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10-20-2011, 03:37 PM

Life, full of lies and hatred, almost no love. But why?
How do people go on? It must be impossible.
But no.
People keep going.
No matter the consequences.
I always thought the world was kind, full of love and happiness.
It once was.
But that one summer day, Disaster Called The Eagle.


Chapter One

Beep! Beep! Beep!
Fumbling with my alarm clock I sat up and stretched.
After a few moments I walked to my closet and pulled out my fave outfit:
A Red Skirt, A Pair of Black Boots, Dark Blue Gloves, A Gem Studded Belt, and A Black Top.
Putting them on I walked to the bathroom and pulled my long brown hair into pigtails.
"Perfect!" I said to myself as I looked in the mirror.
Grabbing my purse i rushed out the door.
I fished my phone out of my purse and read the following text:

Hey Sky! It's Charlotte! Just letting you know that I'm having a party and my place! Please come! Oh an make sure you bring some dance moves! Party's at 12:00! See ya there!

- Charlotte =D

I made a mental note to remember the party and continued to my destination.
As I strolled across the street I saw a girl on the other side, crying.
I rushed over and asked, "What's Wrong?!"
"Nothing! Now go away! I don't need help from you." She sneered.
The girl flipped her ponytail, and walked away.
Insulted I murmured "Well, what a nice girl." under my breath.
But I tried to not let it bother me.
Soon I was at the Modeling Agency.
I walked to the design tables and sat down.
I was planning on making a design business and I needed some new outfits to get started.
Grabbing some blue fabric I started sewing it to the shape of a shirt.
Then I took some buttons and arranged them into an interesting design.
Looks good. I thought to myself.
I grabbed some glue and began finishing up my shirt.
After the buttons were all glued down I stood up and looked at my design.
Awesome I thought.
Then I set it aside then made a few more. One for myself and some for my business!

<span class="ev_code_RED">there will be a few pics soon! </span>

After an hour, maybe two, I was finished.
I cleaned up then I carefully folded up my shirts and stuck them in a bag.
Walking away I heard somebody calling my name.
"Sky! Come over here for a minute."
The girl who was calling my name had long blonde hair and clear white skin.
"Wow. You made a lot of clothes! Can I see them?" She asked.
"Sure!" I said cheerfully.
I handed her the bag and waited as she looked them over.
"Ugly." she said as she ripped one in half.
I stood dumbstruck as she did the same thing to my other shirts.
"You did a horrible job at sewing. They're falling apart."
She shoved the ripped pieces of clothes into my arms and stalked away laughing.
She was <span class="ev_code_RED">Laughing</span>.
My eyes burned and I terribly wanted to go home so I rushed across the street and I ran.
All the way back to my apartment.
But before I could walk in the door a giant "BOO!" made me lose my footing and I fell.
My head hit the door handle and the last sounds I heard before I passed out was a <span class="ev_code_RED">LAUGH</span>.

Chapter Two

I heard the sounds of an ambulance and lights were flashing above my eyes.
Worried voices surrounded me and I felt like lead.
"Please move back!" said a voice.
"Here help me get her on a stretcher." said another.
I felt myself being lifted up the ground.
My head was throbbing and my neck ached worse than it ever had before.
"UGH..." I groaned.
"Doctor! I think she's coming to!" exclaimed a voice.
But no I wasn't.
I was soon back asleep again and no one heard a word from me until we were at the hospital.
"I hope she's Ok."
"Me too"
"Whomever did this is MEAN, M-E-A-N MEAN."
"UGH..." I groaned again, "Where am I?"
"At the hospital." said a voice.
I looked up and saw it was Charlotte speaking.
"Hi Char." I murmured.
"Hey Sky!" she said, "Felling any better?"
"Nope. Lousy." I replied.
"Well the good news is that the doctor says you're going to be ok. But the bad news is nobody knows what happened." It was Verity speaking.
"Hi Verity." I said, "I think I know what happened. But it's a little blurry."
Putting my hands over my eyes I thought.
All I could remember was a laugh and walking home from the Modeling Agency.
"I got nothin'" I said.
"Well that's great says Kiwi maybe a little bit to sarcastically.
I noted the fact that she was smiling and wasn't trying to be mean.
"Where's my phone?" I asked, "I want to call my mom."
My friends understood and handed me my purse.
I pulled out my phone and dialed the numbers.
"Hello?" asked a voice.
"Mom, it's Sky."
"Oh hello Sky! Hows Imagine Town?!" exclaimed my mom.
"Fine, fine, but mom I'm in the hospital."
"What?!" she asked.
"Yes." I said back.
Then I turned the phone on speaker and I explained what happened with some help from my friends.
"Well that settles that." I said as I hung up.
"Yep." said Verity as she took my purse and set it on the bedside table.
Not a moment after a nurse walked in carrying a tray of...
She set the tray on my lap, smiled then walked away.
Basically diving head first into my yummy desert it was all soon gone.
With only one a few bites left I wondered if maybe I should share, or keep it for myself.
I went with the latter because a boy was walking by looking hungrily at the pudding.
Quickly I finished then Pushed the tray away.
My friends had all left and there was nothing left to do except sleep.
I was just getting comfy when my phone rang.
Answering it I saw I had a text.

