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jook13
12-06-2009, 04:24 AM
I have a few tracks that are up for grabs if anyone wants some. In order from old to new. They are also on trialshd.net so log some times up there. Feel free to request any of my older ones. Dont get pissed if you get deleated from my friends list. It is constantly on threat of getting to 100. You can always re-add me when I come out with a new one, I dont mind.

Irreversable This was Kind of an experiment for me. I had always wanted to try it and the new DLC tools has made it easier to make it reliable. From the start you are flipped backwards and forced to race from right to left. This means the controls for leaning are reversed and no checkpoints. For this reason I kept the track fairly simple and short. Try it out! It will mess with your head.
Video: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wn-2E_q3FnY

Unlucky 13. The name has no real meaning, I just kinda liked it. An extreme difficulty track that I tried to make about the same difficulty as diabolic. Some visual Inspiration was borrowed from Voltrons killhouse.

Video: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=X7DBY7Q86ls

Dirty Sanchez. A medium Track With a few rewarding time savers. Its made of mostly wood and while straightforward, I think it has a pretty neat look to it.
VIDEO: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=u4ZQbGmXIU0

Nadnokker. My first attempt to create a physics based course. I labled it hard, but once you go through it a few times, it really is not. The first obstacle is a little touchy, but very badass when pulled off correctly.
Video: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8FfoIk25YNY

Two Worlds. An easy medium track with a smooth flowing line if you can find it. The second half is less decorated due to that damn object limit.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=np3kx8HQdRA


Metalocalypse. A hard track that is chock full of moving parts and moving metal machinery and things like that. An onslaught of badass. Goes great with Dethklok.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CT_tM8YyzKs


Downward. A hard ranked track that is all about working your way down. It is not fast paced, so you cant race through it. Hopefully some of you dig this style of play.
Video: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xt5QLVReCNs

Fightin Fires. Somewhat of a sequal to downward. I just wanted to take the idea a little further and add a ****-ton of fire and explosions.
Video: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kPPbPUi_OVI

Toxic Facility. Set in a toxic dump plant type place, This time with no physics or gimmicks, just raw riding. Its medium difficulty.
video: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xRt-HClkQ7g

Donkey Puncher. rated hard. It has nothing to do with the donkey bike, I didnt think about that when I named it...

Video: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CUCYGBEaYhU

The Matrix. A hard track. Easy to zero fault, tough to get a good time on. You are trapped in an 80's computer graphics engine...
Video: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fJG-TulSE3w

The Ol' In-Out. Rated hard. Fall down into a pit then climb out.
video: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fEaow_R6roM

Three by three. An entire track encased in a 3 by 3 block area.
video... coming soon.

Darker Days. An extreme track. Its a bit of a tough one. Zero faultable for sure though. Those of you who have mastered things like the back wheel hop can get a pretty fast run.
video: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0XKwtaP53Wc

Nosebleed Mine. Rated Medium. Blistering fast speed and huge air. Throw in some explosions. And for the love of god coast (no throttle) down those big downhills.
video: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kJ1uVOZfev4

Marksman Its a target hunt. Do some exploring.
Video: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jyYWC7drGLs

Only 3.. Track for the 3 object limit contest.
video: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=24dzLGUSnLM

3OL#2. Track#2 for the 3 object limit contest.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2N8Trv18Rsk

Catastrophe. Medium with a few neat effects.
video: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3OJjUiSrLCg

Thrill Kill. Hard track with a big intro and technical middle. My entry into the DLC contest
video: http://www.youtube.com/user/jook13#p/u/4/Oj6imVKPsVE

Robo Doom. Work your way up the robot, taking out his arms along the way. Then take out his head.
video: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ql6_2o0NIkU

Spoon Feed. Very technical medium track. Hard platinum too.
video: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wMqTB1PXKyg

Bullsh*t. Some physics and pretty lights. I think its a cool track. I think.
video: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0TpF6Skc4jU

Lonely Number. Another Extreme track. Not as tough as some of my others, but it should be a challenge to get a decent run in.
video: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6TYt2eX8Yi0

Stink Hole. Somewhat of a follow up to Irreversable... but it is reversable. More of an experiment than anything.
video: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IfFs63plqjg

H/H-jook13(1). Holloween competition entry.
video: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2z7hymalUqc

In Diana Jones. Rated Hard. A bunch of crazy trials riders set up a course in an ancient Mayan temple. Jerks
video: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=m3k3Cwd1nIE

Bipolar. Rated Extreme. Another track from me. Its a fairly tough extreme. Can you find my hidden egg on this one?
video: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=P6mjDYCmOsY

Electric Head. Rated Medium. Easy to beat, tough to master. Its more about the riding line than anything.
video: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NVDE0sQDHK8


Acacia strain. Rated hard. I wanted a badass mood and some good ole tech riding.
video: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WeJ72ZtlrLM

Bishop. Rated medium. Tried having some fun with some physics..
Video: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hWBVTHDKAAg

Bloody Roots. Rated Hard. Bust out your tech skills to get a good run.
Video: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=N7zsLkR40nw

Rotation X. A physics based extreme.
Video: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NQnkKOi2SHc

Split Pea Soup. It sure is muggy out here. Rated Hard.
video: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uXn94ARbX_c

Toxic Sequel A sequel to Toxic Facility.
video: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Bluxf1ZWaiY

Poor build. Another physics based extreme.
Video: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YoD8-1pM9CM

Lets Give up. A very extreme track.... Dont even try it, just give up.
Video: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6uF0hgBuTWo

Double Duece. An average hard ranked track.
Video: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aE2iCIFy4uU

Spit Fit. Rated ninja... easy ninja.... wait, what?
Video: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sS_ereoJW74

Wormwood. Rated hard... Very tech, designed to slow you the f&%* down. I have a thing for wood... tracks.
Video: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=q-OGwf--g6A

Cool Carl. Ninja level 1. Tricky... but not the worlds hardest track
Video: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hjWu3pw6Wxo&list=UUkbFxch91IFEi1_tJ2zQyaw&feature=plcp

Uncle Flo. Medium. Faster paced, a really tough to nail quickest route..
Video: http://youtu.be/lUPavpYO6HI

Wayward Son. Hard. Lots of funky physics...
Video: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0VVJtqEi1aU&feature=youtu.be


Apologies. Just God Damn Rediculous.
Video: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UIRXpJgRZBs&feature=youtu.be

Feel free to add me. My tag is jook13. And post your times of trialshd.net!

jook13
12-11-2009, 06:31 AM
New track called Forest Fire added. I put a lot more effort into this one than my past tracks. Try it out dammit http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_mrgreen.gif . My gt is jook13.

rlmergeuser
12-13-2009, 06:21 AM
What up Jook, Forrest fire is a nasty lil track indeed. With the perfect flow, Great lighting, And some sweet transfers. I liked this one alot, And will be playing it again. http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_mrgreen.gif

jook13
12-13-2009, 07:34 PM
I liked this one alot, And will be playing it again.

Thanks a lot man. Thats the thing about custom tracks. People only want to play through it once just to see it. I was guilty of that for the longest time. After the contest by murdoch I noticed that tracks are a lot more fun after you learn them and I have made it a point to play all (well most) my downloaded tracks till I get pretty good at them. It allows you to see what the creator was trying to create as far as flow and fastest route. It makes the tracks more than just "pretty".

rlmergeuser
12-14-2009, 01:07 PM
i gotta get on your fl man, that forest fire track looks siccccc

sending a fr your way

jook13
12-15-2009, 09:57 PM
i gotta get on your fl man, that forest fire track looks siccccc

sending a fr your way

I never got the fr. I went ahead and took the liberty of sending you one.

jook13
01-21-2010, 08:52 AM
New track added with youtube video and all. Its called UP. Video is in the original post.

Euphoric Fusion
01-21-2010, 10:51 AM
Played through it a couple of times now and overall it's pretty good http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_e_wink.gif
Sufferes from a bit of slowdown after the first couple of climbs and the banging of physics objects got on my nerves a bit but other than that good work.

jook13
01-21-2010, 07:21 PM
I played it a bit this morning and I dont really like it like I did last night. It was late and I was tired. I was building with the sound off and didnt notice the annoying banging sound. I still havent ran into the slowdown, but a few people mentioned slowdown, so I am sure its there if you get enough going on the screen at once. Each climbing situation is pretty much the same as the previous. Its also pretty easy for an extreme. And short. Its not terrible, but its repetitive and I could do better. I will put this track behind me and build a good one really soon.

Thanks all who commented on it (mostly messages over xbox).

rlmergeuser
01-21-2010, 11:36 PM
The slowdown is around the 4th obstacle where there is a barrel on fire in front of the rider.

Good track overall with balanced challenges. Looking forward to the next one

jook13
01-23-2010, 10:08 PM
Newest creation called Dorkus is now up for grabs. As always comments and/or complaints are appreciated. A video of it is in the original post.

rlmergeuser
01-23-2010, 10:46 PM
Hell yeah, Keep these coming dog. Dorkus is SICK. Love the FATALITY as well. http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_mrgreen.gif

jook13
02-05-2010, 05:50 AM
New track up now. Its called Irreversable

This was Kind of an experiment for me. I had always wanted to try it and the new DLC tools has made it easier to make it reliable. From the start you are flipped backwards and forced to race from right to left. This means the controls for leaning are reversed and no checkpoints. For this reason I kept the track fairly simple and short. Try it out! It will mess with your head.
Video: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wn-2E_q3FnY

lespritdelescal
02-05-2010, 07:06 AM
This is crazy man.. I am having to learn how to ride all over again.

jook13
02-05-2010, 10:08 PM
Haha, yeah. Watching myself play this level is about equal to watching my mom try one of the beginner levels. With a few rounds though, you start to adjust.

jook13
02-07-2010, 09:16 AM
Newest track is called Unlucky 13.
Some visual Inspiration was borrowed from Voltrons killhouse. Hope its cool guys. I was hoping to make the difficuly about as tough as say diabolic. Try it out, let me know what you guys think. Video below.

