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Alright, this is a remake of the first original episode of IAD. Also, the whole first season will be remade, and remade posted. Ever episode will be pretty long from now on, and will contain some images. The basic style of this Fan-Fic is script writing. I was going to change it to normal writing, but then I couldn't use the mug-shots. So, it remains a hybrid. It's mostly anime-ish, and can be pretty campy at times. Sometimes it doesn't even seem like it's related to Rayman at all. But it is. It's just a different time frame. It's my version of the past of that universe. I think it'll be pretty cool to show you how all of the technology gets eliminated during a certain time period in the plot.
Seasons 2-5 will also be remade, or, "improved" if I may. Meaning they'll be extended, use the newer mug shots, have no plot holes, better dialogue, images, more Major Battles, and season two will have a different theme. So, now you'll have to re-read those seasons, cause, after being improved, they will be like completely different reads, only they'll have the same general plot. (yes, no porn this time.)
Now, about the season themes. They aren't meant to be played while you're reading the episodes, or every time you read an episode. They're actually the songs I've chosen for the animated openings I've made for each season. Most of the frames have been made, but I lack the right tools to make them animated. Once I get the right soft ware, I'll post them.
Also, about the Major Battle themes, I highly recommend you listen to them, because they increase the enjoyment of the read a lot. Not to mention the lyrics do fit with the character that the theme is of.
None of the songs are made by me. So, I'll credit the artists of each song I use.
Tell me if you see any mistakes.
Anyway, here's the first remade IAD episode. (I dedicate this to Rabox, flyingrabbids, and Serza for being such great fans.)
Ravior Dark was a boy who lost everything, but gained everything, then lost everything again. A boy who became the brightest light in the world, but became the darkest anger ever to walk the Lum. A boy who adventured with a squadron of kids that had the same power he had. A boy who had defeated one of the most powerful and evil beings ever to exist. A boy who would grow up and fight a powerful hero. A boy who would become a legend known to all. A boy who's story will be told right.........NOW!
IAD season 1 theme/IAD part 1 theme
Episode 1
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The Beginning
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IAD part 1, begin.........
One day, Ravior Dark and his girlfriend, Iulec Mushroom, were laying at the top of Cerulean Mountain, gazing at the sky that Welfort had covering it.
: ....ah.....don't you just love staring at the beautiful clouds, Iulec?
: I sure do, honey.
: *sigh* I'm such a happy guy. I live in the only war-free city in the world, I'm healthy, I have great friends, and I have the most beautiful and nicest girlfriend.
: Heh, I feel the same way, honey.
: ........hey.....Iulec?
: Yes, honey?
: ......do you want today to be the day?
: ......I don't follow.
: You know......the day we kiss?
: Hold your horses, honey! We're only eleven years old!
: I know that, but I'm tired of waiting!
: Don't you think it would be a little weird for two tweens such as ourselves to kiss?
: ......I guess you're right......
: But I promise, when we're a year older, I'll kiss you.
: ......thanks, honey.
Ravior was a happy kid. He was practically the most popular Rewop in the city of Welfort. He thought he could never be happier than already was, but he was very wrong with that thought.
Iulec looked at her watch.......
: ! Oh crap.
: What's wrong?
: School starts in FOUR minuets!.........Ravior?
Iulec swiftly turned her neck to her right, and where Ravior was originally sitting, there was nothing.
: What the-Huh?!
She turned her head and saw Ravior running down the hill at a high velocity.
: Ravior! Wait for me!
She sprung up and ran after the boy concerned with his attendance at School.
Iulec: HEY! WAIT, HONEY! YOU KNOW I'M NOT A FAST RUNNER!!
Ravior turned his head, and looked back at Iulec while running, he had to respond. I mean, he had to!
: Yeah, I know, but I cant be late again!
Iulec proceeded to smile after she heard him yell that. It was nice to know that he cared about his grades, but, uh oh!
: Ravior! Watch out!!_
Iulec yelled while running.
: Watch out for what-
BONG!!
: ....ouch
: Watch out for that tree.....
The poor boy wasn't looking where he was going, so he ran into a big tree.
Iulec ran over to him to see if he was hurt.
: Hey.....you ok?
: Eh, I'll be fine. I'm just hoping it doesn't leave a mark.
: Alright then, let's continue on without running. We're pretty close to school anyways.
: Sure.
The two Rewop children walked together to School while holding hands. How cute.
Four minutes later.........
So, as usual, Ravior went over to sit with his best friend, Nurf.
: Hey buddy!
: Oh, hey, other buddy! So, did you ask Iulec?
: About what?
: About wha- the kiss, dummy!
: Oh yeah! Sure, I asked her.
: ......and......
: ...and.....what?
: .......*sigh* what did she say?!
: Oh!.....uh.......she said no.
: Dang! She's such a stubborn girl.........but a beautiful one too.
: Hey! Don't start picturing her like that!
: pff, what are you talking about?
: Occasionally, you have a sick mind, and it's usually when Iulec comes to thought.
: Heh, relax, buddy boy_
Nurf said while putting his arm around Ravior_
: I know she's your girl. I would never even THINK of trying to woo her with my awesome skillz with the girlz. Trust me.
