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sassyfashion
08-31-2011, 07:39 AM
this is BASED on my life but there r some not real things in it k? just wanted 2 let u guys know b4 u read this have fun reading!

Chapter 1

“Mmmmmmmm,” I mumble as my alarm clock beeps away. “Come on! I wanna sleep!” Finally I woke up completely and turned it off. I stretched and walked to my closet. I took off my favorite pjs and put on skinny jeans a tee, fingerless gloves, and cream boots. Then I hunted up some jewelry. “With this outfit defiantly my sky hoop earrings and a gold necklace.” Then I left for Mymy’s.

At Mymy’s….

I found her in her pjs looking through her closet. “Mymy!” I shouted. “Ah!” She cried, dropping the pair of shoes she was holding. “Sorry,” I apologized. “But I am going shopping. I got my allowance early today. Wanna come?” “Sure. But I need to get dressed first,” She replied, going through her closet again. “Ok I’ll wait outside.” “Kay”

Outside….

“You ready?” I asked Mymy. “Of course,” She replied. “Hi guys!” someone called. We looked around and guess who we spotted. “Hi Nic! What you doing?” I asked. “Nothing. What are you doing?” “We’re bout to go shopping. Wanna come?” Mymy asked Nicole. “Sure!” she answered happily. “By the way, who is on?” “Let me see,” I said as I took out my my-link. “Um UbiLorelai, Layla, Erika, and Jordon.” “He always wakes up early doesn’t he,” Mymy said. “Well he has to practice dancing and open up the academy,” Nic pointed out. “True. Let’s go!”

After shopping….

“See you later guys! I am going to design some dresses!” I called to Mymy and Nicole. “Kay!” they replied. I opened the door and sat down at my design table. “Hm, I should make it purple and silky.” I walked around imagining a design. “AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!” came a scream from across the street. “Yow!!” I cried as I fell against the wall. It must have knocked me unconscious because when I woke up…….

sassyfashion
08-31-2011, 08:17 AM
is anyone gonna reply 2 my story?

lizi9955
08-31-2011, 10:30 AM
This is such a great story, JaJa!!! WRITE MORE!!!

sassyfashion
09-01-2011, 10:43 AM
ok! thx!

sassyfashion
09-01-2011, 11:23 AM
Chapter 2

“I think she is waking up,” I heard a voice say. I opened my eyes slightly. There I saw Mymy, Lala (Layla), Nicole, and Cyan. “Ohhhhh,” I moaned. “What happened?” “You hit your head,” Mymy replied. “And I guess you became unconscious.” “Yah, we found you here sitting next to your pot.” Nicole told me, pointing to my pink pot. “Does your head hurt?” Lala asked. “A little.” “Here take this.” She held out a pill and a glass of milk. “Thanks,” I said taking the milk and pill. “My head feels better.” I got out of bed. “Wanna go to the blue lagoon?” Cyan asked. “My treat.” “Sure. I want some lunch anyway.”

At the blue lagoon…..

“Hi UbiLorelai!” I said, waving my hand. “Wanna join us?” “Sure,” she replied walking toward us. “I heard you hit your head today. Are you alright?” “I am fine. Thanks for asking!” “No problem. So I am guessing you girls have heard about the singing contest.” “Sure have! Layla and Kiara are practicing.” “That’s wonderful! You and Kiara have very good voices,” she told Layla. “Yah!” the rest of us agreed. Layla smiled. “Thanks!” “May I help…. Omg!! UbiLorelai!! It is an honor serving you. I don’t think any waitress has served a ubi food before. My name is Crystal by the way.” “Hi!” we all said. “Well how about pizza?” Cyan asked everyone. “Totally!” “Yah! “That would be nice.” “Okay than,” Cyan said. “Pizza please.” “Coming right up,” Crystal said as she walked away.

After lunch…..

“This was a good lunch,” UbiLorelai said. “But I have to go now.” “Okay!” we replied. “Bye!” “I have to practice some more with Kiara” Lala said. “Bye!” “Bye!” “And Cyan and I are going to the C&B,” Nic told Mymy and me. “Wanna come?” “Sorry,” Mymy denied. “We have to open shop.” “Kay! Later!” “Later!” We walked toward the shop. Then it happened. The blur that was horrible…..

cckeesd
09-01-2011, 11:30 AM
awesome story jaja loved it http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_wink.gif http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_smile.gif http://media.ubi.com/us/forum_images/gf-glomp.gif http://forums.ubi.com/images/smilies/heart.gif http://forums.ubi.com/images/smilies/88.gif

sassyfashion
09-01-2011, 11:42 AM
thx!

mymy719
09-01-2011, 05:01 PM
that was like the best story evry i loved it!it would be awesome if u wrote more!i cant beleive i was in it.

sassyfashion
09-01-2011, 05:02 PM
thx! i am working on the 3 chapter

lizi9955
09-01-2011, 05:03 PM
Well, DUH, mymy! You're her BFF! HeeHee! http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif Oh, and thanks for including me ad my story in your story, JaJa!!! OMG! That sounded really complicated!

sassyfashion
09-01-2011, 05:11 PM
oh it wasnt! in fact it was fun!

sassyfashion
09-01-2011, 05:34 PM
Chapter 3

“She looks hurt.” “I hope she wakes up soon.” “Me too.” “If she doesn’t wake up soon I am going 2 poor cold water on her face.” I sat up then. It was as if I was shot out of a cannon. “She is up.” It turns out the people I had heard talking were Mymy, Layla, and Kiara. “Ow!” I cried when I tried to get out of Mymy’s bed. Mymy’s bed? I thought. What am I doing here? It was becoming clear now. That horrible blur. “You have some scratches from that –” Mymy started to say. “Don’t remind me. Please.” “Ok,” Kiara said. “But do you feel alright?” “A little pained but that’s it.” “Well I made some soothing hot chocolate,” Layla said. She handed me the cup. “Thanks. Mm! This is good! And I feel better!” “Good! That means it is working. It sooths cuts, scraps and other injuries. Now u should be able to move without pain.” “Thanks!” I got up. “I feel great!” “Wanna go to a party?” Kiara asked. “Sure! What kind?” “Hip Hop” “Kay! Let me change.” I put on my best hip hop outfit, black skinny jeans, twilight fingerless gloves, my cream boots, my black glitter rock shirt, my sky hoops earrings, and my black glasses. “I am ready!”



At the party…..

“Hi!” Sal called to us. “Hey!” we called back. “UbiLorelai and UbiJoolyWooly are here!” “Yea!!”…..

mymy719
09-01-2011, 05:36 PM
awesome can you put up more?

sassyfashion
09-01-2011, 05:38 PM
sure thing!

sassyfashion
09-01-2011, 07:04 PM
Chapter 4

I yawned and stretched. I had danced all night and got home late. I was tired. Now its morning and I was read to go. “What should I wear today?” I asked myself. I put on my baggy pink pants, my striped tank top, my striped fingerless gloves, my cream boots, and a golden necklace. “JaJa!” someone yelled. “Ahh!” I jumped. “Sal! Nic! Hi!” “Hi!” Nic said. “We have a meeting of the cheetah girls.” “Yah! You coming?” Sal asked. “Yah!

After the meeting…..

“Hey Sal, wanna come over?” I asked her. “Sure!” “You know what!” I said as we walked toward my house. “What?” “We should hold a sleepover!” “Yah!” “We should invite Mymy, Nicole um…” I paused. “Layla and Jewel.” She added. “Yah! Lets invite!” “Ok”

Later at the slumber party…..

“Pillow fight!” Jewel shouted. “Yah!” we all shouted, each grabbing a pillow. The next thing I knew we were all laying a down. “Wow!” said Salacia. “That was the biggest pillow fight I’ve ever seen!” “Yah!” we all agreed. “Hey! Wanna play the Wii?” I asked. “Yah!” “Let’s play Just Dance Summer Party!” Lala said. “Ok!” I said as I put it in…..

mymy719
09-01-2011, 07:06 PM
love it cant wait for chapter 5!

sassyfashion
09-01-2011, 07:30 PM
cyan i am at the c and b 4 pics mail me if u need me

cckeesd
09-01-2011, 07:33 PM
MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! cant wait for chapter five

sassyfashion
09-01-2011, 07:35 PM
thx! it will b here tomorrow

artsaboveall
09-01-2011, 08:51 PM
This is so awesome!!!! I can't wait for chapter 5!!!!! http://forums.ubi.com/images/smilies/16x16_smiley-very-happy.gif

lizi9955
09-01-2011, 09:02 PM
Same Here!!! Can't wait! YAYS!

sassyfashion
09-02-2011, 07:26 AM
aww thx guys!!

sassyfashion
09-02-2011, 10:28 AM
Chapter 5

Beep! Beep! Beep! “Mmmmmmm,” I moaned as my alarm clock beeped. “Leave me alone!” I put a pillow over my head. “Why doesn’t that ever work!” I finally got up and stretched. I better change. I put on my pink tank top, my blue jeans, and my cream boots.
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“Omg! I know! We need to hold a big sleepover! I need 2 text Mymy!”

Me
Mymy! We should hold a HUGE pj party!

Mymy
Yah! Who’s house?

Me
Um… idk mine?

Mymy
Ok! Don’t forget to invite Nic! Or Sal!

Me
Ik!

I emailed my friends.

Me
Hey guys! Pajama party, my house! Can u come?

Nicole
Sure!

Sal
B there!

Mel
Sure thing!

Cyan
Wish I could

Mymy
Duh!

Brooklyn
I will try!

Ruby
Ok!

Layla
Sure!

Nina
Ok!

Jessica
Sure!.......

artsaboveall
09-02-2011, 10:59 AM
AWESOME!!!! http://forums.ubi.com/images/smilies/16x16_smiley-very-happy.gif Write more soon plz!!! http://forums.ubi.com/images/smilies/16x16_smiley-very-happy.gif

sassyfashion
09-02-2011, 10:59 AM
awww thx! and i am

UbiLorelai
09-02-2011, 01:32 PM
I like your story JaJa!

sassyfashion
09-02-2011, 01:39 PM
REALLY?! WOW!

sassyfashion
09-02-2011, 04:03 PM
Chapter 6

“You guys wanna play… Just Dance 3!!!” I asked everyone. “U got it?!” Ruby shrieked. “Yah! I pre-ordered,” I replied. “Cool put it in!” Sal said.

2 hours later…..

“Omg!” Nicole cried. “That was FUN!” “I know right!” Mymy replied. “I have never danced so long before!” “You said it!” Nina, Layla, and I said at the same time. We all burst into a fit of giggles. “You know what,” I said after we calmed down. “What?” they all asked. “I have a brand new…..” I started pulling something from my vanity draw. “Makeover kit!” “All right!!” they cried. “Who is doing who?”…..

The next day…..

“Mmm,” I mumbled as my alarm clock woke me up. “I need a new one. Morning guys!” “Morning!” “U guys want some chocolate chip pancakes?” “YAH!!” “This going to be ta-” Knock knock! Knock knock! I opened the door.
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On the mat I saw a magazine from….. a few days ago? That’s strange, I thought. I took one look at the cover and shouted, “Oh no!!!!”. “What?” my friends asked. "My least favorite person! My arch enemy in fact," I told them. "We were both on the cheerleading squad. I was on top of the pyramid and she bumped up and I fell over. It hurt badly." "Oh no!" Mymy cried. "I remember her!" "Now what are we suppose to do?".....

cckeesd
09-02-2011, 04:09 PM
LOVE the idea of adding pics to ur story

sassyfashion
09-02-2011, 04:14 PM
thx! but i thought of the idea cause ham did it!

artsaboveall
09-02-2011, 05:20 PM
This story is SO AWESOME!!!! http://forums.ubi.com/images/smilies/16x16_smiley-very-happy.gif WRITE MORE WRITE MORE WRITE MORE!!!!!! http://forums.ubi.com/images/smilies/16x16_smiley-very-happy.gif

sassyfashion
09-02-2011, 05:41 PM
http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_smile.gif i toatlly am!

cckeesd
09-03-2011, 09:16 AM
LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT

loveangel143
09-03-2011, 09:29 AM
THIS IS TOO AWESOME!!

