1. #71
    Hey, why doesn't anyone comment on MY story! I am sad.
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  2. #72
    did u write more 2 ur story? if so i didnt c it
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  3. #73
    Chapter 11

    Say, say, say! What you want! But don’t play games, with my affections! You, you, you…..

    I moved my hand around my side table searching for my my-link. Finally finding it, I grab it and read the message even though I’m only half awake.

    Mom
    You have to come home for Ricky’s 6 birthday.

    I snap wide awake as soon as I am finished reading that. “Oh no!!” “What?” someone asks. “Ah!!” I say, alarmed, as I fall out of bed. “Sorry,” the person says as they reach their hand out. I look up. Standing over me is Mymy. “I….. I…...” I burst into tears. Mymy helps me up and sits me down in my comfy, purple, plush sofa. “What?” she asks again. “I have to m…..m…..” I burst into tears again. She comforts me until I can speak again. “Now what is it?” “I have to move.” She stares at me. “You’re kidding right?” “No.” I burst into tears for the third time that morning. I look up at her. She stared at my wall, tears pricking her eye. She was in as much pain as me. I knew it. Then all of a sudden I find her crying with me. This is the worst thing that could ever happen to me, I thought…..
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  4. #74
    Chapter 12

    I had texted everyone I knew, telling them of the bad news. Some even said that they would go with me. It was my private boat so I had no fees. I was happy some of my friends were coming along: Sal, Mymy, and Layla. “You guys don’t have to,” I said. “We wanna,” Sal insisted. That is just like her. “I will miss you four very much,” UbiLorelai told us. “We are gonna miss you!” we all said at once. We giggled. All the ubis were with us then. I knew I would miss them deeply.

    On the boat…..

    “Okay guys this is the bedroom hall,” I said as I opened the door. Inside is a hall of six bedrooms. Each one with a name written in glitter and the same color on the door: Pink Pad, Orange Bling, Yellow Diamond, Green Scene, Blue Stone, and Purple Sparkle. They looked into the hall with awe. On the walls were wavy, glittery murals with gems. On the ceiling were two crystal chandeliers. The carpet was plush and neon green. “Wow,” Lala said. “Okay. The side doors are the bunking rooms. The one at the end is my personal bedroom,” I informed them. “What’s in your personal bedroom?” Sal asked. “It’s amazing!” Mymy cried before I could even speak. “But we will talk about that later,” I said. “Right now we pick bunking buddies.” In the end, Sal buddied up with Layla and I buddied up with Mymy. “Okay pick your rooms!” “We want Purple Sparkle,” Lala told me. “Kay and Mymy and I have Pink Pad.”
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  5. #75
    Coolness! TELL ME WHAT HAPPENS WHAT HAPPENS! I DEMAND IT!!! Pleaseness?!?!?!?!
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  6. #76
    Chapter 13

    Beep! Beep! Beep! “Mmmmm,” I moaned as I woke up. “Come on,” mymy said. “Why don’t we get dressed.” “We can walk around the boat in our pjs,” I told her. “It’s my boat.” “Okay.” We walked over to Purple Sparkle and knocked on the door. “Just a minute!” we herd someone cry. “You don’t have to get dressed!” I shouted. “We can walk around in our pjs!” Sal opened the door and started to say something. Then she closed her mouth and smiled. “Oh yah,” she said after a few moments.” I smiled back at her. Soon Layla and Salacia both walked out in amazing pajamas. WE walked to the elevator and stepped inside. I pressed dining room and we were off. When we were in the dining room I sat at my seat and rang the bell. My friends just stood. “What are you guys waiting for?” I asked them. “Have a seat.” “Hello JaJa. What would you like today?” asked my waiter, Ken. “Hey Ken. Well, I would like chocolate chunk pancakes with sausage. What do u guys want?” “Um,” replied Sal. “I don’t know.” “Ken,” I said. He turned to me. “Get them some menus please.” “Okay.” He returned with my custom made menus. “Here you girls go,” he said while handing them out. “I want bacon and blueberry pancakes!” they said at the same time. We burst into a fit of giggles.

    After breakfast…..

    “Okay guys,” I said, putting down my fork. “The boat’s gonna dock soon so we need to get dressed. Follow me.” We got up and walked to the elevator. I pressed dressing room and when we arrived they looked at me oddly. “Why is there an eye scanner?” Layla asked. “Because I have expensive things in here and they have to be protected.” I replied, while it scanned my eye. The doors open and inside there was a lounge and a table with maps of my dressing room. I gave them each a map and said, “Alright guys. Let’s get dress.” We rushed off in different directions.

    At the dock…..

    “That was an awesome closet!!” Mymy exclaimed. “It’s nothing really,” I said, trying to remember the direction of my house. “You guys should see her house,” Mymy said. “It’s huge! Bigger than my family’s house.” I figured the way to our house and we started walking. Once we got there I heard someone shout, “Sissy!!” “Hi Charlotte!” I exclaimed. “Whoa! You must have grown a whole foot!” she giggled happily. “Guys this is my little sis Charlotte. Charlotte these are my friends, Salacia, Layla, and do you remember Mymy?” I asked. “I think so,” she replied. “How old is she?” Sal asked, smiling at how cute Charlotte looked. “Eight,” she replied. “Hey!” someone called. It was Amber. “Hey Amber! Come over here!” “Hey big sis!” she called, running toward us. “Hi Mymy.” “Hi!” “Amber this is Sal and Layla.” “Hi!” all three said at the same time. They smiled. “Who are they?” I asked pointing at the neighboring house. There were four boys outside playing football. “That’s Andrew and his friends. Andrew is the boy with light brown hair.” He saw us and said something to his friends. They stopped playing and stared. It made me feel uncomfortable. Andrew winked at me. I said, “Why don’t we go inside.”…..
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  7. #77
    Originally posted by lizi9955:
    Coolness! TELL ME WHAT HAPPENS WHAT HAPPENS! I DEMAND IT!!! Pleaseness?!?!?!?!
    wow! when i posted i didnt even pother checking if i had new comments! once i saw it was on page 6 i thought do i have new comments? i guess i do!!
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  8. #78
    Oooohhh! Looks like Andrew has a THANG for you, Jaja! Heehee! LOL! WRITE MORE! PLEASENESS!
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  9. #79
    heehee!! i totally will!!
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  10. #80
    MORE, JAJA! THIS IS AMAZING!
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