: Oh, sure. Fine.
: .......though, I have to admit, she's one hot motha-
: grrrr
: Just kidding, I don't curse.
: (Yeesh)
: .....hey, remember that fortune teller we went to the other day? The one that told us that we'll battle our best friend, and one of us would die? You don't think she was talking about me and you, right?
: You're still thinking about that? How can you even believe any of that fortune telling stuff? It's all a scam.
: I don't know about that, she seemed liked the real deal, and she doesn't even demand any money. I mean, you cant tell me that you, for real, aren't concerned about it.
: Eh.....I don't know.......
After Nurf mentioned it, Ravior was actually concerned about the fortune they both received from that Fortune Teller. It never left his mind through out the rest of that school day.
After School was over, and they were outside the building......
: So, you want to come over to my house and shoot some hoops?
: Nah. I have some other plans.
: With who? Your girlfriend?
: Nope, not today.
: Oh really? Where you goin?
: Uh, just.....somewhere.
: You know, you've been acting strange ever since Home Room ended. Is something bothering you?
: Nope. Nothings wrong.
: Alrighty then, see ya tomorrow.
: Yup, see ya.
He waited for Nurf to be far gone, so that he wouldn't see where he was going to head off to. When the coast was clear, Ravior ran as fast as he could over to the Fortune Teller's hut. He was so eager to figure out more about the fortune he and Nurf were given a while back.
When he finally reached the hut, he immediately stopped at the entrance of the hut. A sudden burst of reluctance busted into his heart. He stood there, looking at the opening. He wanted to go in, but at the same time, he wanted to turn around, and walk away. He couldn't decide.
Sweat started to trickle down his head. He thought of how, if he went in there to figure more about the fortune, that his curiosity would be satisfied. But, there was a chance that he would figure out something that would be too much for him to handle. His heart was pumping faster, and faster by the point second, until.....
: Hey, kid, are you going to come in or not?
: .....*gulp*
Well, it was a little easier for him to make a decision, now that he was being asked in some sort of way to go into the hut. He slowly walked into the hut, pushing the large piece of thick clothe out of the way. He walked over to the stool, and sat down.
: Now......Ravior......what may I do for you?
: ....well....uh.....
: Yes? Go on?
: ...could you.....tell me a little bit more about that fortune you gave-
: -to you and your friend Nurf?
Ravior raised his eye brows in surprise. But, then he remembered: She was a real fortune teller.
: Uh, yes.
She sat in her chair, and let out a couple of exhales. The strange thing about this Fortune Teller was that she had sympathy for her clients, and now, she was going to have to disappoint one of em. She took a deep breath, and kindly said:
: I cant.
: What do you mean you "cant"?
: I don't know anything else about it. My visions are very vague, and leave me pretty quickly.
: ......oh......
A sad mood suddenly fell over him, but then:
: ....but, I think.........uh...
: ......are you ok?
She began to cough, and really hard too.
: No-no, I'm alright, probably something stuck in my *gulp* throat.
But it wasn't. Her coughing got worse as the seconds went by, and then finally:
: ......AAAAAAAH!!
She started to scream out of no where. This, like any other eleven year-old kid, scared the crap out of him. Ravior fell out of his chair, and backed up against the wall of the hut as fast as he could, and he stared at the Fortune Teller, and as the seconds went by, weirder and weirder things happened. First was the high pitched screaming, her eyes began to shoot lights, then she began to float, along with spinning lightning. What was happening to her? Well, as it turns out, she was having a vision of Ravior.
Images began to appear to the Fortune Teller's mind in a mixed, but chronologically correct manner.
: (.............what is this?!.......Ferago..........crystals......red
spikes......Etilop......ship......war......family. ......torture.......grave stones.......robe.......hat......spheres.......dar kness........wand........fairy.........limbless... ....rule.......candy.......black limbless........retreat......blue peak............death.........what is this all about?! Could this dark man I see be.......Ravior?.......it...must be........)
When the vision had ended, she fell to the ground from mid-air. But, she landed on her back.......that's not good. Ravior heard a snap after she fell. As scared as he was of her, based on the weird things that were occurring just a moment ago, he ran over to her, fearing for her life.
: Hey, are you OK?
The Fortune Teller's eyes opened, and she looked at Ravior. The pupils in her grey eyes began to grow large, and her skin was beginning to look very pale.
: .....Ravior.......listen to me......to these last words.......
: ....last words?
: ......Ravior......you must not let anger consume you.........when the time comes......choose to forgive and forget......make the smart decision......when it happens.......
: When what happens? What are you talking about?!
: ...............
: ......Fortune Teller?......
.........she stopped breathing.......the Fortune Teller was dead. Those were her last breaths of air.
: .......don't......die......Fortune Teller........*sniff*.......FORTUNE TELLER!!!!!!!!!
Ravior broke into tears. He fell to his face, and wet the floor. This was the first time he saw death in real life. (and it wouldn't be his last.) He didn't feel like standing, but he jumped up anyway, and ran out of the tent, and yelled for help.
Eventually, someone who heard him called for an ambulance. In a matter of seconds, the loud "wee-ooo" sound was heard around the block. They came and wrapped the Fortune Teller up whilst taking her away on a bed.
