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Mr.Dark
11-26-2008, 09:23 PM
Alright, this is a remake of the first original episode of IAD. Also, the whole first season will be remade, and remade posted. Ever episode will be pretty long from now on, and will contain some images. The basic style of this Fan-Fic is script writing. I was going to change it to normal writing, but then I couldn't use the mug-shots. So, it remains a hybrid. It's mostly anime-ish, and can be pretty campy at times. Sometimes it doesn't even seem like it's related to Rayman at all. But it is. It's just a different time frame. It's my version of the past of that universe. I think it'll be pretty cool to show you how all of the technology gets eliminated during a certain time period in the plot.

Seasons 2-5 will also be remade, or, "improved" if I may. Meaning they'll be extended, use the newer mug shots, have no plot holes, better dialogue, images, more Major Battles, and season two will have a different theme. So, now you'll have to re-read those seasons, cause, after being improved, they will be like completely different reads, only they'll have the same general plot. (yes, no porn this time.)

Now, about the season themes. They aren't meant to be played while you're reading the episodes, or every time you read an episode. They're actually the songs I've chosen for the animated openings I've made for each season. Most of the frames have been made, but I lack the right tools to make them animated. Once I get the right soft ware, I'll post them.

Also, about the Major Battle themes, I highly recommend you listen to them, because they increase the enjoyment of the read a lot. Not to mention the lyrics do fit with the character that the theme is of.

None of the songs are made by me. So, I'll credit the artists of each song I use.

Tell me if you see any mistakes.

Anyway, here's the first remade IAD episode. (I dedicate this to Rabox, flyingrabbids, and Serza for being such great fans.)

Ravior Dark was a boy who lost everything, but gained everything, then lost everything again. A boy who became the brightest light in the world, but became the darkest anger ever to walk the Lum. A boy who adventured with a squadron of kids that had the same power he had. A boy who had defeated one of the most powerful and evil beings ever to exist. A boy who would grow up and fight a powerful hero. A boy who would become a legend known to all. A boy who's story will be told right.........NOW!

IAD season 1 theme/IAD part 1 theme (http://www.esnips.com/doc/d44c9293-bbc9-4ba2-9028-163064a0c149/Maximum-the-Hormone---Buiiki-Kaesu!!)

Episode 1
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The Beginning
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IAD part 1, begin.........

One day, Ravior Dark and his girlfriend, Iulec Mushroom, were laying at the top of Cerulean Mountain, gazing at the sky that Welfort had covering it.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior3.png : ....ah.....don't you just love staring at the beautiful clouds, Iulec?

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Iulec1.png : I sure do, honey.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior3.png : *sigh* I'm such a happy guy. I live in the only war-free city in the world, I'm healthy, I have great friends, and I have the most beautiful and nicest girlfriend.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Iulec1.png : Heh, I feel the same way, honey.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior3.png : ........hey.....Iulec?

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Iulec1.png : Yes, honey?

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior3.png : ......do you want today to be the day?

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Iulec1.png : ......I don't follow.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior3.png : You know......the day we kiss?

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Iulec2.png : Hold your horses, honey! We're only eleven years old!

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior3.png : I know that, but I'm tired of waiting!

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Iulec2.png : Don't you think it would be a little weird for two tweens such as ourselves to kiss?

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior3.png : ......I guess you're right......

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Iulec1.png : But I promise, when we're a year older, I'll kiss you.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior3.png : ......thanks, honey.

Ravior was a happy kid. He was practically the most popular Rewop in the city of Welfort. He thought he could never be happier than already was, but he was very wrong with that thought.

Iulec looked at her watch.......

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Iulec2.png : ! Oh crap.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior1.png : What's wrong?

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Iulec2.png : School starts in FOUR minuets!.........Ravior?

Iulec swiftly turned her neck to her right, and where Ravior was originally sitting, there was nothing.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Iulec2.png : What the-Huh?!

She turned her head and saw Ravior running down the hill at a high velocity.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Iulec2.png : Ravior! Wait for me!

She sprung up and ran after the boy concerned with his attendance at School.

Iulec: HEY! WAIT, HONEY! YOU KNOW I'M NOT A FAST RUNNER!!

Ravior turned his head, and looked back at Iulec while running, he had to respond. I mean, he had to!

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior3.png : Yeah, I know, but I cant be late again!

Iulec proceeded to smile after she heard him yell that. It was nice to know that he cared about his grades, but, uh oh!

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Iulec2.png : Ravior! Watch out!!_

Iulec yelled while running.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior3.png : Watch out for what-

BONG!!

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior3.png : ....ouch

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Iulec2.png : Watch out for that tree.....

The poor boy wasn't looking where he was going, so he ran into a big tree.

Iulec ran over to him to see if he was hurt.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Iulec2.png : Hey.....you ok?

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior3.png : Eh, I'll be fine. I'm just hoping it doesn't leave a mark.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Iulec2.png : Alright then, let's continue on without running. We're pretty close to school anyways.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior3.png : Sure.

The two Rewop children walked together to School while holding hands. How cute.

Four minutes later.........

So, as usual, Ravior went over to sit with his best friend, Nurf.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior3.png : Hey buddy!

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Nurf1.png : Oh, hey, other buddy! So, did you ask Iulec?

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior1.png : About what?

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Nurf6.png : About wha- the kiss, dummy!

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior15.png : Oh yeah! Sure, I asked her.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Nurf1.png : ......and......

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior6.png : ...and.....what?

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Nurf5.png : .......*sigh* what did she say?!

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior4.png : Oh!.....uh.......she said no.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Nurf9.png : Dang! She's such a stubborn girl.........but a beautiful one too.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior7.png : Hey! Don't start picturing her like that!

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Nurf4.png : pff, what are you talking about?

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior5.png : Occasionally, you have a sick mind, and it's usually when Iulec comes to thought.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Nurf7.png : Heh, relax, buddy boy_

Nurf said while putting his arm around Ravior_

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Nurf4.png : I know she's your girl. I would never even THINK of trying to woo her with my awesome skillz with the girlz. Trust me.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior4.png : Oh, sure. Fine.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Nurf7.png : .......though, I have to admit, she's one hot motha-

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior12.png : grrrr

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Nurf1.png : Just kidding, I don't curse.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior.png : (Yeesh)

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Nurf2.png : .....hey, remember that fortune teller we went to the other day? The one that told us that we'll battle our best friend, and one of us would die? You don't think she was talking about me and you, right?

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior18.png : You're still thinking about that? How can you even believe any of that fortune telling stuff? It's all a scam.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Nurf8.png : I don't know about that, she seemed liked the real deal, and she doesn't even demand any money. I mean, you cant tell me that you, for real, aren't concerned about it.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior17.png : Eh.....I don't know.......

After Nurf mentioned it, Ravior was actually concerned about the fortune they both received from that Fortune Teller. It never left his mind through out the rest of that school day.

After School was over, and they were outside the building......

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Nurf6.png : So, you want to come over to my house and shoot some hoops?

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior3.png : Nah. I have some other plans.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Nurf6.png : With who? Your girlfriend?

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior3.png : Nope, not today.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Nurf1.png : Oh really? Where you goin?

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior1.png : Uh, just.....somewhere.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Nurf2.png : You know, you've been acting strange ever since Home Room ended. Is something bothering you?

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior3.png : Nope. Nothings wrong.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Nurf1.png : Alrighty then, see ya tomorrow.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior3.png : Yup, see ya.

He waited for Nurf to be far gone, so that he wouldn't see where he was going to head off to. When the coast was clear, Ravior ran as fast as he could over to the Fortune Teller's hut. He was so eager to figure out more about the fortune he and Nurf were given a while back.

When he finally reached the hut, he immediately stopped at the entrance of the hut. A sudden burst of reluctance busted into his heart. He stood there, looking at the opening. He wanted to go in, but at the same time, he wanted to turn around, and walk away. He couldn't decide.

Sweat started to trickle down his head. He thought of how, if he went in there to figure more about the fortune, that his curiosity would be satisfied. But, there was a chance that he would figure out something that would be too much for him to handle. His heart was pumping faster, and faster by the point second, until.....

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Mystery.png : Hey, kid, are you going to come in or not?

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior1.png : .....*gulp*

Well, it was a little easier for him to make a decision, now that he was being asked in some sort of way to go into the hut. He slowly walked into the hut, pushing the large piece of thick clothe out of the way. He walked over to the stool, and sat down.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Mystery.png : Now......Ravior......what may I do for you?

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior1.png : ....well....uh.....

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Mystery.png : Yes? Go on?

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior1.png : ...could you.....tell me a little bit more about that fortune you gave-

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Mystery.png : -to you and your friend Nurf?

Ravior raised his eye brows in surprise. But, then he remembered: She was a real fortune teller.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior1.png : Uh, yes.

She sat in her chair, and let out a couple of exhales. The strange thing about this Fortune Teller was that she had sympathy for her clients, and now, she was going to have to disappoint one of em. She took a deep breath, and kindly said:

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Mystery.png : I cant.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior1.png : What do you mean you "cant"?

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Mystery.png : I don't know anything else about it. My visions are very vague, and leave me pretty quickly.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior1.png : ......oh......

A sad mood suddenly fell over him, but then:

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Mystery.png : ....but, I think.........uh...

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior1.png : ......are you ok?

She began to cough, and really hard too.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Mystery.png : No-no, I'm alright, probably something stuck in my *gulp* throat.

But it wasn't. Her coughing got worse as the seconds went by, and then finally:

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Mystery.png : ......AAAAAAAH!!

She started to scream out of no where. This, like any other eleven year-old kid, scared the crap out of him. Ravior fell out of his chair, and backed up against the wall of the hut as fast as he could, and he stared at the Fortune Teller, and as the seconds went by, weirder and weirder things happened. First was the high pitched screaming, her eyes began to shoot lights, then she began to float, along with spinning lightning. What was happening to her? Well, as it turns out, she was having a vision of Ravior.

