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A solitary soldier, returns from yet another mission compleated to perfection, standing at over six foot he
towerd most of the others around him .Though ,he made no coments he lisend to the conversation going
on.
Vinni spoke ..."Theres a roumer going around that a new recroot was comming in... a Pyrotecnition,
no one knows the soldiers mame or rank just that he was comming in verry soon".
Vinni and all the others were enthousiastic about the new man and were looking forward to meeting him".
I hope hes better than the last one!!"

"Oh! Great !! yet another roockie to blow himself away!!,l Hunter wasent amused!
Turning Vinni looked up , Colonel Hunter was standing behind him, stepping back ,falling flat on his back every
one every one arround him laughed.

Did I scare you?.. smileling to himself, Whats this all about?
Vinni stammerd 'No! ..It.. Its true ,I heard the talk just this morrning"

Thinking no more of the conversation he headed over to his office Sighing as he enterd ,glad he was back
and looking forward to a long hot shower,His quarters were designed for two officers though he was
thankfull no one had the other room.
As he slowly started to strip off his shoulders acked, god he was sore ,he'd landed awequidley when he
jumped from a plane earlier that week,his back rippled as he streched his arms and shoulders......

DOVERTY WANTS TO SEE YOU IN HIS OFFICE !
Colonel Hunter..Crist I hate that damed speeker...muttering, "I'm Haveing a Shower!!!.
HE SAYS NOW Colonel!.... Ok! ok, tell him I'm comming.

Hunter had been part of this platoon, training camp for a considerable time, longer than he care to remember.
He was one of the boys yet he diddent exsist,not officualy any way if he were to be courght by the
enamy,his own people would denie his verry egsistance.
Life was hard enough, with out worring about family or loved ones Both of which he dident have.
He led a solatary life,and that was how he liked it...

Walking in to Dovertys office he saw that look in his eyes
Dovety..."My god man you look beet"

I'll get streight to the point as you know this is a milatary training camp we have specialists in all feilds.
"We have a new solder comming in!"

Hunter ...Yer? I heard the talk."Whats it to do with me Sir?","Your more than one of the men here and you know that more than any one on Base", "Sir?".

Wer've bourght in a new Coverts opperator,theirs been times when we have needed more than one man for a job.This soldier is the best in in pyrotecnics and infultrations....


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As he spoke his eyes slowly scaned the room,standing to one side in full dress uniform was a very attractive
woman,from were he was he could make out that she was a little under six foot black /brown
hair (braided) he figerd that she would be in her late therties, still she looked so fresh standing behind
glass.. like a doll he thourght to himself.....

She stood,hardly moveing except for the rise and fall of her breathing,observing thoughs how
stood befor her,Colonel Hunter figerd she was a secratery a little over dressed.

Doverty cleared his throught.... Hunter?.. "Sorrie Sir!"

Doverty smiled....Top looking lady dont you think?..
"Yes Sir Top looking",a little Stiff looking though! shaw she's real?
Doverty laughed.. I"m glad you like her, as she stood behind a sound proof glass wall she
wase'nt capable of hearing the conversation.

She stood in the preperations room, God its cold in here she thourght, a girl could freeze to death in here.
She could only see Dovertys back
But had a good veiw of the soldier standing in front of him

He was a ruggerd,very fit man , black hair silver threded on the sides very
distiguished though quite scruffy coverd in dust and what looked like mud."Must be a debrief ".

Kat had noticed that the soldier glanced her way

As thay spoke She was nervous as to the conversation,she knew that they were probly now talking
about her.

she'd been brought in as a replacment Pyrotecnition.
For some guy who had been killed a while back she wasent to shaw ,how all theise men would feel
about a female in their ranks ,This she was use to ,as most men seamed to think she wasent up to the job,
she had always proved them wrong,makeing many reliable associates along the way.
She had been on more than her share of missions both as team player and on solo co vert missions.
Kat also new she was the one for this job,and would prove herself here as well.

The General of her previose Station had rec-amended her to Doverty,saying that she is the rite
soldier for this job,she had no family,this was her life it was all she knew.

I'M NOT Stiff!, he thinks I'm stiff...she'd read his lips.

A small beep came over the speeker. Shortly after a rather larg man enterd her room.Come with me
Miss..
Following him around to a small corradore through to Dovertys office...This is it she said, "In to the
lions den!"...the man smiled .."my name is Jon" Miss,No need to worry ,
"Doverty is a top man!" ,Kat looked at Jon.."Hes not the one I'm worried about". Kat gatherd her wits
standing tall she walked over to the men standing at the Desk

Colonel Hunter watched as they walked accross the floor towards them.



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Sir..Standing at attention Kat salouted Dovety

Doverty extended his hand...No need for that here Kat were all On eqale standing here...
Colonel, my man, This... is your new Pyrotecnition...

"Parden?" . I thourght she was your secratery!.. speaking aloud and regretting it streight away.
Kats looked him in the eye typical she thourght...."Sorry to dissapoint you Sir" , takeing an instent disslike
for the man... My name is "Colonel Hunter" he replyed.

Doverty... Hunter!, as the two top ranking officers I was hopeing you would get along,I have it on good orthority that Kat here is the best in the feild of Pyrotechnics. She's here to stay ,so you and the other men will have to accept that she is now part of the team!

"She's a woman! ,were in Hell will we put her ,theirs no facillaties for females on this Base!!

Shes bunking in with you!, you have the only quarters that are suited, to shareing , the showers etc ,
I hope will not be a hassle, Im shaw you will work things out ,as for the rooms you have two seperate areas,
devided by a wall.I'll hear no more! Dis-smised. Colonel Colt Hunter stormed out of the office leaving Kat standing with
Doverty and Jon.
"I am sorry you had to hear all that Kat,Colonel Hunter is a Seasond Officer,he should know better!" .
"Sir ,please dont worry about me when it comes to not Fitting in' its all water off a ducks back to me!
I find it every were I go I'm strong Sir ,I tend to keep to myself and just get on with my job.

Doverty was impressed,Good to hear,I'll get my man here to show you to your quarters, I'm shaw you will settle right in.

The Room was musty smelling ,though well cleaned, they hand known she was comming.
A larger open area she was told is the rec area ,TV in one corrner and a couple of chairs and table in the other in
the midle was a loung, this was the area that we would (share )..over to the right was her room, and small
office. Jon explained that the rooms off to my left was the Colonels
Kat could see that the shower area was the deviding wall Between the sleeping areas and the shared liveing quarters, Doverty had spoken of,interesting she thourght.