Ravior watched as they put her in the ambulance. He felt very guilty about the whole thing. It was because he went to get his fortune told that she died, but what he did not know was that the warning that she gave to him was very important. Hopefully, Ravior will listen to her when the time comes. Hopefully........he will forgive and forget.
A few days later, everybody at school knew how it happened, and all of Ravior's classmates tried to convince him it wasn't his fault, but he ignored them, and was as quiet as ever. Also, strangely enough, Nurf and Iulec were both missing. They never showed up for school, their houses were empty of people, including their parents. Ravior was pretty bored without those two around, which wasn't a great contribution to his already gloomy mood.
When he got home.......
: Hey, mom.
: Hey! How was your day at school?!
: It was pretty boring without Iulec and Nurf.
: Well, I have a surprise for you!
She held out a large, brown box in her arms.
: What is this?
: Read the box.
: ......From: Iulec Mushroom......To: Ravior Dark
: It's a present, from Iulec! Teehee
Ravior opened the box, one piece of tape at a time. When he tore the last piece of tape off, he unfolded all of the giant pegs of cardboard, and there he saw it:
: ......a blue robe and hat?
: Hmm......that's strange. I wonder why she would give you those. They look a little purple.
Ravior searched around the hat and long robe, looking for a trade mark or tag of some sort, or where it was made, but he came up dry.
: What company made these?
: Maybe Iulec did.
: I doubt it. She was never good at sewing, and this fabric feels very different.
: Huh.......well, who knows. Did Iulec leave a letter of any kind?
He searched around the box to see if she taped anything to the inside of it, but nothing.
: Nope.
: I guess you'll have to find out when she comes back from wherever she is.
: I guess so. Hopefully it will be soon. I miss her.
: Aw.....she's so lucky to have someone like you for a boy friend. Well, I'll be in the kitchen, making dinner. We're having Tonic Meat tonight.
: Sounds good.
: Hey, while I'm making dinner, why don't you go up to your room and try on your new clothes?
: Good idea!
He put the clothes back into the box and ran upstairs to his room.
: (Alright, lets see what I look like with these spiffy clothes on.)
Ravior thought as he took the clothes out of the box again.
He put on the long, smooth, bluish-purple robe. It went from the bottom up in a triangular shape, and made a small hole for your head to fit through, but it kept your mouth and nose hidden. There weren't any holes for arms, but it's fabric contained millions of fibers that trap heat, making it one of the most ideal things to wear in really cold weather.
: (Wow! This is comfortable!)
Now, it was time to put on the hat. It was kind of like a cow-boy hat, and it was made of the same materials as the robe, so it kept your ears warm. There also were two little strings on the hat. One on the right, and one on the left. Wonder what those are for. Maybe you could tie something at the end of them? Anyway, the were at the ends of the long hat, so they could never get into your face.
: (I gotta see what I look like in these!)
He thought as he walked over to the mirror. Once he looked into it_
: (Sweet! I look mysterious and cool in this thing!)
Ravior was certainly pleased with his new clothes. He could put clown make-up on his face, put the robe and hat on, and still look cool.
: (You're the best Iulec!)
He went back to his room and took off the robe and hat cause it was starting to get really hot under them, and he was going to go outside. Wearing clothes like that in the summer wouldn't be the best idea in the world.
He went back outside to go to the park. Ravior didn't have anyone to go with, so he wasn't planning on having much fun, but he needed some fresh air to clear his mind. He was still a little depressed, and a nice, peaceful walk in the park was just what he needed.
As he was walking through the park, he was thinking about the things the late fortune teller told him.
: *sigh* (forgive and forget......when it happens......what was she talking about? What's going to happen?! Is someone going to do something terrible to me, and I'll have to forgive that someone? And what happens if I don't forgive this person?! Is it even a person? What if it's a bunch of people?! What will they or him...or her, do to me?! If only she didn't fall on her back, maybe I would know more about this, and she wouldn't of died! UGH!)
Out of his frustration, he kicked a rock that was in front of him really hard.
: .....*sigh*
He continued to walk in a straight path.
: .......(hey.......what's that noise, and that rumbling?!)......what are those things.........?
Suddenly, out of nowhere:
: What the heck?! Ah!
Ravior jumped out of the way of a laser that was aimed at him randomly. He looked back up into the sky, gasping for air. His mouth was wide open. That was the first time he had ever seen laser fire in the flesh. He started to panic, as a horde of more laser fire began to rain down around the park. So, like any other sane person, he ran out of the park as fast as he could, while avoiding the oncoming laser fire.
But, as he was leaving the park, two mysterious beings stopped him.
: Well, what do we have here?
: It's a Rewop boy, Phoid.
: Who are you guys?!
: Don't raise your tone of voice at me, you scum! No matter. I'm Phoid.
: And I'm Lera.
: What?!
: Under the command of lord Xarior, his army is taking over this city. It's the only major one left that he doesn't rule over. Plus, it's the last city that has an army. So, we're wiping you all out.
: Your once peaceful city will now be even MORE peaceful!
: Xarior's army? Are you part of his army?
: Of course we are!
: Then I cant allow you to do this!!
