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    zardozid's Avatar Senior Member
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    I really hate to sound like an armchair film maker but I just figured out what was missing (for me)...

    One, their is no cold weather breath...actors breathing out mist/condensation.

    Two, in the aerial shots we see a low valley fog which disappears at the ground level shots...

    Three, flames around the airplane exhaust and maybe light clouds flying by the fighter (flying through)...

    If you over-lay a light fog/smoke or snow over the final shot it would tie together the final composite of animation and live action...

    Nice work...I'm paying attention (in a good way)

    I really respect people who try something creative.
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    Zardozid

    Thanks man for your positive input. If I ever make a "cold" movie again I will see to implement your suggestions.

    Your question on the budget: Besides some back drop cloths, old ww2 British grey coat and bits and pieces here and there I would say about $100 but I can use the stuff again so it is a kind of an investment. The man-hours are the real cost and I would say about 200 of them.

    I do appreciate your time to give me this feedback.
    Keep well!
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    Thanks for your hard work and sharing this with the community sir! Great movie! S!
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    Originally posted by biltongbru:
    Zardozid

    Thanks man for your positive input. If I ever make a "cold" movie again I will see to implement your suggestions.

    Your question on the budget: Besides some back drop cloths, old ww2 British grey coat and bits and pieces here and there I would say about $100 but I can use the stuff again so it is a kind of an investment. The man-hours are the real cost and I would say about 200 of them.

    I do appreciate your time to give me this feedback.
    Keep well!

    $100...that's inspirational.

    It really is a wonder what someone can do with a computer and some talent (these days).
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