Video: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=X7DBY7Q86ls

lespritdelescal
02-07-2010, 12:31 PM
Hey man.. I was enjoying this track with one fault right up until the end... and then it becomes impossible to finish. http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_eek.gif

I checked your video, and it looks like you added in the stuff past the finish line after you took the video. The wind effects after the finish line cause the rider to crash before he hits the line. I'm not sure exactly what you used, but if you use the strongest wind setting, the rider will always crash. If you use the middle wind setting, the rider will not crash unless you overlap them.

Other than that, one of my favourite tracks. http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_cool.gif

jook13
02-07-2010, 05:13 PM
wow, that is imbarrassing http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_eek.gif http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_redface.gif http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_redface.gif .

Thanks for bringing this to my attention. It is now fixed so a redownload is needed. Sorry for the inconvenience.

I have got a lot of messages complaining about it being too hard. I didnt think it was that hard, is it?

lespritdelescal
02-07-2010, 08:07 PM
wow, that is imbarrassing http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_eek.gif http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_redface.gif http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_redface.gif .

Thanks for bringing this to my attention. It is now fixed so a redownload is needed. Sorry for the inconvenience.

I have got a lot of messages complaining about it being too hard. I didnt think it was that hard, is it?

Cool, thanks for the update to the track.

I didn't think it was too hard. You need to know some advanced techniques, mostly bunny hops and weight shifts. The first obstacle took me a few minutes to figure out the first go round, but on a second playthrough, it took only a couple tries. The rest of the track was pretty straightforward for me, but as it is one of my favourites, it probably compliments my riding style. I guess sometimes it can be difficult to see the next obstacle when you have to make a drop, but all tracks require a couple playthroughs before most people get the lines on them.

I think you did a great job with this one. http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_e_biggrin.gif

jook13
02-14-2010, 02:06 AM
Newest track up called Dirty Sanchez. Let me know what you think! Post your times on Trialshd.net. Enjoy!

Video of it in action:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=u4ZQbGmXIU0

rlmergeuser
02-16-2010, 03:30 PM
dirty sanchez was great loved the colors and theme. also played your other newest track and liked them also the backwards track i couldnt do the reversed controls had me a messed up, but it was a cool idea. anyways really enjoyed your newest creations jook keep it up bro.

jook13
02-16-2010, 06:07 PM
I appreciate the kind words Rotten! For the irreversable track, Try holding the controller upside down. http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_e_wink.gif


I have a new track I put up last night. I think it is beyond extreme difficulty. Called ObstacleCancer.

rlmergeuser
02-17-2010, 05:34 AM
Irreversible is great. A few of my coworkers and I spent an hour or so a week or two ago having blast with it. I managed to survive to the end of the track a couple times, although I'm pretty sure it was just luck. http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_e_smile.gif

jook13
02-17-2010, 05:42 AM
I have had so many mixed reviews about that irreversable track. A few love it, most hate it. I found it is easiest to lean as little as possible. I am glad you got a kick out of it. I am considering making an extreme reverse track http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_twisted.gif http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_twisted.gif probably not though.

jook13
02-22-2010, 08:50 PM
New track called Nadnokker. My first attempt to create a physics based course. I labled it hard, but once you go through it a few times, it really is not. The first obstacle is a little touchy, but very badass when pulled off correctly. Tell me what you think, this is a big departure from my norm.
Video: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8FfoIk25YNY

ahh_me2
02-22-2010, 10:16 PM
I had fun with this track, you're right, it is quite a bit different.

ben1bob
02-23-2010, 01:42 AM
yeah i was surprised i enjoyed this track, because i don't normally like physics based tracks.

but his track seems to rely mostly on skill. good fun.

rlmergeuser
02-23-2010, 05:24 AM
Yep fun track.. what ben1bob said goes for me too!

rlmergeuser
02-24-2010, 06:53 AM
Just tried nadnokker and obstaclecancer. As has already been said, nadnokker was actually quite fun, and the physics nature of it didn't feel contrived or "lucky". obstaclecancer however has me totally stumped. I simply can't see how the very first jump is even possible! Does anyone have a video of this track?

jook13
02-24-2010, 10:34 AM
That first obstacle is a lot easier than it seems... here is a video of my best run, 12 faults.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZgdOoXLyspQ

Thanks for all the complements guys! I spent a lot of time on nadnokker.

rlmergeuser
02-24-2010, 10:43 AM
Ahhhh... I tried doing something like that a couple of times and then figured that must not be it and went back to trying to bunny hop high enough to get the underside of the bike onto that bar. That flip manuever is definitely easier than the near impossible bunny hop I was trying to pull off.

rlmergeuser
02-25-2010, 04:34 AM
loved ther new track jook the obsticles were perfect and i had alot of fun playing the track. Another keeper to add to the growing list of jook tracks. Physics obsticles are hard to make work consistant and for your 1st heavy based track like this it was spot on. The tracks will only get better cant wait for your next.

jook13
02-27-2010, 05:26 AM
Two brand new tracks up for ya guys. One for the flow masters and one for those that like moving parts. Both have a hidden easter-egg. The one in two worlds is pretty sweet, I hope you at least look for that one.

Two Worlds. An easy medium track with a smooth flowing line if you can find it. The second half is less decorated due to that damn object limit.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=np3kx8HQdRA


Metalocalypse. A hard track that is chock full of moving parts and moving metal machinery and things like that. An onslaught of badass. Goes great with Dethklok.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CT_tM8YyzKs

Jarr3tt88
02-27-2010, 03:40 PM
Sent a another FR to get your new tracks......I think I'm keeping you this time lol

rlmergeuser
02-27-2010, 05:05 PM
I'm not sure which 7 of your tracks I downloaded, whichever are available right now I guess.

Either way, they were all a lot of fun, except for the 2 extreme ones... haha. But that is just due to my lack of skill probably.

jook13
02-27-2010, 05:57 PM
Mike, if you have the 7 tracks with my name followed by a number you dont have my 2 newest yet. I had to rename some of them to enter a contest. Its kind of an inconvenience but oh well. For now the tracks I am sharing are named with their proper names again.

Glad to hear that Jarr3tt88. http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_mrgreen.gif http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_mrgreen.gif

rlmergeuser
03-01-2010, 12:14 AM
Two Worlds is good. I like fast tracks like this. Found the easter egg too.. (jim?)

I didn't like Metalocalypse much. Too much physics I think

rlmergeuser
03-01-2010, 12:20 AM
NadNokker - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KgSLo4TL5lw

WIll get video of obstacle cancer later....once i lower faults, HOW COME you hid your fault # in obstacle cancer video jook?

all new tracks are REALLY SICK!

jook13
03-01-2010, 12:39 AM
Thanks for the vid upload of Nadnokker. Its cool to see other peoples approach to my tracks.

I am looking forward to your video of obsticlecancer. Hiding the fault count was unintentional, just the framing of my video cam. I'll reshoot the video. Whatever fault count you manage on obstaclecancer, I'll match on YSNP (your re-make). It will take a while though.

shotaneric... Thanks for the complements on Two Worlds. I made Metalocalypse knowing full well it wouldnt be liked by a lot of you fast-flow loving riders. To be honest it was a lot more fun to make than any other track (not including nadnokker). You should try making a few obsticles with lots of physics, it truly is a lot of fun to fiddle with.

rlmergeuser
03-01-2010, 01:37 AM
here you go bud - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vL5tKFpQhcw

jook13
03-01-2010, 01:42 AM
That was AWESOME! You are insane.

jonofthejungle9
03-02-2010, 02:16 AM
here you go bud - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vL5tKFpQhcw

Dude, that looks mad! I laughed at the funny leg thing @ around 1.15 in the vid.

http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_lol.gif

Ender_IXI
03-06-2010, 01:05 AM
sometimes randoms send me chat or party invites and sometimes i'm bored so i accept and i've talked to this one dude b4 and he asked me whose tracks he should try & you were on and i had him get yours....he really enjoyed them, he was whooping and hollering and laughing just having a good ole time. irreversiable blew his mind and he really liked nadknocker and he was like "how did he do that" on metalpocalypse.....

jook13
03-06-2010, 01:51 AM
haha, awesome.

rlmergeuser
03-06-2010, 02:01 PM
Yeah JOOK the new tracks are sick man your deffinatly shaping up to be one of me fav mappers lol. keep them coming bro and i recieved the message about the new team that is a bad *** team and i know some crazy **** will be coming. Get em JOOK. havent had a chance to add yet and play been consumed by battlefield wish there was an editor for this game lol.

jook13
03-10-2010, 02:38 AM
Downward. A hard ranked track that is all about working your way down. It is not fast paced, so you cant race through it. Hopefully some of you dig this style of play.
Video: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xt5QLVReCNs

rlmergeuser
03-10-2010, 04:28 PM
iv had obsticlecancer on my hard drive for ages and never been able to do the first part >.<,now iv seen video gonna try and do it now looks hard tho http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_e_biggrin.gif

jonofthejungle9
03-11-2010, 11:01 PM
iv had obsticlecancer on my hard drive for ages and never been able to do the first part >.<,now iv seen video gonna try and do it now looks hard tho http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_e_biggrin.gif
I had a go today and got plat first time. (28 taps of the B button and 4.45.079) http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_e_biggrin.gif
Only bit to hold me up was the bit where you kick out your back wheel to land on the log and go round slowly so not to knock the barrel too hard. The rest was fairly easy when you know how lol.

jook13
03-11-2010, 11:05 PM
28 faults aint bad at all. my best is still 12. I'm curious what others manage to score on this track.

jonofthejungle9
03-11-2010, 11:32 PM
Feel fairly confident I could 0 fault it with some practice, tho not sure I got the patience at the mo.

I like this style of track, with very consistant ninja obstacles. I bet it was hard to get them right.

lespritdelescal
03-12-2010, 12:12 AM
Downward!

This track is awesome! The first obstacle was a bit tough to get by, as the falling ramp really didn't work as a ramp in the usual sense, and so I was interpreting how to use it incorrectly, but once I got past that, I was fine.