: Ha! What are YOU going to do? You're nothing but a weak little kid! Now die quietly!!
Phoid whipped out a gun, and prepared to fire it at Ravior.
: !
: Wait a minuet, Phoid.
: Yeah, what is it, Lera?
: I think we have more important things to do rather than killing this kid.
: *sigh* phew.
: If he or any of the other Rewops survives this attack, they'll die anyways after the X laser is fired.
: HUH?!
: So let him go, please.
Phoid frowned, and quickly put his gun away.
: Alright, Lera, you're right, actually, having him wait for his doom would be a lot more amusing! Too bad I wont be around here to see him squeal. Well, let's go, Lera.
: Yes, Phoid.
They both quickly flew back into the sky, and toward the city.
: Oh no! I-I gotta get back to my house!!
Ravior ran back to his house as fast as he could. As he got closer to the city, he saw laser fire falling everywhere. Everyone was in panic, scrambling all over the place. Some Rewops got hit by the lasers, and collapsed in death. The buildings of most of the streets began to explode from the onslaught. It was all because of the machines in the sky.
Ravior ran over to his house, but as he was about to open the door, his house was blasted, throwing him off of the porch, and landing him on his back.
: .....mom..........
His mother ran out side of the enflamed house over to her son.
: Ravior! Are you alright?!
: ...I think so......hey, why are you bleeding?
: Just a little injury, but there's no time for talk, we need to get over to the bomb shelter! Here, put on your robe and hat to stay warm. Now get up!
: ....ok....
They both ran over to the shelter that was behind their house. When they got there, she noticed she forgot the key in. So, she tore the lock off, (she was pretty strong ^_^) and they ran down the stairs, whilst closing the door. It was a small shelter, so only three people could fit in there.
: Mom! These two guys in armor try to kill me! And one of them said that after this attack is over, their going to release this laser that's going to blow up everything!
: Oh dear.........
: I'm scared mom!
Ravior's eyes began to water.
: Now, don't cry, my son.
: *sniff*
: ...............Amazing Grace, how sweet the sound, That saved a wretch like me....I once was lost but now am found, Was blind, but now, I see. T'was Grace that taught...my heart to fear. And Grace, my fears relieved. How precious did that Grace appear...the hour I first believed. Through many dangers, toils and snares...we have already come. T'was Grace that brought us safe thus far...and Grace will lead us home. The Lord has promised good to me...His word my hope secures. My shield and portion be...as long as life endures. When we've been here ten thousand years...bright shining as the sun. We've no less days to sing God's praise...then when we've first begun........Amazing Grace, how sweet the sound, That saved a wretch like me....I once was lost but now am found, Was blind, but now............I see.......
: .....mom......
: Remember that song, Ravior......it has always......pushed me forward......whenever.......I.....was....down..... .......
: ...mom?
: ............
: .....what's wrong with you?
: .....................
: .......why are you not blinking?
: ..................
: .......no..............mom....don't...be dead...don't leave like dad did......
: .........
: .......no.....
Ravior's heart filled with anguish......his vision became blurry as his eyes filled with water.....he hugged his mother's corpse tightly as he continued to cry harshly.
: .....why you too?......
He stared at his mom for a few more seconds, until, he decided that he was going to die too if he stayed in that shelter. The laser would defiantly blow up the underground shelter for sure. So he got up, and weakly walked up the stairs, and opened the door. He saw it......in ruin. Every building was reduced to rubble. It was almost like a flat plain with a few hills. There were no people, either. Only dead bodies.
: ........this isn't right......
Then, he heard it. The sound of a saucer. It was here. The X laser.
: Oh no.......
A hole in the center of the X started to open slowly. Then, a voice was heard.
: WARNING, WARNING, UNDER ORDERS OF LORD XARIOR, EVERYTHING ON THIS PLAIN SHALL BE ANNHILATED IN 10, 9-
: Oh no!
: 6, 5-
: *pant* *pant* *pant*
: 3, 2, 1-
: (oh GOD!!!)
: .........0
This was it......Ravior was finished......or was he?
All of a sudden, Ravior's body began to glow. His entire shape began to change under the glaring silhouette .........and SWOOSH!
: (......)
Ravior had become something powerful at the very last second. His conscious mind was barely present, and his body had unlocked itself form pure desperation. It saved his life..........
A few moments later......
: .......ugh.....huh?
He lifted himself up, and looked around, until his vision was fixed upon a giant mushroom cloud of smoke in the far distance. He had escaped the blast, all in one piece.
: .........Welfort.........
: Hey!
A voice from behind him called out to him. It was the sound of someone old.
: Huh?
He turned his head, and saw a tall man.
To be continued.........
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Alright, this is a remake of the first original episode of IAD. Also, the whole first season will be remade, and remade posted. Ever episode will be pretty long from now on, and will contain some images. The basic style of this Fan-Fic is script writing. I was going to change it to normal writing, but then I couldn't use the mug-shots. So, it remains a hybrid. It's mostly anime-ish, and can be pretty campy at times. Sometimes it doesn't even seem like it's related to Rayman at all. But it is. It's just a different time frame. It's my version of the past of that universe. I think it'll be pretty cool to show you how all of the technology gets eliminated during a certain time period in the plot.
