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    srry thx 2 my stupid intenet prtecer (which i hate more than a maskito and is wayyyyy peskier) its didnt post it when i click pos which i worked so hard n 4 u gus srry i hate. my. internet. protecter. system. I HATE IT!!!!!!!!!! (ps im on my mom's while m posting this right now)
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    Originally posted by sassyfashion:
    srry thx 2 my stupid intenet prtecer (which i hate more than a maskito and is wayyyyy peskier) its didnt post it when i click pos which i worked so hard n 4 u gus srry i hate. my. internet. protecter. system. I HATE IT!!!!!!!!!! (ps im on my mom's while m posting this right now)
    cAN U put me in there?
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    i can try..... anyways trying 2 rewrite stroy
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    That has happened to me SO many times before!!

    TIPS!

    1. If you're writing it straight onto the forum, don't answer other forum posts... it deletes your other one.

    2. Before you post, copy it, just in case the window gets all glitchy.

    3. If you copy it, don't click on ANYONE on the game. It copies their name onto your clipboard, so instead of your story, you get their name.

    4. If you're on a laptop (and you type like me) put a little cloth thing (cleaning cloth works great) ontop of the mouse pad so you don't accidently click anything you don't want to.

    5. Writing on Word is a good idea.



    Oh! And this is an awesome story! XD

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    I screamed and then blushed. People were straring at me so long I felt uncomfortable. I paid for the meal and walked outside with my friends right behind me. They looked as worried as I did.

    "The loud music must have been a distrraction so he-" I started.

    "Or she," Mymy interrupted.

    "Not very likely but maybe," I replied. "As I was saying. So that he or she could take Salz away without anyone noticing. We all had our eyes covered. And even if she screamed would wouldn't hear her cause our eyes were covered. Come on. We need to go to my house."

    At my house.......

    I opened the door, letting my friends close it, and went strait for my spy drawer. I grabbed the kits and placed them on my bed.

    "Choose a color," I said, picking up the pink backpack. My friends grabbed thier favorite colors and a few snacks for the search and we went outside.

    "Where do we go first?" Kiara asked.

    "Gardens," Mymy replied. "It's probaly the bestplace to look." And boy was she wrong. When we arrived at the Gardens it was like a ghost town. No one was in it. We thought.....

    "Let's start searching," Lala said.

    "Search for what?" someone asked from behind us.

    Our bodies started shaking as we slowly turned our heads behind us. There stood a man with a wicked grin.

    "AHHHHHHHHHHH!" we screamed as we turned to run. We never got the chance. He hit our heads and we blacked out.....................
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    AAAAAH! This is getting scary and SUSPENSEFUL! EEEEEEEPPPPP! Write more! I can't take the curiosity!!! Hehe...
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    OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG
    MOOOOOOREEEE
    Please
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    Chapter 23

    When I woke up I saw Dani’s bedroom. Now, I know I blacked out at the Gardens. So why was I here? I tried to sit up, groaned, and I laid back down. “Don’t sit up. You hit your head badly,” I heard someone say. I looked up and saw Dani looking at us worriedly.

    “What happened?” she asked. “Are you alright?”

    “I last I remember a strange man hit us on our heads after he asked, ‘Search for what?’.” I replied, feeling painful.

    “Well, what are you searching for?”

    “Oh my goodness! I almost forgot! Salz is missing!”

    Whaaaat?!" she screamed.

    “Yah!”

    I showed her the note and explained everything. Her face was as pale as snow and her eyes looked like they were gone fall out of her head.

    One I was done explaining she said, “I’ll help you search.”

    “Thanks,” I replied feeling more hopeful. “Maybe we will find her now that we have another person.”

    By now my friends were waking up and were excited that she was helping. I guess they had more hope too……….
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    YAYS! Now we're gonna start searching for Sal! I wonder what'll happen! Write more so we can find out! EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEPPPPPP!!!
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    Originally posted by Balletgrl:
    That has happened to me SO many times before!!

    TIPS!

    1. If you're writing it straight onto the forum, don't answer other forum posts... it deletes your other one.

    2. Before you post, copy it, just in case the window gets all glitchy.

    3. If you copy it, don't click on ANYONE on the game. It copies their name onto your clipboard, so instead of your story, you get their name.

    4. If you're on a laptop (and you type like me) put a little cloth thing (cleaning cloth works great) ontop of the mouse pad so you don't accidently click anything you don't want to.

    5. Writing on Word is a good idea.



    Oh! And this is an awesome story! XD


    That's what I do... I write it beforehand on Pages (The Apple writing program), then I save it as the name of my story, copy it, paste it... You know. Write now, I have a whole Pagesa document saved as "Outside the Lines" which has my whole story on it.
    And this is really good! Write more!
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