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xXDonReneXx
04-24-2012, 07:32 AM
Just a list of the tracks I made so far...

Sunset | Medium | InfernoTrials (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZjXwwZW-LHM&feature=g-all-u) |OpossumBlase (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jFa7wVu4feY) | QcChopper (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=z8iFz6So6k8&feature=g-all-lik) | xXDonReneXx (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rgpafZ3G79k)

LNC | Ninja | InfernoTrials (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3zhy9T3aKfM&feature=g-all-u) | xXDonReneXx (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OPyaL-aurA0)

Laketown | Medium | InfernoTrials (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wb6jJCx2WCM&feature=g-all-u) | OpossumBlase (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_urYPZxCELs) | xXDonReneXx (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QhNXWiy61tI)

Laketown Part 2 | Ninja | xXDonReneXx (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OegY_MY50Lo)

Intensified | Hard | xXDonReneXx (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eSQ5mty1kbA) | First-Person remake of Sunset

A Jolly Prototype | Medium | xXDonReneXx (http://youtu.be/zqvM0DzPPHI) | Nytmair (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4FH0Y91yzvs)

And thanks a lot to OpposumBlase (http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/viewtopic.php?f=82&t=10397) for this nice montage:
Trials Evolution - Made In Germany No.4 (http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_embedded&v=LocAEzHT19A#!)

QcChopper
04-24-2012, 11:52 AM
Very nice 1st track, I love the view http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon/smile.gif

xXDonReneXx
04-24-2012, 02:48 PM
Thanks Qc!

rlmergeuser
04-24-2012, 09:18 PM
Very nice 1st track, I love the view http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon/smile.gif

Yes, me too. It looks like.....just WOW. The time is right for new scenerys and EVO makes it possible. What will happen when you have some practice with the new editor http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon/think.gif

TheMovement81
04-24-2012, 10:15 PM
Off to a good start Don, nice and scenic. Look forward to more. http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon/smile.gif

xXDonReneXx
05-21-2012, 08:58 PM
Thanks guys!

New Ninja track is up. "LNC"

Let me tell ya I cant do sh*t with this new editor yet http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon/biggrin.gif Will take me a loooooong time to get used to that one...

L0RDMelchett
05-25-2012, 11:05 PM
Hey Don,

Just been playing your LNC track. I know it's your track and you've no doubt played each obstacle over and over and over again in testing but how you managed to 0 fault this track in one go is beyond me. I have managed to finish it. In 54 faults. Well, it currently puts me 7th on the leaderboard out of 892 downloads so better than most I guess. Anyway, my struggles aside, it's a great looking track, love the colours and atmosphere of this one. The obstacles, whilst being very tough, are great fun and it is a very addictive track to play, so I really do like it a lot. I just wish I was better at it. I found the second half of the track much easier, I think the obstacles get easier as you go on. Great track, Don!!!

L0RD Melchett

xXDonReneXx
05-29-2012, 09:49 AM
Hey Don,

Just been playing your LNC track. I know it's your track and you've no doubt played each obstacle over and over and over again in testing but how you managed to 0 fault this track in one go is beyond me. I have managed to finish it. In 54 faults. Well, it currently puts me 7th on the leaderboard out of 892 downloads so better than most I guess. Anyway, my struggles aside, it's a great looking track, love the colours and atmosphere of this one. The obstacles, whilst being very tough, are great fun and it is a very addictive track to play, so I really do like it a lot. I just wish I was better at it. I found the second half of the track much easier, I think the obstacles get easier as you go on. Great track, Don!!!

L0RD Melchett
Thanks for the feedback!

I´m really surprised that you think the second half is easier. I agree that the second and third obstacle are really hard but Im having problems with the last one most of the time http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon/smile.gif

rlmergeuser
05-29-2012, 10:16 AM
LNC is a *****!! I liked the obstacles but I hated the pipes blocking my view. Keep the pain comin'! http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon/biggrin.gif I would comment on the bland background, but I never expect a ninja to look super great. But the visual work well enough.

xXDonReneXx
05-29-2012, 10:49 AM
LNC is a *****!! I liked the obstacles but I hated the pipes blocking my view. Keep the pain comin'! http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon/biggrin.gif I would comment on the bland background, but I never expect a ninja to look super great. But the visual work well enough.

Did you play the first version? I released a second one where I removed most of the pipes that block the view (forgot it on one part though).

