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hermione2011
10-19-2011, 08:38 PM
Cover! I hope you like it!
Cover Made By Salacia Bright Star
http://i53.tinypic.com/2rn97rl.png



This is a story of what I am feeling. I am having a lot of bad thoughts right now and I needed to put them out into this story. My dreams, feelings, and friends. Please take this as an inspirational story. What it says is true. The actual story isn't true, but the dreams and feelings are. The music will be sang by me. Don't worry, on the videos the screen is completely black so no one can see anything. Mods, if you don't approve of these videos (please approve because i'm blanking out the screen and its an incredible part of my story!), you have the right to take them off, but please don't erase my story.When I said "tone deaf" I actually mean I was singing tone deaf (I'm actually a really good singer and I want to be a professional singer (and fashion designer) one day! I'm just really not good at some parts of Skyscraper because they are really low! Please don't judge me by that!). I hope you like the story!
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Friends. Hating me all around. Because I wouldn't hang out with them, because I was too busy. Some people just don't understand that you are a person, with feelings. Not some robot that has to work all the time. I have been desperately overworked, and people still ask for more. I can't take this anymore.....

I am a terrible friend, a terrible person

I am sorry to all those I hurt....

~Chapter one~

I walked home from school that day, eyes filled with tears. I thought in my head " People always pick on me, I can't take it. Just because i'm shy, and weak, doesn't mean i'm not a person, a living human being." I just couldn't take people being mean to me anymore. I ran home, went to my room, got into bed, and put my blanket over my head. After a few hours sitting there, I got up and sat on my window seat and looked out at the dark, misty sky. "I'm just a innocent soul in the big world, friendless." I was not tough, I was not brave, and I certainly had no confidence. I was lost in the big world, stuck in my dreams of becoming a professional singer. I decided to try and take my mind off things by singing. I went back under my blanket and started singing "Skyscraper, By Demi Lovato.

View My Video (http://tinypic.com/r/2dlqij7/7)

I sang horribly tone deaf because of my voice being scratchy from crying. I am actually a really good singer. I got up and looked into the mirror. "Behind my curly brown hair and misty green eyes, all I saw was failure."

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~Chapter 2~

I woke up the next morning with my eyes still puffy and red. I sighed when I relized I had to get ready for school. I went and opened the door to my closet. I carefully picked out a nice purple shirt with roses on it, and jeans. I added a nice black bow in my hair. I went to my mirror and brushed my hair. After I was finished, I went downstairs to eat breakfast, feeling doubtful about today. My mom was a professional fashion designer and she was barely ever home. My dad was an advertiser who travels all over the world with his business. I was usually at home alone. It scared me when I was alone but it gave me more time to sing.

I finished my breakfast, put my head down on the table and started to cry again. I didn't want to go back. I didn't want to go anywhere. I wanted to go under my blanket...forever, but I knew I couldn't. I was forced to go to school by my parents. I like learning and all...but I just couldn't stand the people. I put my head up and wiped my eyes. I walked up the driveway where the school bus was waiting for me...
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Chapter 3

I sat at the back of the bus. I get really shy and nervous when I'm around people. People laughed at me when I boarded. I was used to it. I was laughed at or made fun of almost every second of the day. I hated it. I hated school. I hated my life. I didn't want to be popular, but I didn't want to be made fun of. I wanted to be invisible, so no one could see me. The bus pulled up at school. I got up and walked out the bus door. I could smell the beautiful spring air. I went to my locker to get my books. A girl came up and slammed my locker down on my finger. I screamed in terror. Everyone in the hall stared at me. I was so embarrassed. I ran to the bathroom crying. I went into one of the stalls and started crying into the door.

I sang Shakespeare by Miranda Cosgrove to take my mind off what had just happened.

View My Video (http://tinypic.com/r/w0jg4m/5)

I dried my eyes and ran to my first class to sit at my desk. My teacher, Mrs. Zimmerman, told us we were all getting our report cards today. I was very excited. She passed them all out. I looked at mine and I had gotten straight A's! It was the happiest thing that had happened to me all day.