I'll try and go back through some of your other tracks later and post some feedback. http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_e_smile.gif

rlmergeuser
03-12-2010, 02:08 AM
really cool tracks man, i especially like the slingshot ramp thing-a-ma-jig in nadnokker, epic that was and lots of fun.

ben1bob
03-12-2010, 03:52 PM
Downward is great man. i really wasn't sure at all at first but, like above, once i got past that first obstacle i was hooked mate. top stuff.

the camera work in parts sort of makes me feel sea sick, but in a good way http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_e_biggrin.gif

just make Downward 2 three times as long http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_e_wink.gif

keep it up though man, i love your ideas... and those kaveri tracks are among the best i've played as well.

jonofthejungle9
03-13-2010, 07:31 PM
Hay man, I tried your downward track last night and at first got frustrated, but after I got what you had to do I went for a fast run and managed to top your leaderboard on THD.net http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_e_biggrin.gif
Great idea for a track BTW!
I just got obstacle cancer in 25 goes (1 or 2 if it wassn't for that bloody barrel after the log bit!!!)
I really want to 0 fault this one, If I get below 2, I'll post a vid http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_cool.gif

jook13
03-14-2010, 07:19 PM
haha, sorry jon. I posted the new time to beat on thd.net (downward). I just found out that one of the parts can be done a lot faster. I hope you do get that video for obstacle cancer.

Glad you guys like the tracks. http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_mrgreen.gif

jonofthejungle9
03-14-2010, 08:14 PM
haha, sorry jon. I posted the new time to beat on thd.net (downward). I just found out that one of the parts can be done a lot faster.

00:41.038 http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_e_surprised.gif

Thats fast! I thiunk I know where you took off those 6 sec tho, I just never pulled it off!

jook13
03-19-2010, 09:25 AM
Newest one is called Fightin Fires. I took the concept of downward and put it inside of a building that is one fire and falling apart.

Video: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kPPbPUi_OVI

ben1bob
03-19-2010, 01:10 PM
Newest one is called Fightin Fires. I took the concept of downward and put it inside of a building that is one fire and falling apart.

Video: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kPPbPUi_OVI

sounds good mate. downward was http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_e_biggrin.gif

Euphoric Fusion
03-19-2010, 02:30 PM
Outstanding job! The first section is absoulte genius how you got it to work and the feel of the level is amazing.
Custom cams can be a little tricky and the last section is probably the hardest to get right. The slope onto the ramp ready for the roll back has caught me a number of times.
But very very impressive to say the least. http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_e_smile.gif

rlmergeuser
03-19-2010, 07:41 PM
told you already jook but for the readers, cop this track right away. good use of physics and some new ideas and builds, a few awkward parts but some of it rides perfect with practice. i like slamming that last drop down part into a backflip, its a perfect hidden tech setup. i like the angled 4 drop part too, looks cool with the camera used.

ben1bob
03-22-2010, 12:52 PM
Fightin' Fires is great http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_e_biggrin.gif

i thought downward was really good, but a little short. this is really good but a nice length as well. i like any track that increases lesser-used skills if you get what i mean.

that first part is mint where the tunnel thingy drops as you make your way down, very clever indeed.

really recommend this track.

rlmergeuser
03-22-2010, 01:12 PM
Really enjoying your tracks Jook! Really cool looking with a heap of fresh ideas. Keep 'em coming. http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_e_smile.gif

jook13
03-22-2010, 03:29 PM
Thanks guys! It means a ton reading this stuff.

Heet, just wondering, what did you find awkward? A camera in a certain area? just wondering, if there was a mistake in there, I dont wanna repeate it.

rlmergeuser
03-22-2010, 07:31 PM
nah, just the trip down in the first section mostly. the path to follow is awkward angles and tricky, i got it smooth after a couple tries so its fine for me, but i was watching a buddy play who isn't as good as me and he was having a bunch of trouble getting down through the first part. not really a complaint, just something i noticed watching a noob play. http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_e_wink.gif

jook13
03-23-2010, 04:53 AM
I know exactly what you mean. I figured its no more awkward for a newbie than say the steep climb up tires at the end of Technique. I was watching my friend who doesnt play much attempt that level (technique), he got well over 200 faults, about 100 on that part alone.

I labled it hard for that reason, its not a tough track to 0 fault. There are just a few fairly different techniques needed to succeed. Not many ingame tracks have drops while rolling backwards and things like that. Also, with this style of track, checkpoint placement is a *****, I was forced to spread them out more than I wanted. I wish we could number the order of the checkpoints.

lespritdelescal
03-23-2010, 07:13 PM
I'm not a n00b but I had difficulty with that part too. http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_redface.gif After the bridge falls, the ramp on the other side is just at a weird angle, and I must have clipped my head about 20 times.

Great visuals in this track. As far as including things with physics in your tracks, I would say that you are one of the best out there. I always look forward to what you're going to do with your next track - they keep getting better and better!

rlmergeuser
03-24-2010, 02:06 PM
jook you last 2 tracks were awsome havent commented yet but i really enjoy your tracks man. love the drop down style you make.

lespritdelescal
03-27-2010, 07:54 PM
I spent a couple hours playing through your tracks last night, so here's some more feedback..

The visuals in your last couple tracks have been really good. I think I mentioned that the start of Fightin Fires looked incredible.

I really enjoyed playing through your tracks, and trying to improve my times. I think I ended up getting platinum on 3 or four of the tracks of yours that I have ( I'm missing one or two). Turns out I wasn't in the mood for some of the physics stuff last night, so I didn't play through some of the tracks that are a little heavier on the physics, but I'll get back to them.

My favourites were Two Worlds (which I previously didn't have much interest in http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_redface.gif), Dirty Sanchez, Dorkus, and Unlucky 13 (my fav).

I did get frustrated by some of the landing angles in Downward and Fightin Fires. When you switch from one platform to another a couple times, you're switching to a platform which is 90 degrees to the one you're on in a tight spot, and that gets kind of tricky. Just gotta spend some more time practicing that, and I'm sure I'll enjoy those more.

Even though I didn't really play physics tracks yesterday, your physics continue to improve, and continue to be some of the more enjoyable physics in custom tracks. I can't wait to see what you do next.

Thank you for sharing your tracks with all of us! http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_e_biggrin.gif

jook13
03-30-2010, 02:01 AM
Thanks les, kind words!

New track is now up for grabs. Its called Toxic Facility. Set in a toxic dump plant type place, this time with no physics or gimmicks, just raw riding. Its medium difficulty.
video: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xRt-HClkQ7g

rlmergeuser
03-30-2010, 09:14 AM
looks really cool man cant wait to have a try at this one!

rlmergeuser
04-01-2010, 01:11 AM
cool look on this one jook, i haven't tried playing it yet but the video is cool. i had a chemical lab delivery track that i lost that looked kinda like this, but was you know.. a delivery track. can't wait to play the facility when i get a chance.

jook13
04-01-2010, 01:19 AM
You lost it? Was it due to a save crash? Thats one of my biggest fears, I hear about people losing their track when it crashes during a save or something like that. I am not as careful as I should be about saving multiple copies.

Thanks for the kind words guys. I took your comment about my previous track to heart heet. The one you said about a technical manuever where you bounce and backflip. I tried to design this one so an average rider will hit a lot of speed bumps and lose momentum, but the rider that learns techie little bounces and hops and such will gain a lot of speed throughout. I didnt want to spoon-feed any flow.

rlmergeuser
04-01-2010, 01:26 AM
hmm that one was my mistake of a re-save i think, but yeah lost a couple with save crashing too. mostly just blazed out and saving overtop of some other stuff by accident, oops. a few are just straight up deletes of stuff i couldn't find time to finish and hated them taunting me in my track list (castle, haunted house, whole bunch of stuff)

and yeah, like i said after a few playthrus and i was killing it with fun maneuvers as usual, so dont really take what i was saying serious. it was from watching an unskilled, watching anyone playin my tracks in real life is some lol material too

jook13
04-01-2010, 01:31 AM
Naw man, it was the part you said you liked where you hit the ramp and bounce-backflipped. You called it a tech move or something like that and it stuck with me, I like the idea of incorperating more tech moves like that.

rlmergeuser
04-01-2010, 02:54 AM
toxic......is BALLER jook, another mad sick track i love from you....Has some really tech parts that took me a little bit to get into a run, but hey thats what keeps ME playing over and over http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_e_biggrin.gif

@ Heet - Lol haunted house, now that would be sick...make **** appear out of nowhere and pop out at you http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_eek.gif http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_razz.gif


Looking Forward to any Next track from you bud http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_e_smile.gif

jook13
04-01-2010, 05:02 AM
haha, thanks man. I got .006 slower than your run on this track, and I have many many many hours invested in both testing and then trying to beat your score. And yeah, a haunted house would be badass....

jook13
04-08-2010, 07:07 AM
New one called Donkey Puncher... Rated hard. It has nothing to do with the donkey bike, I didnt think about that when I named it...

Video: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CUCYGBEaYhU

rlmergeuser
04-08-2010, 11:49 PM
cool looking statue thing in the background with the triangles http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_e_smile.gif love the details jook

Dosto707
04-08-2010, 11:54 PM
The new track is just brilliant. Love the riding line.
I suggest every one of you beasts go beast it right now. May take some time to get it perfect, but i say you it is worth it http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_e_smile.gif. Really well designed riding line. oh and looks great too.

jook13
04-09-2010, 01:39 AM
Thanks guys!

Dosto is an animal with a time of 33.207 on trialshd.net. I dare any of you to beat that, its about 2 seconds better than my best so far.

Dosto707
04-09-2010, 02:31 AM
Well RedRider already beat me with a time of 31.856 he says :[
But imma beat him tomorrow! (maybe :l)
Anyways..I'm really having fun with this track.
Good stuff.

jook13
04-09-2010, 02:51 AM
haha, awesome! We will see what kind of time I can get out of her tonight. I am hoping that I have the advantage of knowing the track better than you two!

Dosto707
04-09-2010, 03:00 AM
bah! your knowing of the track aint gonna help you against us! sorry, haha! http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_e_biggrin.gif
http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_razz.gif
We challenge thee!

ben1bob
04-09-2010, 01:16 PM
really enjoying donkey puncher. i'm at work now so can't post my time. i got 45.001, so was .001 off Gold last night but can't remember what i got after that run due to me finding your little secret room.

i was disgusted by what i found http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_lol.gif

rlmergeuser
04-09-2010, 02:54 PM
you guys do the jump over huge gap from the shipping container right?

