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Here it is. IAD Episode 2. Sorry it took so long, and sorry it's not as long as the first one, but I hope you enjoy.
Episode 2
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Your destiny
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: Who are you?! Why were you glowing?!
: S-stay back!!
: I'm not going to hurt you, I just want to know why you-
All of a sudden, Ravior's eye's immediately shut as he let out a sigh and collapsed to the ground.
: ..........
The old man put his hands behind his back (his usual pose) and sighed at the pathetic sight. But he wasn't a cruel person, so he decided:
: (I guess I should take him back to the shelter. And the wolves will be out here soon. I'm sure they wouldn't hesitate to have some meat.)
Fifty seven minuets later......
Now, Ravior was in the old guy's home. But he wasn't in the guest room, he was in the lab.
: (Hmm...there doesn˜t seem to be anything wrong with him....was I just seeing things when he looked liked.........no....I know I saw him.....it was so real. And if that's the case, I need to be careful with this kid. He could be pretty dangerous at first. But, I'm sure I'll be able to teach him how to control himself before he turns ba-)
Before he could finish what he was thinking, Ravior awoke.
: W-where am I?
: Ehem! Good. You're awake. How're you feeling? Are you feeling any headache-
: Ugh.....my head hurts.....
The man's eyes widened.
: ......uh-oh
All of a sudden, Ravior began to glow again, and his shape began to change under the bright silhouette! Rising above the bed as it was happening-as his consciousness began to fade, and become someone else's......
And, when it finally ended. When that amazing, bright, and painful experience had finished, Ravior's appearance was what it was when he escaped the blast form the X Laser. He had A long, spiny, red thing growing out of his head. He had blue crystals on his back. His body was black and grey, with red, metallic lines going across the front of his body.
: ....so......this is him, the descendant to the Deity......Dark.
Ravior, or whoever was possessing him, glared at the old man. His large, blue eyes expressed the emotion of rage pretty well. He leaped off the bed, and landed in front of the man and growled profusely while staring at him.
: Huh. Looks like I'm going to have to put you back to sleep.
The old man swiftly raised his arm to where it was in a horizontal position and pointing at Ravior.
: .........
The end result........
: ......oh....hehe....s-...sorry about that......no hard feelings-
: ......ow.
: Hehe
After that amazing slap in the face, Ravior dashed out of the room, and soon out of the building, and into the forest.
As he was blowing across the thick forest at moderately fast speed, he quickly came across a wolf.
The large wolf roared at the unfrightened Ravior, and made a fierce leap at him.
But, Ravior still didn't show any signs of fear, only fast movement. He slashed his arm through the wolf's torso, thus cutting him in half. Then, he shot a laser through his eyes, and blew up the split wolf.
As the remains soon faded into thin air, Ravior began to laugh manically. Whatever was possessing him was happy to kill something.
: HAHAHAHAHA!!
But as he was laughing, a beam of paralysis came from behind and hit the crystals on his back.
Some one shot it at him from behind......it was the old man!
: Heh, now I know where to aim if you ever try that again.
The old man picked up Ravior while he was still in that form, but he changed back to normal in his arms pretty soon.
Back at the shelter.........
: Wake up, kid. Come on.
Ravior's eyes opened, and he awoke.
: ....what happened?
: You SF'ed.
: Huh?
: Get out of bed, and look at the computer, you'll see what I mean. I'll be in the kitchen getting some coffee.
The old man walked away, but before leaving the room, he turned around and said:
: Oh, by the way, my name is Ferago. Nice to meet you.
Ferago continued to the kitchen, closing the door behind him as he did.
: (......Ferago, eh? I don't even know how I got here. What happened to.....Welfort...)
Ravior jumped out of the bed, but he stumbled a little bit. His legs were tired.
: Ow....(eh, guess I should look at the computer like he told me to.)
: OK, let's see........
When Ravior saw the screen, only reading a couple of the words that were on the screen surprised him.
: ......is that what I looked like?!
He had to have an explanation for this.
: (I better go to the kitchen and ask that Ferago guy what this is all about!)
: I wonder if this door leads to the kitchen......(gah! I'm talking to myself!)
When he opened the door........
: .....woah.....
: Uh......excuse me?
: Huh? Oh! It's you. How are you feeling?
: OK.
: Good. Did you read what was on the screen?
: Uh, yeah?
: So, you now understand what happened?
: Not really.........
: Oh.....well, you're the descendant of the Deity Dark.
