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danjama
11-25-2005, 02:21 PM
I have made this, it's my first composite. I tried not to go mad, just kept it simple. I had trouble smudging the edges to blend the plane into the picture well, and i know this is clearly visible. I also was unsure of the scale of the plane to the BG?!! I know there isnt a propeller i dont have a clue how to do that yet. So apart from these faults, what do ya reckon on my first??? http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_confused.gif

http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a194/danjama/Myfirstattemptedited.jpg

Airmail109
11-25-2005, 02:48 PM
good for a first time danjama http://forums.ubi.com/images/smilies/16x16_smiley-happy.gif

can i suggest thought that it looks on the small side, and the 109 looks a bit pixilated from being blown up! http://forums.ubi.com/images/smilies/16x16_smiley-wink.gif

Other than that good effort!

Also i think u shud have the 109 on its side doing a low buzz, try and make it look a little more 3d http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_smile.gif

FoolTrottel
11-25-2005, 03:06 PM
Can't comment on techniques (as I dunno)

But will on composition:
Me thinks it would look better with that 109 placed to the right side of the background....
(Or keep it left and mirror the 109 so it goes to the right... no can't do that ... it's not symmetric)

Maybe want to make it's right wing completely visible? (Looks like you'll have to generate some airspace there ...)

Good job on choice of scenery. It's nice, and special!

What I do like, is the rudder position: a bit right, as in: keep that nose up! Nice touch!

Have Fun!