"I can see it will take a little getting use to ,well, we'll just have to stay out of each others way,
Something I'm good at!"........Jon said his good byes wishing her luck with her new post.
Kat new she would need it. Heading for her room she quickle unpacked her things changed and left streight
for the Labs..time to get aquainted with her surroundings and new home.





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Colonel Hunter was in the shower ,with the water bighting into his skin,he'd turnd the tap on full pelt,"Why me? what
did i do to deserve this... A woman!!" for the love of ......settle down.. he thourght to himself ,dont get all
rield up over this.
She want last ,the men will not be to acceptting of a female in the troops.though they
had no choice in the matter,like him they would do as orderd.
She'll probley get herself killed first day out on the feild...God no! dont think that way..no one deserves that.
He settled ,feeling just that little bit more relaxed,the water was doing the job of soothing his thourghts,and
his sore and tied limbs.Re-moving himself form the shower he dressed, Knowing that she would by now
be in the next room,time to face this.

He was just a little taken aback as he walked in to the main room,nothing no one their.
he'd figerd she was in her room.Good he dissided heading to his office theirs paper work to do!
It would be weeks before Colonel Hunter caught sight of her again.

She had thought it better to stay out of the Colonels way and just get on with her work , wich for the
moment was in the lab, she'd been working with two young men in the pyro department she'd been given
the men as Trainees, trying to teach them what she can, Pyrotecnitions were a scarce breed,many being
killed through lack of knowlage and skill.
The two men ,quite a lot younger than herself were she felt just only boys.

Kat spent most of her spare time in the training area keeping her skills tuned for when thay would be needed,
she prided herself in her fitness, honning in on her targets and distroying all in sight ,Kat longed to get back
out in the feild.It had been quiet of late with most missions being basic seeze and capture not requiering
her special skills and knowlage.

Colonel Hunter walked up to her, .."How you setteling in?" ..

"Their keeping me bussie and on my toes in the labs, I'm settling in just fine thanks!"

Colonel Hunter watched for her reaction to his next words,"The men here will find it Hard to take orders
from a woman."
Kat ,bit back."Orders Must be followed even by me! their lives Will depend on total loyalty and trust. IF!
I give an order ,I will expect it to be carried out in full no questions asked!" Now she was angery .
"Your a real fire cracker arnt you?" A Pyrotecnition with an attatude problem"
Kats face was red,I'm not the one with problems!"

Bighting his liptrying not to smile,more like nitro he thourght to him self ready to blow at any time.
I'd better watch this one carfuly, as she turn away.
She look totaly diferant in the the cloths she wore,put together,well and nicley toned,verry nice.



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He had to addmit she was good to look at.Her fetchures stunning,thoughs lips verry inviting,
"God man snap out of it!"

This girl wasent the skinny or fragile thing he took her for in the office,she was nearly as tall as himself.
He could see now, that she was extreamly fit ,her arms and torso showed years of self dissaplin,well toned
muscells, in the singlet and long leg shorts their was no mistakeing She was all woman.

She looked every bit as fit as himself,
Kat steamed off heading for yet another work out.
They're yet to send Kat on a mission ,though she still liked to go through the drill over at the munitions area,
Trying out diferent detination sequences.
Kat knew it would be a while before most of the men would trust her,they had tolerated her so far
but she was still a long way off their acceptance.She was still verry much the out sider.
So till then she would keep up the training..

It had been a long six months since Kat had been assigned to her new troops three in all,
she had prooven herself to all the men she now worked with.She was finaly one of the boys!

The hardest being the Colonels men,all of them the most experianced group,
The cream of the crop so to speek.
He had pushed her to her limits many times and she had shinned through,never letting them down.

She was pumped and ready for action.Glad she was back in the feilds.

Later that eaverning as they sat in the loung ,listerning to the local station on the radio,

COLT!..Kat!..DOVERTY NEEDS TO SEE YOU BOTH IN HIS OFFICE NOW !

Grabbing their things thay headed over.

Doverty stood as they ented the room......"I have a mission for you both! Covert you,under stand!"
You will be working together on this one.
I need you both on the Ospray in fifteen minits.you'll be briefed once in the air.

Sitting in the hurculies not knowing where the drop was, only what was to be done,
silent knowing they would soon be in hostile territory.

In the back of the Ospray she sat quietly scycing herself up for the mission ahead she had always
seperated herself from all around her when she needed the space, it had been nearly two years since her last
covert opp,she felt the twist in her belly..
This would be her maiden mission ,sitting accross from her,the Colonel seemed, totaly in control,calm!

The boys slept as they moved silently to the rear of the Ospray
wearing the cochlear implants joining them to the computers back at Base ,the subdermals Tracking
their every move, Base would see what they see and hear what they heard. It also linked Kat and Colonel Hunter as one,
( this was a new twist for them both) communication between was of great importance.As Colonel Hunter was
entering the building - she was to disstroy.

Doverty..You hear me people?
Yes Sir, loud and clear..
Ready to get to work?
Yes Sir

Then they were gone..

Entering the building from the ground they headed in diferent directions Colonel Hunter found a shaft and climbed in,
slowly he worked his way through the maze of vents.Comming to the end he slid on to the floor he'd
been looking for.
The building was deserted as they had been told in the brief....
quickly and silantley he headed for his target, a room on the left, he found the
computers with help from Anna back at Base they hacked in and re-moved all the intel they needed.
He was on his way out of their..
Her voice was soft,urgent, Colonel Hunter? ..you hear me? "Yep go ahead", your've got company get out of their,
I've just seen three trucks pulling in! Moove!

It had been twenty minnits since they last made contact,Kat had already placed the charges where they would
do the most damage..This place is supose to be empty whats going on?Three men jumped from one of the
trucks a fourth came from the building,Colonel Hunter! were are you?..I'm going to have to hit the switch get out!!
I'm on my way down you get out as well,he was almost to ground.
"I cant I'm Corrnerd!"... Colonel Hunter called back "Blow! the joint and run!"

Kat knew she had to run.. Turrning she ran for all she was worth
She wasent far enough away, this could get ugly.

Colonel Hunter stood watching as the building went up,Clouds of smoke and fire litt the sky...Done he thourght
Moveing on he headed for the extraction zone,Kat was to meet him their.
Reaching the destination,Colonel Hunter servayed the area for hostiles,all clear.
Kat should be here by now..Calling her name speeking in a soft tone- waiting,no responce

Base..Colonel Hunter were the hell are you what happend. Kats readings have gone off the scales and she's not
ansering our calls.
"We had problems Sir, I'm going to look for her!"
No! The Ospray is comming in,You be on it,we'll have to hope she's all right,
I'll send troops in the morrning to find her.
She might not last that long sir. Colonel Hunter was already moveing,
"The Ospray cant wait Colonel!"
Heading off in the direction of the Buildings,He swore if their was one thing he would not do is leave a
fellow soldier alone in the feilds, dead or alive he would find her.

