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WRITE WRITE WRITE! I CANT STAND THE SUSPENSE! WHERES SALACIA???????
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plz write more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! this is awesome Jaja!
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beautyqueen9129: 
Salcia is back! And the mystery will be continued shortly 
areyt5: Why thank you! And I will be writing more soon! 
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Chapter 26
I was excited. I couldn’t sleep. Today was the day I had a super cool fashion show! Aunella and I had been designing all week. Finally I fell asleep.
I saw myself at the fashion show. Aunella and my designs were being shown off by glamorous, gorgeous models. At the end everyone clapped and applauded. We were thrilled. All the time with spent designing the fashions had paid off! It was spectacular!
I woke up in bed, alarmed. I thought I had heard a noise from the living room. I heard it again. I walked silently, hardly breathing, toward the closet. Propped on wall next to the doorway was a bat. I picked it up carefully, edging my way to the living room. I heard rustling, as if they were in my desk. I peeked through the doorway and saw someone, at my desk, stealing papers from the drawer I keep important papers in. I tiptoed toward the person, hoping that I could catch it. I screamed at the person looked up, startled. I swung my bat and missed. The person dropped the papers and ran. I tore after him, wanted to put him or her in jail. I looked out the front door. I saw no one. I threw down my bat, walked to my bedroom, and hopped into bed. The next thing I knew I was getting woken up.
Beep! Beep! Beep! Beep! My horrible sounding alarm clock rang out, trying to get me up and ready.
“Shut up!” I cried, hoping the dumb thing wouldn’t keep on buzzing its horrifying beeps.
That will never happen. I got up, turned it off and walked to my kitchen, lazily making a piece of toast and some bacon. I. Hate. Mornings.
Right before I took my first bite of the morning breakfast, I heard the doorbell. Sighing, I got up to answer the door. There I found a letter:
You were lucky to find you precious Salacia, but this time you won’t be so lucky. Your precious Dani Willow has gone missing. Can you guess who took her? Ha ha ha ha ha!
I gasped, wondering if it was the intruder who came in my house last night. Who did this terrible thing? I thought. It must have been the person who took Salz. I was mad, upset, and fearful……
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OH
MEH
GOSH!!
I read the other chapters (Even though I procrastinated and didn't comment... SORRIES!)
But now I'm missing!
OH NOES!!
My Mom always tells me, if someone ever kidnapped me, they would bring me back. XD
1cent
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XD No problem! 
Sometimes I read your chapters and don't comment! Sorries!
XD And you never know what I will make happen! Ha ha ha ha ha! XD
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plz write more jaja you havent written in forever!
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XD Here you go all!
Chapter 26
While my emotions were running around like scared rats in a dungeon, Dani was walking around a palace…….
When Dani awoke she found herself lying on a canopy bed.
What am I doing here? She thought to herself, eyeing the fancy furniture in her room. Her room, filled with vibrant purples, blues, and pinks, had expensive things: new technology, very expensive furniture, and a large walk-in closet. She took a few steps to the closet’s threshold and stopped in amazement. Her closet was filled with loads of expensive (there’s that word again!) clothes: sapphire colored denim skirts and jeans, silk and satin blouses of all colors, faux fur coats, diamond tiaras, high heeled shoes, low heeled shoes, flats, sneakers, sandals, long gowns, and bubble vests. Against one wall, between two tall accessory shelves, stood a three drawer vanity with three connected mirrors and lights. She stared at them in awe, shook her head, and walked into the hallway, decorated in plush, thick carpet, wallpaper and glitter.
Wow, she thought. This is some hallway.
At the end of the hallway she found a set of stairs. Climbing down them, she thought about what she had seen so far.
“Fanciness”, she mumbled to herself. “Fanciness, glitter, high tech, lots of clothes. Where am I?”
At the end of the stairs she found another hall, with six doorways, but decorated in elegant items: A diamond chandelier, Persian rugs, and porcelain statues. She looked at the doorways and chose one. Crossing over the threshold, she found that she had entered the kitchen, which was filled with stainless steal appliances, granite countertops, elegant china dishes, a table with craved legs and sides and matching chairs.
Her eyes opened as wide and bowling balls as she scanned the elegant room. Suddenly she felt a hand rest on her shoulder. She looked up and met the eyes of a soft and sweet face of an elegant and beautiful woman. The woman smiled.
“Have a seat,” she said, walking towards the table. Dani inched her way towards the table until she was sitting down.
The woman smiled and said, “Call me Crystal.” Crystal made a bowl of cereal and gave it to Dani. Her stomach whined and growled but Dani pushed the bowl away for a few minutes. Then she pulled it toward her and started eating it. She was done before you could sing Yankee Doodle.
The woman just smiled and said, “I assume you are Dani Willow, the new girl in my castle.”
Dani’s mouth turned into a big ‘O’. “How do you know my name?” she asked. “And why am I here? And what is this place? And –“
“Patience,” Crystal said, still smiling. “One question at a time.”
Suddenly the door burst open and in walked a big muscular man carrying to pretty girls, who were unconscious. Dani gasped. The girls were Hermione and Mikaela!
The women frowned and said, “Do you have to be so rough with our children?”
Dani turned to face Crystal so fast that her hair whipped herself in the face. “Your children?” she squeaked.
The sweet woman looked at Dan and smiled. “Yes, my child. These are my children.”
“Hermione and Mikaela?” she cried. “Why are all three of us here?”
While the man walked the two girls up to their bedrooms, Crystal told her about why she was here. “You are going to learn how to be a princess. A princess with elegance and grace. Humility and posture. And you will learn it here.” She paused and waved her hand around her. “In Emerald Castle!”……….
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How to be a princess!!! 
YAY!!!! I love this Jaja!!!! WRITE MORE PLEASE!!!
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Ohh! I wanna read more!!!!!!!!!!! MOREZ! MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