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Chapter 4

hermione2011
10-19-2011, 08:38 PM
Cover! I hope you like it!
Cover Made By Salacia Bright Star
http://i53.tinypic.com/2rn97rl.png



This is a story of what I am feeling. I am having a lot of bad thoughts right now and I needed to put them out into this story. My dreams, feelings, and friends. Please take this as an inspirational story. What it says is true. The actual story isn't true, but the dreams and feelings are. The music will be sang by me. Don't worry, on the videos the screen is completely black so no one can see anything. Mods, if you don't approve of these videos (please approve because i'm blanking out the screen and its an incredible part of my story!), you have the right to take them off, but please don't erase my story.When I said "tone deaf" I actually mean I was singing tone deaf (I'm actually a really good singer and I want to be a professional singer (and fashion designer) one day! I'm just really not good at some parts of Skyscraper because they are really low! Please don't judge me by that!). I hope you like the story!
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Friends. Hating me all around. Because I wouldn't hang out with them, because I was too busy. Some people just don't understand that you are a person, with feelings. Not some robot that has to work all the time. I have been desperately overworked, and people still ask for more. I can't take this anymore.....

I am a terrible friend, a terrible person

I am sorry to all those I hurt....

~Chapter one~

I walked home from school that day, eyes filled with tears. I thought in my head " People always pick on me, I can't take it. Just because i'm shy, and weak, doesn't mean i'm not a person, a living human being." I just couldn't take people being mean to me anymore. I ran home, went to my room, got into bed, and put my blanket over my head. After a few hours sitting there, I got up and sat on my window seat and looked out at the dark, misty sky. "I'm just a innocent soul in the big world, friendless." I was not tough, I was not brave, and I certainly had no confidence. I was lost in the big world, stuck in my dreams of becoming a professional singer. I decided to try and take my mind off things by singing. I went back under my blanket and started singing "Skyscraper, By Demi Lovato.

View My Video (http://tinypic.com/r/2dlqij7/7)

I sang horribly tone deaf because of my voice being scratchy from crying. I am actually a really good singer. I got up and looked into the mirror. "Behind my curly brown hair and misty green eyes, all I saw was failure."

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
~Chapter 2~

I woke up the next morning with my eyes still puffy and red. I sighed when I relized I had to get ready for school. I went and opened the door to my closet. I carefully picked out a nice purple shirt with roses on it, and jeans. I added a nice black bow in my hair. I went to my mirror and brushed my hair. After I was finished, I went downstairs to eat breakfast, feeling doubtful about today. My mom was a professional fashion designer and she was barely ever home. My dad was an advertiser who travels all over the world with his business. I was usually at home alone. It scared me when I was alone but it gave me more time to sing.

I finished my breakfast, put my head down on the table and started to cry again. I didn't want to go back. I didn't want to go anywhere. I wanted to go under my blanket...forever, but I knew I couldn't. I was forced to go to school by my parents. I like learning and all...but I just couldn't stand the people. I put my head up and wiped my eyes. I walked up the driveway where the school bus was waiting for me...
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Chapter 3

I sat at the back of the bus. I get really shy and nervous when I'm around people. People laughed at me when I boarded. I was used to it. I was laughed at or made fun of almost every second of the day. I hated it. I hated school. I hated my life. I didn't want to be popular, but I didn't want to be made fun of. I wanted to be invisible, so no one could see me. The bus pulled up at school. I got up and walked out the bus door. I could smell the beautiful spring air. I went to my locker to get my books. A girl came up and slammed my locker down on my finger. I screamed in terror. Everyone in the hall stared at me. I was so embarrassed. I ran to the bathroom crying. I went into one of the stalls and started crying into the door.

I sang Shakespeare by Miranda Cosgrove to take my mind off what had just happened.