Dosto707
04-09-2010, 03:04 PM
you guys do the jump over huge gap from the shipping container right?
yea. I do a backwheel bounce from that bridge that falls and then jump from the containers.
It looks really cool when you nail it :]

EDIT: eeeeeww.. i found the easter egg too. really cute.

Oh and i got 31.199

jook13
04-09-2010, 05:09 PM
I played it for like a half an hour this morning before my girls woke up, then they kicked me off so they can watch spongebob. I got 33.827. How are you hitting that steep little hill just after the container gap shortcut? I think that is where I loose my few seconds.

and the little secret room, I'm surprised you found that, I thought it was well hidden... http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_mrgreen.gif

Dosto707
04-09-2010, 05:37 PM
How are you hitting that steep little hill just after the container gap shortcut? I think that is where I loose my few seconds.
I slow down carefully very late just before the hill, and then try to start the climb really careful too so i dont have to let go of the gas. using the analog.
hard to describe :l
But on my current fastest i kinda hit the hill and bounce back :/ and then climb.

Red already got 30.679 http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_razz.gif

lespritdelescal
04-11-2010, 07:14 PM
I haven't tried the new one yet jook, but I'll get there.

Put up a couple videos.. both platinum runs.

Forest Fire: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gvgfD1c80VU (i uploaded without checking jarrett's channel - looks like he has it too)
Two Worlds: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wa31K2MeIow

jook13
04-11-2010, 07:44 PM
Thats awesome! You hit the ride line beautifully on both as well!

Its much appreciated, I'll replace the links on my original post to go to these videos if thats ok with you.

lespritdelescal
04-11-2010, 09:52 PM
All good with me. I'll get practicing on some of your others soon and see what I can do about some more videos.

PS. I can't wait to see you do a track called Cleveland Steamer.

rlmergeuser
04-12-2010, 02:23 AM
Cool track.. what were you thinking about when you named it ? http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_lol.gif

lespritdelescal
04-15-2010, 07:54 AM
jookster.. here's my vid of donkey puncher for you. I'm nowhere near some of the people who've posted, but I managed platinum.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-QyIIOHlJig

lespritdelescal
04-19-2010, 01:28 AM
jook, I had a few runs through Matrix and got a decent gold time. figure it'll be awhile before I get platinum, so I made you a video: (might still be rendering)

EDIT - took out the video - will take a new one of the new version.

Once I had figured out the driving line (it's difficult to tell with those poles), I really enjoyed this one. Had a bit of difficulty with the drop part (where you're bouncing down back and forth), and you can see my landing in the video.. haha.

My favourite part of the track was the end, after the drop down. I thought those obstacles worked really well together.

les

jook13
04-19-2010, 04:54 AM
New track called the Matrix.

Damn les, you got a video before I was able to post it up here. Unfortunately, I had uploaded an older version of the track by accident. The one you took a video of is missing a lot of detail. The ride line is identicle. I do appreciate these videos mate!

I took a low res video of the newer version. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fJG-TulSE3w

rlmergeuser
04-19-2010, 03:13 PM
ok, i played matrix and like it a lot! looks very cool AND it's fun to play,

but... i must say that i like some of your other trax more. for example, nadnokker is my kind of track actually. and i just LOVE toxic facility! it looks amazing and i could play it again and again!

really some great stuff!! keep it up, greets, DA

rlmergeuser
04-19-2010, 05:46 PM
been awhile since i commented here but all your new ones have been cool jook. liked donkey puncher alot, toxic is just sick i love the line and the deco like i said before. matrix wasn't really my thing but i like the geometry anyway. keep up the good work get em jook

jook13
04-20-2010, 04:06 AM
Its kind of funny, I have got like 4 messages from people saying The Matrix is hard, a few say they couldnt finish it. I was torn between rating it medium and hard after I made it. Guess choosing hard was the right choice. I didnt think it is very tough.


been awhile since i commented here but all your new ones have been cool jook. liked donkey puncher alot, toxic is just sick i love the line and the deco like i said before. matrix wasn't really my thing but i like the geometry anyway. keep up the good work get em jook

I appreciate the love for my tracks mate. The Matrix aint for everyone, its cool. I had fun with the look, its tough to make a good ride line out of 3 sizes of poles while keeping mostly right angles.


ok, i played matrix and like it a lot! looks very cool AND it's fun to play,

but... i must say that i like some of your other trax more. for example, nadnokker is my kind of track actually. and i just LOVE toxic facility! it looks amazing and i could play it again and again!

really some great stuff!! keep it up, greets, DA

I appreciate the compliments mate. It means a lot coming from a creator that makes the quality of tracks that you do.

rlmergeuser
04-20-2010, 09:40 PM
Utterly professional tracks. Addictive and they never feel unfair. Track decoration is beautiful.

So many clever little touches on the tracks too. Quality stuff jook.

ahh_me2
04-20-2010, 10:10 PM
Oh yeah!

I played the matrix track last night....great track concept....but it reminded me of tron for some reason...lol

rlmergeuser
04-21-2010, 02:15 PM
Nice videos about your tracks!
I sent you a pm if its possible to be friends and share your tracks http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_e_smile.gif
I can't wait to play them http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_e_smile.gif

great regards,
VanHoutte

ben1bob
04-22-2010, 11:20 AM
well i really liked The Matrix. certainly better than the crappy film. no offence to anyone who enjoyed the film http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_e_wink.gif

initially yeah the driving line is hard to spot. but after a couple of goes you know exactly what you're doing.

another keeper mate!! nice one.

rlmergeuser
04-24-2010, 05:31 AM
Whats craicing(irish spelling) Jook?just got round to playing donkey puncher and matrix there, donkey puncher is insanely good, especially for going for times and what i like about it most is that it caters for every style, theres no specific spec ial way to attack the driving line which is the hardest thing to do imo when making a track and you nailed it.
Matrix is just pure qual, anyone who can make a track as diverse as this using the one object deserves a medal!

p.s still drooling over toxic facility, what a track!

rlmergeuser
04-26-2010, 02:16 AM
Had a go on the Matrix last night - definitely not my favorite from your tracks, but still a great track never the less. i think the main thing I enjoyed from it was just the unique feel.

Keep 'em coming Jook! http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_e_smile.gif

Retribution
04-26-2010, 05:20 AM
Add me again jook.

jook13
05-18-2010, 11:52 PM
New Track!

The Ol' In-Out. Rated hard. Fall down into a pit then climb out.

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ben1bob
05-19-2010, 11:45 AM
i'm off trials all week mate but i'll be trying your track out as soon as i get back on it.

i've neglected customs the last 2/3 weeks due to trying to play WC. but i'll be back on them the weekend.

jook13
05-22-2010, 06:09 AM
New track... Called three by three. Its for that competition when it comes to fruition. An entire track confined in a 3 by 3 room box. Its a bit tricky. No video as my video recorder is frizzing out on me.

jook13
05-25-2010, 02:13 PM
Darker Days. An extreme track. Its a bit of a tough one. Zero faultable for sure though. Those of you who have mastered things like the back wheel hop can get a pretty fast run.

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Let me know what you think eh?

jook13
05-29-2010, 06:32 AM
New track called Nosebleed Mine. Its really fast and has huge jumps. Enjoy and tell me about what you think of it. Its up on trialshd.net as well.
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Dosto707
05-29-2010, 02:30 PM
Nosebleed was the first track i played today, and it just made me smile and laugh and im just glad i played it first http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_razz.gif so much fun. Thanks for sharing!

rlmergeuser
05-30-2010, 07:20 AM
yo jook, been a minute since i was in here. nosebleed was mad fun and im sure ill play it some more but its really good for playing with friends or something, not hard and just fun to fly allover the map in. you know i like my extreme stuff tho, darker days; loved it. i spent some time checking it all out, real nice detail, variety of objects, and just crazy **** in general. like the name alot too, love the twisted designs man. http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_twisted.gif in n out was another keeper, you love your drop down and climb out style tracks don't you? http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_e_wink.gif the track name made me think some checkpoint was gonna be some phallic piston like object or something but i was happy there was none of that. you seem to bang em out pretty quick right now, so im lookin forward to the next 1 soon(?)

jook13
05-30-2010, 06:01 PM
Nosebleed was the first track i played today, and it just made me smile and laugh and im just glad i played it first http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_razz.gif so much fun. Thanks for sharing!

Thanks mate, that was the goal, just a fun fast track.


you seem to bang em out pretty quick right now, so im lookin forward to the next 1 soon(?)

Maybe not too soon, there are dozens of messages in my inbox telling me about new tracks that I have yet to play. I wanna get caught up on all them and give em a proper play through before I start on another. And thanks for the kind words on Darker days, you and I both know that the extremes in general dont get as much love...

lespritdelescal
05-30-2010, 07:41 PM
Jook, you're a track making machine lately http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_e_smile.gif

I played nosebleed mine yesterday, and it was a lot of fun! My brother was sitting there watching me, and he was laughing so much at the part with the big air.

Of the 20 or so tracks that I shared yesterday, this one was easily my favourite!

rlmergeuser
05-31-2010, 02:54 AM
Your 3x3 was very clever and well judged difficulty wise. Really liked it.

Nosebleed Mine is one of my new favourite tracks.
It is a lot of fun and geteing those speeds is always a blast, but it's also beautifully decorated with some lovely little touches.
Very, very professional track jook. And the kind of track I'd be delighted to play as DLC. Great work. http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_cool.gif
Never underestimate a track that just allows the rider a bit of speed, freedom and jumping playability.
Particularly after playing extreme track after extreme track for a while.

I'll need to try Darker Days again as it's pretty tough in places.

jook13
06-03-2010, 07:09 AM
New map called marksman. Its a target hunt this time. Let me know what you think eh...

rlmergeuser
06-03-2010, 07:30 PM
have really enjoyed your recent work man, the extreme, 3x3 and the target hunt are cool, loads of places to go in the target hunt but i just felt the plat of 65 was abit low as i got 88 the 2nd run by pure luck.

Jarr3tt88
06-03-2010, 07:34 PM
Jook man....you got alot of tracks now! lol I gotta run through them and get some vids for you. Please remind me! http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_e_smile.gif

jook13
06-03-2010, 07:37 PM
boris: I agree that the plat is low. I just got 99. Should have tested it more. I can revise that.