WRITE MORE WRITE MORE PLEASE!!! http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif

lizi9955
09-03-2011, 09:53 AM
AAWWWWW....I'm starting to get the feeling that nobody at all likes my story. I'm really sad right now and wanting to cry. WWWWWWWAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!! http://forums.ubi.com/images/smilies/bigtears.gif http://forums.ubi.com/images/smilies/bigtears.gif http://forums.ubi.com/images/smilies/bigtears.gif http://forums.ubi.com/images/smilies/bigtears.gif

sassyfashion
09-03-2011, 10:32 AM
ppl like ur story! i LUV ur story! without ur story i wouldnt have my story!!

hermione2011
09-03-2011, 02:48 PM
I ADORE YOUR STORY LAYLA!!!!!!!

cutie21021
09-03-2011, 05:52 PM
This is da best story ever!I couldn't have done a better job!


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Jewel Sweetie ShowStopper http://media.ubi.com/us/forum_images/gf-glomp.gif
http://forums.ubi.com/images/smilies/compsmash.gifAWW My computer is acting up!

sassyfashion
09-03-2011, 07:47 PM
Chapter 7

“Well we can’t dwell on that now,” I said. “Ham is performing and we need 2 b there 4 her.” “Your right!” Sal said. “Let’s go!!”

At the dance academy…..

“Let’s get front row seats,” Mymy said. “Yah we want to be in front to cheer her at the end,” Nic added. “Well if we’re going to cheer her in the front we better hurry!” Layla pointed out.

During the performance…..

“She’s good,” I whispered to Mymy. “Really good,” she whispered back. Everything was quiet except for the singing, but then…. “OMG!!!” I cried out suddenly. I looked at my friends. They seemed to be speechless and surprised. Finally Mymy said, “How did this happen?” Soon we heard giggling and laughing. “She doesn’t look like she knows what’s going on,” I pointed out. “Poor Ham,” Sal whispered. I looked over at Cyan and noticed she was signaling to Hermione, but she didn’t notice. “Oh boy.”……

hermione2011
09-03-2011, 09:07 PM
WRITE MORE WRITE MORE WRITE MORE WRITE MORE WRITE MORE WRITE MORE WRITE MORE WRITE MORE WRITE MORE WRITE MORE WRITE MORE WRITE MORE WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THE SUSPENSE IS KILLING ME!!!!

artsaboveall
09-03-2011, 09:34 PM
OH MY GOSH!!!!!!!!!!! WRITE MORE WRITE MORE WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!!! THE SUSPENSE http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_eek.gif

lizi9955
09-03-2011, 10:02 PM
Yay. You didn't even mention me in this. http://forums.ubi.com/images/smilies/bigtears.gif http://forums.ubi.com/images/smilies/bigtears.gif http://forums.ubi.com/images/smilies/bigtears.gif http://forums.ubi.com/images/smilies/bigtears.gif

sassyfashion
09-04-2011, 08:53 AM
u r now in it i had meant 2 but i got so into it.... i guess i 4got sooooooo srry!! http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_frown.gif

lizi9955
09-04-2011, 11:02 AM
Thanks, but it still doesn't make up for you copying some of my story.

sassyfashion
09-04-2011, 03:47 PM
excuse me?! and btw u said u were sad cause i didnt include u in this chapter

lizi9955
09-04-2011, 09:40 PM
You know what? I'm just mad that my story isn't getting as much attention as yours and I feel that nobody likes me and that I'm completely invisible. I'm sorry for taking out all of my feelings out on you. http://forums.ubi.com/images/smilies/sadeyes.gif http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_frown.gif http://forums.ubi.com/images/smilies/sadeyes.gif http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_frown.gif

hermione2011
09-04-2011, 10:39 PM
I LOVE YOUR STORY LAYLA! I'VE READ IT! ITS AWESOME!

loveangel143
09-04-2011, 10:40 PM
Layla! Don't say that! I http://forums.ubi.com/images/smilies/heart.gif YOUR STORY SO MUCH THAT I JUST READ IT!! You're even getting more attention than my story!!! http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif

lizi9955
09-04-2011, 11:33 PM
WHAT! Then I need to check out BOTH of your stories! Sorry for being sooo melodramatic!

sassyfashion
09-05-2011, 07:16 AM
i have always liked ur story and without ur story mine wouldnt excist! and its ok i know how u feel sometimes i feel some of my friends dont even really care about me http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_frown.gif like the time when ubilorelai came 4 my banner pic and i told everybody started coming and inviting thier friedns! (and that was plain rude its MY banner not thiers!) and once ubilorelai left most of them left 2 it made me feel unimportant unliked uncared 4 and its always been that was ever since when the filter was messed up (and im not blaming imagine town or the ubis) and its like ppl only like ham the ubis and nicole but not the tohers and i feel horrid and ugly and like im just some weird crazy girl passing through that barly anbody likes and that makes me feel horrid and when im sad no one pays attention but a few ppl and i alway comfort and run 2 them and ask wats wrong but does anyone do that 2 me? no! only a few (who should name namelesss unless they say it is them)

sassyfashion
09-05-2011, 07:18 AM
its ok sometimes im melodramatic!!!
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hermione2011
09-05-2011, 08:37 PM
LOLZ

sassyfashion
09-06-2011, 08:38 AM
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sassyfashion
09-07-2011, 08:58 AM
well guess i may have 2 stop my story because ppl arnt commenting which makes me write more i dont write more unless ppl want me 2 which i hear in comments

hermione2011
09-07-2011, 01:20 PM
PLEASE WRITE MORE! PEOPLE ARE COMMENTING! NOOOOO DONT' STOP!
WHO CARES WHAT THEY THINK! INSPIRE! DREAM! CREATE! BELIEVE IN YOURSELF!

sassyfashion
09-07-2011, 03:37 PM
that makes me feel so good!! thx ham!! - tears of happiness -

sassyfashion
09-07-2011, 03:50 PM
Chapter 8

“Ham!!” I called out. “HAM!!!!!” Oh boy. I wonder what happened. Why was the costume to big? I thought. “HAM!!” Oh boy…..

The next day…..

“Poor Ham!” Cyan cried. “We should do something for her!” “Tofbly,” Sal relied. “What?” I asked her. She swallowed. “Totally.” “Well, I think we should invite everyone!” I said with happiness. “Not gonna happen,” Cyan replied. “Everyone is busy.” “Nuts! Well why don’t we just invite Ham?” Salacia and Cyan looked at each other. “Okay!”

At the party…..

“Hi Hermione!” we cried as soon as she arrived.

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She looked happy. Happy that we weren’t making fun of her. As soon as I closed the door….. DING ****! “Hello?” “Hi, um here is your pizza.” “I didn’t order a pizza,” I said confused…..

lizi9955
09-07-2011, 04:59 PM
YAYZNESS! Sweet chapter, JaJa!!!

sassyfashion
09-07-2011, 05:00 PM
thx!!

sassyfashion
09-07-2011, 08:22 PM
Chapter 9

“Well, I have an order for JaJa.” “Well I didn’t order a pizza so please go away.” Then my door came down. I looked outside. I started screaming. “AHHHHHHHHHHH!! AHHHHHHHHH!!” my friends looked at me and the door and started screaming too. The person outside was in all black and had a mask on. The person took a picture of me and left. I stared blankly at the door wondering why that person wanted a picture of me in my pajamas. “I…I…I…I better call the ubis and the doorman.

Me
Hey my door is off. Can you come over and fix it?

The Doorman
Sure

Me
Thx

Then I texted the ubis.

Me
OMG!! SOMEONE JUST KNOCKED MY DOOR DOWN!!!

Five minutes later I saw UbiLorelai, UbiCali, UbiWillow, UbiSusie, UbiDarla, UbiJanie, UbiJoolyWooly, and UbiMargie. I was still shaking. “Are you okay?” UbiLorelai asked as they rushed toward me. “We came as soon as we got your email,” UbiSusie added. “Who knocked your door down?” UbiJoolyWooly asked. I answered them all at once. “I think I am okay, thank you, and I don’t know. He or she was all in black and had on a mask.” “Well did he or she hurt anyone?” UbiCali asked us. “No,” we all replied. All of a sudden I noticed my door was fixed. “Whoa,” I mumble. “What?” UbiMargie asked when she noticed my eyes bugging out. “My door,” I said pointing. “It is fixed I didn’t know our doorman came and fixed doors so fast and not even saying hi.” Knock knock! “Who is it?” I called. “Norman!” Oh my…..

lizi9955
09-07-2011, 09:44 PM
OOOHH!!! Such mystery!!! WRITE MORE WRITE MORE WRITE MORE WRITE MORE!!!

sassyfashion
09-08-2011, 08:40 AM
thats the whole point of this chapter mystery.....

sassyfashion
09-08-2011, 09:46 AM
Chapter 10

“Why is your door fixed? Is this a prank?” he asked looking suspicious. “No!” I cried. “It really was broken! My friends and the ubis saw!!” “It’s true,” they replied all at once. “Hm, well I guess I’ll be on my way.” I closed the door and stared into space. Then I cried, “Oh my goodness!!” “What?! What?!” my friends and the ubis shouted. “Could the person behind this be….. My arch enemy,” I pause. “Lavender?” “It could be,” Mymy replied. “She hated you when you became more popular then her. She hated you even more when you became cheerleading team captain. She wanted you thrown out of the school when you were voted student of the year. And when her bff stopped being friends with her and became friends with you because you are MUCH nicer to your friends she-“ “Yah,” I interrupted. “Don’t remind me about that one.” “So what you are saying,” UbiJanine said. “Is that she could be the one and trying to get even?” “OMG!! If she is… this could mean that my friends might get the same things I am.” My friends went pale as soon as I said that. But the ubis looked okay. “Well if you see her again you can email us,” UbiLorelai told me. “Okay. I totally will!” I said, glad that she said that. “Well we have to get back to work now. I hope this doesn’t happen again!” “That makes two of us!” “Bye!” they called. “Bye!” we called back. “Man,” I said as I closed the door. “This is very scary.”

sassyfashion
09-08-2011, 09:50 AM
ok this chapter doesnt have pics but so wat

pinkgeek2011
09-08-2011, 09:51 AM
I WORK LIKE CRAZY ON MY BOOK AND NOBODY READ IT! (but your book is a 9 jaja)

<span class="ev_code_RED">EDITED: Tell a moderator if you think someone is being mean, don't call them mean!</span>

sassyfashion
09-08-2011, 10:15 AM
nobody ever told me u had a book i will read it now

sassyfashion
09-08-2011, 10:16 AM
nobody ever told me u had a book i will read it now ok?

pinkgeek2011
09-08-2011, 11:19 AM
Ok,thnx Ja!

sassyfashion
09-08-2011, 01:26 PM
np

hermione2011
09-10-2011, 06:45 PM
I've read yours Erika! It is awesome!

lizi9955
09-10-2011, 06:56 PM
Hey, why doesn't anyone comment on MY story! I am sad. http://forums.ubi.com/images/smilies/bigtears.gif http://forums.ubi.com/images/smilies/sadeyes.gif

sassyfashion
09-11-2011, 08:50 AM
did u write more 2 ur story? if so i didnt c it

sassyfashion
09-11-2011, 05:23 PM
Chapter 11

Say, say, say! What you want! But don’t play games, with my affections! You, you, you…..