Kat lay on the ground wounded,everything hurt.She could barly move.
Hearing a noise she forced herself up and slid to near by bushes, Hideing.
Colonel Hunter crouched he had heard something,"Kat you hear me? answer me soldier"..Their was a silent
plea in his voice -god let her be alive,a buzzing sound came through his ear peice Kat?
Then a small noise came from a shrub" I'm here -over here"
She was alive but in a lot of pain,she had taken steel through her sholder as she'd tryed to escape..

Colonel Hunter to Base..."I found her!" ...
Get a move on Colonel the Ospray can't whate much longer!
Colonel Hunter lifted her in his arms and headed back towardes the pick up.
We can't whate any longer ,we have to go now! The piolet was getting worried the soldiers refused to get in
the Ospray," I see them!"
Running from the trees into the clearing
Move man! we have to get out of here,Colonel Hunter jumped in to the Ospray followed by the others,Thank god you
made it.the piolet took off

Colonel Hunter took what semed to be a small blood stained , lifeless body to the rear of the Ospray ,to a small room
it was were they stayed when asigned to covert opps, they were to talk to no one
While in the front of the Ospray the men stood as the door slamed shut, blood on the floor wondering if she
was dead or alive ,what had happend out their?

Colonel Hunter stood silent , she lay unconsouse ,he skilfuly treated her wounds cleaning away the blood
and dirt,re-mooving all the skrapnel,and stitching the area closed,
then covering her- "sleep you will be ok now",he spoke mainly to him self, knowing she dident hear a word.

She woke and noticed the Colonel sitting in a near by chair...."Why did you come for me?. wispering,
as her head pounded..you could have been killed!"
Colonel Hunter looked up -"Good to see your awake,I thourght I'd lost another Pyro",
Answer my question Colonel "why did you come back for me?"
Even wounded this girl was a real pain. " I'd never leave a man to die alone,and You! would have died".
Dead or alive I bring all my men back! and your one of my best ,besides I couldent be botherd breaking in
a new pyro!"
God it hurt to laugh but Kat couldent help herself..."Settle down soldier befor you bust a stich!"
"How long have I been out for Sir" "Nearly three days",and my name is Colonel Hunter ! ..now get some rest.
she dident argue she closed her eyes and went back to sleep

It was a few weeks now since she had recoverd,Kat spent most of her time in the pool and gym streching
her shoulder mussles ,keeping supple so as not to lose elastisity or strenth in her shoulder.
She owed the Colonel her life and wasent about to forget it.

He'd been comming and going while she recoverd from her last mission,she had to laugh at her self, at
least her non fatality record still stood -she was still alive-thanks again to Colonel Hunter.
Kat was slowley warming to this man...
Now fully recoverd, Kat was rearing to get back out on the feild, they were walking towards the Hangers,
"I think I'm ready to go back out "Kat looked at Colonel Hunter waiting for a reply,"I feel as fit as ever!..
You do do you? Colonel Hunter sent her a contraditing look "How fast can you run?" "Excuse Me!"
with that he took off.. Kat saw the chalenge and took it.

Both of them running -Kat close on His heels seeing an opperning she cut him off-Colonel Hunter lost his footing and
fell to the ground with a all mighty THUD- Kat stood laughing,next thing they were both on the ground
westling. The comossion bourght the soldiers close by running, to see what was going on,
Vinni called around yelling Colonel and Kat are Fighting, Soon we were surrounded by a dozen or so men.

Caught up in battle They dident notice the crowd gathering,

Colonel Hunter had taken Kat and had her pined to the ground. Sitting on top of her
How do you like that he said,"not badeh!"next thing Colonel Hunter was flying through the air then he was flat out on
his back. "Not too bad but I"m better!" ,"You think so do you?"
Kat smiled then befor she knew it Colonel Hunter was in her face ...As they both now stood faceing each other
Colonel Hunter smiled -"You are getting better, I see your've been practising?"
Kat was in a good mood enjoying the scuffle it had been a while since she'd done hand to hand
combat -most men shyed away from her afraid of her, afraid they might hurt her ,But not Colonel Hunter He held back
nothing.
No punches were thrown,this was strickley wresttling.Though Kat new she could throw a pounch when
it was needed of her,Kicks and blocks were all the go! the karate' moves swift and smooth.
Colonel Hunter caurght Kat off gaurd , she was in a head lock,Colonel Hunters nose just inches away from her ,she could feel
his breath on her face-
Colonel Hunter was fierd up enjoying the chalange-now he had her!," Get out of this if you can",Kat was pined fermly
against his chest,he could feel the rise of her breast as she breathed,surrprised that she'd hardly worked up a
sweat she had a steady rythem,only her heart beat gave her away,as It seemed to pound she was pumped up,
I could get to like this he said in her ear.Kat smiled to herself
She was getting ready to counter act the hold..

"WHAT THE HELL IS GOING ON HERE! " Colonel Hunter -still with Kat firmly in his grip spun arround-"BUSTED"! he
thourght ,as they both realised they had an audiance. Colonel Hunter quikly released Kat from his hold allowing them
both to stand at attention.

Doverty was Furiouse...TO MY OFFICE NOW!! Doverty leading the way.

Colonel Hunter- looked at Kat,grined and said we'll finish this later.
Kat -shoock her head "you won only by defolt,I had a counter attack for your hold"
Colonel Hunter laughted and they walked towards the office, as the soldiers moved back ,some one called out
"Go For him Kat,they all laughed. "back to work boys show is over"The soldiers whent on their way.