Images began to appear to the Fortune Teller's mind in a mixed, but chronologically correct manner.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Mystery.png : (.............what is this?!.......Ferago..........crystals......red
spikes......Etilop......ship......war......family. ......torture.......grave stones.......robe.......hat......spheres.......dar kness........wand........fairy.........limbless... ....rule.......candy.......black limbless........retreat......blue peak............death.........what is this all about?! Could this dark man I see be.......Ravior?.......it...must be........)

When the vision had ended, she fell to the ground from mid-air. But, she landed on her back.......that's not good. Ravior heard a snap after she fell. As scared as he was of her, based on the weird things that were occurring just a moment ago, he ran over to her, fearing for her life.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Mystery.png : Hey, are you OK?

The Fortune Teller's eyes opened, and she looked at Ravior. The pupils in her grey eyes began to grow large, and her skin was beginning to look very pale.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Mystery.png : .....Ravior.......listen to me......to these last words.......

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior1.png : ....last words?

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Mystery.png : ......Ravior......you must not let anger consume you.........when the time comes......choose to forgive and forget......make the smart decision......when it happens.......

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior1.png : When what happens? What are you talking about?!

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Mystery.png : ...............

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior1.png : ......Fortune Teller?......

.........she stopped breathing.......the Fortune Teller was dead. Those were her last breaths of air.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior10.png : .......don't......die......Fortune Teller........*sniff*.......FORTUNE TELLER!!!!!!!!!

Ravior broke into tears. He fell to his face, and wet the floor. This was the first time he saw death in real life. (and it wouldn't be his last.) He didn't feel like standing, but he jumped up anyway, and ran out of the tent, and yelled for help.

Eventually, someone who heard him called for an ambulance. In a matter of seconds, the loud "wee-ooo" sound was heard around the block. They came and wrapped the Fortune Teller up whilst taking her away on a bed.

Ravior watched as they put her in the ambulance. He felt very guilty about the whole thing. It was because he went to get his fortune told that she died, but what he did not know was that the warning that she gave to him was very important. Hopefully, Ravior will listen to her when the time comes. Hopefully........he will forgive and forget.

A few days later, everybody at school knew how it happened, and all of Ravior's classmates tried to convince him it wasn't his fault, but he ignored them, and was as quiet as ever. Also, strangely enough, Nurf and Iulec were both missing. They never showed up for school, their houses were empty of people, including their parents. Ravior was pretty bored without those two around, which wasn't a great contribution to his already gloomy mood.

When he got home.......

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior1.png : Hey, mom.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/RM1.png : Hey! How was your day at school?!

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior1.png : It was pretty boring without Iulec and Nurf.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/RM1.png : Well, I have a surprise for you!

She held out a large, brown box in her arms.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior1.png : What is this?

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/RM6.png : Read the box.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior1.png : ......From: Iulec Mushroom......To: Ravior Dark

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/RM1.png : It's a present, from Iulec! Teehee

Ravior opened the box, one piece of tape at a time. When he tore the last piece of tape off, he unfolded all of the giant pegs of cardboard, and there he saw it:

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior1.png : ......a blue robe and hat?

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/RM5.png : Hmm......that's strange. I wonder why she would give you those. They look a little purple.

Ravior searched around the hat and long robe, looking for a trade mark or tag of some sort, or where it was made, but he came up dry.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior1.png : What company made these?

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/RM4.png : Maybe Iulec did.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior1.png : I doubt it. She was never good at sewing, and this fabric feels very different.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/RM1.png : Huh.......well, who knows. Did Iulec leave a letter of any kind?

He searched around the box to see if she taped anything to the inside of it, but nothing.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior1.png : Nope.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/RM2.png : I guess you'll have to find out when she comes back from wherever she is.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior1.png : I guess so. Hopefully it will be soon. I miss her.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/RM3.png : Aw.....she's so lucky to have someone like you for a boy friend. Well, I'll be in the kitchen, making dinner. We're having Tonic Meat tonight.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior1.png : Sounds good.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/RM1.png : Hey, while I'm making dinner, why don't you go up to your room and try on your new clothes?

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior3.png : Good idea!

He put the clothes back into the box and ran upstairs to his room.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior3.png : (Alright, lets see what I look like with these spiffy clothes on.)

Ravior thought as he took the clothes out of the box again.

He put on the long, smooth, bluish-purple robe. It went from the bottom up in a triangular shape, and made a small hole for your head to fit through, but it kept your mouth and nose hidden. There weren't any holes for arms, but it's fabric contained millions of fibers that trap heat, making it one of the most ideal things to wear in really cold weather.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior3.png : (Wow! This is comfortable!)

Now, it was time to put on the hat. It was kind of like a cow-boy hat, and it was made of the same materials as the robe, so it kept your ears warm. There also were two little strings on the hat. One on the right, and one on the left. Wonder what those are for. Maybe you could tie something at the end of them? Anyway, the were at the ends of the long hat, so they could never get into your face.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior3.png : (I gotta see what I look like in these!)

He thought as he walked over to the mirror. Once he looked into it_

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior3.png : (Sweet! I look mysterious and cool in this thing!)

Ravior was certainly pleased with his new clothes. He could put clown make-up on his face, put the robe and hat on, and still look cool.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior3.png : (You're the best Iulec!)

He went back to his room and took off the robe and hat cause it was starting to get really hot under them, and he was going to go outside. Wearing clothes like that in the summer wouldn't be the best idea in the world.

He went back outside to go to the park. Ravior didn't have anyone to go with, so he wasn't planning on having much fun, but he needed some fresh air to clear his mind. He was still a little depressed, and a nice, peaceful walk in the park was just what he needed.

As he was walking through the park, he was thinking about the things the late fortune teller told him.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior6.png : *sigh* (forgive and forget......when it happens......what was she talking about? What's going to happen?! Is someone going to do something terrible to me, and I'll have to forgive that someone? And what happens if I don't forgive this person?! Is it even a person? What if it's a bunch of people?! What will they or him...or her, do to me?! If only she didn't fall on her back, maybe I would know more about this, and she wouldn't of died! UGH!)

Out of his frustration, he kicked a rock that was in front of him really hard.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior4.png : .....*sigh*

He continued to walk in a straight path.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior1.png : .......(hey.......what's that noise, and that rumbling?!)......what are those things.........?

Suddenly, out of nowhere:

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/ep1image2.png

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior13.png : What the heck?! Ah!

Ravior jumped out of the way of a laser that was aimed at him randomly. He looked back up into the sky, gasping for air. His mouth was wide open. That was the first time he had ever seen laser fire in the flesh. He started to panic, as a horde of more laser fire began to rain down around the park. So, like any other sane person, he ran out of the park as fast as he could, while avoiding the oncoming laser fire.

But, as he was leaving the park, two mysterious beings stopped him.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/ep1image3.png

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Phoid1.png : Well, what do we have here?

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Lera1.png : It's a Rewop boy, Phoid.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior7.png : Who are you guys?!

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Phoid5.png : Don't raise your tone of voice at me, you scum! No matter. I'm Phoid.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Lera1.png : And I'm Lera.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior7.png : What?!

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Lera2.png : Under the command of lord Xarior, his army is taking over this city. It's the only major one left that he doesn't rule over. Plus, it's the last city that has an army. So, we're wiping you all out.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Phoid3.png : Your once peaceful city will now be even MORE peaceful!

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior6.png : Xarior's army? Are you part of his army?

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Phoid1.png : Of course we are!

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior7.png : Then I cant allow you to do this!!

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Phoid3.png : Ha! What are YOU going to do? You're nothing but a weak little kid! Now die quietly!!

Phoid whipped out a gun, and prepared to fire it at Ravior.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior13.png : !

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Lera2.png : Wait a minuet, Phoid.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Phoid2.png : Yeah, what is it, Lera?

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Lera2.png : I think we have more important things to do rather than killing this kid.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior14.png : *sigh* phew.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Lera1.png : If he or any of the other Rewops survives this attack, they'll die anyways after the X laser is fired.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior9-1.png : HUH?!

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Lera1.png : So let him go, please.

Phoid frowned, and quickly put his gun away.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Phoid2.png : Alright, Lera, you're right, actually, having him wait for his doom would be a lot more amusing! Too bad I wont be around here to see him squeal. Well, let's go, Lera.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Lera6.png : Yes, Phoid.

They both quickly flew back into the sky, and toward the city.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior13.png : Oh no! I-I gotta get back to my house!!

Ravior ran back to his house as fast as he could. As he got closer to the city, he saw laser fire falling everywhere. Everyone was in panic, scrambling all over the place. Some Rewops got hit by the lasers, and collapsed in death. The buildings of most of the streets began to explode from the onslaught. It was all because of the machines in the sky.

Ravior ran over to his house, but as he was about to open the door, his house was blasted, throwing him off of the porch, and landing him on his back.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior17.png : .....mom..........

His mother ran out side of the enflamed house over to her son.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/RM13.png : Ravior! Are you alright?!

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior18.png : ...I think so......hey, why are you bleeding?

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/RM13.png : Just a little injury, but there's no time for talk, we need to get over to the bomb shelter! Here, put on your robe and hat to stay warm. Now get up!

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior18.png : ....ok....

They both ran over to the shelter that was behind their house. When they got there, she noticed she forgot the key in. So, she tore the lock off, (she was pretty strong ^_^) and they ran down the stairs, whilst closing the door. It was a small shelter, so only three people could fit in there.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior7.png : Mom! These two guys in armor try to kill me! And one of them said that after this attack is over, their going to release this laser that's going to blow up everything!

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/RM13.png : Oh dear.........

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior18.png : I'm scared mom!