I moved my hand around my side table searching for my my-link. Finally finding it, I grab it and read the message even though I’m only half awake.

Mom
You have to come home for Ricky’s 6 birthday.

I snap wide awake as soon as I am finished reading that. “Oh no!!” “What?” someone asks. “Ah!!” I say, alarmed, as I fall out of bed. “Sorry,” the person says as they reach their hand out. I look up. Standing over me is Mymy. “I….. I…...” I burst into tears. Mymy helps me up and sits me down in my comfy, purple, plush sofa. “What?” she asks again. “I have to m…..m…..” I burst into tears again. She comforts me until I can speak again. “Now what is it?” “I have to move.” She stares at me. “You’re kidding right?” “No.” I burst into tears for the third time that morning. I look up at her. She stared at my wall, tears pricking her eye. She was in as much pain as me. I knew it. Then all of a sudden I find her crying with me. This is the worst thing that could ever happen to me, I thought…..

sassyfashion
09-11-2011, 08:27 PM
Chapter 12

I had texted everyone I knew, telling them of the bad news. Some even said that they would go with me. It was my private boat so I had no fees. I was happy some of my friends were coming along: Sal, Mymy, and Layla. “You guys don’t have to,” I said. “We wanna,” Sal insisted. That is just like her. “I will miss you four very much,” UbiLorelai told us. “We are gonna miss you!” we all said at once. We giggled. All the ubis were with us then. I knew I would miss them deeply.

On the boat…..

“Okay guys this is the bedroom hall,” I said as I opened the door. Inside is a hall of six bedrooms. Each one with a name written in glitter and the same color on the door: Pink Pad, Orange Bling, Yellow Diamond, Green Scene, Blue Stone, and Purple Sparkle. They looked into the hall with awe. On the walls were wavy, glittery murals with gems. On the ceiling were two crystal chandeliers. The carpet was plush and neon green. “Wow,” Lala said. “Okay. The side doors are the bunking rooms. The one at the end is my personal bedroom,” I informed them. “What’s in your personal bedroom?” Sal asked. “It’s amazing!” Mymy cried before I could even speak. “But we will talk about that later,” I said. “Right now we pick bunking buddies.” In the end, Sal buddied up with Layla and I buddied up with Mymy. “Okay pick your rooms!” “We want Purple Sparkle,” Lala told me. “Kay and Mymy and I have Pink Pad.”

lizi9955
09-11-2011, 09:14 PM
Coolness! TELL ME WHAT HAPPENS WHAT HAPPENS! I DEMAND IT!!! Pleaseness?!?!?!?!

sassyfashion
09-12-2011, 10:28 AM
Chapter 13

Beep! Beep! Beep! “Mmmmm,” I moaned as I woke up. “Come on,” mymy said. “Why don’t we get dressed.” “We can walk around the boat in our pjs,” I told her. “It’s my boat.” “Okay.” We walked over to Purple Sparkle and knocked on the door. “Just a minute!” we herd someone cry. “You don’t have to get dressed!” I shouted. “We can walk around in our pjs!” Sal opened the door and started to say something. Then she closed her mouth and smiled. “Oh yah,” she said after a few moments.” I smiled back at her. Soon Layla and Salacia both walked out in amazing pajamas. WE walked to the elevator and stepped inside. I pressed dining room and we were off. When we were in the dining room I sat at my seat and rang the bell. My friends just stood. “What are you guys waiting for?” I asked them. “Have a seat.” “Hello JaJa. What would you like today?” asked my waiter, Ken. “Hey Ken. Well, I would like chocolate chunk pancakes with sausage. What do u guys want?” “Um,” replied Sal. “I don’t know.” “Ken,” I said. He turned to me. “Get them some menus please.” “Okay.” He returned with my custom made menus. “Here you girls go,” he said while handing them out. “I want bacon and blueberry pancakes!” they said at the same time. We burst into a fit of giggles.

After breakfast…..

“Okay guys,” I said, putting down my fork. “The boat’s gonna dock soon so we need to get dressed. Follow me.” We got up and walked to the elevator. I pressed dressing room and when we arrived they looked at me oddly. “Why is there an eye scanner?” Layla asked. “Because I have expensive things in here and they have to be protected.” I replied, while it scanned my eye. The doors open and inside there was a lounge and a table with maps of my dressing room. I gave them each a map and said, “Alright guys. Let’s get dress.” We rushed off in different directions.

At the dock…..

“That was an awesome closet!!” Mymy exclaimed. “It’s nothing really,” I said, trying to remember the direction of my house. “You guys should see her house,” Mymy said. “It’s huge! Bigger than my family’s house.” I figured the way to our house and we started walking. Once we got there I heard someone shout, “Sissy!!” “Hi Charlotte!” I exclaimed. “Whoa! You must have grown a whole foot!” she giggled happily. “Guys this is my little sis Charlotte. Charlotte these are my friends, Salacia, Layla, and do you remember Mymy?” I asked. “I think so,” she replied. “How old is she?” Sal asked, smiling at how cute Charlotte looked. “Eight,” she replied. “Hey!” someone called. It was Amber. “Hey Amber! Come over here!” “Hey big sis!” she called, running toward us. “Hi Mymy.” “Hi!” “Amber this is Sal and Layla.” “Hi!” all three said at the same time. They smiled. “Who are they?” I asked pointing at the neighboring house. There were four boys outside playing football. “That’s Andrew and his friends. Andrew is the boy with light brown hair.” He saw us and said something to his friends. They stopped playing and stared. It made me feel uncomfortable. Andrew winked at me. I said, “Why don’t we go inside.”…..

sassyfashion
09-12-2011, 10:29 AM
Originally posted by lizi9955:
Coolness! TELL ME WHAT HAPPENS WHAT HAPPENS! I DEMAND IT!!! Pleaseness?!?!?!?!
wow! when i posted i didnt even pother checking if i had new comments! once i saw it was on page 6 i thought do i have new comments? i guess i do!!

lizi9955
09-12-2011, 10:48 AM
Oooohhh! Looks like Andrew has a THANG for you, Jaja! Heehee! LOL! WRITE MORE! PLEASENESS!

sassyfashion
09-12-2011, 10:57 AM
heehee!! i totally will!!

loveangel143
09-12-2011, 06:08 PM
MORE, JAJA! THIS IS AMAZING! http://forums.ubi.com/images/smilies/88.gif

sassyfashion
09-12-2011, 07:18 PM
thx ver!! working on chapter 14 now

sassyfashion
09-13-2011, 11:50 AM
Chapter 14

“I’m home!!” I called into the house. As soon as I said that I heard thumps everywhere. “JaJa!!” my mom cried. “Who are your friends?” “Guys these are Salacia and Layla. Sal, Lala this is my family.” “Hi.” “Hello Mymy.” “Hi.” “Let’s go to my room guys. I need to unpack.” Once we were in my room Sal asked, “How many people are in your family?” “Um, let me see….. Six,” I replied. “Wow.” “JaJa!!” my mom called. “Can you fix dinner tonight?” “Sure!” I called back. I walked downstairs and looked in the fridge. Surprisingly there wasn’t much. Just an apple and a pear. “Mom!” I cried. “Where is the food?” “We used it last night,” she replied. Oh boy. I guess I have to buy food. I ran back upstairs. “You guys wanna go shopping for food with me?” I asked. “Sure!”

At the grocery store…..

“Okay. Let me see,” I said, looking at my list. “I’ll start with stew. Um….. carrots, tomatoes, potatoes, corn, onions, beef, and spices.” I grabbed those and things for sugar cookies, fruit salad, lemonade, and hot chocolate for later. I paid for the things and we went home.

Later that night…..

“Loved the stew!” Mymy exclaimed. “Thanks!” I replied, feeling happy that my friends like my cooking. “I love this hot chocolate!” Salacia told me. “And it goes great with the leftover cookies.” I smiled, feeling proud I can make hot cocoa just like my dad’s. I heard a knock on the door. It was Amber. “Someone left these flowers for all of you.” “Thanks,” I replied. “No problem,” she said as she walked away. I closed the door. There was a bouquet for each of us. They were all in different colors but with cards. “Here are Sal’s and Mymy’s and Layla’s and mine,” I said as I passed them out. I read my card.

I have only seen you once, but when I saw you I felt so weak. Your back was turned and I didn’t care. I have never seen your eyes but I’m sure they sparkle. If u were a star, you would outshine ‘em all. If you were a moon, you would be the best thing at nightfall. You are the girl of my dreams.

I looked at my friend and saw them smiling. I guess they had an admirer too…..

lizi9955
09-13-2011, 12:40 PM
How romantic! Please write more!!! EEP! HeeHee!

sassyfashion
09-13-2011, 04:22 PM
http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif totally!! u must like it also cause u r ALSO getting it!! lol!!

lizi9955
09-13-2011, 11:03 PM
HeeHee! YAYZNESS! PLEASE write more, JaJa! PLEASENESS!
http://forums.ubi.com/images/smilies/16x16_smiley-very-happy.gif http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif http://forums.ubi.com/images/smilies/heart.gif http://forums.ubi.com/images/smilies/88.gif http://forums.ubi.com/images/smilies/halo.gif http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_razz.gif

sassyfashion
09-14-2011, 08:15 AM
http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_smile.gif i am working on it now

Balletgrl
09-14-2011, 10:41 PM
Me loves it!!

What me inspired you to write? http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif

Me just wants to make clear about it... XD

http://media.ubi.com/us/forum_images/gf-glomp.gif

Leonarda2011
09-15-2011, 07:34 AM
I like it. http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_wink.gif

sassyfashion
09-15-2011, 08:03 AM
Dani: the part of going somewhere and meeting boys and mystery is in the next 1 (it was inspired by u and mik) mik inspired me of going 2 my homeland by boat

Leonarda2011: yeaz!

sassyfashion
09-15-2011, 08:44 AM
Chapter 15

My friends and I looked up at smiled at each other. “Wow,” I said. “When I came I never thought we would have secret admirers.” “Yah,” Salacia agreed. We were all happy. “Hey guys lets have some pancakes,” I said, hungry and wanting to fill my stomach, which was growling for food. “Yah.”

After breakfast…..

“You guys wanna go to my favorite place on this island?” I asked my friends. “Sure!” they reply. “What is it like?” Sal asked. “It’s calming, soothing, beautiful, and a great place to be if you need to think.” “Cool! Sure!”

At my favorite place…..

My friends look at the forest with awe. That’s right. My favorite place is a special forest that nobody but me and now Layla, Sal, and Mymy know. “This is the best place to chill if you are upset.” “This place is so cool!” Layla said. Ring, ring, ring!! “What on earth,” I said as I pulled out my my-link. “Yes! Poll results.” “What?” Mymy asked. “I wanted to know what people thought of us Ham, Mik, and Cyan,” I replied reading the results. I screamed. “What?!” they cried. I couldn’t reply so I just kept screaming. Finally I stopped. “What is it?” Sal asked, worriedly. “Someone hacked the poll and the name is,” I pause and gulped. “You four are goners.” My friends started screaming. I just couldn’t figure this out…..

sassyfashion
09-15-2011, 12:36 PM
anybody? hello?

sassyfashion
09-16-2011, 04:50 PM
seriously i need a little encouragement b4 i can go on!!

artsaboveall
09-16-2011, 05:46 PM
WRITE MORE WRITE MORE WRITe MOREEE!!!! http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif

sassyfashion
09-16-2011, 05:48 PM
i will!! thx salz!

artsaboveall
09-16-2011, 05:51 PM
np!!!! http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_smile.gif sorry i didn't read the latest chapters sooner!!!!!! http://forums.ubi.com/images/smilies/blush.gif

sassyfashion
09-16-2011, 06:55 PM
its ok!

sassyfashion
09-16-2011, 07:05 PM
Chapter 16

When we went to bed that night nobody could sleep for hours. We just kept thinking about that horrible post. Who would have wanted to hack my poll? I thought. Who? Finally we fell asleep.