Seasons 2-5 will also be remade, or, "improved" if I may. Meaning they'll be extended, use the newer mug shots, have no plot holes, better dialogue, images, more Major Battles, and season two will have a different theme. So, now you'll have to re-read those seasons, cause, after being improved, they will be like completely different reads, only they'll have the same general plot. (yes, no porn this time.)
Now, about the season themes. They aren't meant to be played while you're reading the episodes, or every time you read an episode. They're actually the songs I've chosen for the animated openings I've made for each season. Most of the frames have been made, but I lack the right tools to make them animated. Once I get the right soft ware, I'll post them.
Also, about the Major Battle themes, I highly recommend you listen to them, because they increase the enjoyment of the read a lot. Not to mention the lyrics do fit with the character that the theme is of.
None of the songs are made by me. So, I'll credit the artists of each song I use.
Tell me if you see any mistakes.
Anyway, here's the first remade IAD episode. (I dedicate this to Rabox, flyingrabbids, and Serza for being such great fans.)
Ravior Dark was a boy who lost everything, but gained everything, then lost everything again. A boy who became the brightest light in the world, but became the darkest anger ever to walk the Lum. A boy who adventured with a squadron of kids that had the same power he had. A boy who had defeated one of the most powerful and evil beings ever to exist. A boy who would grow up and fight a powerful hero. A boy who would become a legend known to all. A boy who's story will be told right.........NOW!
IAD season 1 theme/IAD part 1 theme
Episode 1
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The Beginning
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IAD part 1, begin.........
One day, Ravior Dark and his girlfriend, Iulec Mushroom, were laying at the top of Cerulean Mountain, gazing at the sky that Welfort had covering it.
: ....ah.....don't you just love staring at the beautiful clouds, Iulec?
: I sure do, honey.
: *sigh* I'm such a happy guy. I live in the only war-free city in the world, I'm healthy, I have great friends, and I have the most beautiful and nicest girlfriend.
: Heh, I feel the same way, honey.
: ........hey.....Iulec?
: Yes, honey?
: ......do you want today to be the day?
: ......I don't follow.
: You know......the day we kiss?
: Hold your horses, honey! We're only eleven years old!
: I know that, but I'm tired of waiting!
: Don't you think it would be a little weird for two tweens such as ourselves to kiss?
: ......I guess you're right......
: But I promise, when we're a year older, I'll kiss you.
: ......thanks, honey.
Ravior was a happy kid. He was practically the most popular Rewop in the city of Welfort. He thought he could never be happier than already was, but he was very wrong with that thought.
Iulec looked at her watch.......
: ! Oh crap.
: What's wrong?
: School starts in FOUR minuets!.........Ravior?
Iulec swiftly turned her neck to her right, and where Ravior was originally sitting, there was nothing.
: What the-Huh?!
She turned her head and saw Ravior running down the hill at a high velocity.
: Ravior! Wait for me!
She sprung up and ran after the boy concerned with his attendance at School.
Iulec: HEY! WAIT, HONEY! YOU KNOW I'M NOT A FAST RUNNER!!
Ravior turned his head, and looked back at Iulec while running, he had to respond. I mean, he had to!
: Yeah, I know, but I cant be late again!
Iulec proceeded to smile after she heard him yell that. It was nice to know that he cared about his grades, but, uh oh!
: Ravior! Watch out!!_
Iulec yelled while running.
: Watch out for what-
BONG!!
: ....ouch
: Watch out for that tree.....
The poor boy wasn't looking where he was going, so he ran into a big tree.
Iulec ran over to him to see if he was hurt.
: Hey.....you ok?
: Eh, I'll be fine. I'm just hoping it doesn't leave a mark.
: Alright then, let's continue on without running. We're pretty close to school anyways.
: Sure.
The two Rewop children walked together to School while holding hands. How cute.
Four minutes later.........
So, as usual, Ravior went over to sit with his best friend, Nurf.
: Hey buddy!
: Oh, hey, other buddy! So, did you ask Iulec?
: About what?
: About wha- the kiss, dummy!
: Oh yeah! Sure, I asked her.
: ......and......
: ...and.....what?
: .......*sigh* what did she say?!
: Oh!.....uh.......she said no.
: Dang! She's such a stubborn girl.........but a beautiful one too.
: Hey! Don't start picturing her like that!
: pff, what are you talking about?
: Occasionally, you have a sick mind, and it's usually when Iulec comes to thought.
: Heh, relax, buddy boy_
Nurf said while putting his arm around Ravior_
: I know she's your girl. I would never even THINK of trying to woo her with my awesome skillz with the girlz. Trust me.
: Oh, sure. Fine.
: .......though, I have to admit, she's one hot motha-
: grrrr
: Just kidding, I don't curse.
: (Yeesh)
: .....hey, remember that fortune teller we went to the other day? The one that told us that we'll battle our best friend, and one of us would die? You don't think she was talking about me and you, right?
: You're still thinking about that? How can you even believe any of that fortune telling stuff? It's all a scam.
: I don't know about that, she seemed liked the real deal, and she doesn't even demand any money. I mean, you cant tell me that you, for real, aren't concerned about it.