: .....come again?
: *sigh* follow me.
Ferago stepped out from behind the counter, and walked to the library, and Ravior followed.
While walking to the library, Ravior was surprised by scratched up some of the walls were. It was like hoards of wild dogs had come and dug their claws into the walls.
But when they made it to the library, he was even more surprised that there was only ONE book.
: .....this is your library?
: Yeah, I know what you're thinking. Why only one book? Well, a few months ago, a big group of wolves, like the one you killed-
: (....when did I kill a wolf?)
: -came in, and trashed this place. It wasn't the first time this happened, they attacked my home a few times before, but the only damage that was done was the walls getting scratched up. This time, they attacked this room.
: Why?
: Why? Cause they're crazy, Rabbid, animals. I mean, this is the Arcane Forest we're in right now. But, not to get off track, something very amazing happened. This one book_
Ferago took the book off the shelf_
: _was the only book that survived, and you wanna know why this is amazing?
Ravior nodded.
: I saw the wolves tear up this place with high ferocity, and every book was torn to shreds. But, this one book, lost every page in it, except for one. This one page, was untouched.
: .....wow.....so, what's so special about this page?
: .....it teaches about the prophecy of the Deity children.
: Who are they?
Ferago opened the book, and turned to the one page that survived.
: I'll read it to you. Now remember, this book is pretty old, so it might sound a little less intelligent than most newer books. But, here's what it says:
If you've read my previous book, you already know all about the Deities of Giga. Well, ALMOST all. One thing I didn't include in the previous book, was that these Deities had families. Yes, they all got married. Even the evil Dark and Nova got married to some one. And they had children. And their children had children. And their children had children. And so on. All of them were normal, and were very nice, run-of-the-mill, kids. Even Dark and Nova's children were normal, and weren't evil. But, it is said that the seventh generation of their children will be the descendants that have their power. For example: Venus' seventh generation son will have the power and soul of Venus inside of him. So, when this generation has come, it is also said that they will all find each other. Including, another being of great power and a normal person. They will all destroy a great and powerful evil that will be a threat of almost equal evil to what Dark and Nova themselves were. Only two of the descendants will have a child of their own, and one of those children will be the hero that will save the planet from an evil that will be revived in one that was good. One who will be betrayed by the civilization that he swore to protect. But, the one who is betrayed, might not ever make the threat that the new hero is destined to put to rest.
: That's all that's on the page.
: Wow, sounds like a cool story. But what does this have anything to do with what I saw on the computer?
: That image of you is what you looked like, and assuming from what you looked like, how you acted, the power you had, or hell, your LAST name, it's pretty safe to say that you're the descendant of Dark, one of the Deities.
: Then.....that means....I'm evil?
: No, no. It means you have an evil being inside of you. But, that evil being can be controlled, and in order to control it, you're going to have to defeat the evil fraction of him that is inside of you.
: How will I do that?
: .....I'll teach you how.
To be continued..........
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Cool chapter. Man, Ferago is lucky to survive th wolfs with his nice home.
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OK, until Episode 10 (which is pretty much already complete.) all the episodes are going to be some what short fillers, showing Ferago training Ravior how to use his powers. It’s going to be a little boring. But, bear with me here, I never really had much of a plot with these first few episodes in the first place. So, if you find this episode boring, don’t worry, it will get exciting again in future episodes.
So, seeing how easy it will be to make Episodes 4-9, and Episode 10 is more than halfway done, this will all be over pretty soon, and season 2 will come along. If you’ve already read the crappy original versions, you already know the premise of what’s going to happen once season 2 starts. That’s when this series really kicks off.
So. Sit back, relax, and happy reading.
Episode 3
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The training starts
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Ravior followed Ferago outside of the shelter, and onto a little platform, where he would teach him his first attack.
: So, how exactly are you going to teach me how to use these powers of mine? I thought it would be dangerous to transform into that….thing.
Ferago raised his finger in a wittingly way.
: Not at all! You’re completely safe. Trust me. My quarantine pills never fail. And as for your powers, the data collected from the computer showed all of the things you were capable of, (yeah, just go with it.) and I’ve read through them. You have quite an arsenal, I can tell ya that!
: OK, so, how am I going to transform?
: Just tell your body to.
: ….uh, ok?
Ravior closed his eyes, and kept saying in his mind “Transform me……transform me…….hello? TRANSFORM ME!”