The next morning…..

I blinked my eyes and yawned. My friends weren’t up yet. I looked at the clock. 7 a.m.! I thought. I woke up EARLY! I got up and took a shower. When I went back into my bedroom my friends were up. “Morning guys,” I said, walking into my room. They all looked tired. “Why don’t you guys take showers then we can get dresses,” I suggested. They agreed and they walked drowsily up to the bathroom and took a shower one at a time. When each went out looking more awake, a drowsy one would go in. I read the whole time. When they were all done, looking more awake and not drowsy at all, I took them into my closet. It was almost as big as the one on my boat. My friends and I went through the whole closet, looking for stuff to wear. Just when we were putting the finishing touches on my my-link rang. It was a text from Verity!

Verity
Wats up JaJa?

Me
Nothing much u?

Verity
Well I got a new dress

Me
Sweetz

Varity
Yah…..

sassyfashion
09-16-2011, 08:05 PM
Chapter 17

Verity and I texted forever, then we went downstairs for breakfast. Apparently Dad was cooking. “Dad!” I said, entirely surprised. “Why are you making breakfast?” “You’re Mom is tired,” he replied. “She was up a long time. From five a.m. two days ago till five a.m. this morning.” I gasped. My friends looked at my dad wide eyed. He just nodded. “She needs her rest. Now what would you like for breakfast girls?” “Bacon and Blueberry waffles,” we said, all at once. We giggled while my dad said, “Okay!”

After breakfast…..

“That was a very good breakfast,” Sal said, finishing off her waffles. Layla and Mymy nodded and smiled. “Thanks for the food dad!” we ran upstairs into my bedroom. “You know what we could do guys?” I said, with a happy grin on my face. “What?” they asked. “Girl Frenzy!” “Yah!” Mymy cried. Sal and Lala looked puzzled. “What’s girl frenzy?” Lala asked. “It’s where we do hair-dos and spa and clothes. Girl stuff!!” Sal and Layla looked at each other with grins on their faces. “Yah!” I went to my bathroom to get some stuff. “Mymy!” I called. “I need your help!” She came in and helped me carry stuff. We came out with four foot massagers (the kind you put water in), lots of towels and wash clothes, masks, lotion, oats, bath salts, shampoo, conditioner, and cleansers. “Are we gonna wash our hair in your bathroom sink?” Sal asked me. “Nope,” I replied, smiling and pointed to a sink next to my vanity. I went to my vanity and opened the draws. I pulled out hair brush. “You guys did bring your own hair brushes right?” “Yah.” I pulled out perfume and face paint. “Face paint!” Lala cried. “Yup.” I pulled out my nail kit. Then I went downstairs, into the kitchen. I opened the fridge and pulled out a cucumber and some boiled eggs. I went to a cabinet and pulled out some milk powder and honey. I ran back to my room and said, “We’re all set.”…..

sassyfashion
09-17-2011, 11:50 AM
ello?! anyone?!

sassyfashion
09-18-2011, 09:27 AM
hello......

sassyfashion
09-18-2011, 10:36 AM
Chapter 18

I heard giggling in my doorway. Our masks were on our faces and our cucumbers were on our eyes. I took off my cucumbers and tilted my head. In my doorway were my youngest brothers, Ricky (six) and Charlie (eight and Charlotte’s twin). I guess I should explain my whole family. The oldest in the family (besides mom and dad) is Rose. Rose is fifteen. The others in my family are Crystal (thirteen), Amber (nine), Charlotte and Charlie (eight) Jasmine (seven) Ricky (six), Dominic (five), and Belle (four). Big family right? Well my parents wanted that. Anyway, when I saw Ricky and Charlie, I flung a pillow at them. They laughed and darted down the hall. I got up and closed the door. A few minutes later out masks were washed off and our cucumbers were thrown away. We had set up the foot massagers and relaxed our feet in ‘em. I heard a knock at the door and went to see who it was Dominic, Ricky, and Charlie. They started giggling again. I slammed the door in their faces and went back to my foot massager. When I heard another knock I almost screamed. I ran to the door and flung it open. I saw Amber their and she looked a little bit upset. “Sorry,” I apologized. “I thought you wee our pesky brothers.” The upset face turned into a smile. I knew she understood how I was feeling. She gave me a note. I thanked her and she went toward her room. I closed the door and began walking to the others. “What’s the letter say?” Layla asked. “It’s to us all,” I said. I opened the letter and read what it said.

Those flowers you each received were all from me. It only like one of you but who could it be? Figure out, I’ll give you a clue. It could be her, it could be you. Her skin tone is bright kind of like white. That was your clue so to you all, goodnight.

I looked up from the letter. “It can’t be me,” I said. “I have tan skin. It must be one of you.”…..

Balletgrl
09-18-2011, 11:07 AM
Suspense-ness and mystery!! http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif

http://media.ubi.com/us/forum_images/gf-glomp.gif

If someone sent that to me I would be like, Um.... Later! http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif

http://media.ubi.com/us/forum_images/gf-glomp.gif

Me can't waits to read more!

WRITEZ MOREZ PLEASES!!

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sassyfashion
09-18-2011, 03:41 PM
heehee!! i feel like a nacny drew mystery writer!! lolz!! like later? really!! lolz!! i totally am writing more

sassyfashion
09-19-2011, 07:53 AM
heehee chapter 19 is pretty hard so it will take a while

sassyfashion
09-30-2011, 08:47 AM
Chapter 19

The note was driving us crazy. We had been pondering over it for hours. Now we were sitting at the dining table, eating dinner. Ricky had burped and grossed us out. He smirked at us. When dinner was over we excuse ourselves from the dining room and ran to my bedroom. “More detective work guys,” I said, pulling out my detective kit. “Cool detective kit!” Salacia exclaimed. It had everything: Fingerprint powder, invisible ink pens, detective notepads, pens, flashlights, everything. I grabbed my fingerprint powder and a feather. I dipped the feather in the powder and ran it around the note. I looked at my friends and Mymy nodded. I lifted the note to my face and blew the powder away. There was a fingerprint! I carefully laid it on my vanity. I grinned at my friends, as I took out my fingerprint decoder. I scanned it but I didn’t get a result. I scanned over and over but still, nothing. I sighed and put my kit away. “Nuts,” I said feeling depressed. I looked over at my friends and they shook their heads. I knew they felt depressed 2. Then I heard someone singing.

Never say never! I never thought that I could walk through fire! I never thought that I could take the burn!

When I heard that I knew EXACTLY who was texting….. Dani! I was wondering how her trip was going.

Dani
Mollie died!

I stared at my my-link with sadness in my heart. Tears pricked my eyes. I could feel Mollie’s pain. But why?.....

sassyfashion
10-03-2011, 08:39 AM
i am sorry bout the delay but i have been sooooo busy i will try though 4 the fans of this book! its my destany!!!!!!!!!! lolololololzz!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

sassyfashion
10-25-2011, 02:32 PM
I woke up early that morning. I went outside to get the gazzette and found something else with it.

You can run, but you can't hide you and your friends, are in for a big surprise.

I screamed at a few people looked at me oddly. I blushed and hurried inside. Once inside I texted Lala, Mymy and Salz.

Me
guys! i just got a weird letter! come here! it involves you three!

Layla
eek! coming!

Mymy
whoaz! on my way!

Salacia
really?! im coming!

I waiting outside, trying to spot them when they arrived. Finally, after what seemed to be a million years, I saw them.

"Mymy! Salz! Lala!" I shouted. I ran inside and picked up the note. When I turned around I found them sitting on my couch. "Read this," I said, handing the paper to Salz.

Salz read the note outloud, as my friends faces truned pale.

Salz loked up, after she finished reading the paper. "What do you think he or she meant by that?" she asked.

"I don't know but I have the weird feeling that it's the same mystery that we started but never finished.

"I wonder if he or she saw us now," Mymy wondered............

sassyfashion
10-28-2011, 09:29 AM
We stared at Mymy, with our pale faces turning paler. I guess we had never thought of that.

Knock knock. Knock knock.

"Now who could that be?" I wondered outloud.

I went to the door and opened it ever so slightly and that's when I saw it. Another note. I picked it up and went inside, closing the door gently. I sat next to my friends and opened the note. And this is what I saw:

You may scream, you may run. This is going to be lots of fun!

I stared in horror and what the note said. My friends looked at me worridly.

"JaJa?" Lala said. "What's wrong?"

I handed her the note and she read, silently, as her face whitened, as if she'd seen a ghost. Then she screamed. Then she read the note outloud. The second she was done, we heard a knock. Knock konck. Knock knock. I ran to the door and threw it open, hoping to catch whoever was doing this. I stared, disbelievingly, at what I saw: another note. I picked it up, slammed the door, and walked towards my living room. My friends stared at me, wondering what happened. I sat down and gave the letter for Mymy to read. What she read gave us all a shock.

"The hair, so black and silky, outshines the moon. Your complection, so beautifully white, outshines the sunlight. I have never seen one more beautiful, I hope to see you again tomorrow."

Layla, Mymy, and I gasped and turned our heads towards Salz. She blushed.

"Salz," I said. "I think you have a secret admirer!".........

UbiDarla
10-28-2011, 12:28 PM
Great story JaJa! Awesome mystery! My favorite part so far was when you needed a map to get around your closet on the boat... http://forums.ubi.com/images/smilies/88.gif Can't wait to find out what happens!

sassyfashion
10-29-2011, 02:28 PM
thx UbiDarla! kinda got that idea from London Tipton cause her closet is huuuuuuge! and ppl get lost in there http://forums.ubi.com/images/smilies/16x16_smiley-very-happy.gif yah im working next chapter http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_smile.gif it will b posted soon

artsaboveall
10-29-2011, 02:30 PM
OMG OMG OMG Whoa. I have a secret admirer?!? http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_eek.gif AHH! http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_eek.gif
Thanks so much for adding me!! http://forums.ubi.com/images/smilies/88.gif I can't wait to see what happens next XD

sassyfashion
10-29-2011, 03:29 PM
Oh. My. Goodness. Salz litteraly shrieked when I said that. Well I guess she was happy. Or maybe excited. Or maybe......

Beep! Beep! Beep! I groaned so loud the next island could have heard me. I slapped my hand down on my alarm clock's off button and got up. I put on some comfortable clothing and went outside to get Imagine That magazine. Instead of just the magazine I saw....... a note. Not again, I thought. I picked up both and went inside to open the note. On it I saw:

Salacia it is the one I am after. I wait at Pierre's 30 after 9 is when the clock will chime. She will be at the table in the far back, when she will meet me this message will lack. But one thing she must know, is to wear a dress, as white a snow.

I stared at the message for five minutes strait and then texted Salacia.

Me
salz get over here quick!

Salacia
um.... ok......

When she finally arrived, which felt like hours away, I pulled her insides, slamming the door behind us, and we went to my living room. Once she sat down I handed her the note. She looked at me with wide eyes. I nodded. She knew this was from her secret admirer. She took the note and opened it quickly, just barely not ripping it, and read the note. Her eyes widend with every word until I thought they would pop right out of thier sockets. She looked at my trying to say something, but nothing came out. She tried again but still nothing would come out. I looked at her questionly and she nodded. She wanted me to text Layla and Mymy. I grabbed my my-link and started texting.