: Eh.....I don't know.......
After Nurf mentioned it, Ravior was actually concerned about the fortune they both received from that Fortune Teller. It never left his mind through out the rest of that school day.
After School was over, and they were outside the building......
: So, you want to come over to my house and shoot some hoops?
: Nah. I have some other plans.
: With who? Your girlfriend?
: Nope, not today.
: Oh really? Where you goin?
: Uh, just.....somewhere.
: You know, you've been acting strange ever since Home Room ended. Is something bothering you?
: Nope. Nothings wrong.
: Alrighty then, see ya tomorrow.
: Yup, see ya.
He waited for Nurf to be far gone, so that he wouldn't see where he was going to head off to. When the coast was clear, Ravior ran as fast as he could over to the Fortune Teller's hut. He was so eager to figure out more about the fortune he and Nurf were given a while back.
When he finally reached the hut, he immediately stopped at the entrance of the hut. A sudden burst of reluctance busted into his heart. He stood there, looking at the opening. He wanted to go in, but at the same time, he wanted to turn around, and walk away. He couldn't decide.
Sweat started to trickle down his head. He thought of how, if he went in there to figure more about the fortune, that his curiosity would be satisfied. But, there was a chance that he would figure out something that would be too much for him to handle. His heart was pumping faster, and faster by the point second, until.....
: Hey, kid, are you going to come in or not?
: .....*gulp*
Well, it was a little easier for him to make a decision, now that he was being asked in some sort of way to go into the hut. He slowly walked into the hut, pushing the large piece of thick clothe out of the way. He walked over to the stool, and sat down.
: Now......Ravior......what may I do for you?
: ....well....uh.....
: Yes? Go on?
: ...could you.....tell me a little bit more about that fortune you gave-
: -to you and your friend Nurf?
Ravior raised his eye brows in surprise. But, then he remembered: She was a real fortune teller.
: Uh, yes.
She sat in her chair, and let out a couple of exhales. The strange thing about this Fortune Teller was that she had sympathy for her clients, and now, she was going to have to disappoint one of em. She took a deep breath, and kindly said:
: I cant.
: What do you mean you "cant"?
: I don't know anything else about it. My visions are very vague, and leave me pretty quickly.
: ......oh......
A sad mood suddenly fell over him, but then:
: ....but, I think.........uh...
: ......are you ok?
She began to cough, and really hard too.
: No-no, I'm alright, probably something stuck in my *gulp* throat.
But it wasn't. Her coughing got worse as the seconds went by, and then finally:
: ......AAAAAAAH!!
She started to scream out of no where. This, like any other eleven year-old kid, scared the crap out of him. Ravior fell out of his chair, and backed up against the wall of the hut as fast as he could, and he stared at the Fortune Teller, and as the seconds went by, weirder and weirder things happened. First was the high pitched screaming, her eyes began to shoot lights, then she began to float, along with spinning lightning. What was happening to her? Well, as it turns out, she was having a vision of Ravior.
Images began to appear to the Fortune Teller's mind in a mixed, but chronologically correct manner.
: (.............what is this?!.......Ferago..........crystals......red
spikes......Etilop......ship......war......family. ......torture.......grave stones.......robe.......hat......spheres.......dar kness........wand........fairy.........limbless... ....rule.......candy.......black limbless........retreat......blue peak............death.........what is this all about?! Could this dark man I see be.......Ravior?.......it...must be........)
When the vision had ended, she fell to the ground from mid-air. But, she landed on her back.......that's not good. Ravior heard a snap after she fell. As scared as he was of her, based on the weird things that were occurring just a moment ago, he ran over to her, fearing for her life.
: Hey, are you OK?
The Fortune Teller's eyes opened, and she looked at Ravior. The pupils in her grey eyes began to grow large, and her skin was beginning to look very pale.
: .....Ravior.......listen to me......to these last words.......
: ....last words?
: ......Ravior......you must not let anger consume you.........when the time comes......choose to forgive and forget......make the smart decision......when it happens.......
: When what happens? What are you talking about?!
: ...............
: ......Fortune Teller?......
.........she stopped breathing.......the Fortune Teller was dead. Those were her last breaths of air.
: .......don't......die......Fortune Teller........*sniff*.......FORTUNE TELLER!!!!!!!!!
Ravior broke into tears. He fell to his face, and wet the floor. This was the first time he saw death in real life. (and it wouldn't be his last.) He didn't feel like standing, but he jumped up anyway, and ran out of the tent, and yelled for help.
Eventually, someone who heard him called for an ambulance. In a matter of seconds, the loud "wee-ooo" sound was heard around the block. They came and wrapped the Fortune Teller up whilst taking her away on a bed.
Ravior watched as they put her in the ambulance. He felt very guilty about the whole thing. It was because he went to get his fortune told that she died, but what he did not know was that the warning that she gave to him was very important. Hopefully, Ravior will listen to her when the time comes. Hopefully........he will forgive and forget.
A few days later, everybody at school knew how it happened, and all of Ravior's classmates tried to convince him it wasn't his fault, but he ignored them, and was as quiet as ever. Also, strangely enough, Nurf and Iulec were both missing. They never showed up for school, their houses were empty of people, including their parents. Ravior was pretty bored without those two around, which wasn't a great contribution to his already gloomy mood.