Jarr3tt88: You know I would really appreciate that. My digicam recordings kinda suck.

rlmergeuser
06-03-2010, 07:47 PM
haha i took a couple runs and got 55, but i suck at target hunt. So its fair for me http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_e_smile.gif

jook13
06-03-2010, 08:32 PM
My video of the score to beat (to my knowledge)... 99.

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jook13
06-09-2010, 08:07 AM
One more 3x3 contest entry.
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jook13
06-15-2010, 08:42 AM
Mammoth Mtn.. Rated Medium. Set in a blizzard with glaciers and stuff. Being rated medium, its fairly easy to zero fault. It is very technical though, and it will take great control to get a good time. I actually designed the track to slow you down, unless you've got the right moves...

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Retribution
06-16-2010, 05:14 AM
Great flow, enjoyed your latest track. Still couldnt put up a good time because of the last obstacle i have to jump over before the finish line, im tryin to work it and get it under 35 secs.

jook13
06-16-2010, 05:16 AM
Right on mate, glad you liked it. It seems this track is going under the radar with this season 2 stuff going on!

Dosto707
06-16-2010, 05:24 AM
It seems this track is going under the radar with this season 2 stuff going on!No, no; it's on the radar for sure. I love it :]
Looks amazing and rides like a dream too.

Thanks for sharing again.

jhop420
06-16-2010, 06:02 AM
Mammoth Mtn. is awesome! The driving line is smooth and technical. The background looks cool too with all the cubes and the snowy atmosphere. I've been playing Mammoth Mtn. more than Fighting Fires today http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_e_smile.gif

Top stuff. Keep up the good work

Jongie
06-17-2010, 09:34 AM
I enjoy playing Mammoth Mtn. Good technical driving line. Hope i can get platin on this one the next days. Thanks for sharing! http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_e_smile.gif

rlmergeuser
06-19-2010, 07:35 PM
Hey man, I played the rest or your tracks that I have and I loved them!!! Mamomoth Mtn. was beautiful and fun to play. I played all and had a blast doing it while being visually stimulated. I'm deffinately going to open up a permanent spot on my FL after your week in the tourny http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_e_biggrin.gif

rlmergeuser
06-19-2010, 11:58 PM
the new one is siccness jook, you got one of my favourite extremes now and a couple really nice medium style ones, top mapmaker in my books bro. loved the steam off the "glaciers" and stuff, and the line is fast and tricky to keep up your speed on, redlynx style.

MurdocLoch
06-26-2010, 09:20 PM
Toxic Facility (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4jsMlRzzH0Q) - 26.262

rlmergeuser
06-26-2010, 09:26 PM
SICK RUN MYRDY http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_e_biggrin.gif

jook13
07-06-2010, 01:48 AM
Hell yeah sick run Murdy...

got a new one out its for the 3 object contest... Called Only 3
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rlmergeuser
07-06-2010, 02:02 AM
here is my run on only 3. very nice track btw. well done jook once again

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bJutwabIsug

rlmergeuser
07-06-2010, 07:29 AM
Great track with lots going on and very good use of the 3 object limitation. Thanks Jook. http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_e_smile.gif

rlmergeuser
07-06-2010, 08:29 AM
what a weird choice of objects to use, but it works very well, i love the last 10 seconds of the track especially.

rlmergeuser
07-07-2010, 12:05 AM
good choice of objects on the 3 limit jook. Sick track once again http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_mrgreen.gif

jook13
07-12-2010, 04:52 AM
Thanks guys!

Here is my 2nd entry.
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lespritdelescal
07-13-2010, 07:57 PM
Hey Jook - Made you a couple videos for your 3OL's, no pressure to use them. http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_e_smile.gif Still having fun with them - gotta figure out how to platinum #1. #2 is my favourite though - love the bouncing, especially off the moving stuff.

I also agree with heet - interesting choice of objects on #1, but well executed.

3OL #1 (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=r-K2T5lrFzM)
3OL #2 (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=utUJSQeCSig)

Didn't embed cause you've already embedded your runs - didn't want to clog up the topic.

Keep it up, jook!

jook13
07-23-2010, 05:50 PM
I released my entry to all in my FR list. Before I call it final, I want you to play it and tell me what sucks about it! Its called Catastrophe.

rlmergeuser
07-23-2010, 05:53 PM
nothing sucks about it its sweet http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_e_wink.gif

rlmergeuser
07-23-2010, 08:02 PM
That map is addicting to play. Im not for sure what the plat. time is but i got it on first run. http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_lol.gif I pulled a low 28 sec run after 20 mins or so. I liked the changes that you did make on the track which made it a little more technical.

jook13
07-23-2010, 08:05 PM
I still think its too easy to get a good run. Even for a medium.

rlmergeuser
07-24-2010, 12:56 AM
pure jook style, flying hiiigh and watching burnign buildings falling apart in the background. i'd know this was yours without your name on it, you always do the fast flying **** proper and you like your burning structures http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_e_wink.gif

jook13
07-25-2010, 05:18 AM
Thanks heet... glad ya liked it.
I went ahead and made another track. Completely different from each other.. Which one would you rather see in the DLC?

Catastrophie: Kinda short, detailed track. Medium. A few time-savers. Seems like it would be a "safe" choice for the comp. Fastest route may be too easy to achieve... I dont know.
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Forkin Metal: Longer track. Hard. Big fast intro (yeah, I have used before). Turns into a fairly technical hard. Also has a lot of time-savers. Less detail due to the overall ground it covers.
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I wanna know which one I should really polish up to enter...

Edit: and BIG thanks to all who have helped me so far!

Jarr3tt88
07-25-2010, 06:52 AM
I haven't played either yet but Catastrophie looks a lot better.

rlmergeuser
07-25-2010, 01:46 PM
I've played them both.. I like Forkin Metal a lot more.. crazy fast with some nice tech riding in the middle.

rlmergeuser
07-25-2010, 02:51 PM
That's a tough one Jook, I really like them both. The scoring gives 30% to look and feel, 30% to innovation and creativity, and 40% to playability. Catastrophe definitely looks better; Forkin Metal definitely had the edge in innovation/creativity. It's not an easy choice but I think, on paper at least, I'd run with Catastrophe as it makes a stronger overall first impression.

Scoring wise it's a technically tighter ride (playability) and looks noticeably better (look and feel). I don't believe that any bonus you would get in the creativity/innovation category by choosing Forkin Metal would offset the losses incurred in the other two categories by forgoing Catastrophe. http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_e_ugeek.gif

Having said that, the more I play Forkin Metal the bigger the grin gets on my face...

Great job on both, they're really well done! http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_e_biggrin.gif

rlmergeuser
07-25-2010, 04:04 PM
Gave them a go last night. Forkin' Metal, all the way. Its ripe for speedrunning, the insane fast paced start, the technical bit...I'd play it for hours if it had supported leaderboards.

Get on it, jook. Awesome.

jook13
07-26-2010, 02:53 AM
Haha... why did I do this to myself? I have gotten an overwhelming 50-50 reaction from all you guys and people on xbox live. Half you are for one, half for the other.

I would still like to know more peoples opinions on which you like more... And what would make them better... Thanks again for all that have put input so far!

Jarr3tt88
07-26-2010, 04:22 AM
Ok I finally played them!

I like Catastrophe the best. I played it a bunch of times http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_e_biggrin.gif I only noticed slight texture glitching at the start line, everything was pretty good! I love the flow http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_e_biggrin.gif I got 31.3 secs. Thought I found a shortcut but it wasn't lol (or maybe it was but I sucked at it :p)

rlmergeuser
07-26-2010, 11:25 AM
Haha... why did I do this to myself? I have gotten an overwhelming 50-50 reaction from all you guys and people on xbox live. Half you are for one, half for the other.

I would still like to know more peoples opinions on which you like more... And what would make them better... Thanks again for all that have put input so far!

Jook I just found this thread, I have always just gone to 'general' and never really looked here.

Anyway I definitely liked both of your tracks..I gave you my opinions already on your medium track but after playing your hard track, I am definitely more of a fan of your hard track (of course I am bias towards harder tracks cos I play them more) it was so brilliant from the hectic but not frustrating intro and all the nice technical stuff. All your obstacles (except for intro) could be taken in alot of different ways.

Honestly I really couldn't find much wrong with it..The only thing I would say is maybe it needs a bit more scenery just to make it stand out a little but since its long this may not be possible and the layout itself is pretty much a standout.

Really its your choice and like what you said I think the medium track is definitely the "safe" option and its an overall solid track but the hard track stands out so much more to me..Also I think good riders always make better hard tracks because you know what makes hard tracks fun to play.

The only part I really had trouble with was getting to that 'shortcut' ramp at the end...Does it require getting a smooth run down the ramp?? (ie from the previous obstacle, the jump down from the top platform)...I got this a few times but still couldn't lead smoothly into it. I probably just need more practice at it.

My best time after nearly a couple of hours of playing was 49.244 but I never got the end right and I was going over and over some of your obstacles.

jook13
07-27-2010, 07:30 PM
Final version of Forkin Metal is up. Made some changes to the end.. and move around and deleated objects to pretty it up a bit. I think I will go with this one, it stands out more than Catastrophie I believe... Any thoughts before I hit the submit button? issues need be fixin?

rlmergeuser
07-27-2010, 07:33 PM
If you talk on a mic i can maybe help improve catastrophie, because I like it a lot better.

I think it needs more timesavers, Maybe a frontflip and land against something circular etc... to make you gain speed to only make a farther jump than you would if just landing.

Anything like that makes the track a whole lot better http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_e_wink.gif

QcChopper
07-27-2010, 08:03 PM
Awesome work Jook, I love both tracks, but so far I like Forkin Metal a bit more, I loved that big wheel at the end and I thought it was a great high speed track, and although I usually prefer technical tracks, there are always exceptions and this is one of them. *****in'! Best of luck for the contest.

Retribution
08-02-2010, 02:29 AM
Thrill Kill was alright, but man i gotta say im lovin your latest creation (The Flip Side) Its like a ninja Inferno/Diabolic. I finished with 150 faults in around 10 mins, but most of that was at 1 section, when you fall down and have to climb over a steep wall and bounce over some barrels then hop onto the next platform. The visuals on this track is top notch. Im pretty sure i can knock this out with less than 10 faults soon.