Me
hey u 2 get over here salz wants u

They didn't even reply. They just ran over to my house. I through open the door right when they tripped and fell. They expected to fall against the door ut no such luck. They fell onto the plush purple carpet of my house.

"Oof!" they cried as they fell. Salz and I tried to stiffen a giggle as we helped them up. We just couldn't. We started laughing so hard our cheeks hurt. I didn't dare open my eyes for I feared Mymy and Lala would be scowling at us. Finally in opened my eyes ever so slightly and instead of finding them scowling, I found them laughing with us. See what great friends I have? When we finally stopped laughing we stood up and Salz and I showded them the note. They gasped and looked at each other smiling. I looked at the wondering what they were smiling about then I knew and I started smiling too. The only one not smiling was Salz.

"What are you guys smiling about?" she asked. We didn't reply. We just kept on smiling. When we finally told her she smiled as well........

sassyfashion
10-29-2011, 03:30 PM
np salz!

lizi9955
10-29-2011, 05:28 PM
OOOOOOOHHHHHHH!!! This is getting (in sing songy voice) GOOOOODDDD!!! Write more, JaJa! I beg of you! MOREZ!

sassyfashion
10-29-2011, 06:06 PM
why thx lala and 2 tell u the truth... my story's just getting started....... http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_wink.gif

sassyfashion
10-29-2011, 07:37 PM
"Do you like this design?" I asked Salacia.

"Well," she paused. "Not really"

"Okay," I replied, putting the design back in it's drawer. As you may have guessed we were getting Salz ready for her "date". Mymy was helping her withher nails, Layla was doing her hair, and I was making her outfit. Kiara was also over my house. Why you ask? Do help Salz with her make-up. Earlier we did a full spa treatment on her. Facials, feet scrubs, ect. Now we want her to look super chic during this "date" but maybe we over did it a little.

I looked at some more designs. I was quite limited and color and the actual design but somehow I made it just right.

"How bout this?" I asked, showing her another design.

"Maybe," she replied. She looked nervous.

"Salz are you um nervous?" I asked.

She looked at me and mumbled, "Maybe."

Layla patted her on the back. "You'll be fine. Look if you want we can be there to watch and help you. On your 'date'." We all laughed at that. But somehow, I think Salz was worrid.

At Pierre's......

We were all at Pierre's but at different tables. Saz was at the one it said and we were at tables nearby. I finally foud a design she liked and created it. She was wearing a white mini dress, cream boots, and white gloves. Everything was normal, candles, fine food, and even elegant music. But then something weird happened. They started to play Firework by Katy Perry. And it was loud! My guess at top volum. Everyone put thier hands over thier ears and closed thier eyes. The next thing I knew the music was the regular jazz tune and Chef Pierre was saying, "I'm sorry about that. Someone put the CD in our CD player. That is all."

I looked at the table where Salz was. I gasped at what I saw. She was gone!.........

artsaboveall
10-29-2011, 08:06 PM
OMG!!! WHERE DID I GO?!?!? http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_eek.gif
WRITE MORE!!! XD http://forums.ubi.com/images/smilies/88.gif

lizi9955
10-29-2011, 08:12 PM
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHH!!! Salz...WENT! Somewhere out in the open! Tell us what has happened to her! MORE MORE MOREEEEE!!! EEEEEEEEEEEPPPPPP!

sassyfashion
10-29-2011, 08:32 PM
XD XD XD XD goodness u 2! u really must luuuuuv this story! XD XD and working on the chapter http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_wink.gif will b here in 10 mins i think http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_smile.gif

artsaboveall
10-29-2011, 08:59 PM
YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! http://forums.ubi.com/images/smilies/88.gif

sassyfashion
10-29-2011, 09:24 PM
srry thx 2 my stupid intenet prtecer (which i hate more than a maskito and is wayyyyy peskier) its didnt post it when i click pos which i worked so hard n 4 u gus srry i hate. my. internet. protecter. system. I HATE IT!!!!!!!!!! (ps im on my mom's while m posting this right now)

ellak3
10-29-2011, 11:51 PM
Originally posted by sassyfashion:
srry thx 2 my stupid intenet prtecer (which i hate more than a maskito and is wayyyyy peskier) its didnt post it when i click pos which i worked so hard n 4 u gus srry i hate. my. internet. protecter. system. I HATE IT!!!!!!!!!! (ps im on my mom's while m posting this right now) cAN U put me in there?

sassyfashion
10-30-2011, 08:41 AM
i can try..... anyways trying 2 rewrite stroy

Balletgrl
10-30-2011, 08:47 AM
That has happened to me SO many times before!!

TIPS!

1. If you're writing it straight onto the forum, don't answer other forum posts... it deletes your other one.

2. Before you post, copy it, just in case the window gets all glitchy.

3. If you copy it, don't click on ANYONE on the game. It copies their name onto your clipboard, so instead of your story, you get their name.

4. If you're on a laptop (and you type like me) put a little cloth thing (cleaning cloth works great) ontop of the mouse pad so you don't accidently click anything you don't want to.

5. Writing on Word is a good idea. http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif

http://media.ubi.com/us/forum_images/gf-glomp.gif

Oh! And this is an awesome story! XD

http://media.ubi.com/us/forum_images/gf-glomp.gif

sassyfashion
10-30-2011, 09:19 AM
I screamed and then blushed. People were straring at me so long I felt uncomfortable. I paid for the meal and walked outside with my friends right behind me. They looked as worried as I did.

"The loud music must have been a distrraction so he-" I started.

"Or she," Mymy interrupted.

"Not very likely but maybe," I replied. "As I was saying. So that he or she could take Salz away without anyone noticing. We all had our eyes covered. And even if she screamed would wouldn't hear her cause our eyes were covered. Come on. We need to go to my house."

At my house.......

I opened the door, letting my friends close it, and went strait for my spy drawer. I grabbed the kits and placed them on my bed.

"Choose a color," I said, picking up the pink backpack. My friends grabbed thier favorite colors and a few snacks for the search and we went outside.

"Where do we go first?" Kiara asked.

"Gardens," Mymy replied. "It's probaly the bestplace to look." And boy was she wrong. When we arrived at the Gardens it was like a ghost town. No one was in it. We thought.....

"Let's start searching," Lala said.

"Search for what?" someone asked from behind us.

Our bodies started shaking as we slowly turned our heads behind us. There stood a man with a wicked grin.

"AHHHHHHHHHHH!" we screamed as we turned to run. We never got the chance. He hit our heads and we blacked out.....................

lizi9955
10-30-2011, 04:02 PM
AAAAAH! This is getting scary and SUSPENSEFUL! EEEEEEEPPPPP! Write more! I can't take the curiosity!!! Hehe...http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif

artsaboveall
10-30-2011, 04:03 PM
OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG
MOOOOOOREEEE http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_eek.gif
Please http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif

sassyfashion
10-30-2011, 08:28 PM
Chapter 23

When I woke up I saw Dani’s bedroom. Now, I know I blacked out at the Gardens. So why was I here? I tried to sit up, groaned, and I laid back down. “Don’t sit up. You hit your head badly,” I heard someone say. I looked up and saw Dani looking at us worriedly.

“What happened?” she asked. “Are you alright?”

“I last I remember a strange man hit us on our heads after he asked, ‘Search for what?’.” I replied, feeling painful.

“Well, what are you searching for?”

“Oh my goodness! I almost forgot! Salz is missing!”

“Whaaaat?!" she screamed.

“Yah!”

I showed her the note and explained everything. Her face was as pale as snow and her eyes looked like they were gone fall out of her head.

One I was done explaining she said, “I’ll help you search.”

“Thanks,” I replied feeling more hopeful. “Maybe we will find her now that we have another person.”

By now my friends were waking up and were excited that she was helping. I guess they had more hope too……….

lizi9955
10-31-2011, 12:59 PM
YAYS! Now we're gonna start searching for Sal! I wonder what'll happen! Write more so we can find out! EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEPPPPPP!!!

skylight22
10-31-2011, 01:14 PM
Originally posted by Balletgrl:
That has happened to me SO many times before!!

TIPS!

1. If you're writing it straight onto the forum, don't answer other forum posts... it deletes your other one.

2. Before you post, copy it, just in case the window gets all glitchy.

3. If you copy it, don't click on ANYONE on the game. It copies their name onto your clipboard, so instead of your story, you get their name.

4. If you're on a laptop (and you type like me) put a little cloth thing (cleaning cloth works great) ontop of the mouse pad so you don't accidently click anything you don't want to.

5. Writing on Word is a good idea. http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif

http://media.ubi.com/us/forum_images/gf-glomp.gif

Oh! And this is an awesome story! XD

http://media.ubi.com/us/forum_images/gf-glomp.gif
That's what I do... I write it beforehand on Pages (The Apple writing program), then I save it as the name of my story, copy it, paste it... You know. Write now, I have a whole Pagesa document saved as "Outside the Lines" which has my whole story on it.
And this is really good! Write more!

sassyfashion
11-01-2011, 09:38 AM
Chapter 24

We looked everywhere but no luck.

“Now what are we gonna do?” Mymy said. “We’ve looked everywhere but haven’t found her.”

I didn’t even hear her. I was writing in my tiny spy notebook.

The Search for Salacia Bright Star

So far we have found nothing. Not even a clue. We are getting worried. Maybe the kidnapper took her off the island. All we know is someone or someones doesn’t want us to find her.

“How about Salz house?” Dani suggested. “Maybe her kidnapper took her there, thinking no one would think of looking there.”

My head snapped up as I snapped back to attention. I put my book in my backpack and said, “Good idea. Let’s go.”

At Sal’s house………

“I’m glad Norman gave us the key,” I said. “But he looked suspicious.”

“What did u expect?” Kiara said. “We are asking for someone else’s house key.”

I shrugged and unlocked the door. Lala put her finger to her lip and I pushed open the door inch by inch, till finally it was open all the way. We walked in feeling scared. The room was a disaster. The sheets and blankets where on the floor, couch cushions everywhere, and the coffee table was on its side. We stared in horror.

“What happened in here?!” I squeaked. The rest couldn’t talk, for they were in what seemed like hypnosis. Finally they spoke. But all at once.

“What the…..” Lala said.

“OMG!” Kiara said.

“What happened?!” Mymy cried.

“I can’t believe it,” Dani mumbled.

“This is not hap-” I started to say but I was cut off. Someone was coming in Salz house!...........

tink792
11-01-2011, 12:00 PM
Do not give out personal information in game or on the forums!! If you need a reminder on the forums rules, you can find them here:

http://forums.ubi.com/eve/foru...1021549/m/4911045449 (http://forums.ubi.com/eve/forums/a/tpc/f/8921021549/m/4911045449)

`UbiJanie

tink792
11-01-2011, 12:03 PM
your awesome at writing!


LUV VICTORIA!!! <3

beautyqueen9129
11-01-2011, 03:02 PM
WRITE! WRITE MORE AND MORE AND MORE! THIS IS SOOOO GOOD!

skylight22
11-02-2011, 01:00 PM
OH MY GOSHNESS!!
Write. More. NOOOOOOOOOWWWWWWWWWW.....
XD
But I just finished reading this from start to end! It's really, really, AWESOME!!!
Write more now, my peep!
XD

artsaboveall
11-02-2011, 05:32 PM
You have GOT to WRITE MORE XD http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif TOO MUCH SUSPENSE http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_eek.gif PLZ WRITE MORE - Before I burst XD

sassyfashion
11-03-2011, 08:54 AM
Chapter 24

We hid behind the couches, hoping the intruder wouldn’t see us.