Standing in the office ,coverd in dust ,whateing for Doverty to turn around, they
new they were in for a grilling ,and they dident have long to whait

As Doverty turner they could see that he was rather upset, as well he should be they had acted
totaly out of control
"I dont know what was going on out their, but you are both my comanding officers what kind of conduct
do you call this -fighting in front of your men!"
Colonel Hunter looked at Kat then turned to Doverty.."I'm sorrie Sir it was all in good fun,Kat and myself were just
Horseing around Sir",I guess we both got carried away."Please Sir it was just as much my folt . I started it ,
Kat- dident want Colonel Hunter takeing all the blame, Doverty looked at her ,you? how?
Kat went on to explain how it all started.
Doverty lissend trying not to laugh- "this is rediculas you say it all started over a race!
Yes Sir ..the Colonel lost his balance, "YOU CUT ME OFF!"
Doverty lost it he had to sit down as his sides hurt so much from the laughter,
"Get out here!,before I have you both thrown in the lock up, go on git".
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Entering the loung Colonel Hunter stopped in his tracks,standing in the middle, Totaly absorbed in what she was doing.
Kat hadent noticed him walk into the room.She was dressed in her covert blacks,He felt his stomach twist,
his mouth go dry, he wet his lips, he spoke softly to him self,God she was stunning!,
That suit did nothing but esenchuate every curve,She was all woman no misstaking that.
He could see she was haveing problems with the new flack jacket.He couldent help but laugh at the
sight befor him.

Foccising on the job at hand ,curseing as she tryed to ajust the jacket that Doverty now insisted she wear
on every mission."It dosent feel right damed thing".Her head snaped up "What you laughing at!,
"Sorrie,I shouldent laugh, NO You shouldent now please leave.
Let me help!" Flack jackets need to be fitted properly so as not to restrict your movement in the feild"
"If you must"Kat glared at him.
Colonel Hunter took the jacket and placed it squarely on her shoulders,Fixing the laces so that they followed the curve
of her spine,turning her to face him he then started on the straps,moveing up to the zipper,his hands at
her waist he placed one hand inside the jacket so as not to catch her skin.

His hands were warm his fingers ruff ,as they slid past her breast,Catching her breath ,Kat watched as
Colonel Hunters hands mooved along her skin.She closed her eyes "This is to much!" It felt good her skin tingled
she thourght that she had,her feelings under control,"This was tourcher!"
"Hows that feel"?,Oh god help her," Wondeful" her voice bearley a wisper,correcting herself she added
"Fits perfect,thanks",Colonel Hunter noticed that his fingers lingerd too long,
"This woman was intoxicating" he steped back knowing to well that if he dident he might just kiss her ,
god knows he wanted to.

Quickly changeing the subject,"Its dangerouse out their!
"Dangerouse!"she forced a breathy sigh,"Mayby I should just wonder off to my lab and work around with
expolsives,I'm shaw that would be a lot safer!"Sarcasem,dident suit her at all.
"Thats not what I ment!,"Then tell me Colonel Hunter what did you mean?"
"I was trying to say Be carefull thats all,I'd hate to loose you, the boys here have become fond to you and
I dont wish to wish to see you hurt,You will be alone on this mission with no help from the Base"

"Or you!, "Colonel Hunter I owe you my life and I'll always remember that !"she protested ,a lump caught in her throught,
she dispised the huskyness in her voice, clearing her throught she continued, I've seen how explosives
in the wrong or in-experianced hands can do,I'm awear of the dangers of my job!,and dont bring up the past.
I'll never let myself be courght out like that again!",setteling her nerves,and takeing a deep breath she went on
quietly,"I'm sorry if I snapped,","I undestand all to well that if I'm caught,that Doverty and all thoughs in the
NSA will denie my very egsistance ,I'm no fool Colonel Hunter ,and I do! know whate I'm doing!"
Seeing through her anger he saw that she was a little scared this was her first solo mission after all

A mixture of alarm and pleasure rippled through her they cared about her safty,he cared!
her voice low,"We all have our reasons for doing whate we do!", so lets just forget about all this
and let me get on with the job.With that she pushed past him,and headed for the door.

Colonel Hunters hand landed heaverly on her shoulder,he spun her around,an involantary step placed her within
inches from his nose,she caught his stare!,Her arm in his firm grip,he'd never laid a hand on her in
anger befor,He knew she was a strong and very capable woman. pulling her arm,"Please I need to get my
pack, and Doverty whants to see me befor I go!"

Colonel Hunters mouth was on hers his,kiss was demanding but gentle, he moved closer pulling her to him he felt her
responce,soft yelding, wanting... Kat!."THE Ospray LEAVES IN TEN MINITS.
"DAM he realy did hate that thing" He droped his hand from her arm,"Be careful, Kat".
" I'm in no hurry to die,I'm always carefull but thanks just the same",Kat turned,grabbing her bag ,a little
confused had that realy hapend?...
She was sitting in the Ospray her mind spinning,"get it together Girl!" growling at herself it was
just a kiss. She'd kissed plenty of men in her time.So why did this one rattle her so much?
I'll be landing soon,I need to get over this.
Kat was to go in under cover as a personal assistant to one of the leaders of a munitions dealer ( smugglers),
her job was to find the depo destroy it and get all the intel on the people involved in the sales.
Four months Past....
It was late at night her boss hade requested that she stay behind and help with some extra work that he had
for for her.
Walking into her office, was the man she called Boss!The head of opperations.She'd spent the parst sixteen
weeks working for this man,he was a womaniser! God she dispised him. He an octopuss all hands!
An overbearing man who used his possision to get whate he wanted,unfortunatly at this moment he
wanted her!
This playing personal secratary was wearing thin.He placed his hand on the small of her back,
every mussle in her stiffend her reflexes twiched,she wanted to deck the pig.(steady girl dont blow this know!)
"Come"he sneeried,(she'd guess it was ment to be a smile),"Let me show you the heart of this business I'm
shaw you will be impressed!",Your've proven to me that you are the person I've been looking for,your
knowlage of computers and numbers is out standing.If you play your cards write I can garentee that this job
could be verry rewarding for us both.
Kat felt sick, She knew egzactly what he ment by Playing cards! Sleeze,I'd rather die first befor I would let
him any were nere me!
They came to a small door,nothing special she thourght!,she watched as he enterd a sercurity code,
(this looked like a closet!),now she was a little worried what was he planing to do?
The door opend it led to a small corradoor,The stench was unbearable,the smell a mixture of blood,sweat
and death filled the air.
Kat thourght she was going to pass out. Cells lined one wall,"Who are theise people?"
she tryed desperatly to hide the disssgust in her voice, " Traiters" dont worry your self with them",
was his reply.He spat in their direction.At least a dozen people,some women!
She could feel her anger rise,
"Come!",he grabed her arm pushing her forward, into another room at the end of the hall.
Thank god!,no wonder she couldent find it,the room was small though well set out,
computers lined one half of the back wall,the heavy door slamed shut behind them Kat flinched,
"No need to worrie Your pritty head lass as i said earlier I can make you a verry rich lady.
He steped towards her his breath was foul,and he was all over her.Kat screamed out,
he just laughed,"this Room is Sound proof my pritty, no one can hear you!
He crused her to his chest,He was a large man who thourght he had that to his addvantage.
How wrong he was. Kat with all her training and agillaty removed his grip swiftly,pushing him away
"I said NO!,he was angery, Swinging hard,Kat ducked,all he hit was air.His back now to her she took
advantage of the moment . A lifeless body now at her feet,Kat knew she had to move fast.

