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<BLOCKQUOTE class="ip-ubbcode-quote"><div class="ip-ubbcode-quote-title">quote:</div><div class="ip-ubbcode-quote-content">Originally posted by Axe_Waylander:
A day late. I was out yesterday evening. But heres something I wrote with a valentines theme. Let me know what you'll think 
I couldn’t help but wonder if it’s The Lords intention
To make this girl my wife together for a life sentence
Before I saw this flower I smelt a roses fragrance
And when I turned I had fallen in love in an instance
Is this love… for I have never felt this way before
And every glimpse that I get I keep on wanting more
She walks by and catches me watching her in awe
She smiles as our eyes meet then she walks out the door
No I’m not gonna let love so easily pass me by
As I hurry after her like a fat kid after pie
I don’t usually roll like this but tonight my lifes on the line
And I’ll do anything to ensure that my love is mine
I rush out… I can’t see her but a roses scent is in the air
As I frantically look around to catch a glimpse of her hair
But I didn’t so I made my way back to the after party
To enquire around if anyone knew the name of the shorty
I can’t believe I met true love and lost her almost instantly
As I reminisce in the thoughts of what could have been
I feel like a shipwrecked matey whose just used his last flare
Or like a young kid whose just scuffed his new pair
I leave the bar to go home outside the scent is still in the air
Surely this can’t be as I look up and she’s standing there
Looking at me and smiling “I came back” is what she says
As I take a hold of her hand and plan it to always be this way
ShaN
(Please don't bite any of my stuff - thanks) </div></BLOCKQUOTE>
That is truly amazing my friend, many people will be delighted by it thankyou for sharing its wonderful words with us.
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<BLOCKQUOTE class="ip-ubbcode-quote"><div class="ip-ubbcode-quote-title">quote:</div><div class="ip-ubbcode-quote-content">Originally posted by Lankyleg:
That is truly amazing my friend, many people will be delighted by it thankyou for sharing its wordful words with us.
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Thanks alot for the positive feedback. If my words can make even a single person smile then it's purpose has been fulfilled
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i am so stupid, yesterday WAS valentine's after all
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hi
I M back Yavana,
First of all BELATED HAPPY BIRTHDAY
I m sorry i couldnt wish u on time any ways happy valentine day to all of you and specially for Roxy
yours
rocky
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c'mon man never lose hope. The purpose of valentine's day is to share and celebrate love, no matter you do it with your friend, family or lover.
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True words. You by chance not Valentine?)