Would like to see this in the DLC entry tho. http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_e_wink.gif

edit- 24 faults 4 mins http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_razz.gif

jook13
08-02-2010, 02:47 AM
You beat me to it man http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_razz.gif Glad ya like it.

Yeah, new track up called The Flip Side. It is a very tough extreme. I would say it is ninja, but not as tough as bounce or AM2. Still, a 0 fault would be very impressive to watch.... I dont think anyone will do it. http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_cool.gif (feel free to prove me wrong)

video coming later tonight.

Retribution
08-02-2010, 05:00 AM
It is certainly 0 faultable, but someone else will probably beat me to it. (JJ, red or murdoc)

jook13
08-02-2010, 06:11 AM
It is certainly 0 faultable, but someone else will probably beat me to it. (JJ, red or murdoc)

haha.. I know. Reverse psycology http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_e_wink.gif

Here is a video of it in action:
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Retribution
08-02-2010, 06:33 AM
For the 3rd checkpoint, what i did was gas hard hit the front tire directly and just slide back on the below platform with plenty of room, almost impossible to fault with this method.

rlmergeuser
08-02-2010, 08:27 AM
You are a very bad man jook. http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_e_sad.gif Evil, evil track. http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_twisted.gif http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_lol.gif
But extremely well constructed and decorated as always. Rock solid stuff.

And BTW I think Thrill Kill is a great track. http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_e_biggrin.gif

rlmergeuser
08-02-2010, 09:25 AM
sick track man, prob your best so far http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_e_smile.gif

MurdocLoch
08-02-2010, 08:43 PM
The Flip Side & Obstacle Cancer (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=R9-FPwASQLU) - Both 1 fault runs - Sorry I couldn't manage any better - I'm really not supposed to be playing customs right now anyway- Enjoy - ML

rlmergeuser
08-02-2010, 10:51 PM
The Flip Side & Obstacle Cancer (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=R9-FPwASQLU) - Both 1 fault runs - Sorry I couldn't manage any better - I'm really not supposed to be playing customs right now anyway- Enjoy - ML
Sickening! http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_cry.gif http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_lol.gif Seriously impressive runs. http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_cool.gif

Last time I tried Flip Side I got the back wheel up on to the very last beam before the finish when the time ran out. http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_evil.gif http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_lol.gif
So for us mere mortals I think the difficulty is perfect for a ninja track.

jook13
08-03-2010, 02:38 AM
that is awesome Murdy, nice runs by any means. guess I shoulda made Flip Side harder http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_twisted.gif .

Thanks for the positive feedback, makes it worth getting all the hatemail http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_lol.gif

Jongie
08-03-2010, 10:55 AM
Murdoc is a beast! He makes it look so easy. But these are really challenging tracks. Cant complete any of both for now. But thats no reason to send hatemails. Anytime i will come back, like i have done with skumbags tracks! http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_e_biggrin.gif

rlmergeuser
08-04-2010, 07:45 AM
Thrill Kill is so funny! awesome flow and interesting raceline, cameras are perfect and the track itself looks like its built by redlynx, huge props and good luck on the contest

by best so far 52:816 (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TPCVcGLJoaQ)

jook13
08-08-2010, 07:37 AM
New track fellas. Its my boss battle for the Redlynxtv comp. Its Its more of a full legnth track working your way up a giant robot, taking out his limbs on the way, then blasting his head off when you get to the top. I tried to find a good balance between ride-line and boss battle. I didnt want a lot of backing up or funky flipped-reverse riding in it.

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rlmergeuser
08-11-2010, 07:05 PM
Very satisfying to behead the metallic menace jook. http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_cool.gif
And it is pretty playable as well as looking great with some excellent details like the wiring.

rlmergeuser
08-12-2010, 11:05 AM
loving some of the unique detail you have in your boss track man, good stuff.

rlmergeuser
08-13-2010, 05:00 AM
Hey Jook, I really enjoy FlipSide even though it's still destroying me! http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_lol.gif I can get all the way to the end with roughly 15-faults, but for some reason I can't beg, borrow, or steal my way over the very last incline-square-log ledge. I have roughly 1,000 faults wrapped up on that last obstacle, you'd think by now I'd have miracled my way over through sheer probability! http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_lol.gif But, I will keep at it until it gives up and lets me through. http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_twisted.gif

Robo Doom is also very well done. I'm digging that 1950's robot invasion vibe and the claw. Watching the whole thing crumble to pieces at the end is really cool! http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_e_biggrin.gif

BlueMageFTW
08-13-2010, 08:32 PM
yeah jook... great stuff brudda. (robo doom) i finished and submitted my boss battle also, 'Judas' ...if ya'd like, see it here. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=f7okZC5P3nU

rlmergeuser
08-16-2010, 07:03 PM
all the new **** is sick jook but i still havent tried thrill kill or the robot boss. flipside is nasty as hell and your dlc was awesome too (you chose catastrophie right?)

jook13
08-20-2010, 06:27 AM
Heet, grim, bluemage, boris, golem. Thanks for the kinds words guys. puts a grin on my face. http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_mrgreen.gif

New track called Spoon Feed. Its a technical medium. Hard to platinum. I doubt any of you fools even can. http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_razz.gif

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By the way, I uploaded all my recent tracks onto trialshd.net, got all caught up. Sorry it took so long.

lifeonaboard
08-20-2010, 11:34 AM
Spoon Feed is the perfect medium track. Easy to 0 fault with an extremely hard speed line. It is easily one of my favorites ever.

rlmergeuser
08-20-2010, 05:18 PM
hey jooks, got a chance to test out the sick track called thrill kill finally the other day. another classic ill definitely play again and again. one thing i did want to mention tho, and this is not to take away from any of your tracks they are all sick i play them all the time, you use the fast catapult in almost every new track you done in the past few months. i like doing it, its always a sick move flying over half the track when you hit it properly, but i like seeing new stuff and seems like almost every new track of yours i play im going "oh he did this again?" guess you really like that move http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_e_wink.gif anyway this is not negative feedback, just somethign i noticed. thrill kill is another keeper and one of my favourites of the ones you've done lately

rlmergeuser
08-20-2010, 08:24 PM
Spoon Feed has some truly superb background graphics. http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_cool.gif I kept messing up looking at all the wonderful detail.

Redlynx are going to have to push the boat out for the Big Thrill Pack as the trackmakers on here seem intent on outdoing them on background graphics.


Spoon Feed does indeed have a great line and one that's very tricky to master and fun to keep trying for Platinum.

Though I have to say Heetsauce the only 2 tracks I've seen of jooks with the briliant speed boosts are Nosebleed Mine and Thrill Kill. And both are personal favourites of mine.
I haven't seen anyone else executing these high speed sections as well as Jook though there was an Isabelle stye track from somone (who's name sadly escapes me at the moment) that used wind to make it mindblowingly fast.

Retribution
08-20-2010, 08:34 PM
though there was an Isabelle stye track from somone (who's name sadly escapes me at the moment) that used wind to make it mindblowingly fast.

Lespritdelescalier made that one. http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_e_wink.gif

rlmergeuser
08-20-2010, 08:39 PM
my bad maybe im just lacking on all the new jook tracks and only played the ones with that move in it. i know catastrophie, forkin metal, nosebleed and thrill kill that all have the same style catapult in em, but it is a pretty sick move so i cant blame you http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_e_wink.gif

rlmergeuser
08-21-2010, 01:23 AM
Hey jook which track did you pick for your DLC entry?

rlmergeuser
08-21-2010, 02:51 AM
I really like Spoon Feed. Keep up the good work! http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_e_biggrin.gif

jook13
08-21-2010, 03:40 AM
hey jooks, got a chance to test out the sick track called thrill kill finally the other day. another classic ill definitely play again and again. one thing i did want to mention tho, and this is not to take away from any of your tracks they are all sick i play them all the time, you use the fast catapult in almost every new track you done in the past few months. i like doing it, its always a sick move flying over half the track when you hit it properly, but i like seeing new stuff and seems like almost every new track of yours i play im going "oh he did this again?" guess you really like that move http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_e_wink.gif anyway this is not negative feedback, just somethign i noticed. thrill kill is another keeper and one of my favourites of the ones you've done lately

I know what you mean. I felt the same way making them. After Nosbleed I used the same thing in a 30L track. Then I made Thrill Kill thinking it would be for the DLC contest and wanted to include the move in that. Microsoft accepted my Catastrophe track a long while ago and I misread the rules apparently so I couldnt re-submit a new track http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_asleep.gif wanted to use Thrill Kill after Cata was accepted). So basically, I used the same section in Nosebleed for two other competition tracks.

I'll keep it fresh for sure from now on though, I like to see new things as much as all of you guys.

And that Isabella sequal by Les is pretty intense, One of my favorites.

Jarr3tt88
08-21-2010, 05:00 AM
Video love for Spoon Feed http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yH13oBg2ewQ

Pretty sweet track! Only took two runs, but I wanna try and find the flow http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_e_biggrin.gif Nice work man! If i haven't said it lately, you are such an awesome creator now from back then http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_e_biggrin.gif Keep it up man!

rlmergeuser
08-21-2010, 10:21 PM
crazy new track, all the colours are mental, so much goin on, i love when you do detail heavy tracks, they are my fave, i got 36 secs so far

lespritdelescal
08-22-2010, 03:21 AM
Thanks for the nice words about my track guys http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_e_biggrin.gif

Anyhow, as for Spoon Feed - wow. The visuals are amazing, probably one of my favourites of any custom I've played. I ran through this one super slowly several times just to take a look at everything. The line is also really cool and extremely hard to maintain - would have been sick to see how people managed if this was in season 2. I look forward to playing this one a lot more. Well done, jook!

MurdocLoch
08-23-2010, 02:50 AM
jook - played spoon feed a few times today - liked it a lot http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_e_smile.gif

rlmergeuser
08-24-2010, 10:25 AM
I have tried some of your tracks and they are really nice tracks.
Great lines and nice decorations.
I love your style http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_e_smile.gif

jook13
08-26-2010, 08:15 PM
F4HMaTiSp0rT. Thanks man. I havent comments on your stuff like I should. Your style is all your own. Very decorative patterns and smooth lines. I like it.