Hope you feel! Better! X O X O X O X O X O!

- Your secret admirer.


Chapter Three

I stared at the screen.
Who would send this to me?
I'm just a dumb newbie.
Quickly I stuffed my phone back in my purse and I hit the button to call the doctor.
Once he came I said, "I would like to leave now."
He nodded then left.
I got dressed and picked up my purse.
I rushed out the door, out the hall, out the waiting room and out into the street.
I walked home and kicked rocks as I went.
I have no idea who sent me that text or what happened to me.
When I got home I slammed the door and flung myself on my bed.
I didn't to anything else.
About an hour later I lay asleep.
It was my phone.
Unable to answer it the answering machine picked up.
"Your call has been forwarded to an automatic message system.
At the tone please record your message.
At the end of your message, you may hang up, or press one for more options."
"Hey Sky.
It's Charlotte.
Where are you?
The doctors said you left.
Anyways call back when you get this.
There was the sound of her hanging up then the dial tone.
My eyes fluttered open at the sound.
Picking up my phone I called Charlotte's number.
"Hello?" asked Charlotte.
"Hey Char. It's Sky."
"Oh hey Sky! I just left a message!"
"Yeah I know.
Anyways can you come over?
I feel terrible."
"Sure Sky! Be right there!"
Charlotte hang up.
I waited for a few minutes then I heard the sound of a car door being shut.
A moment later...
"Come in." I said.
Charlotte stepped inside.
"Hey Sky! What's wrong?" she asked.
"I don't really know... I guess this has just been a really bad day for me." I told her.
"Yeah you know what? I got this just a few minutes before I left the hospital."
I showed her the text.

"Hope you feel! Better! X O X O X O X O X O!

- Your secret admirer." Read Charlotte.

"Wow..." she said.
"I know... It's just that. I can't even think of what to say." I replied.
"Well... At least you know somebody likes you!" exclaimed Charlotte,
"Sky and somebody sitting in a tree! K-I-S-S-I-N-G!"


10-20-2011, 06:21 PM
Oh...my...GOSH! You are an awesome writer! It is truly a GIFT...I loves...MORE!!! WRITE. MORE!!! EEEEEEEEEEEP!!! http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_smile.gif http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_smile.gif http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_smile.gif http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif http://media.ubi.com/us/forum_images/gf-glomp.gif http://media.ubi.com/us/forum_images/gf-glomp.gif http://media.ubi.com/us/forum_images/gf-glomp.gif

10-21-2011, 02:16 PM
Thanks! Layla right? Please continue reading! http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif

10-21-2011, 02:21 PM


10-22-2011, 02:59 PM
Thanks jinn-sylvia! I admire your support! Please keep reading!

10-22-2011, 03:02 PM
Originally posted by Skywish21:
Thanks! Layla right? Please continue reading! http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif

Oh, yeah...it is! Are you a mind reader??? XD...and Chapter 2 is AWESOMENESS!!!

10-22-2011, 03:13 PM
Thanks Layla! And not a mind reader. Too bad though... I can read your mind... HUMM! I can read your mind! HUMM! XD! Thanks for reading! writing chapter three as we speak! I really hope everyone keeps reading! It's SO fun to write! I mean you can make anything happen! - XD - I sound like one 'O' my teachers! - XD XD XD - Giggle! Don't you love to <span class="ev_code_RED">GIGGLE</span>? It's SO FUN! <span class="ev_code_GREEN">WOOHOO!</span> I LOVE to be weird! http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif *sigh* I think I need to take a breath! *takes deep breath* ANYWAYS! I'm so <span class="ev_code_BLUE">GLAD</span> that people like my story so far! <span class="ev_code_RED">GLOMP ATTACK!!</span> http://media.ubi.com/us/forum_images/gf-glomp.gif

10-25-2011, 07:39 AM
I so much LOVE it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!