Ravior's eyes began to water.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/RM13.png : Now, don't cry, my son.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior10.png : *sniff*

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/RM10.png : ...............Amazing Grace, how sweet the sound, That saved a wretch like me....I once was lost but now am found, Was blind, but now, I see. T'was Grace that taught...my heart to fear. And Grace, my fears relieved. How precious did that Grace appear...the hour I first believed. Through many dangers, toils and snares...we have already come. T'was Grace that brought us safe thus far...and Grace will lead us home. The Lord has promised good to me...His word my hope secures. My shield and portion be...as long as life endures. When we've been here ten thousand years...bright shining as the sun. We've no less days to sing God's praise...then when we've first begun........Amazing Grace, how sweet the sound, That saved a wretch like me....I once was lost but now am found, Was blind, but now............I see.......

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior18.png : .....mom......

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/RM10.png : Remember that song, Ravior......it has always......pushed me forward......whenever.......I.....was....down..... .......

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior18.png : ...mom?

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/RM10.png : ............

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior18.png : .....what's wrong with you?

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/RM10.png : .....................

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior19.png : .......why are you not blinking?

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/RM10.png : ..................

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior12.png : .......no..............mom....don't...be dead...don't leave like dad did......

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/RM10.png : .........

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior.png : .......no.....

Ravior's heart filled with anguish......his vision became blurry as his eyes filled with water.....he hugged his mother's corpse tightly as he continued to cry harshly.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior10.png : .....why you too?......

He stared at his mom for a few more seconds, until, he decided that he was going to die too if he stayed in that shelter. The laser would defiantly blow up the underground shelter for sure. So he got up, and weakly walked up the stairs, and opened the door. He saw it......in ruin. Every building was reduced to rubble. It was almost like a flat plain with a few hills. There were no people, either. Only dead bodies.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior12.png : ........this isn't right......

Then, he heard it. The sound of a saucer. It was here. The X laser.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior13.png : Oh no.......

A hole in the center of the X started to open slowly. Then, a voice was heard.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Mystery.png : WARNING, WARNING, UNDER ORDERS OF LORD XARIOR, EVERYTHING ON THIS PLAIN SHALL BE ANNHILATED IN 10, 9-

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior13.png : Oh no!

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Mystery.png : 6, 5-

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior13.png : *pant* *pant* *pant*

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Mystery.png : 3, 2, 1-

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior9-1.png : (oh GOD!!!)

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Mystery.png : .........0

This was it......Ravior was finished......or was he?

All of a sudden, Ravior's body began to glow. His entire shape began to change under the glaring silhouette .........and SWOOSH!

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/Ep1image.png

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/RaviorSF3.png : (......)

Ravior had become something powerful at the very last second. His conscious mind was barely present, and his body had unlocked itself form pure desperation. It saved his life..........

A few moments later......

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior1.png : .......ugh.....huh?

He lifted himself up, and looked around, until his vision was fixed upon a giant mushroom cloud of smoke in the far distance. He had escaped the blast, all in one piece.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior1.png : .........Welfort.........

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ferago2.png : Hey!

A voice from behind him called out to him. It was the sound of someone old.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior1.png : Huh?

He turned his head, and saw a tall man.

To be continued.........

Mr.Dark
11-26-2008, 09:23 PM
Alright, this is a remake of the first original episode of IAD. Also, the whole first season will be remade, and remade posted. Ever episode will be pretty long from now on, and will contain some images. The basic style of this Fan-Fic is script writing. I was going to change it to normal writing, but then I couldn't use the mug-shots. So, it remains a hybrid. It's mostly anime-ish, and can be pretty campy at times. Sometimes it doesn't even seem like it's related to Rayman at all. But it is. It's just a different time frame. It's my version of the past of that universe. I think it'll be pretty cool to show you how all of the technology gets eliminated during a certain time period in the plot.

Seasons 2-5 will also be remade, or, "improved" if I may. Meaning they'll be extended, use the newer mug shots, have no plot holes, better dialogue, images, more Major Battles, and season two will have a different theme. So, now you'll have to re-read those seasons, cause, after being improved, they will be like completely different reads, only they'll have the same general plot. (yes, no porn this time.)

Now, about the season themes. They aren't meant to be played while you're reading the episodes, or every time you read an episode. They're actually the songs I've chosen for the animated openings I've made for each season. Most of the frames have been made, but I lack the right tools to make them animated. Once I get the right soft ware, I'll post them.

Also, about the Major Battle themes, I highly recommend you listen to them, because they increase the enjoyment of the read a lot. Not to mention the lyrics do fit with the character that the theme is of.

None of the songs are made by me. So, I'll credit the artists of each song I use.

Tell me if you see any mistakes.

Anyway, here's the first remade IAD episode. (I dedicate this to Rabox, flyingrabbids, and Serza for being such great fans.)

Ravior Dark was a boy who lost everything, but gained everything, then lost everything again. A boy who became the brightest light in the world, but became the darkest anger ever to walk the Lum. A boy who adventured with a squadron of kids that had the same power he had. A boy who had defeated one of the most powerful and evil beings ever to exist. A boy who would grow up and fight a powerful hero. A boy who would become a legend known to all. A boy who's story will be told right.........NOW!

IAD season 1 theme/IAD part 1 theme (http://www.esnips.com/doc/d44c9293-bbc9-4ba2-9028-163064a0c149/Maximum-the-Hormone---Buiiki-Kaesu!!)

Episode 1
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The Beginning
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IAD part 1, begin.........

One day, Ravior Dark and his girlfriend, Iulec Mushroom, were laying at the top of Cerulean Mountain, gazing at the sky that Welfort had covering it.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior3.png : ....ah.....don't you just love staring at the beautiful clouds, Iulec?

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Iulec1.png : I sure do, honey.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior3.png : *sigh* I'm such a happy guy. I live in the only war-free city in the world, I'm healthy, I have great friends, and I have the most beautiful and nicest girlfriend.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Iulec1.png : Heh, I feel the same way, honey.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior3.png : ........hey.....Iulec?

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Iulec1.png : Yes, honey?

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior3.png : ......do you want today to be the day?

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Iulec1.png : ......I don't follow.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior3.png : You know......the day we kiss?

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Iulec2.png : Hold your horses, honey! We're only eleven years old!

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior3.png : I know that, but I'm tired of waiting!

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Iulec2.png : Don't you think it would be a little weird for two tweens such as ourselves to kiss?

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior3.png : ......I guess you're right......

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Iulec1.png : But I promise, when we're a year older, I'll kiss you.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior3.png : ......thanks, honey.

Ravior was a happy kid. He was practically the most popular Rewop in the city of Welfort. He thought he could never be happier than already was, but he was very wrong with that thought.

Iulec looked at her watch.......

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Iulec2.png : ! Oh crap.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior1.png : What's wrong?

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Iulec2.png : School starts in FOUR minuets!.........Ravior?

Iulec swiftly turned her neck to her right, and where Ravior was originally sitting, there was nothing.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Iulec2.png : What the-Huh?!

She turned her head and saw Ravior running down the hill at a high velocity.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Iulec2.png : Ravior! Wait for me!

She sprung up and ran after the boy concerned with his attendance at School.

Iulec: HEY! WAIT, HONEY! YOU KNOW I'M NOT A FAST RUNNER!!

Ravior turned his head, and looked back at Iulec while running, he had to respond. I mean, he had to!

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior3.png : Yeah, I know, but I cant be late again!

Iulec proceeded to smile after she heard him yell that. It was nice to know that he cared about his grades, but, uh oh!

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Iulec2.png : Ravior! Watch out!!_

Iulec yelled while running.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior3.png : Watch out for what-

BONG!!

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior3.png : ....ouch

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Iulec2.png : Watch out for that tree.....

The poor boy wasn't looking where he was going, so he ran into a big tree.

Iulec ran over to him to see if he was hurt.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Iulec2.png : Hey.....you ok?

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior3.png : Eh, I'll be fine. I'm just hoping it doesn't leave a mark.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Iulec2.png : Alright then, let's continue on without running. We're pretty close to school anyways.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior3.png : Sure.

The two Rewop children walked together to School while holding hands. How cute.

Four minutes later.........

So, as usual, Ravior went over to sit with his best friend, Nurf.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior3.png : Hey buddy!

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Nurf1.png : Oh, hey, other buddy! So, did you ask Iulec?

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior1.png : About what?

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Nurf6.png : About wha- the kiss, dummy!

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior15.png : Oh yeah! Sure, I asked her.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Nurf1.png : ......and......

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior6.png : ...and.....what?

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Nurf5.png : .......*sigh* what did she say?!

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior4.png : Oh!.....uh.......she said no.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Nurf9.png : Dang! She's such a stubborn girl.........but a beautiful one too.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior7.png : Hey! Don't start picturing her like that!

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Nurf4.png : pff, what are you talking about?

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior5.png : Occasionally, you have a sick mind, and it's usually when Iulec comes to thought.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Nurf7.png : Heh, relax, buddy boy_

Nurf said while putting his arm around Ravior_

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Nurf4.png : I know she's your girl. I would never even THINK of trying to woo her with my awesome skillz with the girlz. Trust me.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior4.png : Oh, sure. Fine.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Nurf7.png : .......though, I have to admit, she's one hot motha-

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior12.png : grrrr

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Nurf1.png : Just kidding, I don't curse.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior.png : (Yeesh)

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Nurf2.png : .....hey, remember that fortune teller we went to the other day? The one that told us that we'll battle our best friend, and one of us would die? You don't think she was talking about me and you, right?

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior18.png : You're still thinking about that? How can you even believe any of that fortune telling stuff? It's all a scam.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Nurf8.png : I don't know about that, she seemed liked the real deal, and she doesn't even demand any money. I mean, you cant tell me that you, for real, aren't concerned about it.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior17.png : Eh.....I don't know.......

After Nurf mentioned it, Ravior was actually concerned about the fortune they both received from that Fortune Teller. It never left his mind through out the rest of that school day.

After School was over, and they were outside the building......

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Nurf6.png : So, you want to come over to my house and shoot some hoops?