“Sal!” we heard someone say. “Sal are you here?”

I peeked around the edge of the couch and saw……..

“Ham!” I cried, running over to her.

“JaJa?” she said, looking quite confused.

I gave her a hug and explained about the search, Salz, and the weird looking dude that hit our heads. She looked at my wide-eyed and shocked. She sort of looked like she was going to pass out. I sat her on the couch and explained how we were searching for her and why we had back packs with us. She was speechless.

Once I was done talking she said, “I’ll help you search.”

I smiled and handed her a backpack. We had another traveler. We started to search and found a few things. A grabbed my notebook and started to write:

The Search for Salacia bright Star(Clues)

*A broken heel
*A quill
*A fingerprint

I turned to my friends, my grin as wide as a watermelon. Their grins were just as big.

“Food Fair?” I asked. They nodded. The excitement was getting better and better!

At the food fair……..

“Hi Delia!” we chorused, running up to her.

“Hello girls,” she replied, smiling. “What are you up to today?”

“Have you seen Salz?” I blurted.

She didn’t seem to mind. “No, not that I can remember. Oh wait. I saw her at the Dance Academy. May I ask why?”

I lowered my voice. “She is missing.”

Dalia’s eye widened. “Missing?” Salacia is missing? Jade Island’s Salacia Bright Star?”

We nodded sadly.

“I wish I could help you girl but I have so much work to do. But I give you my good luck and hope.”

“It’s ok. We have a lot of people. We will find her. I’m sure of it. Thank for your help!” I said, as we headed for the academy………….

artsaboveall
11-03-2011, 05:05 PM
OMG OMG OMG OMG WHERE AM I?!?!?!?!?
AHH THE SUSPENSE!!! http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_eek.gif PLEASE write more Jaja!!!! http://forums.ubi.com/images/smilies/88.gif

sassyfashion
11-04-2011, 09:18 AM
Chapter 25

“Jordon!” we cried running up to Jordon Miller, the dance instructor. He looked preoccupied. Finally he looked up at us.

“Yes?” he asked.

“We are looking for Salacia.” Kiara told him. “Have you seen her anywhere?”

“Hm. Yes, yes I have. I saw her talking with Flora Reyes yesterday.”

“Thanks!” she called over her shoulder, as we ran to the modeling agency.

Once we got there I shouted, “Flora!”

She looked up, surprised, and said, “Hello gals.”

“Hey,” we replied running faster then ever.

“Flora,” I said. “Have you seen Salacia?”

She thought for a moment and said, “Yes. Yes I have. I just saw her yesterday at um, at the Pierre’s Restaurant. Yes, that is where I saw her.”

“Thanks!” we cried, as we ran toward the center.

At the Fashion Center……

We looked around. The restaurant was pretty much empty too. Only a few people were there. Chef Pierre, Ella, and a few other people but that’s it.

“Chef Pierre have you seen Salacia?” I asked eager than ever to find her.

He pointed to a table. There we saw……

“Salz!” we shrieked, as we ran to her. She looked a little….. well, injured.

She looked up at us, her grin a mile wide. “Guys!” she cried, running into our arms. We had never had a bigger, happier group hug.

When we finally stopped hugging I said, “We need to finish solving this mystery.”……..

loveangel143
11-04-2011, 02:39 PM
JaJa! This is not a story! It is a piece of incredibleness! http://forums.ubi.com/images/smilies/88.gif Can u add me if you can JaJa? Thanks http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_smile.gifhttp://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_smile.gifhttp://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_smile.gifhttp://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_smile.gifhttp://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_smile.gifhttp://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_smile.gifhttp://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_smile.gif

loveangel143
11-04-2011, 03:30 PM
I just read the story beginning to end. Lhttp://forums.ubi.com/images/smilies/heart.gifVE IT!

sassyfashion
11-10-2011, 02:24 PM
posting new chapter soon by the end of the day it will b here i hope

sassyfashion
11-12-2011, 07:59 AM
srry ive been so busy lately...... ill post ASAP though im just so busy!

BUCKRULES
11-19-2011, 04:08 PM
JaJa-
I wrote something about you on the Amazing People thread

sassyfashion
11-22-2011, 08:30 AM
Awwwwww thanks! I'll look ASAP!

sassyfashion
11-22-2011, 08:55 AM
Chapter 25

I was fed up. We tried and tried and tried again and tried some more. We couldn’t figure out why anyone would take Salacia and who did it. But hey, we didn’t care that much anyways. All we cared about at the moments was the she was back! We had a huge party and celebrated for what seemed like forever. During that time I never would have guessed that I would have some big things to think about the next day……………………..

I saw beautiful trees and animals as I looked around me. It was a gorgeous forest with elegance and beauty. I couldn’t believe my luck! This was a destined place that I had wished for many times ago. It would inspire clothing ideas, give me happiness, and it was a wish come true. I loved the place and everything in it. I saw Toco toucans, spider monkeys, humming birds, butterflies and so much more. It was the best place in the world.

Beep! Beep! Beep! Beep! Beep! my alarm clock cried.

“Can it!” I screamed back, mad it awoke me from my wonderful dream. It refused to quiet down and kept on hollering its annoying beeps. Finally I woke up and climbed out of bed, drowsily, heading for the kitchen. I looked at the kitchen, feeling to lazy to make a gourmet meal. I looked at my boxes of cereal, trying to choose something that would fill me hungering stomach, as it growled underneath my pjs. I grabbed some Wheat Chex, got into my fridge, grabbed the milk and sat down. I realized my mistake and grabbed a plastic bowl from the cupboard. I felt more tired than ever before. I looked at the clock in the kitchen and cried, “6 O’ clock?!” I ran to my bed a jumped in, before realizing I forgot to put my unmade breakfast away. I got up lazily, put the things away, and hopped back into bed. The next thing I knew I was late. I ran for my closet throwing on the first things I saw and headed for the door. On the way I check myself in the vanity mirror, brushed my hair, and ran for the door. Right after I unlocked it, it slammed open, knocking me against the wall. I looked around the door, my thoughts swirling and twirling on who could be there. Salz? I thought. Maybe Layla? I peeked around and saw nothing. Nothing but a wind storm anyways. I closed the door and threw myself at my closet. Putting on whatever rain gear I found, I headed for the door. The wind slammed it open. I walked outside, slammed it closed, and heading for Aunella Willow’s house…………

sassyfashion
11-22-2011, 04:27 PM
Chapter 26

The wind was pushing against me as I struggled to get to Aunella’s house. It was cold enough to freeze boiling hot, melted ice cream in ten seconds flat! Finally I saw the house and tried to run as fast as lightning could bolt down from the sky. No such luck. When I got on her lovely front porch I knock as hard as I could on the door. Hurry, I thought. Open up! When I saw her warm, happy, caring face I smiled a mile wide. I rushed inside the house, happy to be in such a warm and nice home. The living room seemed dark. So I thought. The next thing I knew I had passed out on the comfy, plush carpet.

When I awoke, I saw Aunella Willow worried and upset face.

“Are you alright?” she asked.

“Yes,” I lied. “I must’ve gotten worn out from walking through the wind.”

She looked at me curiously, her eyes looking directly into mine. I knew she was trying to find out if I was lying. Finally I couldn’t stand it anymore.

“I don’t feel to well,” I blurted, hoping that she wouldn’t be mad. She didn’t look mad. She looked happy that I told her the truth. I felt happy too. Happy that she was helping me get better. She helped me to the couch where I fell fast asleep.

When I awoke I jumped out of bed feeling pumped, energetic, happy, and most importantly cured. I jumped up and ran to Aunella, thanking her for making me feel better. I couldn’t believe I was all better. Finally we could do what we had planned………

sassyfashion
11-24-2011, 06:11 PM
Anyone?

artsaboveall
11-24-2011, 11:04 PM
AWESOME, Jaja! http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_smile.gif Write more! http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif

sassyfashion
11-25-2011, 02:33 PM
Thanks! I'm soooo going to! I've waited too long! http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_smile.gif

beautyqueen9129
11-25-2011, 08:19 PM
WRITE WRITE WRITE! I CANT STAND THE SUSPENSE! WHERES SALACIA???????

areyt5
11-26-2011, 10:56 AM
plz write more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! this is awesome Jaja!

sassyfashion
11-26-2011, 12:18 PM
beautyqueen9129: http://forums.ubi.com/images/smilies/16x16_smiley-very-happy.gif Salcia is back! And the mystery will be continued shortly http://forums.ubi.com/images/smilies/shady.gif

areyt5: Why thank you! And I will be writing more soon! http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_smile.gif

sassyfashion
11-26-2011, 01:15 PM
Chapter 26

I was excited. I couldn’t sleep. Today was the day I had a super cool fashion show! Aunella and I had been designing all week. Finally I fell asleep.

I saw myself at the fashion show. Aunella and my designs were being shown off by glamorous, gorgeous models. At the end everyone clapped and applauded. We were thrilled. All the time with spent designing the fashions had paid off! It was spectacular!

I woke up in bed, alarmed. I thought I had heard a noise from the living room. I heard it again. I walked silently, hardly breathing, toward the closet. Propped on wall next to the doorway was a bat. I picked it up carefully, edging my way to the living room. I heard rustling, as if they were in my desk. I peeked through the doorway and saw someone, at my desk, stealing papers from the drawer I keep important papers in. I tiptoed toward the person, hoping that I could catch it. I screamed at the person looked up, startled. I swung my bat and missed. The person dropped the papers and ran. I tore after him, wanted to put him or her in jail. I looked out the front door. I saw no one. I threw down my bat, walked to my bedroom, and hopped into bed. The next thing I knew I was getting woken up.

Beep! Beep! Beep! Beep! My horrible sounding alarm clock rang out, trying to get me up and ready.

“Shut up!” I cried, hoping the dumb thing wouldn’t keep on buzzing its horrifying beeps.

That will never happen. I got up, turned it off and walked to my kitchen, lazily making a piece of toast and some bacon. I. Hate. Mornings.

Right before I took my first bite of the morning breakfast, I heard the doorbell. Sighing, I got up to answer the door. There I found a letter:

You were lucky to find you precious Salacia, but this time you won’t be so lucky. Your precious Dani Willow has gone missing. Can you guess who took her? Ha ha ha ha ha!

I gasped, wondering if it was the intruder who came in my house last night. Who did this terrible thing? I thought. It must have been the person who took Salz. I was mad, upset, and fearful……

Balletgrl
11-26-2011, 05:41 PM
OH
MEH
GOSH!!

I read the other chapters (Even though I procrastinated and didn't comment... SORRIES!)

But now I'm missing!

http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif

OH NOES!!

My Mom always tells me, if someone ever kidnapped me, they would bring me back. XD

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1cent

sassyfashion
11-26-2011, 07:53 PM
XD No problem! http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_smile.gif http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_wink.gif Sometimes I read your chapters and don't comment! Sorries!

XD And you never know what I will make happen! Ha ha ha ha ha! XD

areyt5
12-10-2011, 03:26 PM
plz write more jaja you havent written in forever!

sassyfashion
12-11-2011, 09:37 AM
XD Here you go all!

Chapter 26

While my emotions were running around like scared rats in a dungeon, Dani was walking around a palace…….

When Dani awoke she found herself lying on a canopy bed.