Quickly hacking into the computers sending all intel back to Base,Finding the codes to the Cells Kat
oppend them as she left, releasing the prisners,no one saw her, they scatted heading for the carpark
she had laid the charges earlier when she'd had the chance,now all she had to do was acctivate them.
"their thats done!",leaving the building she moved to a safe distance,"Free" "no more tweed suit she'd hated
that dress it was itchy and hot ,she now wore the black suit,this was more like it smooth and cool on her
skin,the flack jacket,thanks to Colonel Hunter fitted perfectly. The fire filled the sky with smoke.the detination had gone
off without a hitch,she'd tacken out a fuel depo just six weeks ago"Now all that was left is to blow the
munitions depo!" Then she could go home! ,HOME! she laughed! it sounds good.

Looking out the window of the Ospray Kat watched as the night sky was lit up ,the colours Crimsen
the black smoke a dark contrast to the red of the flames.A satersfide smile curled at her lips.She'd done it
her first mission was a success.

At the debreifing Kat stood ,wearie and tierd
Doverty was extreamly pleased to have her back in one peice,pleased that the mission had gone so well
he knew to well that she wouldent like the next bit of information that he had for her.
He explaind to her ,that two cervillians had been found dead that night,the officials had blamed them for
the explosions,an act of Terrerisam!.
Kat trembled with anger knowing full well she had killed them,her anger turned to shock as it dawned on her.

"Kat",Doverty broke into her thourts,"It's not your fault!,you were'nt to know,remember
if you hadent helped the others hey too would be dead.Dont dwel on it!", dissmised , You'll have a meal
deliverd to your quarters,now get cleaned up and some rest,you deserve it go!" "Thank you Sir I will.

She walked towards the showers,slowly removeing her jacket she tossed it, totaly missing the chair,
slamminginto the wall,she dident care the shower was the only place she wanted to be,"I'll pick it up latter!"

After her shower Kat walked in to the dinning area the smell of food in the air, her stomach
grumbled she moved towards the inviting arromers.

Colonel Hunter stood in the doorway of their quarters,as he watched her walk across the floor,He was so glad to see
her back, theise last few months had been quiet and he had to addmit, non eventfull since she left,she truly
was a sight for sore eyes,the last time they had been together was the night she had left the same night he
had kissed her,How would she react now when she saw him?" He dident regtett the kiss, it had brought back
to life a part of him wich he had thourt was dead! "But how would she react ?"

Not knowing if she was hungry or not she sat ,"I'm so tired , I can't eat,maybe I should
just go to bed!"She sudenly realised she wasent alone,for a split second she thourght she was back at that
building,the hairs on the back off her neck prickeld.
The chair went skidding across the floor,"Kat sprung into action her nerves were a weck,she had him by the
throught,"You make one wrong move and I will kill you!,"Kat!", "Its me Colonel Hunter!,She'd scared the life out of him,
"whote the hell hapend to you out their?"
She was trembling as she held him,releasing him so fast that he moved backwards trying to regain his feet
"Nothing!",nothing hapend!" "Don't lie to me! I can see it in your eyes,
if I hadent spoken,I think you may well have tryed to kill me! Tell me what happend to you?"
"I'm just a little over tierd,thats all I'm fine, at least I will be when I've had some rest".
"Kat?"
"Dont ask ,you know I am not aloud to talk about this" her voice was no more than a silent wisper,a plea",
"Please dont ask me again",
His heart was skiped,whot the "Hell" had happend to her?she was a bundle off nerves,"First thing in the
morrning,he would see Doverty!
Kat was watching Colonel Hunter as he rubed his neck,"That was a pritty strong grip you have their,remind me never
to get you angery"smileing, Kat moved to stand infront of him "promise me you will never sneek up on me
again ,while your at it". "Thats a Promise!"

Kat lifted her hand and placed it on Colonel Hunters neck,she noticed that a large
welt was vissable were her arm had been," I could have killed you!"I'm sorry",
Colonel Hunter saw the hurt in her eyes,the single tear .He couldent help himself,Kissing her
were it sat,slowly working more kisses down her face on to her lips.Her responce was breath tacking
her lips warm on his own,he pulled her closer,He! neaded her closer,a damp rob was all that stood between
them,as his hand slid up onto her skin he could feel her trembling,her hand was around his neck,holding
him close,as the palm of his hand moved over her nipple,Her voice low,trembling
Colonel Hunter please "This is insane",we souldent be doing this!",

"Then stop me!"his own voice betraying how he felt,"Tell me to stop and I will!"
She said nothing as his mouth was now at her breast,he had her back to the wall,"Pease Colonel Hunter",
His mouth was so warm on her skin,and she wanted him.
As he lifted her in to his arms , she looked in to his eyes,she could see a hunger in him,
A little scared off what was to come.
The pound of his own heart was all he could hear as he took her lips with his own.
Colonel Hunter asked "Just say the word and you can leave!She looked in to his eyes,the desire that lay within him flared
Fighting her own want she titend her robe,kissed him,and left!
Stuned he watched her leave,he wanted her,but he would wait,when she was readt to come to him,
it would be without reservation,without regret. He would have her ,body and sole she would be his and his
alone. He wanted to protect her,love her!
With the risks that woman takes she needs a protector,smileing to himself " I need a shower... a cold one!
Stripping he headed off.


Tomorrow is a promise to no one.

Death is a shadow.
always their,
Even when not seen.

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10-22-2003, 10:07 AM
Bee warned it can get a little warm in here
please for give spelling.and lack of punchuation



A solitary soldier, returns from yet another mission compleated to perfection, standing at over six foot he
towerd most of the others around him .Though ,he made no coments he lisend to the conversation going
on.
Vinni spoke ..."Theres a roumer going around that a new recroot was comming in... a Pyrotecnition,
no one knows the soldiers mame or rank just that he was comming in verry soon".
Vinni and all the others were enthousiastic about the new man and were looking forward to meeting him".
I hope hes better than the last one!!"

"Oh! Great !! yet another roockie to blow himself away!!,l Hunter wasent amused!
Turning Vinni looked up , Colonel Hunter was standing behind him, stepping back ,falling flat on his back every
one every one arround him laughed.