As for the decoration, tracks with great background detail have never been my strength http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon/biggrin.gif

rlmergeuser
05-29-2012, 10:57 AM
Yea I played the 2nd one. There were only 2 ( I think) spots where the pipes blocked my view, but it's never not annoying. Just after the 2nd CP was the worst. I think I would've gotten past that with fewer faults if that pipe hadn't blocked me http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon/sad.gif

xXDonReneXx
05-29-2012, 11:12 AM
I know I screwed up with that one, hope my next one is going to be better...

rlmergeuser
05-29-2012, 11:20 AM
I know I screwed up with that one, hope my next one is going to be better...

No doubt it will be http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon/biggrin.gif

xXDonReneXx
06-23-2012, 03:56 PM
Laketown & Laketown Part 2 are up.
Have fun! (or rage quit)

emcee
06-23-2012, 04:58 PM
The medium laketown track is well addictive...the backflip part is tricky but i wanted to perfect it because i enjoyed the track so much. Cheers man!

JoeRegular
06-23-2012, 06:25 PM
Hey bud, enjoyed both the Ninja's a lot and Laketown was fun. Will be looking to make major improvements. The pipes in the foreground of LNC were irritating in a couple places but not gamebreaking for me.

Good work mate http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon/smile.gif

rlmergeuser
06-23-2012, 08:03 PM
Checked out Laketown this morning, Sweet theme with a nice line. Should of thrown some more objects around maybe but... I enjoyed running the line, However I must skip the backflip and gain some time.

Laketown 2... I lost my black belt a long time ago, Loved the replays though. Good stuff Don. http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon/smile.gif

Barrybarfly
06-23-2012, 08:45 PM
Didnt realise you had a track thread! I'll check your tracks out next time I get online and post opinions afterwards.

Barrybarfly
06-24-2012, 01:51 AM
I enjoyed sunset but think its really a hard track and not medium. But other than that its a good track!

Laketown was really fun, I like that a lot.

The others.......well I'm not really good enough for those I'm afraid! lol

xXDonReneXx
07-01-2012, 09:45 PM
Vids for both Laketown tracks in the OP...

Thanks for the feedback guys!

rlmergeuser
07-02-2012, 12:22 PM
Like the scenery of Laketown. The coloured houses and the wood made obstacles belong together. Hard platinum time.
Part2 was too hard for me. I did not finished the track http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_cry.gif

Mein Englisch ist ziemlich scheiße! So, jetzt ernsthaft. Die bunten Häuser im Hintergrund von Laketown und die Hindernisse aus den Holzstämmen und anderen Holzobjekten bilden ein ganzes, und man verbindet deutlich beide Komponenten mit diesem Seethema. Sieht nicht so aus als wäre das alles irgendwie zusammengeschustert, sondern da hat sich jemand Gedanken gemacht.

Part2 war zu zäh für mich. Bin an der Stelle mit dem Salto und anschließenden BunnyHop auf die gestapelten Kisten hängen geblieben. Auf dem Vorderrad zu landen war nicht das Problem, aber der darauf folgende Sprung!

Sorry for all members who can not read german. Next post will be complete in English http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon/doh.gif

xXDonReneXx
07-02-2012, 12:35 PM
Mein Englisch ist ziemlich scheiße! So, jetzt ernsthaft. Die bunten Häuser im Hintergrund von Laketown und die Hindernisse aus den Holzstämmen und anderen Holzobjekten bilden ein ganzes, und man verbindet deutlich beide Komponenten mit diesem Seethema. Sieht nicht so aus als wäre das alles irgendwie zusammengeschustert, sondern da hat sich jemand Gedanken gemacht.

Part2 war zu zäh für mich. Bin an der Stelle mit dem Salto und anschließenden BunnyHop auf die gestapelten Kisten hängen geblieben. Auf dem Vorderrad zu landen war nicht das Problem, aber der darauf folgende Sprung!

Also um ehrlich zu sein war Part 2 zuerst da und Part 1 dann nur kurz in ner Stunde zusammengebastelt http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon/smile.gif Wollte nicht schon wieder nur ne Mini-Zielgruppe ansprechen. Die Gedanken waren eigentlich nur nen möglichst starken optischen Kontrast zwischen beiden Versionen zu erreichen während die Umgebung eigentlich die selbe bleibt... Also zerstörte triste Umgebung zu farbenfroher fröhlicher Umgebung.
Auf jeden Fall danke fürs Feedback und deine neue Strecke is auch top!

