Buzzkill- BZZZZZZ http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AXok0S6aqzE

    Metro- Run from the military through a city
    video soon.....

    Highway- run from the military on a highway
    video soon....

    KEGGERY- King of the water! awesome.....
    video soon...

    River styx ride- A fun time IN HELL
    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kWF_3JlyBa8

    Horror tracks
    H/H Zoidberg747 1- supernatural tribute http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VQwFkzSA0TA

    H/H Zoidberg747 2- ouch http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RIbT1FkTx4Y

    T2SE Remakes- The grill fantasy http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=87CEh1RmAbY

    Hill climbing tutorial http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UmA9KwllwuU

    Too many tires http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Gl4rEmWCnIM

    Dlc entry: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oqX_xI54Vfo



    Skill games:
    Target hunt:
    Skydiving- Target hunt map where you jump off a plane

    Flip hunter: Bounce machine- a room full of trampolines
    Spelunking- Down,Down,Down

    Wheelie: Caterpillar- your on a speeding caterpillar with explosives in front of you, what do you do...? You wheelie
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    QcChopper's Avatar Senior Member
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    Re: Cave-In

    I voted no sorry. Your track doesn't use much decoration at all and isn't very appealing visually, but the most obvious flaw IMO is the camera angle behind the rider, when I got to that point, it didn't take a minute for me to hit menu --> exit so I didn't see the track beyond this point. You'll find that most players will feel that way, this is a thing to avoid unless you don't put obstacles making it pretty much useless unless you need to show something at that angle, like briefly to enter a cavern or a monster's mouth for example or you can use it in the ending sequence for a dramatic effect.

    I would suggest reading the documentation available here:

    http://www.redlynxtrials.com/forum/v...hp?f=28&t=4225

    and right here (PDF).

    Then you might want to check out some of the entries posted right in this forum section to see what you are up against.
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    Re: Cave-In

    Yeah i've been getting the same feedback from other people so ya ill definitely cut down on the camera, i guess i might try to add decoration, I really appreciate this feedback thanks.
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    Re: Cave-In

    Oh I see where it says not to mess wiht the camera thats my bad, I guess i need to change it
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    Re: Cave-In

    Alright im working on it now I took the camera off most of it i just use it to enter and exit the caves and for the end so its not so frustrating, im also adding some decor but i don't think the map is ever going to be appealing visually because its a cave in. Once Again thanks for the feedback.
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    Re: Cave-In

    Vid of my new and improved track sorry for the sucky quality had to use a webcam and if its not clear at the end missiles come and blow you up http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9-24uPiA-s4

    Oh and if anyone can tell me how to post the video directly in the forum id really appreciate, thanks
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    QcChopper's Avatar Senior Member
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    Re: Cave-In



    Just click on one of the 3 youtube options just above the text window, a code will appear, just insert the youtube video identifier string into the code(the string can usually be found between the = and the & in the youtube URL or if there is no & just copy the string until the end of the line ) in this case the video identifier string is 9-24uPiA-s4
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    Re: Cave-In

    Thanks
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    Zoidberg747's custom maps

    Hey guys my gt is zoidberg747 i'm just going to put some links to my vids of my tracks. I'll just show the video for my dlc entry. just send me a friend request if you want to try one of em out, or send me a message.

    Blackout- Hard
    Dark map thats fairly challenging
    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vu1kbeKz_0g

    The River Styx- medium
    Map that resembles the river to hell
    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oONIKKZ2d3A

    Blue dream- beginner
    First attempt at alternate routes also my easiest map
    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gglOQU-4CoY

    Space race- another easy map thats in space
    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RJbyZONE-Ok

    KABOOM- hardest map no real theme to it
    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YWLJSwSxgIQ

    Look out!-Experimental map where i tried a couple things, pretty random
    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=R29P54Bufxk

    Incan Barrel Run- Map almost entirely made of barrels and all the decor is based off of buildings similar to incan design, also my hardest map. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tnqzESj5Hoo

    This is sparta-Easy map were you go past a couple of soldiers,

    Box trials- The idea is you ride through a warehouse were everything is made of boxes, not that much deco but that's the point

    Satan's toybox- A level of satan's toybox when he was a kid, also my hardest map so If you get frustrated easily I would suggest playing one of my easier maps.
    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZyPiCO1L83k

    Construct fail- easy map that is easy to beat harder to fast run, also cool fatality at the end http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0by-vDZO17M

    Natural escape- Easy short map that has you running through nature, very short but fun to speed run.
    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RnTHsKEqVpw

    Golden pipes- Harder map that has you riding across golden pipes might be fairly challenging
    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VyjwYotFbJg

    Star wars- Short map that resembles star wars it isn't perfect but its pretty fun and it looks okay, not sure if platinum is possible yet but it is still very fun. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uZjhtN144BA

    Matrix- Matrix themed map cameras arent great hopefully they dont mess up the map terribly. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tKcnjc5fCXM


    ULTIMATE WHEELIE- my first ninja-ninja lite track that has you using wheelies to get past obstacles.
    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MoxV_0ok_ck

    INSANE WHEELIE- Sequel to ultimate wheelie http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=02Ik_JWBPmE

    Skydiving- Target hunt map where you jump off a plane


    Park-walk through a park, with alligators and black bears http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Sk0Y0wJ2ZjI

    Overload-Does not compute http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=m8wP_YbuyMc



    EVIL WOOD- wood is so evil... especially when it ninja
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    Re: Zoidberg747's custom maps

    Heres my dlc entry:

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