*Unbearable Light* ??? By Salacia | Forums

[Fireferaira]

AMAZING! Write more soon please!

[Fireferaira]

remember you promised one more chapter this week so write more!

[JustBeingMe]

Your writing is so beautiful!

[fabiona12]

And I'm jumping out of a building because I can't wait for more Not to rush you..........

[artsaboveall]

Thank you so much Aline!!! And OMG FIONA!!!!! DON'T JUMP OFF A BUILDING!!!!
Please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
UGH I don't know what to write for transitions anymore....
Any ideas? PLEASE? XD

[JustBeingMe]

I think you should start with Kylie and Will and Jace at the apartment. I miss Kylie and Will

[vampmagix]

Can you even consider my suggestion for Flora Reyes? pretty please?

[fabiona12]

Your the writer, your the thinker...

how bout, Jace gets attacked by a pack of hungry squirrels and......something happens. XD sorry, I am still thinking for my story and I can't think 2 at a time!


And your right, jumping off a building is boring, I'm a gonna jump off Mount Everest! See you when you write more

[camiliyah]

Me is in lovvvve with the last chapter! Oh! The song Stereo Hearts just came to mind!

My hearts a stereo,
it beats for you so listen close,
hear my thoughts.......

I love that song!
I love robots!
I love everything! (except for ketchup )


Anyway here are my thoughts on the last chapter!!

<span class="ev_code_BLUE">Serious talk:</span> I really think Paris and Jace are going somewhere! Even though they haven't met formally Jace seems really intrigued by her. Glit and Jace may just remain accquaintances, possibly friends. Their meeting was kind of, well, awkward ! Mik and Leo. -crickets chirp- I am literally speechless, and so was Mik . Poor Mickey! (Oooh!! I am going to start calling her that!) Salacia and Jace might have a little something going on! I don't know I am just jumping out on a limb here! Hurry and post another chapter otherwise I will have to meet Fiona on top of Mount Everest. That's a long climb.

[Mikaela-Rose]

MACE!!

JAKAELA!!!

Sorry.

LEO STINKS!

I NEVER GET SPEECHLESS WITH BOYS!

But I do like them, then 5 minutes later, leave 'em!