MurdocLoch. Thanks mate, I tried to do what you do best. Technical riding.

lespritdelescalier. Thanks! It would be sweet to see what the top dogs can do on it.

boris. Thanks man, I cant mental colors like you do, but I try.

Jarr3tt88. Thanks for the video man! I know I make my own, but the quality cant compare to that delectable Hd you have there.


Anyways... New track called ********. Complete with the worlds most lame Fatality.
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Willyums
08-27-2010, 12:50 AM
man jook i had no idea your tracks were so advanced. right up there with the best creators imo http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_e_biggrin.gif

Retribution
08-27-2010, 02:07 AM
That track is just BULLSH*T. and im lovin it. http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_e_biggrin.gif Will work on a better time as soon as i finish COMMAND RESPECT.

rlmergeuser
09-04-2010, 02:16 PM
"Mammoth Mtn" is one of favorite tracks. very nice decoration and the line driving is very fun.

all your tracks are awesome. congratulations!!! http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_e_biggrin.gif

jook13
09-07-2010, 09:04 PM
Thanks for the kind words fella's! Got another extreme for some of you to beast if you are up for it. Its called Lonely Number.

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rlmergeuser
09-07-2010, 09:23 PM
"Lonely number" is great. I played a little and is great fun. I will try the next few days to get platinum.

I really like the extreme tracks how it!!! http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_cool.gif

lespritdelescal
09-08-2010, 12:19 AM
I think Loneliest Number is my favourite of yours. After watching your video, I think I should easily be able to manage trimming off about a second more so I can grab a platinum medal.

The first time I played this one though, I had 40 something faults, and didn't even come close to the silver time. http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_e_smile.gif

MurdocLoch
09-08-2010, 04:20 AM
Lonely Number (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QmcSKyEqkI8)

jook13
09-08-2010, 06:06 AM
Lonely Number (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QmcSKyEqkI8)

Awesome Murdoc! Thanks for that vid there. You approached a few of the obstacles in ways I havent thought of.

Thanks for the nice words Les and Forostm. I kinda designed (or tried to) this track to look harder than it really is. I wanted the rider to feel like a badass when they do it smoothly.

MurdocLoch
09-08-2010, 06:24 AM
No problem jook- Nice track - I only got to play it for about 30min cause I was workin on Event Ho for season two - This was just my first zero - I hope to bring it down to the low fifties - The feedback I have is one I felt i've given you before and that is you got some funky camera angels in places where it makes the obstacle way harder than it actually is- This is a very big no no in my book - It's as bad as leaving everything floating and default dust ect. - another thing that felt weird was playing through 90% of the track before reaching the first physics object - It felt very out of place - Other than that it was a great track

MadlogBrown
09-08-2010, 07:26 AM
Lonely number looks really fantastic.

rlmergeuser
09-08-2010, 01:28 PM
Jook, I'm going to send You a FR this afternoon some time. Would love to try some of these.

jook13
09-09-2010, 01:25 AM
No problem jook- Nice track - I only got to play it for about 30min cause I was workin on Event Ho for season two - This was just my first zero - I hope to bring it down to the low fifties - The feedback I have is one I felt i've given you before and that is you got some funky camera angels in places where it makes the obstacle way harder than it actually is- This is a very big no no in my book - It's as bad as leaving everything floating and default dust ect. - another thing that felt weird was playing through 90% of the track before reaching the first physics object - It felt very out of place - Other than that it was a great track

The only spot I added a custom camera is just before the big blocks you bounce across. At that little hill climb. I moveds the camera up a bit and angled it down cause there was an object obstructing view. Is that the one you speak of? I didnt really feel it made it harder to do, but that may be because I play tested it so much it became second nature. Any other people feel that way?

As for the physics thing... yeah, its a bit out of place. I couldnt resist the urge to make something move.

I appreaciate the honest feedback buddy. I definately will keep these things in mind in the future. Obviously I gotta pay more attention if I throw cameras in there.

Thanks badlog, I saw some videos of yours on lesprits youtube channel, they look really nice. I am sure I'll play em soon enough.

Mung.. I'll make room. I try to wait a few days after making a track before deleating anybody, give em a chance to get the new one first.

rlmergeuser
09-09-2010, 01:46 AM
sick track jook, liking the difficulty http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_twisted.gif i havent done a 0 yet, need to play more. id also like to say the cam on the hill part was out of place. it is hard to judge because you can do it with your eyes closed while building http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_e_wink.gif other than that, smoove track

rlmergeuser
09-10-2010, 07:44 PM
Sick new track jook well all of your tracks have always been top notch i love playing everyone of them. you are one of my fav mappers. especially for cool physics obsticles, your always doing something new. Mappers like you keep me playing trials

rlmergeuser
09-10-2010, 09:39 PM
new 1 is a cracker!

Willyums
09-10-2010, 10:36 PM
lovin it jook. no 0 fault yet but its just the right sort of extreme that when you link a few obstacles quickly it feels awesome. not actually too difficult to run thru but feels like what youre doing IS difficult, makes you feel better at the game if that makes sense http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_e_confused.gif http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_e_biggrin.gif

Jarr3tt88
09-11-2010, 02:58 AM
Heres some videos jook

Two Worlds
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PouL7rR2sHo

Dirty Sanchez
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=R04VmY9G4Co

Bullsh*t
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=z75xXULAoAk

Some good tracks here http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_e_biggrin.gif Bullsh*t was tough to get a good run xD ********! haha jk

jook13
09-11-2010, 03:09 AM
Heres some videos jook

Two Worlds
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PouL7rR2sHo

Dirty Sanchez
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=R04VmY9G4Co

Bullsh*t
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=z75xXULAoAk

Some good tracks here http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_e_biggrin.gif Bullsh*t was tough to get a good run xD ********! haha jk


Thanks mate! Those videos are always most appreciated! I love watching how others approach what I have built, rarely is it exactly the same as I do.


lovin it jook. no 0 fault yet but its just the right sort of extreme that when you link a few obstacles quickly it feels awesome. not actually too difficult to run thru but feels like what youre doing IS difficult, makes you feel better at the game if that makes sense http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_e_confused.gif http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_e_biggrin.gif

Thanks mate. That was kinda my goal. I wanted the player to feel better than they really are. The obstacles look a lot tougher than they really are. I dont think its very hard for an extreme.


new 1 is a cracker!

Thanks cracka!


Sick new track jook well all of your tracks have always been top notch i love playing everyone of them. you are one of my fav mappers. especially for cool physics obsticles, your always doing something new. Mappers like you keep me playing trials

Thanks a ton mate! Means a lot coming from the likes of you. I know I dont tell you enough how much I love all that you put out. Glad to see you back on the scene and back on my FL. And as for something new, I got this freaking insane idea for a track, if it will work it will be nuts.


sick track jook, liking the difficulty http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_twisted.gif i havent done a 0 yet, need to play more. id also like to say the cam on the hill part was out of place. it is hard to judge because you can do it with your eyes closed while building http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_e_wink.gif other than that, smoove track

Thanks mate. I can almost count on seeing your name come up in this thread every time I make a track. Means a lot, as you probably know. I know you can get that 0 fault, I bet you are a beast rider of massive proportions and almost nobody knows it. After I defeat Murdocs current time on Astral Heat, I plan on getting a decent run on Blood Clot.

rlmergeuser
09-11-2010, 08:50 AM
bloodclot jook run http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_eek.gif look forward to it

jook13
09-20-2010, 08:21 AM
bloodclot jook run http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_eek.gif look forward to it

bloodclot is really hard for me. still workin on it. http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_mrgreen.gif

New track guys. Called Stink Hole. Due to the design, it has no checkpoints. Sorry bout that. Its more of an experiment than anything, but I am happy with it. Just takes a little to get the hang of it. And if you knew how long I spent tweeking that camera, you wont complain about it. I know its not perfect, I gave up after far too long.

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rlmergeuser
09-20-2010, 08:23 AM
very clever changing the camera jook, good stuff.

jhop420
09-21-2010, 08:31 PM
This track is brilliant. The best use of the reverse trick I've have seen so far. Changing the camera angle makes all the difference. This track is fun and quite challenging because no checkpoints. Best reversable track yet!

rlmergeuser
09-21-2010, 09:32 PM
Very clever use of the camera that could open up whole new types of track but for the fact that I expect it is extraordinarily difficult to 'tweak' the camera exactly right as jook says.

Much kudos for some bold thinking and excellent execution though jook. Nicely done. http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_e_biggrin.gif

lespritdelescal
09-21-2010, 11:18 PM
This track is brilliant. The best use of the reverse trick I've have seen so far. Changing the camera angle makes all the difference. This track is fun and quite challenging because no checkpoints. Best reversable track yet!
Not sure I can add to what jhop said, so quoted for truth!

Willyums
09-22-2010, 12:28 AM
jooks deffo the authority in reverse tracks imo. this ones genius, mainly because its the first reverse track i know of with complete playability. tracks with those genuine "whoa!!" moments are rare and stink hole really does fit that category. incredible concept, clean and precise physics and great visuals. keep at it man http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_e_biggrin.gif

jook13
09-22-2010, 01:35 AM
Thanks for the kind words fellas. Means a lot as always.

Today I was playing it and the second reversing mechanism didnt work once. I was like "what the hell?, thought it was dialed it..." It worked after that. Is anyone else having issues with it? I'd hate to have to go back and tweek it further because that usually messes it up more. If I have to, I will though.

rlmergeuser
09-22-2010, 04:46 AM
stink hole is genius, other maps are very well polished. Keep it up http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_e_biggrin.gif

MurdocLoch
09-22-2010, 07:07 AM
jook13 sent you a message-
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No thanks on the reverse track jook - TBH I love your straight **** but I can't stand your experimental stuff - I guess it's good to be well rounded but sometimes your tracks are just bipolar - ML

jook13
09-22-2010, 08:57 AM
jook13 sent you a message-
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No thanks on the reverse track jook - TBH I love your straight **** but I can't stand your experimental stuff - I guess it's good to be well rounded but sometimes your tracks are just bipolar - ML


Exit track before you even try it eh? Dont play the maggot. Try it, it plays like a "normal" track with a couple elevator rides... thats what the whole spinning of the camera is about. Or did you not even get that far?
I think part of the beauty of the editor is the ability to do stuff that you werent intended to. Sometimes trying to do nothing more than emulate everyone else gets old.