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior3.png : Nah. I have some other plans.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Nurf6.png : With who? Your girlfriend?

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior3.png : Nope, not today.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Nurf1.png : Oh really? Where you goin?

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior1.png : Uh, just.....somewhere.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Nurf2.png : You know, you've been acting strange ever since Home Room ended. Is something bothering you?

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior3.png : Nope. Nothings wrong.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Nurf1.png : Alrighty then, see ya tomorrow.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior3.png : Yup, see ya.

He waited for Nurf to be far gone, so that he wouldn't see where he was going to head off to. When the coast was clear, Ravior ran as fast as he could over to the Fortune Teller's hut. He was so eager to figure out more about the fortune he and Nurf were given a while back.

When he finally reached the hut, he immediately stopped at the entrance of the hut. A sudden burst of reluctance busted into his heart. He stood there, looking at the opening. He wanted to go in, but at the same time, he wanted to turn around, and walk away. He couldn't decide.

Sweat started to trickle down his head. He thought of how, if he went in there to figure more about the fortune, that his curiosity would be satisfied. But, there was a chance that he would figure out something that would be too much for him to handle. His heart was pumping faster, and faster by the point second, until.....

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Mystery.png : Hey, kid, are you going to come in or not?

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior1.png : .....*gulp*

Well, it was a little easier for him to make a decision, now that he was being asked in some sort of way to go into the hut. He slowly walked into the hut, pushing the large piece of thick clothe out of the way. He walked over to the stool, and sat down.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Mystery.png : Now......Ravior......what may I do for you?

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior1.png : ....well....uh.....

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Mystery.png : Yes? Go on?

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior1.png : ...could you.....tell me a little bit more about that fortune you gave-

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Mystery.png : -to you and your friend Nurf?

Ravior raised his eye brows in surprise. But, then he remembered: She was a real fortune teller.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior1.png : Uh, yes.

She sat in her chair, and let out a couple of exhales. The strange thing about this Fortune Teller was that she had sympathy for her clients, and now, she was going to have to disappoint one of em. She took a deep breath, and kindly said:

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Mystery.png : I cant.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior1.png : What do you mean you "cant"?

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Mystery.png : I don't know anything else about it. My visions are very vague, and leave me pretty quickly.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior1.png : ......oh......

A sad mood suddenly fell over him, but then:

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Mystery.png : ....but, I think.........uh...

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior1.png : ......are you ok?

She began to cough, and really hard too.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Mystery.png : No-no, I'm alright, probably something stuck in my *gulp* throat.

But it wasn't. Her coughing got worse as the seconds went by, and then finally:

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Mystery.png : ......AAAAAAAH!!

She started to scream out of no where. This, like any other eleven year-old kid, scared the crap out of him. Ravior fell out of his chair, and backed up against the wall of the hut as fast as he could, and he stared at the Fortune Teller, and as the seconds went by, weirder and weirder things happened. First was the high pitched screaming, her eyes began to shoot lights, then she began to float, along with spinning lightning. What was happening to her? Well, as it turns out, she was having a vision of Ravior.

Images began to appear to the Fortune Teller's mind in a mixed, but chronologically correct manner.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Mystery.png : (.............what is this?!.......Ferago..........crystals......red
spikes......Etilop......ship......war......family. ......torture.......grave stones.......robe.......hat......spheres.......dar kness........wand........fairy.........limbless... ....rule.......candy.......black limbless........retreat......blue peak............death.........what is this all about?! Could this dark man I see be.......Ravior?.......it...must be........)

When the vision had ended, she fell to the ground from mid-air. But, she landed on her back.......that's not good. Ravior heard a snap after she fell. As scared as he was of her, based on the weird things that were occurring just a moment ago, he ran over to her, fearing for her life.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Mystery.png : Hey, are you OK?

The Fortune Teller's eyes opened, and she looked at Ravior. The pupils in her grey eyes began to grow large, and her skin was beginning to look very pale.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Mystery.png : .....Ravior.......listen to me......to these last words.......

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior1.png : ....last words?

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Mystery.png : ......Ravior......you must not let anger consume you.........when the time comes......choose to forgive and forget......make the smart decision......when it happens.......

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior1.png : When what happens? What are you talking about?!

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Mystery.png : ...............

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior1.png : ......Fortune Teller?......

.........she stopped breathing.......the Fortune Teller was dead. Those were her last breaths of air.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior10.png : .......don't......die......Fortune Teller........*sniff*.......FORTUNE TELLER!!!!!!!!!

Ravior broke into tears. He fell to his face, and wet the floor. This was the first time he saw death in real life. (and it wouldn't be his last.) He didn't feel like standing, but he jumped up anyway, and ran out of the tent, and yelled for help.

Eventually, someone who heard him called for an ambulance. In a matter of seconds, the loud "wee-ooo" sound was heard around the block. They came and wrapped the Fortune Teller up whilst taking her away on a bed.

Ravior watched as they put her in the ambulance. He felt very guilty about the whole thing. It was because he went to get his fortune told that she died, but what he did not know was that the warning that she gave to him was very important. Hopefully, Ravior will listen to her when the time comes. Hopefully........he will forgive and forget.

A few days later, everybody at school knew how it happened, and all of Ravior's classmates tried to convince him it wasn't his fault, but he ignored them, and was as quiet as ever. Also, strangely enough, Nurf and Iulec were both missing. They never showed up for school, their houses were empty of people, including their parents. Ravior was pretty bored without those two around, which wasn't a great contribution to his already gloomy mood.

When he got home.......

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior1.png : Hey, mom.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/RM1.png : Hey! How was your day at school?!

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior1.png : It was pretty boring without Iulec and Nurf.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/RM1.png : Well, I have a surprise for you!

She held out a large, brown box in her arms.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior1.png : What is this?

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/RM6.png : Read the box.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior1.png : ......From: Iulec Mushroom......To: Ravior Dark

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/RM1.png : It's a present, from Iulec! Teehee

Ravior opened the box, one piece of tape at a time. When he tore the last piece of tape off, he unfolded all of the giant pegs of cardboard, and there he saw it:

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior1.png : ......a blue robe and hat?

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/RM5.png : Hmm......that's strange. I wonder why she would give you those. They look a little purple.

Ravior searched around the hat and long robe, looking for a trade mark or tag of some sort, or where it was made, but he came up dry.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior1.png : What company made these?

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/RM4.png : Maybe Iulec did.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior1.png : I doubt it. She was never good at sewing, and this fabric feels very different.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/RM1.png : Huh.......well, who knows. Did Iulec leave a letter of any kind?

He searched around the box to see if she taped anything to the inside of it, but nothing.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior1.png : Nope.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/RM2.png : I guess you'll have to find out when she comes back from wherever she is.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior1.png : I guess so. Hopefully it will be soon. I miss her.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/RM3.png : Aw.....she's so lucky to have someone like you for a boy friend. Well, I'll be in the kitchen, making dinner. We're having Tonic Meat tonight.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior1.png : Sounds good.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/RM1.png : Hey, while I'm making dinner, why don't you go up to your room and try on your new clothes?

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior3.png : Good idea!

He put the clothes back into the box and ran upstairs to his room.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior3.png : (Alright, lets see what I look like with these spiffy clothes on.)

Ravior thought as he took the clothes out of the box again.

He put on the long, smooth, bluish-purple robe. It went from the bottom up in a triangular shape, and made a small hole for your head to fit through, but it kept your mouth and nose hidden. There weren't any holes for arms, but it's fabric contained millions of fibers that trap heat, making it one of the most ideal things to wear in really cold weather.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior3.png : (Wow! This is comfortable!)

Now, it was time to put on the hat. It was kind of like a cow-boy hat, and it was made of the same materials as the robe, so it kept your ears warm. There also were two little strings on the hat. One on the right, and one on the left. Wonder what those are for. Maybe you could tie something at the end of them? Anyway, the were at the ends of the long hat, so they could never get into your face.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior3.png : (I gotta see what I look like in these!)

He thought as he walked over to the mirror. Once he looked into it_

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior3.png : (Sweet! I look mysterious and cool in this thing!)

Ravior was certainly pleased with his new clothes. He could put clown make-up on his face, put the robe and hat on, and still look cool.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior3.png : (You're the best Iulec!)

He went back to his room and took off the robe and hat cause it was starting to get really hot under them, and he was going to go outside. Wearing clothes like that in the summer wouldn't be the best idea in the world.

He went back outside to go to the park. Ravior didn't have anyone to go with, so he wasn't planning on having much fun, but he needed some fresh air to clear his mind. He was still a little depressed, and a nice, peaceful walk in the park was just what he needed.

As he was walking through the park, he was thinking about the things the late fortune teller told him.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior6.png : *sigh* (forgive and forget......when it happens......what was she talking about? What's going to happen?! Is someone going to do something terrible to me, and I'll have to forgive that someone? And what happens if I don't forgive this person?! Is it even a person? What if it's a bunch of people?! What will they or him...or her, do to me?! If only she didn't fall on her back, maybe I would know more about this, and she wouldn't of died! UGH!)

Out of his frustration, he kicked a rock that was in front of him really hard.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior4.png : .....*sigh*

He continued to walk in a straight path.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior1.png : .......(hey.......what's that noise, and that rumbling?!)......what are those things.........?

Suddenly, out of nowhere:

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/ep1image2.png

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior13.png : What the heck?! Ah!

Ravior jumped out of the way of a laser that was aimed at him randomly. He looked back up into the sky, gasping for air. His mouth was wide open. That was the first time he had ever seen laser fire in the flesh. He started to panic, as a horde of more laser fire began to rain down around the park. So, like any other sane person, he ran out of the park as fast as he could, while avoiding the oncoming laser fire.

But, as he was leaving the park, two mysterious beings stopped him.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/ep1image3.png

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Phoid1.png : Well, what do we have here?