Ravior’s legs quickly felt the urge to jump into the air (I’m just as confused as you are.) leaped into the air, and the transformation process began immediately!
: Ah, there we go.
: Wow….this feels different.
: It will, but you will get use to it. Now, first, try to fluctuate your hands in an open motion.
: OK.
: GAH! Don’t do it in my direction! Turn around!
: Oh, sorry.
: It’s OK. Now, do it.
: Alright…….
: Ah, well done. But, you can make it even more powerful. Tighten your knuckles a bit more.
: Hmm…..that came out looking a little weird.
: Yeah, you’re telling me.
: But, you did well. Try it a couple more times, though. Put more strain into your hands.
: OK…….
: ….awesome. 
: That was fantastic! Splendid job, Ravior!
: Thanks!
Well, that was Ravior’s training for the day. Ravior changed back to normal, and he and Ferago went back inside the shelter. They had dinner. …..OK, it was only Apricot Pie, but, still dinner. Ferago could make tons of stuff with his huge kitchen and food supply.
After dinner…….
: That was delicious! I’ve always loved Apricot Pie. For an old guy, you’re really good with food!
: Gee, you’re so kind. But, anyway, you have more training to do in the morning. So you better get to bed.
: Eh, fine. Where am I going to sleep?
: ………
: ……sigh…….I would be better off sleeping on a wet cave floor.
Despite the uncomfortable bed he had to sleep in, Ravior fell asleep relatively quickly. And in the night, his mind was filled with odd things……..
: …Ravior…….Ravior…….I see you……..hee hee hee………she will die…….and you can’t stop it…….you can’t……..
: Ah!
: ….w-what the hell?!
: ….do I have a fever?
Four hours later…….
: So, how did you sleep?
: I…..(Maybe I should keep that dream to myself…..) I had a nice rest. That bed isn’t too bad once you get use to it.
: Good.
: So, when am I going to start training again?
: Eh, no need to start right away.
: Hum, OK, what do we do in the meantime?
: How about we just talk about random stuff. That’s what I always use to do with my friends.
: Uh, OK…….what do you want to talk about?
: Hmm……how about why your arms are navy blue?
: Oh, it’s a trend. Their called Yigs. Most people wear them nowadays.
: So, are they like sleeves?
: Yeah, I guess.
: Ah…….hmm, you know, we should start training now.
: But I thought you said-
: Eh, forget what I said. Your training is pretty important.
: Um, OK.
To be continued………
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<BLOCKQUOTE class="ip-ubbcode-quote"><div class="ip-ubbcode-quote-title">quote:</div><div class="ip-ubbcode-quote-content">Originally posted by Mr.Dark:
You can PM me about it. </div></BLOCKQUOTE>
Your boring me... -_- Where's Mr. Dark? 
Hey...That background...That's from Megaman X!
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So, Episodes 4-10 are all going to be posted in one post. To be honest, I really want to get on with the story, and there really isn’t much to put in eps 4-7 other than some small dialogue and Ravior being trained. So, these episodes all make up for one slightly long ep. Out of eps 4-10, 9 and 10 are the only ones that have anything interesting in it.
Also beware of some crappy story telling. I’m not at my peak of telling stories with text, so……eh, onc’e I get to season 2, it’ll be alright.
P.S. This will be the only time I do this.
Episode 4
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Head Laser
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: Today, you’re going to learn how to shoot the Emerald Laser from your head.
: Emerald Laser, huh. How powerful is it?
: You’ll see once you unleash it. Now, concentrate all your power to your fore head.
: Ok~ay…..
: Good work.
: Hey, what can I say? I’m a good learner.
To be continued………
Episode 5
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A little practice
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A bunch of growling was heard in the distance. Ferago turned around to see that it was more wolves!
: Hey, look over there! Wolves!
: Want me to take care of them?
: Of course! I don’t want to clean up my house again. Besides, this will be good practice.
: But…..I don’t want to kill the wolves……
: I know what you’re thinking, but look: They aren’t real wolves. They’re dark energy that came from the forest’s trees.
: …um……
: Just do it already! They’re getting closer!
Ravior looked at the ground with a solemn face.
: *sigh* fine.
He charged for the wolves, ready to waste ‘em.
: There, that takes care of them.
: (Woah, he’s better than I thought. It didn’t even look like he was trying, and I barely even taught him how to shoot beam……maybe it’s Dark……)
To be continued…….