Willyums
09-22-2010, 11:07 PM
thats a crime murdoc, no backwards riding included http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_e_smile.gif

rlmergeuser
09-23-2010, 12:49 AM
new track looks cool jook, havent got a chance to play it yet but looks very interesting in the video. im still playing lonely alot, love that track. http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_twisted.gif


Sometimes trying to do nothing more than emulate everyone else gets old.

probably not intended as such, but first time i read it i was like ohhhh shhhh he went there hell yes dont f with jook. classic quote http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_e_wink.gif

jook13
09-23-2010, 01:37 AM
new track looks cool jook, havent got a chance to play it yet but looks very interesting in the video. im still playing lonely alot, love that track. http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_twisted.gif


Sometimes trying to do nothing more than emulate everyone else gets old.

probably not intended as such, but first time i read it i was like ohhhh shhhh he went there hell yes dont f with jook. classic quote http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_e_wink.gif

I'm not saying that is what Murdoc does... He creates lots of original looks and structures. His post made me to believe he prefers I stick to the paved road so to speak. Chances are I mis-interepreted his post, but it almost seemed he was mad I dont always make tracks geared towards him.

Thats cool though, I feel I make plenty of different types of tracks for most tastes, including lots of traditional style tracks. But if I come up with a crazy idea, I'm probably gonna build it. They may not be the most fun to speed run on, but lots of people seem to get a kick out of em and I like to make em.

lespritdelescal
09-23-2010, 02:26 AM
Thats cool though, I feel I make plenty of different types of tracks for most tastes, including lots of traditional style tracks. But if I come up with a crazy idea, I'm probably gonna build it. They may not be the most fun to speed run on, but lots of people seem to get a kick out of em and I like to make em.
Regardless of how people feel about certain kinds of tracks, all of your stuff is always well built, and you can see that a lot of time and thought goes into the stuff that you do. Building your tracks for yourself is definitely the way to go http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_e_smile.gif (Can't help but think that this one would have been a pain to test though.)

And hopefully Murdoc spent more time trying the track than posting what he did. http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_e_smile.gif

EDIT - I'm very close to platinum on this one..

MurdocLoch
09-23-2010, 05:29 AM
Jook - I'm not mad - I just wanted to give you my honest feedback- I did make it down the elevator but still the track was not for me - sorry now that I read what I wrote I see that was an ******* thing to say - guess that makes me an ******* - anyway I do like most of your tracks- still playing lonely as well that and toxic are my favorites

and heet even if jook didn't mean the coment as you read it doesn't change that it is true - I do have a tendancy to be unoriginal - you got me

Unoriginal *******

lespritdelescal
09-24-2010, 12:08 AM
Some hi-def Stink Hole (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Xe4Fq7MBMrw) lovin'.

BlueMageFTW
09-27-2010, 01:47 PM
amidst all the brutal honesty, misinterpretations and misrepresentations, lies a glorious stinkhole that with a perfectly orchestrated reverser and corrector is very playable by all races, styles and genders. beautifully done. love the horizontal slider on the corrector. and yes jook, its all dialed in near perfect! but as you asked, i also failed to correct 2/25 times. no biggie... my rider wasnt fully settled. easy way for you to correct that issue is maybe use the newest cradle (or some part of it) i formed on brinstar b... the reason is because your cradle is angled up and out its easy to bounce back off the wall a hair so, try a squared cradle or a slightly longer timed trigger... i thoroughly enjoyed this long checkpointless (which it really doesnt need any) original twist on an old concept piece. thanks for sharing.
p.s. i guess i now know why i didnt get any feedback from the 'U-o A' on my brinstar lol...

rlmergeuser
09-27-2010, 07:52 PM
Stink Hole is a genius idea very well executed. When I first hit the reverser I was bummed because I can't control my rider to save my life in that configuration... Then the camera panned around in buttery-smooth fashion and it controlled like normal, very, very cool! Keep up with the experimental tracks, they're quite fun in their own right and can serve to seed ideas for traditional-style tracks that otherwise wouldn't come to anyone's mind. Excellent work. http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_e_biggrin.gif

rlmergeuser
09-29-2010, 11:20 AM
Sick new track jook always finding new ways to inovate and change the game I cab always count on being wowed when I play a new track from your twisted *** I Di have a hard time with reverse controls though I suck lol

jook13
09-30-2010, 12:28 AM
Thanks for the kind words guys. Much appreciated. And thanks for the vidoe Les... smooth riding as always.

New track for the Holloween/Horror comp.
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Willyums
09-30-2010, 01:09 AM
thats gotta have a chance, surely. fantastic scary theme and physics are once again spot on. very impressed mate http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_e_smile.gif that one part, i was like "ohh **** im gonna drop on that dynamite!?" http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_lol.gif

rlmergeuser
09-30-2010, 01:28 AM
brilliant fatality, i know i have no chance at that competition lol http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_lol.gif , but it will be fun to make and play all these halloween maps http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_e_biggrin.gif

rlmergeuser
09-30-2010, 01:57 AM
Hey jook I been meaning to get around to sending you a FR. Would love to try your tracks. If you are on I would appreciate a track rotation if you don't mind! Love playing customs! Thanks!

jook13
10-12-2010, 07:32 PM
New track called In Diana Jones. I wanted to use the title "Temple of Poon" but microsoft wouldnt let me.

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Jarr3tt88
10-12-2010, 07:41 PM
ahahahahahahahah thats an awesome name jook, gotta grab that from you lata http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_e_biggrin.gif

Ender_IXI
10-13-2010, 12:27 AM
Diana Jones = "Temple of Poon"



is there a story here?

edit* track looks pro, gonna grab it next time on on

edit2* got 38.7^^

rlmergeuser
10-13-2010, 05:38 AM
Jook, I'm digging your Halloween entry. The fling at the start is a lot of fun and the blender fatality is absolutely brutal!

The Temple of Poon censor issue killed me! I had quite a good laugh when I saw what the filter-acceptable replacement was. http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_lol.gif http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_lol.gif http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_lol.gif

jook13
10-14-2010, 03:05 AM
Well... At least poeple seem to like the name http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_mrgreen.gif

rlmergeuser
10-14-2010, 05:57 AM
Excellent Halloween track with some top quality phyics and atmospherics as had been said.

Poon is epic. There's just so much of it and it's all so well designed and brilliantly themed. Sheer Class. http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_cool.gif

rlmergeuser
10-14-2010, 12:25 PM
Loved poon jook has a great flow to it and the temple atmosphere is awsome great lighting especially at the end love your tracks jook just to let u know

rlmergeuser
10-14-2010, 12:43 PM
Ah yes, Love the temple, Love poon. Sick *** lil flow as always Jook. In Diana jones...... Classic. http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_mrgreen.gif

jook13
10-30-2010, 08:37 AM
Thanks skum, Rot, and Golem!

New track up called Bipolar. Its pretty tough I think.. Let me know what you think of her...
I decided to hide an egg somewhere in this, its pretty well hidden though. Let me know if you find it.

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Dosto707
10-30-2010, 12:32 PM
Bipolar is sick.

jonofthejungle9
10-30-2010, 09:57 PM
Bipolar is sick.
I second that!

rlmergeuser
10-30-2010, 10:12 PM
Bipolar is sick.
I second that!

Agreed still trying to get sub minute its hard to get everything 1st try
http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_e_smile.gif

rlmergeuser
10-30-2010, 10:45 PM
Bipolar is a cracker of an extreme. http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_cool.gif Very addictive.

jook13
10-30-2010, 10:54 PM
Bipolar is sick.
I second that!

Agreed still trying to get sub minute its hard to get everything 1st try
http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_e_smile.gif

Right on! A big pat on the back to the 1st person with a sub minute run. And a bigger pat on the back to whoever can find the hidden egg thing.

Thanks for the kind words everyone!

rlmergeuser
10-30-2010, 11:15 PM
EXTREME physics at there best. Sick *** angles for obstacles. Loved the platforms dropping from the wall, Although i sometimes feel as if i can beat the second one. Dope *** level. I'm no where near a minute though........ yet. http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_mrgreen.gif

Love this one Jook. http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_twisted.gif

Dosto707
10-31-2010, 02:29 AM
Found the egg, jook :]
I cheated a bit though :/
Crawled there with only the rider, after a bailout.
Got veeeery close getting there with my bike. ..still trying.

jook13
10-31-2010, 03:39 AM
EXTREME physics at there best. Sick *** angles for obstacles. Loved the platforms dropping from the wall, Although i sometimes feel as if i can beat the second one. Dope *** level. I'm no where near a minute though........ yet. http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_mrgreen.gif

Love this one Jook. http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_twisted.gif


Thanks skum! I know the feeling about beating the second platform... I tried my damndest to hit it before it drops completely and never did. I'm sure its possible but I dont know... I figured if you are going that fast you are probably not setup correctly for the next ramp. Or maybe I just screwed up a little bit http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_cool.gif



Found the egg, jook :]
I cheated a bit though :/
Crawled there with only the rider, after a bailout.
Got veeeery close getting there with my bike. ..still trying.

You are probably making it harder than you have to http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_lol.gif http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_e_wink.gif

Dosto707
10-31-2010, 03:49 AM
You are probably making it harder than you have to http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_lol.gif http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_e_wink.gifProbably yea, haha http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_mrgreen.gif . Was trying to do this ninja trick to get there. Gave up already tho.
I'm sure i'm gonna feel so dumb when i learn how to get there legit.

Dosto707
10-31-2010, 04:11 AM
Oh daaamn, i feel so dumb now, haha http://forum.redlynx.com/forum/images/smilies/icon_lol.gif

rlmergeuser
10-31-2010, 03:01 PM
BIPOLAR is so sick JOOK. im not a big fan of extremes but this one was done well and not to hard. The only part i reall had a problem with was the double platforms that fall out of the wall and then you have like a tire peel weight **** after them. I have so much trouble with that part. I cant find the egg, but i will dammit. It is going to be my mission to fin this ***** i love eggs.