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Lera1.png : It's a Rewop boy, Phoid.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior7.png : Who are you guys?!

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Phoid5.png : Don't raise your tone of voice at me, you scum! No matter. I'm Phoid.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Lera1.png : And I'm Lera.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior7.png : What?!

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Lera2.png : Under the command of lord Xarior, his army is taking over this city. It's the only major one left that he doesn't rule over. Plus, it's the last city that has an army. So, we're wiping you all out.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Phoid3.png : Your once peaceful city will now be even MORE peaceful!

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior6.png : Xarior's army? Are you part of his army?

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Phoid1.png : Of course we are!

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior7.png : Then I cant allow you to do this!!

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Phoid3.png : Ha! What are YOU going to do? You're nothing but a weak little kid! Now die quietly!!

Phoid whipped out a gun, and prepared to fire it at Ravior.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior13.png : !

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Lera2.png : Wait a minuet, Phoid.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Phoid2.png : Yeah, what is it, Lera?

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Lera2.png : I think we have more important things to do rather than killing this kid.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior14.png : *sigh* phew.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Lera1.png : If he or any of the other Rewops survives this attack, they'll die anyways after the X laser is fired.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior9-1.png : HUH?!

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Lera1.png : So let him go, please.

Phoid frowned, and quickly put his gun away.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Phoid2.png : Alright, Lera, you're right, actually, having him wait for his doom would be a lot more amusing! Too bad I wont be around here to see him squeal. Well, let's go, Lera.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Lera6.png : Yes, Phoid.

They both quickly flew back into the sky, and toward the city.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior13.png : Oh no! I-I gotta get back to my house!!

Ravior ran back to his house as fast as he could. As he got closer to the city, he saw laser fire falling everywhere. Everyone was in panic, scrambling all over the place. Some Rewops got hit by the lasers, and collapsed in death. The buildings of most of the streets began to explode from the onslaught. It was all because of the machines in the sky.

Ravior ran over to his house, but as he was about to open the door, his house was blasted, throwing him off of the porch, and landing him on his back.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior17.png : .....mom..........

His mother ran out side of the enflamed house over to her son.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/RM13.png : Ravior! Are you alright?!

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior18.png : ...I think so......hey, why are you bleeding?

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/RM13.png : Just a little injury, but there's no time for talk, we need to get over to the bomb shelter! Here, put on your robe and hat to stay warm. Now get up!

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior18.png : ....ok....

They both ran over to the shelter that was behind their house. When they got there, she noticed she forgot the key in. So, she tore the lock off, (she was pretty strong ^_^) and they ran down the stairs, whilst closing the door. It was a small shelter, so only three people could fit in there.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior7.png : Mom! These two guys in armor try to kill me! And one of them said that after this attack is over, their going to release this laser that's going to blow up everything!

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/RM13.png : Oh dear.........

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior18.png : I'm scared mom!

Ravior's eyes began to water.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/RM13.png : Now, don't cry, my son.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior10.png : *sniff*

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/RM10.png : ...............Amazing Grace, how sweet the sound, That saved a wretch like me....I once was lost but now am found, Was blind, but now, I see. T'was Grace that taught...my heart to fear. And Grace, my fears relieved. How precious did that Grace appear...the hour I first believed. Through many dangers, toils and snares...we have already come. T'was Grace that brought us safe thus far...and Grace will lead us home. The Lord has promised good to me...His word my hope secures. My shield and portion be...as long as life endures. When we've been here ten thousand years...bright shining as the sun. We've no less days to sing God's praise...then when we've first begun........Amazing Grace, how sweet the sound, That saved a wretch like me....I once was lost but now am found, Was blind, but now............I see.......

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior18.png : .....mom......

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/RM10.png : Remember that song, Ravior......it has always......pushed me forward......whenever.......I.....was....down..... .......

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior18.png : ...mom?

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/RM10.png : ............

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior18.png : .....what's wrong with you?

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/RM10.png : .....................

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior19.png : .......why are you not blinking?

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/RM10.png : ..................

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior12.png : .......no..............mom....don't...be dead...don't leave like dad did......

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/RM10.png : .........

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior.png : .......no.....

Ravior's heart filled with anguish......his vision became blurry as his eyes filled with water.....he hugged his mother's corpse tightly as he continued to cry harshly.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior10.png : .....why you too?......

He stared at his mom for a few more seconds, until, he decided that he was going to die too if he stayed in that shelter. The laser would defiantly blow up the underground shelter for sure. So he got up, and weakly walked up the stairs, and opened the door. He saw it......in ruin. Every building was reduced to rubble. It was almost like a flat plain with a few hills. There were no people, either. Only dead bodies.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior12.png : ........this isn't right......

Then, he heard it. The sound of a saucer. It was here. The X laser.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior13.png : Oh no.......

A hole in the center of the X started to open slowly. Then, a voice was heard.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Mystery.png : WARNING, WARNING, UNDER ORDERS OF LORD XARIOR, EVERYTHING ON THIS PLAIN SHALL BE ANNHILATED IN 10, 9-

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior13.png : Oh no!

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Mystery.png : 6, 5-

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior13.png : *pant* *pant* *pant*

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Mystery.png : 3, 2, 1-

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior9-1.png : (oh GOD!!!)

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Mystery.png : .........0

This was it......Ravior was finished......or was he?

All of a sudden, Ravior's body began to glow. His entire shape began to change under the glaring silhouette .........and SWOOSH!

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/Ep1image.png

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/RaviorSF3.png : (......)

Ravior had become something powerful at the very last second. His conscious mind was barely present, and his body had unlocked itself form pure desperation. It saved his life..........

A few moments later......

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior1.png : .......ugh.....huh?

He lifted himself up, and looked around, until his vision was fixed upon a giant mushroom cloud of smoke in the far distance. He had escaped the blast, all in one piece.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior1.png : .........Welfort.........

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ferago2.png : Hey!

A voice from behind him called out to him. It was the sound of someone old.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior1.png : Huh?

He turned his head, and saw a tall man.

To be continued.........

flyingrabids
11-27-2008, 10:25 AM
WOAH! That was a really long chapter! So, i take it that Iulec is Ravior's girldfriend. Soon, Faer will take her position. Nurf and Ravior's mum look pretty cool too. And it looks like old enemies Phiod and Lera made a rather early appearance.

serza5
11-27-2008, 12:40 PM
Glad to see you've got it back up again http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif

Joshua822
11-27-2008, 01:44 PM
Nice plot. And the graphics are good to http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_wink.gif

Mr.Dark
11-27-2008, 03:33 PM
Glad you liked it. ^^

The next episodes will have a few more pictures than this one.

Eps 2 might take a week to finish, btw.

flyingrabids
11-28-2008, 09:10 AM
Btw, who is that guy who says hey at the end? Is he Ferago?

Mr.Dark
11-28-2008, 09:25 AM
Yep. http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif It's how I always imagined him.

Joshua822
11-28-2008, 10:14 AM
I think ferago looks like a 18th century componist :P

flyingrabids
11-29-2008, 09:42 AM
Joshua: Please don't double post. Use the edit button.

Mr.Dark: REALLY?! I expected he would be a more...younger man. I don't mean to disapoint you or anything.

serza5: Sorry to go off topic, but i dislike you. That's right, i'm FAB from PC. Don't anger me again just like you did on my "An upsetting message from an old member here" topic. Since that problem is solved (unless you keep annoying me there), i want you to be nice to me. Please do so and i'll dislike you no longer.

Mr.Dark
11-29-2008, 10:58 AM
Woah, calm down, dude. She's changed. A LOT.

And in the original first season, it was mentioned a couple times that Ferago was an old man.

BTW, aren't you glad I dedicated that episode to you? You read the announcement, didn't you?

flyingrabids
11-30-2008, 07:13 AM
Serza has changed eh? Hmm..we'll see if she p*sses me off anymore. And yes, i did read your announcement. Thanks for saying that you dedicated this to me, Raybox and...serza5.

It is my pleasure to enjoy your story Mr.Dark!Mr Dark (and dark Rayman) are my favourite villians ever! Feel free to call me your biggest fan, most active fan, the guy who made a Fanfic especially for you. And i'm proud to call you my best friend in Raymanzone. http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_smile.gif

Joshua822
11-30-2008, 07:29 AM
<BLOCKQUOTE class="ip-ubbcode-quote"><div class="ip-ubbcode-quote-title">quote:</div><div class="ip-ubbcode-quote-content">Serza has changed eh? Hmm..we'll see if she p*sses me off anymore. </div></BLOCKQUOTE>

I don't want to fight. But

Well, it's too say that both your reactions there where stupid. If you don't like Kelvin, that's okay, but you don't need to spread it around. And it was wrong from Serza to dislike you because you don't like Kelvin.

Mr.Dark
11-30-2008, 09:57 AM
<BLOCKQUOTE class="ip-ubbcode-quote"><div class="ip-ubbcode-quote-title">quote:</div><div class="ip-ubbcode-quote-content">Originally posted by flyingrabids:
And yes, i did read your announcement. Thanks for saying that you dedicated this to me, Raybox and...serza5.

It is my pleasure to enjoy your story Mr.Dark!Mr Dark (and dark Rayman) are my favourite villians ever! Feel free to call me your biggest fan, most active fan, the guy who made a Fanfic especially for you. And i'm proud to call you my best friend in Raymanzone. http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_smile.gif </div></BLOCKQUOTE>
Gee, thanks, bud. ^.^ I'm sure you'll like how Dark Rayman is portrayed later in the future of IAD.

BTW, Joshua, lets not fuel the fire, alright?

And FAB, if someone says something mean to you, it's best not to get so angry over it. Sure, it's ok to get upset and angry but not to the extent to where you're insulting them back. Cause doing that means you're doing exactly what that person did to you. Besides, you never know. Serza may have been kidding. She tends to do that quite often. ^_^ And don't worry about Kelvin. He's just a sensitive boy.