When he got home.......
: Hey, mom.
: Hey! How was your day at school?!
: It was pretty boring without Iulec and Nurf.
: Well, I have a surprise for you!
She held out a large, brown box in her arms.
: What is this?
: Read the box.
: ......From: Iulec Mushroom......To: Ravior Dark
: It's a present, from Iulec! Teehee
Ravior opened the box, one piece of tape at a time. When he tore the last piece of tape off, he unfolded all of the giant pegs of cardboard, and there he saw it:
: ......a blue robe and hat?
: Hmm......that's strange. I wonder why she would give you those. They look a little purple.
Ravior searched around the hat and long robe, looking for a trade mark or tag of some sort, or where it was made, but he came up dry.
: What company made these?
: Maybe Iulec did.
: I doubt it. She was never good at sewing, and this fabric feels very different.
: Huh.......well, who knows. Did Iulec leave a letter of any kind?
He searched around the box to see if she taped anything to the inside of it, but nothing.
: Nope.
: I guess you'll have to find out when she comes back from wherever she is.
: I guess so. Hopefully it will be soon. I miss her.
: Aw.....she's so lucky to have someone like you for a boy friend. Well, I'll be in the kitchen, making dinner. We're having Tonic Meat tonight.
: Sounds good.
: Hey, while I'm making dinner, why don't you go up to your room and try on your new clothes?
: Good idea!
He put the clothes back into the box and ran upstairs to his room.
: (Alright, lets see what I look like with these spiffy clothes on.)
Ravior thought as he took the clothes out of the box again.
He put on the long, smooth, bluish-purple robe. It went from the bottom up in a triangular shape, and made a small hole for your head to fit through, but it kept your mouth and nose hidden. There weren't any holes for arms, but it's fabric contained millions of fibers that trap heat, making it one of the most ideal things to wear in really cold weather.
: (Wow! This is comfortable!)
Now, it was time to put on the hat. It was kind of like a cow-boy hat, and it was made of the same materials as the robe, so it kept your ears warm. There also were two little strings on the hat. One on the right, and one on the left. Wonder what those are for. Maybe you could tie something at the end of them? Anyway, the were at the ends of the long hat, so they could never get into your face.
: (I gotta see what I look like in these!)
He thought as he walked over to the mirror. Once he looked into it_
: (Sweet! I look mysterious and cool in this thing!)
Ravior was certainly pleased with his new clothes. He could put clown make-up on his face, put the robe and hat on, and still look cool.
: (You're the best Iulec!)
He went back to his room and took off the robe and hat cause it was starting to get really hot under them, and he was going to go outside. Wearing clothes like that in the summer wouldn't be the best idea in the world.
He went back outside to go to the park. Ravior didn't have anyone to go with, so he wasn't planning on having much fun, but he needed some fresh air to clear his mind. He was still a little depressed, and a nice, peaceful walk in the park was just what he needed.
As he was walking through the park, he was thinking about the things the late fortune teller told him.
: *sigh* (forgive and forget......when it happens......what was she talking about? What's going to happen?! Is someone going to do something terrible to me, and I'll have to forgive that someone? And what happens if I don't forgive this person?! Is it even a person? What if it's a bunch of people?! What will they or him...or her, do to me?! If only she didn't fall on her back, maybe I would know more about this, and she wouldn't of died! UGH!)
Out of his frustration, he kicked a rock that was in front of him really hard.
: .....*sigh*
He continued to walk in a straight path.
: .......(hey.......what's that noise, and that rumbling?!)......what are those things.........?
Suddenly, out of nowhere:
: What the heck?! Ah!
Ravior jumped out of the way of a laser that was aimed at him randomly. He looked back up into the sky, gasping for air. His mouth was wide open. That was the first time he had ever seen laser fire in the flesh. He started to panic, as a horde of more laser fire began to rain down around the park. So, like any other sane person, he ran out of the park as fast as he could, while avoiding the oncoming laser fire.
But, as he was leaving the park, two mysterious beings stopped him.
: Well, what do we have here?
: It's a Rewop boy, Phoid.
: Who are you guys?!
: Don't raise your tone of voice at me, you scum! No matter. I'm Phoid.
: And I'm Lera.
: What?!
: Under the command of lord Xarior, his army is taking over this city. It's the only major one left that he doesn't rule over. Plus, it's the last city that has an army. So, we're wiping you all out.
: Your once peaceful city will now be even MORE peaceful!
: Xarior's army? Are you part of his army?
: Of course we are!
: Then I cant allow you to do this!!
: Ha! What are YOU going to do? You're nothing but a weak little kid! Now die quietly!!
Phoid whipped out a gun, and prepared to fire it at Ravior.
: !
: Wait a minuet, Phoid.
: Yeah, what is it, Lera?
: I think we have more important things to do rather than killing this kid.
: *sigh* phew.
: If he or any of the other Rewops survives this attack, they'll die anyways after the X laser is fired.
: HUH?!
: So let him go, please.
Phoid frowned, and quickly put his gun away.