What am I doing here? She thought to herself, eyeing the fancy furniture in her room. Her room, filled with vibrant purples, blues, and pinks, had expensive things: new technology, very expensive furniture, and a large walk-in closet. She took a few steps to the closet’s threshold and stopped in amazement. Her closet was filled with loads of expensive (there’s that word again!) clothes: sapphire colored denim skirts and jeans, silk and satin blouses of all colors, faux fur coats, diamond tiaras, high heeled shoes, low heeled shoes, flats, sneakers, sandals, long gowns, and bubble vests. Against one wall, between two tall accessory shelves, stood a three drawer vanity with three connected mirrors and lights. She stared at them in awe, shook her head, and walked into the hallway, decorated in plush, thick carpet, wallpaper and glitter.

Wow, she thought. This is some hallway.

At the end of the hallway she found a set of stairs. Climbing down them, she thought about what she had seen so far.

“Fanciness”, she mumbled to herself. “Fanciness, glitter, high tech, lots of clothes. Where am I?”

At the end of the stairs she found another hall, with six doorways, but decorated in elegant items: A diamond chandelier, Persian rugs, and porcelain statues. She looked at the doorways and chose one. Crossing over the threshold, she found that she had entered the kitchen, which was filled with stainless steal appliances, granite countertops, elegant china dishes, a table with craved legs and sides and matching chairs.

Her eyes opened as wide and bowling balls as she scanned the elegant room. Suddenly she felt a hand rest on her shoulder. She looked up and met the eyes of a soft and sweet face of an elegant and beautiful woman. The woman smiled.

“Have a seat,” she said, walking towards the table. Dani inched her way towards the table until she was sitting down.

The woman smiled and said, “Call me Crystal.” Crystal made a bowl of cereal and gave it to Dani. Her stomach whined and growled but Dani pushed the bowl away for a few minutes. Then she pulled it toward her and started eating it. She was done before you could sing Yankee Doodle.

The woman just smiled and said, “I assume you are Dani Willow, the new girl in my castle.”

Dani’s mouth turned into a big ‘O’. “How do you know my name?” she asked. “And why am I here? And what is this place? And –“

“Patience,” Crystal said, still smiling. “One question at a time.”

Suddenly the door burst open and in walked a big muscular man carrying to pretty girls, who were unconscious. Dani gasped. The girls were Hermione and Mikaela!

The women frowned and said, “Do you have to be so rough with our children?”

Dani turned to face Crystal so fast that her hair whipped herself in the face. “Your children?” she squeaked.

The sweet woman looked at Dan and smiled. “Yes, my child. These are my children.”

“Hermione and Mikaela?” she cried. “Why are all three of us here?”

While the man walked the two girls up to their bedrooms, Crystal told her about why she was here. “You are going to learn how to be a princess. A princess with elegance and grace. Humility and posture. And you will learn it here.” She paused and waved her hand around her. “In Emerald Castle!”……….

artsaboveall
12-11-2011, 11:57 AM
How to be a princess!!! http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_eek.gif
YAY!!!! I love this Jaja!!!! http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif WRITE MORE PLEASE!!! http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif

beautyqueen9129
12-11-2011, 01:00 PM
Ohh! I wanna read more!!!!!!!!!!! MOREZ! MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

sassyfashion
12-11-2011, 03:51 PM
XD Of course darlings! I know how to be a princess too you know! XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD I'll post more soon http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_wink.gif

UbiWillow
12-11-2011, 06:00 PM
YAY THERE IS MORE STORY!

sassyfashion
12-11-2011, 06:50 PM
XD Glad you like it UbiWillow!

areyt5
12-11-2011, 07:38 PM
Yayz!!!!! Jaja is back baby!! Love this story!!!!

sassyfashion
12-12-2011, 01:52 PM
XD Here is another chapter!

Chapter 26

Dani stared at the as if she had gone out into a street in a clown suit saying, “I CUDDLE WITH ALLIGATORS!”

“Excuse me,” she said finally, getting up from her chair. She walked silently to the stairway and climbed them. While she climbed she thought about what it would be like living here.

It would probably never change me, she thought. I’m Dani and that’s that. But maybe it won’t be so bad staying here for a while. Wouldn’t it be nice to have a comfy bed for a change? And have a laptop and –“

While she thought Hermione was having her own thoughts.

Ham awoke in a canopy bed, just like Dani did.

“What the!” she cried, jumping out of her bed. “What’s this place?” Then she eyed her closet. Her eyes as wide as a dodo bird egg, she walked towards it. She gasped as she looked inside. Her closet was filled with loads of expensive (there’s that word again!) clothes: sapphire colored denim skirts and jeans, silk and satin blouses of all colors, faux fur coats, diamond tiaras, high heeled shoes, low heeled shoes, flats, sneakers, sandals, long gowns, and bubble vests. Against one wall, between two tall accessory shelves, stood a three drawer vanity with three connected mirrors and lights. Does that kind of closet ring a bell? Anyways, she was in love with her closet. She went inside and hunted for the perfect outfit. When she came out of her closet she was dressed in a sapphire colored denim skirt, a hot pink silk blouse, a pair of pink high heeled shoes, and a platinum and diamond necklace. Walking into the hall and down the steps she wondered how she got here.

Is this a wonderful dream? she thought to herself. If it is I hope no one wakes me up.

She entered the stainless steal kitchen. She eyed the wonderful and appliances and her gaze landed on a beautiful woman, AKA Crystal. She slid into a seat and Crystal turned around and saw Hermione. A smile spread upon her face.

“You must be Hermione,” she said.

Ham looked astonished. “How did you know my name?” she blurted.

“Every woman should know her child’s name.”

“Her child’s name?” Hermione squeaked.

“Yes. You are my child for now, for I will turn you into a graceful and elegance princess,” Crystal replied, her smile growing wider.

“But, but, but,” Ham sputtered, staring on the smile.

“Eat you breakfast”, the woman said, her smile now looking hysterical. “You’ll need you energy for the girl and boy dancing session.”

She took a bite out of her breakfast. Then another. Bite after bite she ate until her breakfas was finished

At the girl and boy dance…….

Each girl had on long, elegant gown while the boys wore black tuxes. Crystal paired each boy and girl with what she thought was the perfect pair. Dani, Hermione and Mikaela stood patiently waiting for their pairs. Dani looked down at her feet in thought.

I wonder who I’ll be pair with. Suddenly she saw a pair of feet before her. She looked up into the eyes ad Isaiah!.........

flowergoboom
12-12-2011, 02:46 PM
Honestly, this is the first time I have read any of this. So I decided to just take a look at the story thing and I was completely surprised by how great it was! This definitely deserves an emote! Aww there are no good surprised or blown away ones..well PARTY!!http://fc08.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2011/140/3/a/disco_fever_by_kath602-d3gsalr.gif

artsaboveall
12-12-2011, 06:05 PM
AWESOMENESS JAJA!!! http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif I LOVE IT!!! WRITE MORE!! http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_smile.gif http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_smile.gif http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_smile.gif http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_smile.gif

sassyfashion
12-12-2011, 07:39 PM
Emma: XD XD XD XD XD

Salz: http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_wink.gif Thanks yas! http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_smile.gif

sassyfashion
12-14-2011, 04:29 PM
Chapter 28

Both Isaiah and Dani took a step back, away from each other, for who knows what? Maybe they were embarrassed. Maybe they had a crush on each other maybe-

“HEY! We don’t have a crush on each other!!” They both cried at me.

Sigh. I hate it when people interrupt my story. It’s like someone knocking off a pot of chili and the cook having to start all over again. It’s like Cliff eating the cake Clair made and her having to start all over again. It’s like-

“Get on with it!” everyone cried.

ARG! Whatever.

“What are you doing here?” Dani and Isaiah asked each other. “What am I doing here? What are you doing here? Answer my question!”

They stared at each other, their non expressed face building frowns upon them.

Finally Isaiah said, “I don’t know, okay! I just woke up here in a weird room on a strange bed.”

Dani’s eyes flamed with anger once those very words came out of his mouth.

“We’re going to be taught to be royalty, if you even care.” Isaiah’s stuck out his tongue and Dani rolled her eyes.

“Today we learn the waltz. Follow the foot steps on the floor and you’ll do swell. Begin,” Crystal instructed, turning on the music.

The pairs began to dance, following the footsteps plastered on the dance floor. Soon it was all over and Isaiah and Dani were relieved. Walking towards their friends they gave each other maddening glances at each other. This could get very ugly.

Later that day……

Dani, Mikaela, and Hermione sat at their assigned seats and the girls’ dinner table. They were going to learn table manners, for that’s what ”princesses” use for dining. I’m not sure how well the trio liked it. Or any of this at all. After the “dinner manner lesson” they had regular manner lesson, “princess dressing” lessons, and balance lessons. This is gonna be some school……….

Chapter 29

Dani was in an incredible, amazing room with Christmas decorations of every kind overtaking the room. She had no idea this house took afloat into the sky the minute she closed the door, though, and that she was high above the clouds. She walked towards the tree and sat before it, wondering who the presents were for. She read each label carefully and gasped. They were all addressed to her! The minute she opened the first one she chose the floor and walls disappeared and she fell into the sky below her. She screamed and screeched and cried, but it was no use. She was falling, and that was that. She had almost touched the hard rock of Mount Everest when.........

Her elegant clock whispered soft, royal-like music into her room and woke her up. Her eyes snapped open and she stretched. She was dressed in a silk night gown, and she didn’t like it much. I guess she isn’t the princess type. She slipped her feet into she soft and plushy neon purple slippers and walked into the hallway, down the stairs, and stepped over the kitchen’s threshold into a………… deserted kitchen. It was vacant of human life and warmth from the oven. To put it in another way it seemed like a dead kitchen. She walked into a different room and stopped to look at the scene, different from the kitchen’s.

This room, the living room, had a fireplace on the north wall with three soft white couches surrounding it and a couple of lime green side tables next to the couch facing the fireplace. Against the eastern wall was a glass case holding tiny statues of girls in elegant (What else?) gowns and men in black suits dancing and a larger statue of Crystal. On the western wall were medium sized pictures of many different kinds of children, up to teens, and Crystal standing right behind them. The kids didn’t look very happen, and Dani knew why.

“Man”, she mumbled. “Everyone who comes here is miserable.”

She walked out, trying to think of where her group could be. Finally she found them in the den, watching Princess Protection Program and munching on popcorn with the spices they chose for their own cartons. Dani picked up a small container of popcorn, seasoned it with caramel popcorn spice, and sat down on the only empty couch. She looked around at the other girls and noticed Mikaela and Hermione were no where in sight.

Apparently those two were having there own nightmares…..

Mikaela was in the palace, wondering around, trying to find Dani and Hermione. She looked everywhere but no sign of them. Finally, she took the laptop from her desk and sat on her bed. She wanted to do some research on Emerald Castle and what was known about it. She began to type when suddenly she had a very unusual thirst for some milk... She set the laptop on her and rushed downstairs to see what the matter was. The minute she stepped onto the floor surrounding the set of stairs, she fell into a pit of darkness. While falling and falling, she screamed and screamed.

The minute she awoke, her body snapped up and she fell off the bed. Making her way for Hermione’s room, she pondered the dream she had just had, before waking up.

Hermione was laying on the beach, her skin soaking up the tanning sun rays. She read a fashion magazine, Jade Island’s Fashions of the Week, when she saw a woman snapping pictures and holding a recorder to a famous fashion model.

I bet that’s a reporter, she thought. I don’t want this vacation to be in the papers. I need to go someplace private.

She got up and tip toed toward her small beach cabin. Suddenly the reporter’s head snapped toward her and started running to her shouting, “Hermione, over here!”

Ham picked up speed as she ran. She didn’t know where to run to.

If I can lose the reporter, she though. I can make an escape to the cabin.