Also, this happened a long time ago, it's time to get over it.

Joshua822
11-30-2008, 12:09 PM
<BLOCKQUOTE class="ip-ubbcode-quote"><div class="ip-ubbcode-quote-title">quote:</div><div class="ip-ubbcode-quote-content">And FAB, if someone says something mean to you, it's best not to get so angry over it. Sure, it's ok to get upset and angry but not to the extent to where you're insulting them back. Cause doing that means you're doing exactly what that person did to you. Besides, you never know. Serza may have been kidding. She tends to do that quite often. ^_^ And don't worry about Kelvin. He's just a sensitive boy. </div></BLOCKQUOTE>

That's what i was trying to say http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_wink.gif Well, i wasn't trying to fuel the fire http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_frown.gif

serza5
11-30-2008, 01:06 PM
<BLOCKQUOTE class="ip-ubbcode-quote"><div class="ip-ubbcode-quote-title">quote:</div><div class="ip-ubbcode-quote-content">
serza5: Sorry to go off topic, but i dislike you. That's right, i'm FAB from PC. Don't anger me again just like you did on my "An upsetting message from an old member here" topic. Since that problem is solved (unless you keep annoying me there), i want you to be nice to me. Please do so and i'll dislike you no longer. </div></BLOCKQUOTE>
Oh I "SO" did not know that and isn't good of me to read that when i'm in a VERY unhappy mood.

Limely
11-30-2008, 02:22 PM
I want you stop the quarreling in this topic, or I'll have to lock it. Just so you know.

Mr.Dark
11-30-2008, 04:03 PM
.......why, guys? Why cant you act like adults?

Hey, Limely, you wouldn't happen ton have the power to delete the posts that are in the argument, would you?

flyingrabids
12-01-2008, 12:07 PM
Okay, so Serza5 was just in a bad mood at the time. Joshua and Mr.Dark trying to help me from stress...

Mr.Dark: Kelvin is a sensitive guy eh? Alright i believe you. Case dismissed! And btw, i can't wait to see Dark Rayman in IAD!

Limely, you're my friend aren't you? Please don't lock this. All the nonsense has just ended. http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_smile.gif

aeojrtfao
12-02-2008, 12:00 AM
<BLOCKQUOTE class="ip-ubbcode-quote"><div class="ip-ubbcode-quote-title">quote:</div><div class="ip-ubbcode-quote-content">Originally posted by flyingrabids:
Limely, you're my friend aren't you? </div></BLOCKQUOTE>
No, she hates you.
...
Kidding! http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif
Anyway...uh...no I won't say it, because if I'm right it'll spoil the story...

Mr.Dark
12-02-2008, 12:22 PM
You can PM me about it.

Mr.Dark
12-18-2008, 02:42 PM
Here it is. IAD Episode 2. Sorry it took so long, and sorry it's not as long as the first one, but I hope you enjoy.

Episode 2
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Your destiny
===========

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/eps2image1.png

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ferago2.png : Who are you?! Why were you glowing?!

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior7.png : S-stay back!!

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ferago2.png : I'm not going to hurt you, I just want to know why you-

All of a sudden, Ravior's eye's immediately shut as he let out a sigh and collapsed to the ground.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/eps2image2.png

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ferago2.png : ..........

The old man put his hands behind his back (his usual pose) and sighed at the pathetic sight. But he wasn't a cruel person, so he decided:

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ferago4.png : (I guess I should take him back to the shelter. And the wolves will be out here soon. I'm sure they wouldn't hesitate to have some meat.)

Fifty seven minuets later......

Now, Ravior was in the old guy's home. But he wasn't in the guest room, he was in the lab.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/ep2i1.png

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ferago2.png : (Hmm...there doesnt seem to be anything wrong with him....was I just seeing things when he looked liked.........no....I know I saw him.....it was so real. And if that's the case, I need to be careful with this kid. He could be pretty dangerous at first. But, I'm sure I'll be able to teach him how to control himself before he turns ba-)

Before he could finish what he was thinking, Ravior awoke.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior1.png : W-where am I?

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ferago1.png : Ehem! Good. You're awake. How're you feeling? Are you feeling any headache-

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior5.png : Ugh.....my head hurts.....

The man's eyes widened.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ferago4.png : ......uh-oh

All of a sudden, Ravior began to glow again, and his shape began to change under the bright silhouette! Rising above the bed as it was happening-as his consciousness began to fade, and become someone else's......

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/ep2i3.png

And, when it finally ended. When that amazing, bright, and painful experience had finished, Ravior's appearance was what it was when he escaped the blast form the X Laser. He had A long, spiny, red thing growing out of his head. He had blue crystals on his back. His body was black and grey, with red, metallic lines going across the front of his body.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/ep2i4.png

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ferago2.png : ....so......this is him, the descendant to the Deity......Dark.

Ravior, or whoever was possessing him, glared at the old man. His large, blue eyes expressed the emotion of rage pretty well. He leaped off the bed, and landed in front of the man and growled profusely while staring at him.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ferago2.png : Huh. Looks like I'm going to have to put you back to sleep.

The old man swiftly raised his arm to where it was in a horizontal position and pointing at Ravior.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/RaviorSF1.png : .........

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/ep2i5.png

The end result........

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/ep2i6-1.png

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ferago2.png : ......oh....hehe....s-...sorry about that......no hard feelings-

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/ep2i7.png

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ferago2.png : ......ow.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/RaviorSF2.png : Hehe

After that amazing slap in the face, Ravior dashed out of the room, and soon out of the building, and into the forest.

As he was blowing across the thick forest at moderately fast speed, he quickly came across a wolf.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/ep2i8.png

The large wolf roared at the unfrightened Ravior, and made a fierce leap at him.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/ep2i9.png

But, Ravior still didn't show any signs of fear, only fast movement. He slashed his arm through the wolf's torso, thus cutting him in half. Then, he shot a laser through his eyes, and blew up the split wolf.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/ep2i10.png

As the remains soon faded into thin air, Ravior began to laugh manically. Whatever was possessing him was happy to kill something.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/ep2i11.png

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/RaviorSF2.png : HAHAHAHAHA!!

But as he was laughing, a beam of paralysis came from behind and hit the crystals on his back.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/ep2i12-1.png

Some one shot it at him from behind......it was the old man!

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/ep2i13.png

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ferago1.png : Heh, now I know where to aim if you ever try that again.

The old man picked up Ravior while he was still in that form, but he changed back to normal in his arms pretty soon.

Back at the shelter.........

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/ep2i14.png

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ferago1.png : Wake up, kid. Come on.

Ravior's eyes opened, and he awoke.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior1.png : ....what happened?

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ferago1.png : You SF'ed.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior1.png : Huh?

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ferago1.png : Get out of bed, and look at the computer, you'll see what I mean. I'll be in the kitchen getting some coffee.

The old man walked away, but before leaving the room, he turned around and said:

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ferago1.png : Oh, by the way, my name is Ferago. Nice to meet you.

Ferago continued to the kitchen, closing the door behind him as he did.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior4.png : (......Ferago, eh? I don't even know how I got here. What happened to.....Welfort...)

Ravior jumped out of the bed, but he stumbled a little bit. His legs were tired.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/ep2i15.png

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior1.png : Ow....(eh, guess I should look at the computer like he told me to.)

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/ep2i16.png

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior3.png : OK, let's see........

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/ep2i17.png

When Ravior saw the screen, only reading a couple of the words that were on the screen surprised him.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior13.png : ......is that what I looked like?!

He had to have an explanation for this.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior13.png : (I better go to the kitchen and ask that Ferago guy what this is all about!)

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/ep2i18.png

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior1.png : I wonder if this door leads to the kitchen......(gah! I'm talking to myself!)

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/ep2i19.png

When he opened the door........

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/ep2i20.png

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior18.png : .....woah.....

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/ep2i21.png

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/ep2i22.png

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior18.png : Uh......excuse me?

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ferago1.png : Huh? Oh! It's you. How are you feeling?

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior18.png : OK.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ferago1.png : Good. Did you read what was on the screen?

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior17.png : Uh, yeah?

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ferago2.png : So, you now understand what happened?

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior15.png : Not really.........

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ferago4.png : Oh.....well, you're the descendant of the Deity Dark.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior1.png : .....come again?

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ferago4.png : *sigh* follow me.

Ferago stepped out from behind the counter, and walked to the library, and Ravior followed.

While walking to the library, Ravior was surprised by scratched up some of the walls were. It was like hoards of wild dogs had come and dug their claws into the walls.

But when they made it to the library, he was even more surprised that there was only ONE book.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/ep2i23.png

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior13.png : .....this is your library?

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ferago3.png : Yeah, I know what you're thinking. Why only one book? Well, a few months ago, a big group of wolves, like the one you killed-

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior18.png : (....when did I kill a wolf?)

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ferago2.png : -came in, and trashed this place. It wasn't the first time this happened, they attacked my home a few times before, but the only damage that was done was the walls getting scratched up. This time, they attacked this room.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior1.png : Why?

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ferago2.png : Why? Cause they're crazy, Rabbid, animals. I mean, this is the Arcane Forest we're in right now. But, not to get off track, something very amazing happened. This one book_

Ferago took the book off the shelf_

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ferago2.png : _was the only book that survived, and you wanna know why this is amazing?

Ravior nodded.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ferago2.png : I saw the wolves tear up this place with high ferocity, and every book was torn to shreds. But, this one book, lost every page in it, except for one. This one page, was untouched.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior1.png : .....wow.....so, what's so special about this page?

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ferago2.png : .....it teaches about the prophecy of the Deity children.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior1.png : Who are they?