: Alright, Lera, you're right, actually, having him wait for his doom would be a lot more amusing! Too bad I wont be around here to see him squeal. Well, let's go, Lera.
: Yes, Phoid.
They both quickly flew back into the sky, and toward the city.
: Oh no! I-I gotta get back to my house!!
Ravior ran back to his house as fast as he could. As he got closer to the city, he saw laser fire falling everywhere. Everyone was in panic, scrambling all over the place. Some Rewops got hit by the lasers, and collapsed in death. The buildings of most of the streets began to explode from the onslaught. It was all because of the machines in the sky.
Ravior ran over to his house, but as he was about to open the door, his house was blasted, throwing him off of the porch, and landing him on his back.
: .....mom..........
His mother ran out side of the enflamed house over to her son.
: Ravior! Are you alright?!
: ...I think so......hey, why are you bleeding?
: Just a little injury, but there's no time for talk, we need to get over to the bomb shelter! Here, put on your robe and hat to stay warm. Now get up!
: ....ok....
They both ran over to the shelter that was behind their house. When they got there, she noticed she forgot the key in. So, she tore the lock off, (she was pretty strong ^_^) and they ran down the stairs, whilst closing the door. It was a small shelter, so only three people could fit in there.
: Mom! These two guys in armor try to kill me! And one of them said that after this attack is over, their going to release this laser that's going to blow up everything!
: Oh dear.........
: I'm scared mom!
Ravior's eyes began to water.
: Now, don't cry, my son.
: *sniff*
: ...............Amazing Grace, how sweet the sound, That saved a wretch like me....I once was lost but now am found, Was blind, but now, I see. T'was Grace that taught...my heart to fear. And Grace, my fears relieved. How precious did that Grace appear...the hour I first believed. Through many dangers, toils and snares...we have already come. T'was Grace that brought us safe thus far...and Grace will lead us home. The Lord has promised good to me...His word my hope secures. My shield and portion be...as long as life endures. When we've been here ten thousand years...bright shining as the sun. We've no less days to sing God's praise...then when we've first begun........Amazing Grace, how sweet the sound, That saved a wretch like me....I once was lost but now am found, Was blind, but now............I see.......
: .....mom......
: Remember that song, Ravior......it has always......pushed me forward......whenever.......I.....was....down..... .......
: ...mom?
: ............
: .....what's wrong with you?
: .....................
: .......why are you not blinking?
: ..................
: .......no..............mom....don't...be dead...don't leave like dad did......
: .........
: .......no.....
Ravior's heart filled with anguish......his vision became blurry as his eyes filled with water.....he hugged his mother's corpse tightly as he continued to cry harshly.
: .....why you too?......
He stared at his mom for a few more seconds, until, he decided that he was going to die too if he stayed in that shelter. The laser would defiantly blow up the underground shelter for sure. So he got up, and weakly walked up the stairs, and opened the door. He saw it......in ruin. Every building was reduced to rubble. It was almost like a flat plain with a few hills. There were no people, either. Only dead bodies.
: ........this isn't right......
Then, he heard it. The sound of a saucer. It was here. The X laser.
: Oh no.......
A hole in the center of the X started to open slowly. Then, a voice was heard.
: WARNING, WARNING, UNDER ORDERS OF LORD XARIOR, EVERYTHING ON THIS PLAIN SHALL BE ANNHILATED IN 10, 9-
: Oh no!
: 6, 5-
: *pant* *pant* *pant*
: 3, 2, 1-
: (oh GOD!!!)
: .........0
This was it......Ravior was finished......or was he?
All of a sudden, Ravior's body began to glow. His entire shape began to change under the glaring silhouette .........and SWOOSH!
: (......)
Ravior had become something powerful at the very last second. His conscious mind was barely present, and his body had unlocked itself form pure desperation. It saved his life..........
A few moments later......
: .......ugh.....huh?
He lifted himself up, and looked around, until his vision was fixed upon a giant mushroom cloud of smoke in the far distance. He had escaped the blast, all in one piece.
: .........Welfort.........
: Hey!
A voice from behind him called out to him. It was the sound of someone old.
: Huh?
He turned his head, and saw a tall man.
To be continued.........
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WOAH! That was a really long chapter! So, i take it that Iulec is Ravior's girldfriend. Soon, Faer will take her position. Nurf and Ravior's mum look pretty cool too. And it looks like old enemies Phiod and Lera made a rather early appearance.
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Glad to see you've got it back up again
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Nice plot. And the graphics are good to
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Glad you liked it. ^^
The next episodes will have a few more pictures than this one.
Eps 2 might take a week to finish, btw.
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Btw, who is that guy who says hey at the end? Is he Ferago?
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Yep.
It's how I always imagined him.
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I think ferago looks like a 18th century componist :P
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Joshua: Please don't double post. Use the edit button.
Mr.Dark: REALLY?! I expected he would be a more...younger man. I don't mean to disapoint you or anything.
serza5: Sorry to go off topic, but i dislike you. That's right, i'm FAB from PC. Don't anger me again just like you did on my "An upsetting message from an old member here" topic. Since that problem is solved (unless you keep annoying me there), i want you to be nice to me. Please do so and i'll dislike you no longer.