Did I scare you?.. smileling to himself, Whats this all about?
Vinni stammerd 'No! ..It.. Its true ,I heard the talk just this morrning"

Thinking no more of the conversation he headed over to his office Sighing as he enterd ,glad he was back
and looking forward to a long hot shower,His quarters were designed for two officers though he was
thankfull no one had the other room.
As he slowly started to strip off his shoulders acked, god he was sore ,he'd landed awequidley when he
jumped from a plane earlier that week,his back rippled as he streched his arms and shoulders......

DOVERTY WANTS TO SEE YOU IN HIS OFFICE !
Colonel Hunter..Crist I hate that damed speeker...muttering, "I'm Haveing a Shower!!!.
HE SAYS NOW Colonel!.... Ok! ok, tell him I'm comming.

Hunter had been part of this platoon, training camp for a considerable time, longer than he care to remember.
He was one of the boys yet he diddent exsist,not officualy any way if he were to be courght by the
enamy,his own people would denie his verry egsistance.
Life was hard enough, with out worring about family or loved ones Both of which he dident have.
He led a solatary life,and that was how he liked it...

Walking in to Dovertys office he saw that look in his eyes
Dovety..."My god man you look beet"

I'll get streight to the point as you know this is a milatary training camp we have specialists in all feilds.
"We have a new solder comming in!"

Hunter ...Yer? I heard the talk."Whats it to do with me Sir?","Your more than one of the men here and you know that more than any one on Base", "Sir?".

Wer've bourght in a new Coverts opperator,theirs been times when we have needed more than one man for a job.This soldier is the best in in pyrotecnics and infultrations....


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As he spoke his eyes slowly scaned the room,standing to one side in full dress uniform was a very attractive
woman,from were he was he could make out that she was a little under six foot black /brown
hair (braided) he figerd that she would be in her late therties, still she looked so fresh standing behind
glass.. like a doll he thourght to himself.....

She stood,hardly moveing except for the rise and fall of her breathing,observing thoughs how
stood befor her,Colonel Hunter figerd she was a secratery a little over dressed.

Doverty cleared his throught.... Hunter?.. "Sorrie Sir!"

Doverty smiled....Top looking lady dont you think?..
"Yes Sir Top looking",a little Stiff looking though! shaw she's real?
Doverty laughed.. I"m glad you like her, as she stood behind a sound proof glass wall she
wase'nt capable of hearing the conversation.

She stood in the preperations room, God its cold in here she thourght, a girl could freeze to death in here.
She could only see Dovertys back
But had a good veiw of the soldier standing in front of him

He was a ruggerd,very fit man , black hair silver threded on the sides very
distiguished though quite scruffy coverd in dust and what looked like mud."Must be a debrief ".

Kat had noticed that the soldier glanced her way

As thay spoke She was nervous as to the conversation,she knew that they were probly now talking
about her.

she'd been brought in as a replacment Pyrotecnition.
For some guy who had been killed a while back she wasent to shaw ,how all theise men would feel
about a female in their ranks ,This she was use to ,as most men seamed to think she wasent up to the job,
she had always proved them wrong,makeing many reliable associates along the way.
She had been on more than her share of missions both as team player and on solo co vert missions.
Kat also new she was the one for this job,and would prove herself here as well.

The General of her previose Station had rec-amended her to Doverty,saying that she is the rite
soldier for this job,she had no family,this was her life it was all she knew.

I'M NOT Stiff!, he thinks I'm stiff...she'd read his lips.

A small beep came over the speeker. Shortly after a rather larg man enterd her room.Come with me
Miss..
Following him around to a small corradore through to Dovertys office...This is it she said, "In to the
lions den!"...the man smiled .."my name is Jon" Miss,No need to worry ,
"Doverty is a top man!" ,Kat looked at Jon.."Hes not the one I'm worried about". Kat gatherd her wits
standing tall she walked over to the men standing at the Desk

Colonel Hunter watched as they walked accross the floor towards them.



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Sir..Standing at attention Kat salouted Dovety

Doverty extended his hand...No need for that here Kat were all On eqale standing here...
Colonel, my man, This... is your new Pyrotecnition...

"Parden?" . I thourght she was your secratery!.. speaking aloud and regretting it streight away.
Kats looked him in the eye typical she thourght...."Sorry to dissapoint you Sir" , takeing an instent disslike
for the man... My name is "Colonel Hunter" he replyed.

Doverty... Hunter!, as the two top ranking officers I was hopeing you would get along,I have it on good orthority that Kat here is the best in the feild of Pyrotechnics. She's here to stay ,so you and the other men will have to accept that she is now part of the team!

"She's a woman! ,were in Hell will we put her ,theirs no facillaties for females on this Base!!

Shes bunking in with you!, you have the only quarters that are suited, to shareing , the showers etc ,
I hope will not be a hassle, Im shaw you will work things out ,as for the rooms you have two seperate areas,
devided by a wall.I'll hear no more! Dis-smised. Colonel Colt Hunter stormed out of the office leaving Kat standing with
Doverty and Jon.
"I am sorry you had to hear all that Kat,Colonel Hunter is a Seasond Officer,he should know better!" .
"Sir ,please dont worry about me when it comes to not Fitting in' its all water off a ducks back to me!
I find it every were I go I'm strong Sir ,I tend to keep to myself and just get on with my job.

Doverty was impressed,Good to hear,I'll get my man here to show you to your quarters, I'm shaw you will settle right in.

The Room was musty smelling ,though well cleaned, they hand known she was comming.
A larger open area she was told is the rec area ,TV in one corrner and a couple of chairs and table in the other in
the midle was a loung, this was the area that we would (share )..over to the right was her room, and small
office. Jon explained that the rooms off to my left was the Colonels
Kat could see that the shower area was the deviding wall Between the sleeping areas and the shared liveing quarters, Doverty had spoken of,interesting she thourght.

"I can see it will take a little getting use to ,well, we'll just have to stay out of each others way,
Something I'm good at!"........Jon said his good byes wishing her luck with her new post.
Kat new she would need it. Heading for her room she quickle unpacked her things changed and left streight
for the Labs..time to get aquainted with her surroundings and new home.





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Colonel Hunter was in the shower ,with the water bighting into his skin,he'd turnd the tap on full pelt,"Why me? what
did i do to deserve this... A woman!!" for the love of ......settle down.. he thourght to himself ,dont get all
rield up over this.
She want last ,the men will not be to acceptting of a female in the troops.though they
had no choice in the matter,like him they would do as orderd.
She'll probley get herself killed first day out on the feild...God no! dont think that way..no one deserves that.
He settled ,feeling just that little bit more relaxed,the water was doing the job of soothing his thourghts,and
his sore and tied limbs.Re-moving himself form the shower he dressed, Knowing that she would by now
be in the next room,time to face this.