View My Video (http://tinypic.com/r/w0jg4m/5)

I dried my eyes and ran to my first class to sit at my desk. My teacher, Mrs. Zimmerman, told us we were all getting our report cards today. I was very excited. She passed them all out. I looked at mine and I had gotten straight A's! It was the happiest thing that had happened to me all day.

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Chapter 4

BostonCutie
10-19-2011, 08:41 PM
This is beautiful, Hermione! I just love the girls dress on the cover!

fabiona12
10-19-2011, 08:44 PM
OMGNESS HAM!!! u sound soo much like Demi Lovato!! and thats a HUGE compliment cuz she is an AMAZING singer!! Fantabulous Jobhttp://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif

hermione2011
10-19-2011, 09:01 PM
http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_smile.gif Hehe! Once I do more videos you will see better than that http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif

That was really bad singing! I messed up!


Well..It was supposed to be tone deaf in the story...so I guess its not that bad of a problem! I will write more in a few minutes!

Originalplayer
10-19-2011, 09:03 PM
MY GOSH HERMOINE!!! u sure u don't want to be a professional writer? that was really good!!! i can't click the singing because i am using my dsi to go online & write this comment right now, and i can't view videos on it, but tommorrow i'm getting on my computer and listening!!! i will comment once i hear!!! HECK! i'll probably comment on the actuall youtube video![if that's where the link leads to!] really great hermoine!!! you r realy talented!!! http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_smile.gif

hermione2011
10-19-2011, 09:12 PM
It does not lead to You Tube. I'm not allowed to post things on You Tube. It just leads to TinyPic http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_smile.gif

I'm glad you liked it!

hermione2011
10-19-2011, 09:14 PM
BTW! I was doing the video so my parents couldn't hear because i'm embarrassed to sing in front of them http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif That's why its kinda quiet and scratchy! The other ones that I post won't be though!

skylight22
10-19-2011, 09:19 PM
I think it's pretty sad... Sometimes, I actually feel that way IRL, except people don't pick on me... They think I'm obsessed with death. But what frustrates me all the time is my best friend. She always try to take advantage of me, and everyone likes her so much, and...
Well, you have no idea how frustrating it feels.
But I loved this, Ham. Keep going with it. I love the general idea of the story.

nicole92598
10-19-2011, 09:25 PM
I think you did a great job expressing your feelings! Thanks for taking my advice! http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_smile.gif

hermione2011
10-19-2011, 09:27 PM
Hehe! Your welcome!

jade12345
10-19-2011, 09:28 PM
I love the way your words have feeling! Great job!

hermione2011
10-19-2011, 09:29 PM
http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_smile.gif!

Its a lot different than just writing a story. This story is true. (well not the actual story but what i'm feeling right now. I'm actually feeling it!) Oh! and the singer thing is true http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif

Originalplayer
10-20-2011, 08:17 PM
I JUST LISTENED TO THE SINGING!! THAT WAS PRETTY GOOD TO BE TONE DEAF! GOOD JOB HERMOINE!http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_smile.gif

hermione2011
10-20-2011, 08:18 PM
Hehe! I'm an awful low singer! (Just saying http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif)

The other ones that I will be posting on there will be better http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_smile.gif

lillylover2011
10-20-2011, 08:28 PM
i loved the singing idk if im as good as u though,i LUV singing too i sing any song i can remember

girl7233
10-20-2011, 08:30 PM
THE SONG AND STORY ARE BEAUTIFUL!
How do u take such awesome videos?
I try to do it and it comes out all choppy and disconnected then I gotsta erase the vid XD

hermione2011
10-22-2011, 12:03 PM
http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif

loveangel143
10-22-2011, 12:05 PM
WRITE MORE HAM!!!!!!!!!! XD http://forums.ubi.com/images/smilies/88.gif MEH LOVES IT!

hermione2011
10-22-2011, 12:09 PM
I am going to a bit later...