Sorry guys, german feedback gets german answers http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon/smile.gif

xXDonReneXx
07-25-2012, 07:27 AM
I released a new track called Intensified. It´s a first-person remake of my first Evo track Sunset. Had to tweak the line a little because the original one is way too hard from that point of view.

Retribution
07-25-2012, 08:49 AM
Got your message on xbox yesterday. Am gonna check out both sunset and intensifed after work today...caught a glimpse of it and it looks good.

rlmergeuser
10-23-2012, 10:44 AM
Bumping!
LocAEzHT19A&feature=plcp

xXDonReneXx
10-23-2012, 10:58 AM
Bumping!
LocAEzHT19A&feature=plcp
Thanks again, I already put it in the OP http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon/smile.gif

xXDonReneXx
03-07-2013, 10:19 PM
New track shared - A Jolly Protoype - Medium - Jolly Jumper remake - Vid in the OP - Have fun http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon/smile.gif

DJ_2wItchY
03-07-2013, 10:37 PM
jolly jumper remake. sweet. i'l check it out. i apologize for my tardiness as well. appreciate the vids and comments you did for me http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon/smile.gif

Barrybarfly
03-07-2013, 10:50 PM
Judging from the video, its VERY green! http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon/razz.gif lol I'll check it out when I get online Don. Although my run may not be quite as good! http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_redface.gif

emcee
03-07-2013, 11:01 PM
One of my faves from hd I got to 200th at one point http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon/smile.gif Great idea the whole prototype concept...sweet remske too although the evo phoenix doesnt seem to take as well to it as the hd one did lol. Great work man...reminded me also of the skittle achievement...what a pain in the *** that was!

DJ_2wItchY
03-07-2013, 11:23 PM
haha that skittle achievement! i was dragging my guy on the floor for like 5 minutes trying to knock them over lol. yeah rene i like the line, its def good ol jolly jumper. the line is a lil rough but i watched you're replay and its easily smooth when done good. i thought the idea of a corrupt style was unique but i reckon with the evo editor this remake could have been enhanced from the original.

xXDonReneXx
03-08-2013, 08:25 AM
i thought the idea of a corrupt style was unique but i reckon with the evo editor this remake could have been enhanced from the original.
I think so, too, but I just can´t get myself to learn all the advanced stuff in the Evo editor... I only can do the basics, that´s why all my tracks so far are pretty simple...

Glad you like it anyway!

imme1986pc
03-08-2013, 12:54 PM
i like this track.haben ja schon gestern drüber gesproche.Bißchen zeit konnte ich noch mit muttislieblinge raushauen.1 sek hat mir aber noch gefehlt um dich zu bekommen.naja,werde es heute nochmal mit meinem acc probieren

Nytmair
03-08-2013, 02:16 PM
I think it turned out pretty cool dude! The plywood was a pain in the *** ocassionally, but overall it's fun! Lots of places to shave off time too.

4FH0Y91yzvs
http://youtu.be/4FH0Y91yzvs

D2Dahaka
03-09-2013, 09:16 AM
I love hd remakes and I thought your take on Jolly Jumper was really cool. The line is a little trickier than the hd version IMHO, but different doesn't mean bad. Nice one http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon/smile.gif

Rudemod 69
03-09-2013, 01:29 PM
With 'Jolly Jumper' being a gem from HD, I had a feeling/hope I'd like this.I wasn't disappointed, great work, the line evokes the original well, and you give it a little sprinkling of your own touch.Loved it!

A.Donkey.Rider
03-09-2013, 03:49 PM
geile strecke dude! sieht sehr fett aus und das "Error" feeling kommt sehr gut auf http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon/smile.gif

ich habe als du sie hochgeladen hast auch schon ne strecke angefangen, die "Primes" und "echte objekte" mixt, weiß jetz nich ob ich die weiterbauen soll, kommt sonst so nachgemacht rüber http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon/biggrin.gif

aber sonst, SEHR NICE!

xXDonReneXx
03-09-2013, 04:14 PM
Thanks for the kind words guys.

@Lynx
Mach weiter! So ausgefallen war die Idee jetz auch nich, dass das sonst niemanden machen sollte http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon/wink.gif

rlmergeuser
03-09-2013, 04:51 PM
XDON right track, congratulations and encouragement

rlmergeuser
03-10-2013, 05:30 PM
As I said at the another thread, I`m missing some details around the corrupted theme. These are my only 2 cents. Nice line and HD feeling. http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon/biggrin.gif

rlmergeuser
03-10-2013, 05:48 PM
I love the TrialsHD-feeling! Great track Don! http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon/clap.gif