He was just a little taken aback as he walked in to the main room,nothing no one their.
he'd figerd she was in her room.Good he dissided heading to his office theirs paper work to do!
It would be weeks before Colonel Hunter caught sight of her again.

She had thought it better to stay out of the Colonels way and just get on with her work , wich for the
moment was in the lab, she'd been working with two young men in the pyro department she'd been given
the men as Trainees, trying to teach them what she can, Pyrotecnitions were a scarce breed,many being
killed through lack of knowlage and skill.
The two men ,quite a lot younger than herself were she felt just only boys.

Kat spent most of her spare time in the training area keeping her skills tuned for when thay would be needed,
she prided herself in her fitness, honning in on her targets and distroying all in sight ,Kat longed to get back
out in the feild.It had been quiet of late with most missions being basic seeze and capture not requiering
her special skills and knowlage.

Colonel Hunter walked up to her, .."How you setteling in?" ..

"Their keeping me bussie and on my toes in the labs, I'm settling in just fine thanks!"

Colonel Hunter watched for her reaction to his next words,"The men here will find it Hard to take orders
from a woman."
Kat ,bit back."Orders Must be followed even by me! their lives Will depend on total loyalty and trust. IF!
I give an order ,I will expect it to be carried out in full no questions asked!" Now she was angery .
"Your a real fire cracker arnt you?" A Pyrotecnition with an attatude problem"
Kats face was red,I'm not the one with problems!"

Bighting his liptrying not to smile,more like nitro he thourght to him self ready to blow at any time.
I'd better watch this one carfuly, as she turn away.
She look totaly diferant in the the cloths she wore,put together,well and nicley toned,verry nice.



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He had to addmit she was good to look at.Her fetchures stunning,thoughs lips verry inviting,
"God man snap out of it!"

This girl wasent the skinny or fragile thing he took her for in the office,she was nearly as tall as himself.
He could see now, that she was extreamly fit ,her arms and torso showed years of self dissaplin,well toned
muscells, in the singlet and long leg shorts their was no mistakeing She was all woman.

She looked every bit as fit as himself,
Kat steamed off heading for yet another work out.
They're yet to send Kat on a mission ,though she still liked to go through the drill over at the munitions area,
Trying out diferent detination sequences.
Kat knew it would be a while before most of the men would trust her,they had tolerated her so far
but she was still a long way off their acceptance.She was still verry much the out sider.
So till then she would keep up the training..

It had been a long six months since Kat had been assigned to her new troops three in all,
she had prooven herself to all the men she now worked with.She was finaly one of the boys!

The hardest being the Colonels men,all of them the most experianced group,
The cream of the crop so to speek.
He had pushed her to her limits many times and she had shinned through,never letting them down.

She was pumped and ready for action.Glad she was back in the feilds.

Later that eaverning as they sat in the loung ,listerning to the local station on the radio,

COLT!..Kat!..DOVERTY NEEDS TO SEE YOU BOTH IN HIS OFFICE NOW !

Grabbing their things thay headed over.

Doverty stood as they ented the room......"I have a mission for you both! Covert you,under stand!"
You will be working together on this one.
I need you both on the Ospray in fifteen minits.you'll be briefed once in the air.

Sitting in the hurculies not knowing where the drop was, only what was to be done,
silent knowing they would soon be in hostile territory.

In the back of the Ospray she sat quietly scycing herself up for the mission ahead she had always
seperated herself from all around her when she needed the space, it had been nearly two years since her last
covert opp,she felt the twist in her belly..
This would be her maiden mission ,sitting accross from her,the Colonel seemed, totaly in control,calm!

The boys slept as they moved silently to the rear of the Ospray
wearing the cochlear implants joining them to the computers back at Base ,the subdermals Tracking
their every move, Base would see what they see and hear what they heard. It also linked Kat and Colonel Hunter as one,
( this was a new twist for them both) communication between was of great importance.As Colonel Hunter was
entering the building - she was to disstroy.

Doverty..You hear me people?
Yes Sir, loud and clear..
Ready to get to work?
Yes Sir

Then they were gone..

Entering the building from the ground they headed in diferent directions Colonel Hunter found a shaft and climbed in,
slowly he worked his way through the maze of vents.Comming to the end he slid on to the floor he'd
been looking for.
The building was deserted as they had been told in the brief....
quickly and silantley he headed for his target, a room on the left, he found the
computers with help from Anna back at Base they hacked in and re-moved all the intel they needed.
He was on his way out of their..
Her voice was soft,urgent, Colonel Hunter? ..you hear me? "Yep go ahead", your've got company get out of their,
I've just seen three trucks pulling in! Moove!

It had been twenty minnits since they last made contact,Kat had already placed the charges where they would
do the most damage..This place is supose to be empty whats going on?Three men jumped from one of the
trucks a fourth came from the building,Colonel Hunter! were are you?..I'm going to have to hit the switch get out!!
I'm on my way down you get out as well,he was almost to ground.
"I cant I'm Corrnerd!"... Colonel Hunter called back "Blow! the joint and run!"

Kat knew she had to run.. Turrning she ran for all she was worth
She wasent far enough away, this could get ugly.

Colonel Hunter stood watching as the building went up,Clouds of smoke and fire litt the sky...Done he thourght
Moveing on he headed for the extraction zone,Kat was to meet him their.
Reaching the destination,Colonel Hunter servayed the area for hostiles,all clear.
Kat should be here by now..Calling her name speeking in a soft tone- waiting,no responce

Base..Colonel Hunter were the hell are you what happend. Kats readings have gone off the scales and she's not
ansering our calls.
"We had problems Sir, I'm going to look for her!"
No! The Ospray is comming in,You be on it,we'll have to hope she's all right,
I'll send troops in the morrning to find her.
She might not last that long sir. Colonel Hunter was already moveing,
"The Ospray cant wait Colonel!"
Heading off in the direction of the Buildings,He swore if their was one thing he would not do is leave a
fellow soldier alone in the feilds, dead or alive he would find her.

Kat lay on the ground wounded,everything hurt.She could barly move.
Hearing a noise she forced herself up and slid to near by bushes, Hideing.
Colonel Hunter crouched he had heard something,"Kat you hear me? answer me soldier"..Their was a silent
plea in his voice -god let her be alive,a buzzing sound came through his ear peice Kat?
Then a small noise came from a shrub" I'm here -over here"
She was alive but in a lot of pain,she had taken steel through her sholder as she'd tryed to escape..