She did a few turns and loops to throw the reporter off track and off her trail. She looked around her and opened the door to step into her cabin. Suddenly the cabin began to grow higher and higher by the second. She looked down. The cabin wasn't getting taller, she was sinking in quicksand!

“Help!”, she cried. “Somebody save me!”

The sand was almost in her mouth when-

Mikaela was shaking her, for Hermione was talking what she screamed in her dream. She woke up alarmed. She exhaled, relieved that it was only a dream. She crept out of bed and put on an outfit that she wanted for that day. She and Mikaela climbed, slowly, down the steps and entered the den. They sat next to Dani and began to munch on their popcorn………

artsaboveall
12-15-2011, 05:12 PM
ABSOLUTELY AWESOME!!!!!!
And Just a dream!!! WOW!!!
I love your story! http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif

BostonCutie
12-15-2011, 05:51 PM
This story is absolutly amazing! Please write more soon!

UbiWillow
12-15-2011, 07:36 PM
I agree with BostonCutie this story is awesome!!

sassyfashion
12-15-2011, 07:46 PM
Salz: XD Thanks!

Charlotee: Thanks! Totally will! Might write more tonight http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_wink.gif

UbiWillow: Thanks! http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_smile.gif

Fireferaira
12-15-2011, 07:56 PM
AWESOME!!! http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif

sassyfashion
12-15-2011, 08:05 PM
http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_wink.gif Thanks! Working on story. Have a small writer's black though, but don't worry! This blockage will be pushed a way in a moments notice! http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_smile.gif

areyt5
12-17-2011, 04:35 PM
your story keeps getting better! i love it! hope your writers block goes away super soon!

sassyfashion
12-17-2011, 05:10 PM
Thanks! But my writer block is gone, I'm jsut waiting for something.

hermione2011
12-17-2011, 08:39 PM
AHHHHH!! WRITE MORE WRITE MORE WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


I JUST READ YOUR WHOLE STORY FROM PAGE 1-12!!!!!!


WRITE MORE WRITE MORE WRITE MORE!!

Even though I had already read up to when you had the picture of me with the broken leg like...4 months ago...

BUT NOW I'M CAUGHT UP!!

WRITE MORE WRITE MORE WRITE MORE! http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif!

sassyfashion
12-17-2011, 09:16 PM
XD Just waiting for something then I can start...... http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_wink.gif

sassyfashion
12-18-2011, 01:28 PM
Since you all are so eager to read another chapter, i'm posting one more for you. then you're gonna ahve to wait a bit again http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_wink.gif

Chapter 30

The trio tried to be good about this princess stuff, but it wasn’t easy. It probably isn’t like how regular princess have it……

Mikaela was sitting at the dining table, eating a buttered piece of toast, a few pieces of crispy bacon, and a small bowl of grits. Not that she really wanted to, it’s just “princesses” are supposed to be kept healthy and not hungry. She was dressed in a lavender satin long sleeve blouse, a pair of denim pants, a pair of black low heeled sandals, and a sapphire barrette. She loved the wardrobe, yes, but she didn’t like all the school activities, if that’s even what “princesses” are supposed to call them. Soon Hermione was downstairs and sitting in her proper place, according to Crystal anyways, and bean to eat creamy grits, sausage, and boiled eggs. She was dressed in a hot pink short sleeve blouse, a denim mini skirt, golden high heels, and a ruby necklace. Of course, she liked the wardrobe as well, but hated the events. Dani came downstairs and sat between them, starting to munch on her cereal, crispy bacon, and toast with her favorite jelly. She wore a neon blue long sleeve blouse, a pair of denim jeans, and a pair of sneakers. I’m guessing she wasn’t too much on the clothing.

“Good morning darlings!” Crystal said, still cheery as ever. “Are you having a good morning?”

They mumbled no but out loud they said, “Yes.”

“Good! Today we’re going to have custom gowns made for each of you.”

That didn’t sound too bad.

“We have a big dance so we can teach each of you some hard dance steps.”

That sounded bad.

“Tell me what you want on your dresses and I’ll have them made.” She looked at the girls, expecting them to speak up of what they wanted. The trio stayed quiet.

Finally Hermione spoke up. “Can we go to ours rooms to think about what we want?”

Crystal looked surprised but said, “Sure.”

They trio went up to Dani’s room and sprawled themselves around her room. Mikaela looked up from her spot on the floor.

“I wish we were home. I hate it here,” she said, giving a maddening stare at the window. “I wanna see Salz, Nina, UbiLorelai. I wanna see everyone. I miss them all.”

The other two nodded in agreement. These three really felt homesick………

UbiWillow
12-18-2011, 03:13 PM
YAAAY There is finally more!

sassyfashion
12-18-2011, 04:17 PM
XD And there will be even more soon! http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_wink.gif

artsaboveall
12-18-2011, 10:14 PM
YAY!!! I love this Jaja!!! http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif

sassyfashion
12-19-2011, 09:15 AM
Thanks! http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_wink.gif

sassyfashion
12-25-2011, 08:27 PM
Chapter 31

Dani was at a subway station, all alone, waiting for the midnight subway to arrive. No Hermione. No Mikaela. Just Dani. Why? I have NO idea. But that’s how it was. Dani looked sadly around her, with hope that someone would be standing there, awaiting to step on to the subway with her to travel back to Jade Island. But, of course, no one stood before the deep brown, long, track that reached the island ready to board with her. It was just her and her small suitcase. She looked, hungrily, at the taco stand. She reached into her purse (yes, I mean purse) and pulled out a dollar bill, enough to buy a delicious, warm taco. She had more money than that, of course. After all, she just escaped from “the castle of doom” as she liked to call it. She stretched her body as far as it would go and looked down the long, long tunnel which the subway would come through. She saw nothing but darkness. She walked over to the stand and bought a taco. She took it over to a small bench and put her mouth close to the food when suddenly, something caught her eye. She looked to her side and saw five men, sitting back against the wall of the sort of warm building holding the tracks. The five ate hungrily at what they could get their hands on. No, only four. The fifth looked hungry, almost starving. She looked at her own taco and stood up. She walked silently over to the man and gave him her taco.

She smiled and said, “Merry Christmas.”

He looked at her, smiling too, and said, “Bless you kind lady. Bless you.”

He took small bites, probably trying to make it last as long as possible. She heard a noise behind her and saw her transport pulling in. She knew the taco wouldn’t last him long. She took out a five ten dollar bills and handed them out to the men.

They smiled. “Thank you,” they chorused, and she knew they had made their Christmas wonderful.

Music sang into her room from her electric pink alarm clock. Her eyes snapped open, and she realized the whole subway and hungry men thing was only a dream. Just to make sure, she went into her friends’ rooms and looked inside. They were each curled up into a ball, Hermione’s tight and Mikaela’s loose. They looked restful while sleeping so Dani didn’t dare to wake them up. She just walked towards the kitchen and paused at the threshold. She saw Crystal cooking home made batter, which she assumed would be bagels. She assumed right. On the table she saw cream cheese. And crème cheese. And more crème cheese. And even more crème cheese. Each contain help a different flavor, some strawberry some raspberry, ECT. She slid into her seat before Crystal turned around with a fresh platter of bagels. She gasped in surprised and then laughed.

“You scared me hon,” she said, setting down the plate.

Hon? Dani mumbled in her head. Who says “hon.”? Oh, I guess people who lived in the country do. Whoa, whoa, whoa. Dani thought about what she had just said. Country? Could Crystal be country?

She repeated that sentence as she spread blackberry crème cheese on her bagel. Taking a bite, she questioned her remark.

Why did she have us brought here? Why does she do this at all? It’s kidnapping and kidnapping is illegal. So why did she risk it? That was one question that she pondered all day…….

hermione2011
12-25-2011, 09:35 PM
MMMM BAGELS AND CREAM CHEESE!!! MY FAVORITE BREAKFAST IN THE WORLD!!!!!!!!! http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif!!!

Write more write more write more!! http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif

sassyfashion
12-26-2011, 08:41 AM
IKR! Yummy! http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_smile.gif Writing more soon! http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_wink.gif

artsaboveall
12-26-2011, 10:32 AM
I LOVE IT!! It's awesome!!! http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif I can't wait for MORE!!! http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif

areyt5
12-27-2011, 03:14 PM
More awesomeness fromm JaJa!!!!!! WRITE MORE!!!!

sassyfashion
12-28-2011, 04:32 PM
XD Sorries I haven't been writing. I have writers block. That's why that chapter wasn't very good XD I'll write as soon as this dumb blockage is gone!! GO AWAY WRITERS BLOCK!!! XD

beautyqueen9129
12-29-2011, 10:04 AM
JaJa,
I!
Want!
More!
Now!

Plz!
Give!
Us!
More!!!

areyt5
12-29-2011, 10:26 AM
tell your writers block to go away or it wont get any COOKIES!!!!!!!!!!!!

sassyfashion
12-31-2011, 07:05 PM
XD - cough -

<span class="ev_code_PINK">Dear Writers Block,</span>
<span class="ev_code_PINK">I wish you would go away, for you are not wanted. Please try to go away by tomorrow. My friends and I are impatient for another chapter. I would like to write it and my friends wanna read it. Please go away, at the least, by tomorrow.</span>

<span class="ev_code_PINK">The person you make a pest of yourself for,</span>
<span class="ev_code_PINK">JaJa</span>

sassyfashion
12-31-2011, 07:10 PM
PHEW! I just (pant) finished (pant) another chapter (pant) of my story (pant):

Chapter 32

While the three girls were grumbling and mumbling upsettingly about their unhappiness, their friends at Jade Island weren’t keeping their feelings to themselves……

I looked at the friends who were able attend my Christmas party: Jennifer Lovely Melody, Nicole Starshine, and Kylie Bella Willow. Across the table I could see Kylie boldly eating chicken couscous that I had put on the buffet table. Well, you have to admit, she is an individual and a bold person, not afraid to speak up for her and her friends. Next to her, Nicole was chewing the meat she cut off from a leg from the turkey, also from the buffet. Next to me was Jennifer, delicately nibbling at a slice of cake. It was then I realized everyone is an individual and no one is completely alike, even twins, identical or not.

Life is a wonderful opportunity of friendship and experience. Once you are gone you can not come back again and explore its wonders and adventures, but people take advantage anyway. Most people don’t realize that life isn’t a toy and something not worth using every moment and every one of its amazing wonders. I guess story writing makes you a little bit more practical about life, and it makes you realize what life really is and what it’s really about. It doesn’t affect you enough to change your ways and who you are, of course, and it makes you wonder. Wonder about what you ask?

Anything. Maybe even why birds fly or how a caterpillar makes its cocoon and turns into a butterfly. Some of the questions that you wonder about you’ve already learned. But you just wished you knew more about life and its nature.

Of course, I hadn’t changed. I just write like a writer should. I think, I write, I post.

Back to the story.

Dinner had come and gone like a slumber party. Your friends are here one minute and they have to go home the next. Why does life have to be so complicated? But, of course, everyone is gone. I couldn’t change that. You just can’t change life.

I wandered towards my bedroom. My mind had floated away again but on a different subject: Hermione, Dani, and Mikaela.

Where could they be? I thought as I sat on the couch. I turned on the TV, attempting to watch one of my favorite shows. I had no success. My mind just kept floating away. I was worried and that was that.

I tried to read but couldn’t concentrate on reading the words. I decided to write in my diary:

Dear Dairy,
Dani, Ham, and Mik are still missing. I miss them dearly. WHY did anyone have to take them? Or anyone at all. Dumb kidnappers. Dumb thieves. Dumb bad people. Why

I didn’t finish that page that night. I fell fast asleep………

areyt5
01-01-2012, 11:43 AM
Yay! Amazing new chapter JaJa!