Episode 6
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How to make a Shield
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: What you are being trained to defeat is very powerful. Having only a good offence isn’t enough. You also need a good defense, and trust me, you’ll be needing it a lot. Not just in this upcoming battle, but in the many other battles you’ll be having in your life. Seeing that you are a Deity child.
: So this means I’ll be meeting the other Deity people some day? Like, will I be living with them?
: Yes. Probably when you’re an adult. I think.
: (Hmm…..at least I’ll have a family of some sort.) Let me ask you this: Are they nice?
: Beats me. I’ve never met them. I don’t even know what they look like. But it’ll be up to you and the others to work together to stop whatever evil that you’re said to one day stop.
: So is our victory a guarantee?
: No. There’s as much of a chance of failing as there is a victory.
: But what about the other stuff that the book said would happen to me and the other Deity people after we destroy the evil? If we fail, what will happen?
: Who knows. Probably something that isn’t good, I can promise you that. But let’s get back on track. To make a shield, focus some power into your arms, then hold them up.
: OK.
: (He’s already perfected it?)…uh, very good.
To be continued……..
Episode 7 (almost there)
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Learning how to fly
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: Probably one of the most important things you’ll have to learn is how to fly. A lot of the enemies you’ll face will most likely have this ability. It’s very easy, you just have to-
: Huh…..well, then can you shoot while flying? It’s not as easy as you might thi-
: (…….maybe I don’t need to train him? He looks to be use to the evil power inside of that body already…..very odd…..)
: (I guess I’m worrying too much. He’s just a strong kid, that’s all.) H-hey, Ravior, that’s enough for today, let’s get back into the house.
: Sure thing!
To be continued……..
Episode 8
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Be careful
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: Well, Ravior, I think your training is done.
: R-really?! Already?! Does that mean I can face…..whatever I’m supposed to fight…now?!
: Hold on a second, Ravior. I must warn you of something first….about Dark’s spirit being inside of you.
: What about it?
: You seem to be getting use to it unnaturally fast.
: How is it unnatural?
: Well…..it’s just that………it’s hard to explain, really…..I guess I’ll warn you about something else then.
: Lay it on me, I’m prepared to take on anything!
: ….after you weaken Dark, the spirit that’s inside of you, he will want to regain control over his power. You will have the ability to give some of it back to him, and that will increase your strength.
: Really?! How?! I should do that!
: No! You can’t let him.
: Huh? Why not?
: In order for him to increase your power, he would have to take a part of your own mind and body, and in doing so, would change your normal physical appearance and some other things about your genetics, be it mental or physical,
: Oh…..
: Although you would gain great strength, it would be dangerous to you. Plus, Dark would have more control over you, and believe me, that’s the last thing you want. Be prepared to be tempted by him. He’ll be asking you if he can increase your power a lot. He may even try to deceive you. Exaggerate things. You know, right? So never, under any circumstance, allow him to increase your power. Meaning whenever he asks, refuse. Got it?
: Uh…sure. I get it.
: ….anyway, now is the time to destroy his control over his power. To do this, you must get him out of your mind, so that you can break the control.
: Before you continue, why can I only destroy his control? Why not kill him completely?
: Because if you completely destroyed him, you would be destroyed too. Besides, it’s probably impossible to completely wipe him out anyway. He’s was un killable when he walked the planet, so now
that he’s a spirit he’s even more invincible, if that makes any sense. But you don’t need to worry about him once you break the control he has over his power. Just make sure you don’t let him have any of it back.
: Alright, gotcha.
: Now, to get a part of him out of your mind, you must use all of your might to unleash him, and it needs to be in an open area, which is where you must go. There’s a place in the forest that’s open enough. Here’s a map, use it to guide you to the spot. Understand?
: Very clearly.
: Also, be careful for whatever attacks you in the forest. I think only wolves are out there, though. It shouldn’t be too hard for you to handle.
: Alright, I understand.
: Oh, and……remember, Ravior, with God, you can do the impossible, see the invisible, break the unbreakable…………and touch the untouchable.
: Um….OK……?
: Good luck out there. May he watch over you.
: …..sure……
To be continued……..
Episode 9
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The Arcane Forest
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: (OK, let’s look at the map……huh…..just one mile north? This won’t take long.)
Area #1
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Arcane Forest
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Arcane Forest theme (listen to while reading): http://www.esnips.com/doc/a41c...RockmanX4-IntroStage
: Look at that sky……that moon……what serene beauty………*sigh*, I better continue. I’m pretty close to that spot. It should only take a couple more minuets.
