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nice fast track you made, really liked it. really well done line.
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as asked for in my track thread bud
Your use of the environment is getting pretty spot on dude and a good sweet line , only thing i would suggest is adding more time to the length. Felt somewhat ripped off and cheated when it suddenly ended so quick. lol but guess thats only prefference.
I would personally try and mix up the styles , this gives better chance of getting to grips with different aspects of the editor. Even if the track doesn't far so well in track central it will eventually give you an all round better approach to what you can and cant do in making a track and opens many more doors in which way you can be creative.
have a good one bud
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When something unexpectedly ends that is good and in its true form is usually longer ( which 99% of speed runs are ) there is a feeling of being cheated out of the further 10 to 15 secs that should have also been part of that track. Ripped off , cheated are similar terms to being Gutted , bummer and so on. It means that the track was good but put in light hearted terms , rather than just saying " it was just too short ".
i would have just +1 a post like other did but you asked me personally to give you feedback bud so tried to be a little more helpful , sorry if this offended you it wasn't meant to.
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hello bud , looks good bud nice clean fast run can i just add a few ideas to maybe help you. I my self try never to dip below 30 Secs , i find 30 to 40 to be a prime target for a fast quick line 20 secs odd can seem to quick. Also i can totally understand why you dont want to bother with decor in the background but i do think it can add value to a track and entertainment. If your stuck for ideas bud just use your fog depth as you do and have silhouettes or outline as such to create a scene , ( which is kinda of cheating but can look good ). I also would try to avoid any massive curve in the air , try to have the bike turn as close to the ground as possible or a tleast whilst you are manoeuvring over many objects
I personally think track central is way to hard on your tracks , and really dont understand sometimes why they hit you so hard , maybe its the time or the samey feel to them , who knows they do it to me also.
hope i never spoke out of turn buddy , just wanted to help if i can and feel free to message me on psn if you like for any help in the editor , if i can i will help because i really gets up my nose to see people who actually try to create a real place for people to play, be downgraded so badly. Its this type of thing that is stopping people building
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Now will go check your track out bud
