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ysydor201988
07-01-2009, 06:55 AM
http://i409.photobucket.com/albums/pp178/ysydor20/ptcon.jpg


Pls comment
ysy

SILVERFISH1992
07-01-2009, 07:08 AM
It looks like that plane is in a very steep glide. http://forums.ubi.com/images/smilies/10.gif

ysydor201988
07-01-2009, 07:15 AM
Originally posted by SILVERFISH1992:
It looks like that plane is in a very steep glide. http://forums.ubi.com/images/smilies/10.gif


yes i know the smoke should be much more horizontal

TinyTim
07-01-2009, 10:51 AM
Is this a poster of some sort? Like an advertisement poster for the "Budau Isidor production" or perhaps a poster for a new movie ("The fall of Luftwaffe")?

If it is not, and if it's a completed artwork by itself, then I'd remove the gigantic, dare I say self-important sign and rather include a tiny, hand signature in a left corner, with e-mail adress in the right (as it is). Right now it's hard to tell what's the point of this work - the big sign at the top, or the Heinkel (it is Heinkel, right?) at the bottom. Of course that would leave you with a big black sky - which you could use to include the reason for the downfall of the He-111 - like a victorious Tempest, Mustang or a Yak, having the belly illuminated from he-111s flames, climbing away into the dark. Ah, and I'd blur it less, far less.

BillSwagger
07-01-2009, 11:17 AM
Originally posted by ysydor201988:
<BLOCKQUOTE class="ip-ubbcode-quote"><div class="ip-ubbcode-quote-title">quote:</div><div class="ip-ubbcode-quote-content">Originally posted by SILVERFISH1992:
It looks like that plane is in a very steep glide. http://forums.ubi.com/images/smilies/10.gif


yes i know the smoke should be much more horizontal </div></BLOCKQUOTE>

Not bad, looks like its in a stall, and possibly having trouble recovering.

Updrafts can cause that effect too, but from the picture it justs looks like the plane is going slow and falling from a stall.

ysydor201988
07-01-2009, 12:48 PM
Originally posted by TinyTim:
Is this a poster of some sort? Like an advertisement poster for the "Budau Isidor production" or perhaps a poster for a new movie ("The fall of Luftwaffe")?

If it is not, and if it's a completed artwork by itself, then I'd remove the gigantic, dare I say self-important sign and rather include a tiny, hand signature in a left corner, with e-mail adress in the right (as it is). Right now it's hard to tell what's the point of this work - the big sign at the top, or the Heinkel (it is Heinkel, right?) at the bottom. Of course that would leave you with a big black sky - which you could use to include the reason for the downfall of the He-111 - like a victorious Tempest, Mustang or a Yak, having the belly illuminated from he-111s flames, climbing away into the dark. Ah, and I'd blur it less, far less.

yes it may be a future movie...but the important thing is that i've puted my name there cuz it happened that my work was copyed and they've used like they're was own so as my name is so big they must cut it and results in a bad immage so that's the reson i know usualy i put my name in a corner if u don't bellieve watch the phots the HD treath above...where are my pic...i think even u would be angry if someowone copy's your work and then he gets comments like wow...good super...http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_wink.gif

USArmyAirCorps
07-01-2009, 01:04 PM
Well this wow-good-super is just for you.

http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif

ysydor201988
07-01-2009, 01:13 PM
Originally posted by USArmyAirCorps:
Well this wow-good-super is just for you.

http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif

thx u very much

i have a movie posted "the eyes of the enemy" if u are interested
in the il2 movie makers treath

BillSwagger
07-01-2009, 03:05 PM
Just put these up, if you want to have a gander.


No fire and brimstone, more lighting and focus.


http://forums.ubi.com/eve/foru...911008867#6911008867 (http://forums.ubi.com/eve/forums?a=tpc&s=400102&f=45410763&m=6911008867&r=6911008867#6911008867)

waffen-79
07-01-2009, 04:27 PM
already been said

focus is your friend

blur is your enemy

BillSwagger
07-01-2009, 04:53 PM
Originally posted by waffen-79:

blur is your enemy

Clarity is important, but i think it depends on the effect you are going for. If you are making a period piece then the picture quality is going to mimic what a photograph might've looked like from that time.


Blur is used to show motion and depth. ive seen great water fall photos that really capture the motion.