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    [RH] Rudhelms Tracks

    I'm all new to the Trials Community, just playing it for two months now. So I'm very curious about some Feedback on my first two Tracks. They are called

    [RH] Stove
    and
    [RH] Shipping.

    I guess one can see that i lost the patience on decoration my first Track (Stove) near the end of it. Every Feedback – positive or negative – would be highly appreciated :-)
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    Here a Clip of my new Track... as you can see – still Work in Progess. Driveline nearly completed, just some tweaks here and there. And the Decoration of course :-)

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    Finally finished my Track... Any critics will be highly appreciated. I know it is far from good, but the building still takes A LOT of Time, and i have to wrestle my kids away from the Playstation first

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    Eevan80's Avatar Member
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    Looks like a nice technical driving line. I definitely make sure to check it out next time i'm on Trials.
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    And a new one... basically there are a few new ones since «Escape»... but... well... you know... i'm lazy

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    I usually look for two things in a track; a good driveline to entertain the rider, and a cohesive and nicely decorated theme. Your latest track is very good on both points.

    Only building two months? Impressive.
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    Thank you very much! Not quite sure when i uploaded the first Track, but let it be 3 Or 4 months i try to build There still is a lot of room for getting better Since I'm not a very good rider, I have some troubles with building the driveline, or let's say with the consistency of the difficulty. For Example the last Checkpoint in the latest track is way harder than any other Obstacle in the track. And it's to easy to hit the fast line through the track. But i'm pretty confident the quality of the driveline will rise with my driving skills So every feedback is very helpful!
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    I agree with Rudemod. Nice job with progressing in getting better with building. One thing I definitely noticed is your improvement with lighting.

    I think the first section of your storm track, is more polished than the rest, but overall, it is definitely a step up, or two in fact. Its a nice track, keep up the work.
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    Thank you. Yeah, i tend to be unpatient, and at a certain point i just want to upload the track and get lazy with decoration and tweaking. I hope that in the Future i will be able to keep on polishing until it is realy finished... but till then, there is another Track



    And there i have a question. I use a Custom Camera for the last part of the Track and i had to put up the interploation speed of this Camera because otherwise it was slightly tilted and the Bridge wasn't horizontal in the screen anymore. Adn this now looks weird because the camera angle changes so quickly. Any hints, maybe raise the interpolation with a curve datasource?
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    My entry for ~funks FCH Challenge. Theme was Heaven/Hell.
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