loveangel143
10-22-2011, 12:09 PM
YAYZO!! http://forums.ubi.com/images/smilies/88.gif

hermione2011
10-22-2011, 09:33 PM
Added a bit more to the original post http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_smile.gif

teacherrock101
10-25-2011, 02:36 PM
Hey, ham! You know when ur going to post the winners of the Halloween costume contest?!

hermione2011
10-25-2011, 07:51 PM
Soon.

hermione2011
10-25-2011, 08:00 PM
Added more to the original post again!

artsaboveall
10-25-2011, 08:08 PM
you what song would be PERFECT for your story? http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif
Invisible by Skylar Grey http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif

hermione2011
10-26-2011, 05:08 AM
I'll try later XD!

BostonCutie
10-26-2011, 04:08 PM
I love that song, Hermione! You sound amazing! Please write more!

hermione2011
10-26-2011, 04:15 PM
Haha I will!

hermione2011
11-07-2011, 10:06 PM
I added more http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif!

pinkstorm6
11-08-2011, 06:50 AM
Yay you got my voice memo to work!!!!!!!

Wrewretet
11-09-2011, 05:36 AM
You and Kiara have such beautiful singing voices! I'm also loving this book. Please continue! http://forums.ubi.com/images/smilies/heart.gif

http://i42.tinypic.com/2nk6hxh.jpg
Whatever boys can do, Girls can do in high heels! http://forums.ubi.com/images/smilies/heart.gif

hermione2011
11-09-2011, 02:08 PM
Of course http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_smile.gif!

pinkstorm6
11-09-2011, 03:17 PM
<BLOCKQUOTE class="ip-ubbcode-quote"><div class="ip-ubbcode-quote-title">quote:</div><div class="ip-ubbcode-quote-content">Originally posted by Wrewretet:
You and Kiara have such beautiful singing voices! I'm also loving this book. Please continue! http://forums.ubi.com/images/smilies/heart.gif

http://forums.ubi.com/images/smilies/heart.gif <span class="ev_code_PURPLE">Serena Fabulous Starshine</span> http://forums.ubi.com/images/smilies/heart.gif </div></BLOCKQUOTE>

Awh thank you! http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_smile.gif

hermione2011
11-09-2011, 03:18 PM
Kiwi!! Please reply to the pm!

loveangel143
11-09-2011, 07:12 PM
Aw I wish I was that good http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_smile.gif Wait.. I'm not good at all! I'll try to post a vid but beware- You might need hearing aids after it.

hermione2011
11-09-2011, 07:25 PM
LOL VERITYYYY!!!

haha!

nicole92598
11-09-2011, 07:29 PM
OH! Great singing! But you should play instrumental version of the songs!

sassyfashion
11-09-2011, 07:31 PM
more........ more....... MORRRRRRRRRE!!!!! I DEMAND U WRITE MORE!!!!! gimme more gimme more gimme more!!!!!!! GIMME!!! i wish i could listen 2 it is the 1 on u know wat good 2? is it the same? HOPE SO!!!! and btw luving story! - does a dance - uh huh uh huh go ham go ham! OH YAH!!! XD come on though MORRRRRRRRE!!!!

hermione2011
11-09-2011, 07:35 PM
Nicole: I know how to play piano. For some of my videos, I will be playing piano at the same time as singing http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_wink.gif

Jaja: THANK YOUUUU!!

nicole92598
11-09-2011, 07:43 PM
AWESOME!!!!!!!! I want ppl to hear my voice but afraid of idenity theft! IDK how it's possible?

girl7233
11-09-2011, 08:12 PM
I love the story and music! http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif

loveangel143
11-09-2011, 09:09 PM
Trying to post a Singing Vid! But my stinkin' camera WON'T WORK!!! gr.

hermione2011
11-10-2011, 05:01 AM
Nicole: There are probably no identity thefts on here

Kylie: Thanks!

Verity: LOL!