Ferago opened the book, and turned to the one page that survived.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ferago2.png : I'll read it to you. Now remember, this book is pretty old, so it might sound a little less intelligent than most newer books. But, here's what it says:

If you've read my previous book, you already know all about the Deities of Giga. Well, ALMOST all. One thing I didn't include in the previous book, was that these Deities had families. Yes, they all got married. Even the evil Dark and Nova got married to some one. And they had children. And their children had children. And their children had children. And so on. All of them were normal, and were very nice, run-of-the-mill, kids. Even Dark and Nova's children were normal, and weren't evil. But, it is said that the seventh generation of their children will be the descendants that have their power. For example: Venus' seventh generation son will have the power and soul of Venus inside of him. So, when this generation has come, it is also said that they will all find each other. Including, another being of great power and a normal person. They will all destroy a great and powerful evil that will be a threat of almost equal evil to what Dark and Nova themselves were. Only two of the descendants will have a child of their own, and one of those children will be the hero that will save the planet from an evil that will be revived in one that was good. One who will be betrayed by the civilization that he swore to protect. But, the one who is betrayed, might not ever make the threat that the new hero is destined to put to rest.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ferago2.png : That's all that's on the page.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior1.png : Wow, sounds like a cool story. But what does this have anything to do with what I saw on the computer?

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ferago2.png : That image of you is what you looked like, and assuming from what you looked like, how you acted, the power you had, or hell, your LAST name, it's pretty safe to say that you're the descendant of Dark, one of the Deities.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior18.png : Then.....that means....I'm evil?

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ferago3.png : No, no. It means you have an evil being inside of you. But, that evil being can be controlled, and in order to control it, you're going to have to defeat the evil fraction of him that is inside of you.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior1.png : How will I do that?

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ferago1.png : .....I'll teach you how.

To be continued..........

flyingrabids
12-19-2008, 04:18 AM
Cool chapter. Man, Ferago is lucky to survive th wolfs with his nice home.

Mr.Dark
01-07-2009, 08:55 AM
OK, until Episode 10 (which is pretty much already complete.) all the episodes are going to be some what short fillers, showing Ferago training Ravior how to use his powers. Its going to be a little boring. But, bear with me here, I never really had much of a plot with these first few episodes in the first place. So, if you find this episode boring, dont worry, it will get exciting again in future episodes.

So, seeing how easy it will be to make Episodes 4-9, and Episode 10 is more than halfway done, this will all be over pretty soon, and season 2 will come along. If youve already read the crappy original versions, you already know the premise of whats going to happen once season 2 starts. Thats when this series really kicks off.

So. Sit back, relax, and happy reading.

Episode 3
==============
The training starts
==============

Ravior followed Ferago outside of the shelter, and onto a little platform, where he would teach him his first attack.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/ep3i1.png

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior1.png : So, how exactly are you going to teach me how to use these powers of mine? I thought it would be dangerous to transform into that.thing.

Ferago raised his finger in a wittingly way.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ferago1.png : Not at all! Youre completely safe. Trust me. My quarantine pills never fail. And as for your powers, the data collected from the computer showed all of the things you were capable of, (yeah, just go with it.) and Ive read through them. You have quite an arsenal, I can tell ya that!

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior1.png : OK, so, how am I going to transform?

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ferago1.png : Just tell your body to.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior1.png : .uh, ok?

Ravior closed his eyes, and kept saying in his mind Transform metransform me.hello? TRANSFORM ME!

Raviors legs quickly felt the urge to jump into the air (Im just as confused as you are.) leaped into the air, and the transformation process began immediately!

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior3.png : Ah, there we go.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/ep3i2.png

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/RaviorSF2.png : Wow.this feels different.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ferago1.png : It will, but you will get use to it. Now, first, try to fluctuate your hands in an open motion.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/RaviorSF1.png : OK.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ferago2.png : GAH! Dont do it in my direction! Turn around!

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/RaviorSF1.png : Oh, sorry.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ferago4.png : Its OK. Now, do it.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/RaviorSF1.png : Alright.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/ep3i3.png

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ferago1.png : Ah, well done. But, you can make it even more powerful. Tighten your knuckles a bit more.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/ep3i4.png

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ferago2.png : Hmm..that came out looking a little weird.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/RaviorSF1.png : Yeah, youre telling me.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ferago1.png : But, you did well. Try it a couple more times, though. Put more strain into your hands.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/RaviorSF1.png : OK.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/ep3i5.png

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/RaviorSF1.png : .awesome. http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_redface.gif

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ferago1.png : That was fantastic! Splendid job, Ravior!

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/RaviorSF1.png : Thanks!

Well, that was Raviors training for the day. Ravior changed back to normal, and he and Ferago went back inside the shelter. They had dinner. ..OK, it was only Apricot Pie, but, still dinner. Ferago could make tons of stuff with his huge kitchen and food supply.

After dinner.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/ep3i6.png

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior3.png : That was delicious! Ive always loved Apricot Pie. For an old guy, youre really good with food!

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ferago1.png : Gee, youre so kind. But, anyway, you have more training to do in the morning. So you better get to bed.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior1.png : Eh, fine. Where am I going to sleep?

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ferago1.png :

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/ep3i7.png

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior6.png : sigh.I would be better off sleeping on a wet cave floor.

Despite the uncomfortable bed he had to sleep in, Ravior fell asleep relatively quickly. And in the night, his mind was filled with odd things..

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/ep3i8.png

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/ep3i9.png

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/ep3i10.png

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/ep3i9.png

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/darkmugshot1.png : Ravior.Ravior.I see you..hee hee heeshe will die.and you cant stop it.you cant..

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior9-1.png : Ah!

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/ep3i11.png

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior13.png : .w-what the hell?!

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/ep3i12.png

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior.png : .do I have a fever?

Four hours later.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/ep3i13.png

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ferago1.png : So, how did you sleep?

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior1.png : I..(Maybe I should keep that dream to myself..) I had a nice rest. That bed isnt too bad once you get use to it.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ferago1.png : Good.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior1.png : So, when am I going to start training again?

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ferago1.png : Eh, no need to start right away.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior1.png : Hum, OK, what do we do in the meantime?

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ferago1.png : How about we just talk about random stuff. Thats what I always use to do with my friends.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior1.png : Uh, OK.what do you want to talk about?

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ferago1.png : Hmmhow about why your arms are navy blue?

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior15.png : Oh, its a trend. Their called Yigs. Most people wear them nowadays.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ferago2.png : So, are they like sleeves?

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior3.png : Yeah, I guess.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ferago4.png : Ah.hmm, you know, we should start training now.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior1.png : But I thought you said-

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ferago1.png : Eh, forget what I said. Your training is pretty important.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior1.png : Um, OK.

To be continued

MASF
01-20-2009, 08:48 PM
<BLOCKQUOTE class="ip-ubbcode-quote"><div class="ip-ubbcode-quote-title">quote:</div><div class="ip-ubbcode-quote-content">Originally posted by Mr.Dark:
You can PM me about it. </div></BLOCKQUOTE>

Your boring me... -_- Where's Mr. Dark? http://forums.ubi.com/groupee_common/emoticons/icon_smile.gif

Hey...That background...That's from Megaman X!

Mr.Dark
03-14-2009, 10:00 PM
So, Episodes 4-10 are all going to be posted in one post. To be honest, I really want to get on with the story, and there really isnt much to put in eps 4-7 other than some small dialogue and Ravior being trained. So, these episodes all make up for one slightly long ep. Out of eps 4-10, 9 and 10 are the only ones that have anything interesting in it.

Also beware of some crappy story telling. Im not at my peak of telling stories with text, soeh, once I get to season 2, itll be alright.

P.S. This will be the only time I do this.

Episode 4
=========
Head Laser
=========

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/ep41.png

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ferago1.png : Today, youre going to learn how to shoot the Emerald Laser from your head.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior3.png : Emerald Laser, huh. How powerful is it?

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ferago3.png : Youll see once you unleash it. Now, concentrate all your power to your fore head.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior3.png : Ok~ay..

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/ep4i2.png

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ferago1.png : Good work.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/RaviorSF2.png : Hey, what can I say? Im a good learner.

To be continued

Episode 5
=============
A little practice
=============

A bunch of growling was heard in the distance. Ferago turned around to see that it was more wolves!

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ferago2.png : Hey, look over there! Wolves!

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/RaviorSF2.png : Want me to take care of them?

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ferago2.png : Of course! I dont want to clean up my house again. Besides, this will be good practice.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/RaviorSF1.png : But..I dont want to kill the wolves

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ferago4.png : I know what youre thinking, but look: They arent real wolves. Theyre dark energy that came from the forests trees.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/RaviorSF1.png : um

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ferago2.png : Just do it already! Theyre getting closer!

Ravior looked at the ground with a solemn face.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/RaviorSF1.png : *sigh* fine.

He charged for the wolves, ready to waste em.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/ep4i3.png

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/RaviorSF1.png : There, that takes care of them.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/ep4i4.png

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ferago2.png : (Woah, hes better than I thought. It didnt even look like he was trying, and I barely even taught him how to shoot beammaybe its Dark)

To be continued.

Episode 6
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How to make a Shield
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http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ferago2.png : What you are being trained to defeat is very powerful. Having only a good offence isnt enough. You also need a good defense, and trust me, youll be needing it a lot. Not just in this upcoming battle, but in the many other battles youll be having in your life. Seeing that you are a Deity child.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/RaviorSF1.png : So this means Ill be meeting the other Deity people some day? Like, will I be living with them?

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ferago4.png : Yes. Probably when youre an adult. I think.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/RaviorSF1.png : (Hmm..at least Ill have a family of some sort.) Let me ask you this: Are they nice?

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ferago1.png : Beats me. Ive never met them. I dont even know what they look like. But itll be up to you and the others to work together to stop whatever evil that youre said to one day stop.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/RaviorSF1.png : So is our victory a guarantee?

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ferago2.png : No. Theres as much of a chance of failing as there is a victory.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/RaviorSF2.png : But what about the other stuff that the book said would happen to me and the other Deity people after we destroy the evil? If we fail, what will happen?