: (A cave? I didn’t know there were caves in forests.)
: OK, this must be the spot………alright…….
: GRRRRRRRRAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!
: …………….
: ……OK……where is he?…….?………!
To be continued………..
Episode 10
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Dark VS. Puppet Dark
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Major Battle #1
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Evil Marionette, Puppet Dark
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Battle theme (listen to while reading): http://www.esnips.com/doc/bfbf...54c/RTRZ---23---Fake
: Gah!
: AAAAAAH!!!!
: …guh…..ugh…..I….have to….get up……before…he…..GAAAAAH!!!!
: ….peh, OK, time to rock!
: What the……I can absorb power into the crystals on my back?…..hehe….
: …..uh-oh.
: ….gig…..this…..feels……AAAAAAH!!!!!!!!!!
: (this….isn’t…..escapable…..I’m……done for…….huh? What’s coming over me?…..)
: W-where am I?
: What the?!
: …….mom?
: ………….Amazing Grace, how sweet the sound, That saved a wretch like me....I once was lost but now am found, Was blind, but now, I see. T'was Grace that taught...my heart to fear. And Grace, my fears relieved. How precious did that Grace appear...the hour I first believed. Through many dangers, toils and snares...we have already come. T'was Grace that brought us safe thus far...and Grace will lead us home. The Lord has promised good to me...His word my hope secures. My shield and portion be...as long as life endures. When we've been here ten thousand years...bright shining as the sun. We've no less days to sing God's praise...then when we've first begun……..
: …….Amazing Grace, how sweet the sound, That saved a wretch like me....I once was lost but now am found, Was blind, but now…………I see…….
: …..remember that song, Ravior, it has always pushed me forward whenever I was down. Trust that God will protect you. Trust him, and he will deliver you from your problems, no matter how hopeless it may seem. You can always count on him.
: ……I will……
: …..now, weaken the evil that binds you.
: ……alright. This’ll be for you, mom. and every Rewop that died……
: So long, son……
*FWING*
: Time to finish you!
The evil incarnation then spoke in the youth’s mind……
: Well, well, well……..I underestimated your ability to control my strength. But, don’t feel too proud. That was only a puppet. Luckily for you, though, it was linked to the control I had over the power that was in you, so you now have all the free will to use it. But, if you ever have the desire to become stronger……..let me know.
Ravior lowered his head and smirked.
: Yeah? Good luck trying to convince me into doing that. I know what would become of me if I allowed you to have some of this power back. Ferago gave me the wisdom, and God won’t allow you to harm me.
: Oh, I’m quite certain your faith in God will deteriorate eventually. It usually does with everyone else. Once one thing goes wrong, you’ll blame him, and be angry at him. Will he protect you then?
: …….yes.
: We’ll see about that. Well, anyway, about you allowing me to have some control over my power again……you’ll change your mind on that soon, too. You will have to protect loved ones and yourself in the near future, and allowing me to assist you might be the only way for you to succeed in doing that. It’s your destiny, so I probably don’t have much time to wait until I’ll regain control of my power again. I have foreseen it. The wisdom you now have will be gone for a long period of time, too. Even after you regain it, you will still be having second thoughts.
: What are you talking about?
: …..ah……I can see……the start of your adventure will begin in only a couple of minuets.
: ……again, what are you talking about?!
: You’ll see…..or not…..hehehe….
: OK, you’re not making any sense, so shut up.
: As you wish……oh, and don’t forget you won’t be able to use my power for a couple of hours.
The voice faded away. Dark, the evil Deity, crept away into the deepest part of Ravior’s mind.
: I better get back to Ferago’s place.
: ……..hmm?
: ……what’s that?
In the distance, a giant, purple creature was running towards Ravior, and at a very fast speed.
: I better get out of here!
But before he make much the distance, the monster was well caught up with him.
: ACK!
: …(what is this thing……?)
The creature’s head began to glow. It was going to blast Ravior!
As soon as the waves beamed Ravior’s head even more to the ground, the creature lifted it’s foot, and sent him flying.
In only moments, Ravior went through the thick canopy of trees and into the sky.
He flew miles. For forty three minuets, he was shooting through the clouds at a very fast speed. Of course, Ravior was unconscious. He was almost on the different side of the planet when he finally began to fall to the ground.
IAD part 1, end.
To be continued……….