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    Please write more! This story is AMAZING! I read all of it at once! From chapter one to nine!
    OMG WHAT HAPPENS NEXT?!?!?!?!?!?!?!
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    It's alright but why did you write such a long story. What was the point? Anywayzz continue cozz i want to read some more !!!

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    Cherry199818

    1) I wrote such a long story because I love to write.

    2)The point? So I can write to entertain people!
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  4. #44
    Continue Mikaela!
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    Originally posted by loveangel143:
    Me says yeah it is!
    Me says Mik's story is..
    Me LIKEY MIKS STORY!
    ME LOVES MIKS STORY!
    LOLZ!!
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    I just added chapter 10! READ IT!!
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    WAHH! you're going! I can't come with you cause I just came back from UbiWorld and Sapphire Island!! What's gOnna happen?
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    Omgz Mik.. I just added a chapter to my story! It goes along with yours! Here, read it!


    ~*~*~*~*~Chapter 13*~*~*~*~*~*~*

    I wake myself up and Fiona drives me To Pierre's, and I had a great breakfast. Fiona drives me to Jade Port. I see Mikaela.

    "Mik? I'm so sorry you had to leave. I'll be here for your Jade Idol speech." I say, patting her back.

    "Yeah, Mik. But I'm going with you." says Sal, with a grin.

    "I'd love to come, but I just went to Sapphire Island and UbiWorld and all..-" then my My-Link goes off. "Hold on, I gotta take this."

    "Hello?" I answer.

    "VERITY! YOUR BROTHER IS BACK FROM COLLEGE!" I recognize my mom's voice, and I can't believe my brother is back. (His name is GamerWizard on UbiWorld and here his name is Gamer) he was my older brother.

    "Mom? What about Gamer?"

    "We want you to see him again!! Come, come back at least for a week!"

    Oh no. "Heheha.. Sure.. C-c-coming t-t-tomorrow.." I said in an unsteady voice.*

    "Okay! Great.. Bye!"

    My mom hung up, and it was kinda good & bad news. Good news was, I got to see Mikaela! Bad news was.. Well.. I didn't really get along with my brother. He was always the smart one.

    "HEY! Mikaela! Guess what??? I'm going to visit my parents from UbiWorld tomorrow! We get to see eachother!! My brother came back from college." I said, kinda worried.
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  9. #49
    Pushing your story up!
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    Thanks Very! YOU ARE AWESOME SAUCE!! As UbiSue would say.
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