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ferago4.png : Who knows. Probably something that isnt good, I can promise you that. But lets get back on track. To make a shield, focus some power into your arms, then hold them up.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/RaviorSF1.png : OK.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/ep4i6.png

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ferago2.png : (Hes already perfected it?)uh, very good.

To be continued..

Episode 7 (almost there)
===============
Learning how to fly
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http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ferago1.png : Probably one of the most important things youll have to learn is how to fly. A lot of the enemies youll face will most likely have this ability. Its very easy, you just have to-

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/ep4i7.png

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ferago2.png : Huh..well, then can you shoot while flying? Its not as easy as you might thi-

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/ep4i8.png

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/ep4i9.png

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ferago2.png : (.maybe I dont need to train him? He looks to be use to the evil power inside of that body already..very odd..)

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/ep4i10.png

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ferago2.png : (I guess Im worrying too much. Hes just a strong kid, thats all.) H-hey, Ravior, thats enough for today, lets get back into the house.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/RaviorSF2.png : Sure thing!

To be continued..

Episode 8
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Be careful
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http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ferago1.png : Well, Ravior, I think your training is done.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior15.png : R-really?! Already?! Does that mean I can face..whatever Im supposed to fightnow?!

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ferago2.png : Hold on a second, Ravior. I must warn you of something first.about Darks spirit being inside of you.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior18.png : What about it?

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/ep4i5.png

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ferago4.png : You seem to be getting use to it unnaturally fast.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior1.png : How is it unnatural?

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ferago4.png : Well..its just thatits hard to explain, really..I guess Ill warn you about something else then.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior15.png : Lay it on me, Im prepared to take on anything!

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ferago4.png : .after you weaken Dark, the spirit thats inside of you, he will want to regain control over his power. You will have the ability to give some of it back to him, and that will increase your strength.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior15.png : Really?! How?! I should do that!

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ferago2.png : No! You cant let him.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior1.png : Huh? Why not?

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ferago2.png : In order for him to increase your power, he would have to take a part of your own mind and body, and in doing so, would change your normal physical appearance and some other things about your genetics, be it mental or physical,

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior18.png : Oh..

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ferago4.png : Although you would gain great strength, it would be dangerous to you. Plus, Dark would have more control over you, and believe me, thats the last thing you want. Be prepared to be tempted by him. Hell be asking you if he can increase your power a lot. He may even try to deceive you. Exaggerate things. You know, right? So never, under any circumstance, allow him to increase your power. Meaning whenever he asks, refuse. Got it?

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior1.png : Uhsure. I get it.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ferago4.png : .anyway, now is the time to destroy his control over his power. To do this, you must get him out of your mind, so that you can break the control.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior18.png : Before you continue, why can I only destroy his control? Why not kill him completely?

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ferago4.png : Because if you completely destroyed him, you would be destroyed too. Besides, its probably impossible to completely wipe him out anyway. Hes was un killable when he walked the planet, so now
that hes a spirit hes even more invincible, if that makes any sense. But you dont need to worry about him once you break the control he has over his power. Just make sure you dont let him have any of it back.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior3.png : Alright, gotcha.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ferago2.png : Now, to get a part of him out of your mind, you must use all of your might to unleash him, and it needs to be in an open area, which is where you must go. Theres a place in the forest thats open enough. Heres a map, use it to guide you to the spot. Understand?

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior14.png : Very clearly.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ferago2.png : Also, be careful for whatever attacks you in the forest. I think only wolves are out there, though. It shouldnt be too hard for you to handle.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior1.png : Alright, I understand.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ferago2.png : Oh, andremember, Ravior, with God, you can do the impossible, see the invisible, break the unbreakableand touch the untouchable.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior1.png : Um.OK?

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ferago1.png : Good luck out there. May he watch over you.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior18.png : ..sure

To be continued..

Episode 9
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The Arcane Forest
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http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior18.png : (OK, lets look at the maphuh..just one mile north? This wont take long.)

Area #1
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Arcane Forest
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Arcane Forest theme (listen to while reading): http://www.esnips.com/doc/a41c...RockmanX4-IntroStage (http://www.esnips.com/doc/a41c9a10-57fa-4c12-997e-d20fe9c352b6/Esdeer-Holybells-RockmanX4-IntroStage)

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/ep9i2.png

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/RaviorSF1.png : Look at that skythat moonwhat serene beauty*sigh*, I better continue. Im pretty close to that spot. It should only take a couple more minuets.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/ep9i3.png

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/RaviorSF1.png : (A cave? I didnt know there were caves in forests.)

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/ep9i4.png

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/RaviorSF2.png : OK, this must be the spotalright.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/ep9i5.png

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/RaviorSF5.png : GRRRRRRRRAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/ep9i6.png

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/RaviorSF1.png : .

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/ep9i7.png

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/RaviorSF2.png : OKwhere is he?.?!

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/ep9i8.png

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/ep9i9.png

To be continued..

Episode 10
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Dark VS. Puppet Dark
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Major Battle #1
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Evil Marionette, Puppet Dark
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Battle theme (listen to while reading): http://www.esnips.com/doc/bfbf...54c/RTRZ---23---Fake (http://www.esnips.com/doc/bfbfef48-ac50-4cd1-9f21-fab948b5254c/RTRZ---23---Fake)

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/ep10i1.png

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/RaviorSF2.png : Gah!

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/ep10i2.png

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/RaviorSF5.png : AAAAAAH!!!!

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/ep10i3.png

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/RaviorSF5.png : guh..ugh..I.have to.get upbeforehe..GAAAAAH!!!!

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/ep10i4.png

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/RaviorSF2.png : .peh, OK, time to rock!

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/ep10i5.png

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/RaviorSF1.png : What theI can absorb power into the crystals on my back?..hehe.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/ep10i6.png

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/RaviorSF2.png : ..uh-oh.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/ep10i7.png

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/RaviorSF3.png : .gig..this..feelsAAAAAAH!!!!!!!!!!

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/ep10i8.png

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/RaviorSF3.png : (this.isnt..escapable..Imdone for.huh? Whats coming over me?..)

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/ep10i9.png

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior1.png : W-where am I?

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/ep10i10.png

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior18.png : What the?!

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/ep10i11.png

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior9-1.png : .mom?

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/RM3.png : .Amazing Grace, how sweet the sound, That saved a wretch like me....I once was lost but now am found, Was blind, but now, I see. T'was Grace that taught...my heart to fear. And Grace, my fears relieved. How precious did that Grace appear...the hour I first believed. Through many dangers, toils and snares...we have already come. T'was Grace that brought us safe thus far...and Grace will lead us home. The Lord has promised good to me...His word my hope secures. My shield and portion be...as long as life endures. When we've been here ten thousand years...bright shining as the sun. We've no less days to sing God's praise...then when we've first begun..

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior1.png : .Amazing Grace, how sweet the sound, That saved a wretch like me....I once was lost but now am found, Was blind, but nowI see.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/RM1.png : ..remember that song, Ravior, it has always pushed me forward whenever I was down. Trust that God will protect you. Trust him, and he will deliver you from your problems, no matter how hopeless it may seem. You can always count on him.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior6.png : I will

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/RM1.png : ..now, weaken the evil that binds you.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior7.png : alright. Thisll be for you, mom. and every Rewop that died

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/RM6.png : So long, son

*FWING*

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/RaviorSF2.png : Time to finish you!

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The evil incarnation then spoke in the youths mind

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/darkmugshot1.png : Well, well, well..I underestimated your ability to control my strength. But, dont feel too proud. That was only a puppet. Luckily for you, though, it was linked to the control I had over the power that was in you, so you now have all the free will to use it. But, if you ever have the desire to become stronger..let me know.

Ravior lowered his head and smirked.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior14.png : Yeah? Good luck trying to convince me into doing that. I know what would become of me if I allowed you to have some of this power back. Ferago gave me the wisdom, and God wont allow you to harm me.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/darkmugshot1.png : Oh, Im quite certain your faith in God will deteriorate eventually. It usually does with everyone else. Once one thing goes wrong, youll blame him, and be angry at him. Will he protect you then?

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior1.png : .yes.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/darkmugshot1.png : Well see about that. Well, anyway, about you allowing me to have some control over my power againyoull change your mind on that soon, too. You will have to protect loved ones and yourself in the near future, and allowing me to assist you might be the only way for you to succeed in doing that. Its your destiny, so I probably dont have much time to wait until Ill regain control of my power again. I have foreseen it. The wisdom you now have will be gone for a long period of time, too. Even after you regain it, you will still be having second thoughts.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior18.png : What are you talking about?

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/darkmugshot1.png : ..ahI can seethe start of your adventure will begin in only a couple of minuets.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior1.png : again, what are you talking about?!

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/darkmugshot1.png : Youll see..or not..hehehe.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior6.png : OK, youre not making any sense, so shut up.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/darkmugshot1.png : As you wishoh, and dont forget you wont be able to use my power for a couple of hours.
The voice faded away. Dark, the evil Deity, crept away into the deepest part of Raviors mind.

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http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior1.png : I better get back to Feragos place.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/ep9ib.png

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior1.png : ..hmm?

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/ep9ic.png

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior1.png : whats that?

In the distance, a giant, purple creature was running towards Ravior, and at a very fast speed.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior9-1.png : I better get out of here!

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/ep9id.png

But before he make much the distance, the monster was well caught up with him.

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/ep9ie.png

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior13.png : ACK!

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http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/ep9ig.png

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee56/Machine_029/I%20am%20darkness%20mugshots/Ravior.png : (what is this thing?)

The creatures head began to glow. It was going to blast Ravior!

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As soon as the waves beamed Raviors head even more to the ground, the creature lifted its foot, and sent him flying.

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In only moments, Ravior went through the thick canopy of trees and into the sky.

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He flew miles. For forty three minuets, he was shooting through the clouds at a very fast speed. Of course, Ravior was unconscious. He was almost on the different side of the planet when he finally began to fall to the ground.

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IAD part 1, end.

To be continued.