Colonel Hunter to Base..."I found her!" ...
Get a move on Colonel the Ospray can't whate much longer!
Colonel Hunter lifted her in his arms and headed back towardes the pick up.
We can't whate any longer ,we have to go now! The piolet was getting worried the soldiers refused to get in
the Ospray," I see them!"
Running from the trees into the clearing
Move man! we have to get out of here,Colonel Hunter jumped in to the Ospray followed by the others,Thank god you
made it.the piolet took off

Colonel Hunter took what semed to be a small blood stained , lifeless body to the rear of the Ospray ,to a small room
it was were they stayed when asigned to covert opps, they were to talk to no one
While in the front of the Ospray the men stood as the door slamed shut, blood on the floor wondering if she
was dead or alive ,what had happend out their?

Colonel Hunter stood silent , she lay unconsouse ,he skilfuly treated her wounds cleaning away the blood
and dirt,re-mooving all the skrapnel,and stitching the area closed,
then covering her- "sleep you will be ok now",he spoke mainly to him self, knowing she dident hear a word.

She woke and noticed the Colonel sitting in a near by chair...."Why did you come for me?. wispering,
as her head pounded..you could have been killed!"
Colonel Hunter looked up -"Good to see your awake,I thourght I'd lost another Pyro",
Answer my question Colonel "why did you come back for me?"
Even wounded this girl was a real pain. " I'd never leave a man to die alone,and You! would have died".
Dead or alive I bring all my men back! and your one of my best ,besides I couldent be botherd breaking in
a new pyro!"
God it hurt to laugh but Kat couldent help herself..."Settle down soldier befor you bust a stich!"
"How long have I been out for Sir" "Nearly three days",and my name is Colonel Hunter ! ..now get some rest.
she dident argue she closed her eyes and went back to sleep

It was a few weeks now since she had recoverd,Kat spent most of her time in the pool and gym streching
her shoulder mussles ,keeping supple so as not to lose elastisity or strenth in her shoulder.
She owed the Colonel her life and wasent about to forget it.

He'd been comming and going while she recoverd from her last mission,she had to laugh at her self, at
least her non fatality record still stood -she was still alive-thanks again to Colonel Hunter.
Kat was slowley warming to this man...
Now fully recoverd, Kat was rearing to get back out on the feild, they were walking towards the Hangers,
"I think I'm ready to go back out "Kat looked at Colonel Hunter waiting for a reply,"I feel as fit as ever!..
You do do you? Colonel Hunter sent her a contraditing look "How fast can you run?" "Excuse Me!"
with that he took off.. Kat saw the chalenge and took it.

Both of them running -Kat close on His heels seeing an opperning she cut him off-Colonel Hunter lost his footing and
fell to the ground with a all mighty THUD- Kat stood laughing,next thing they were both on the ground
westling. The comossion bourght the soldiers close by running, to see what was going on,
Vinni called around yelling Colonel and Kat are Fighting, Soon we were surrounded by a dozen or so men.

Caught up in battle They dident notice the crowd gathering,

Colonel Hunter had taken Kat and had her pined to the ground. Sitting on top of her
How do you like that he said,"not badeh!"next thing Colonel Hunter was flying through the air then he was flat out on
his back. "Not too bad but I"m better!" ,"You think so do you?"
Kat smiled then befor she knew it Colonel Hunter was in her face ...As they both now stood faceing each other
Colonel Hunter smiled -"You are getting better, I see your've been practising?"
Kat was in a good mood enjoying the scuffle it had been a while since she'd done hand to hand
combat -most men shyed away from her afraid of her, afraid they might hurt her ,But not Colonel Hunter He held back
nothing.
No punches were thrown,this was strickley wresttling.Though Kat new she could throw a pounch when
it was needed of her,Kicks and blocks were all the go! the karate' moves swift and smooth.
Colonel Hunter caurght Kat off gaurd , she was in a head lock,Colonel Hunters nose just inches away from her ,she could feel
his breath on her face-
Colonel Hunter was fierd up enjoying the chalange-now he had her!," Get out of this if you can",Kat was pined fermly
against his chest,he could feel the rise of her breast as she breathed,surrprised that she'd hardly worked up a
sweat she had a steady rythem,only her heart beat gave her away,as It seemed to pound she was pumped up,
I could get to like this he said in her ear.Kat smiled to herself
She was getting ready to counter act the hold..

"WHAT THE HELL IS GOING ON HERE! " Colonel Hunter -still with Kat firmly in his grip spun arround-"BUSTED"! he
thourght ,as they both realised they had an audiance. Colonel Hunter quikly released Kat from his hold allowing them
both to stand at attention.

Doverty was Furiouse...TO MY OFFICE NOW!! Doverty leading the way.

Colonel Hunter- looked at Kat,grined and said we'll finish this later.
Kat -shoock her head "you won only by defolt,I had a counter attack for your hold"
Colonel Hunter laughted and they walked towards the office, as the soldiers moved back ,some one called out
"Go For him Kat,they all laughed. "back to work boys show is over"The soldiers whent on their way.

Standing in the office ,coverd in dust ,whateing for Doverty to turn around, they
new they were in for a grilling ,and they dident have long to whait

As Doverty turner they could see that he was rather upset, as well he should be they had acted
totaly out of control
"I dont know what was going on out their, but you are both my comanding officers what kind of conduct
do you call this -fighting in front of your men!"
Colonel Hunter looked at Kat then turned to Doverty.."I'm sorrie Sir it was all in good fun,Kat and myself were just
Horseing around Sir",I guess we both got carried away."Please Sir it was just as much my folt . I started it ,
Kat- dident want Colonel Hunter takeing all the blame, Doverty looked at her ,you? how?
Kat went on to explain how it all started.
Doverty lissend trying not to laugh- "this is rediculas you say it all started over a race!
Yes Sir ..the Colonel lost his balance, "YOU CUT ME OFF!"
Doverty lost it he had to sit down as his sides hurt so much from the laughter,
"Get out here!,before I have you both thrown in the lock up, go on git".
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Entering the loung Colonel Hunter stopped in his tracks,standing in the middle, Totaly absorbed in what she was doing.
Kat hadent noticed him walk into the room.She was dressed in her covert blacks,He felt his stomach twist,
his mouth go dry, he wet his lips, he spoke softly to him self,God she was stunning!,
That suit did nothing but esenchuate every curve,She was all woman no misstaking that.
He could see she was haveing problems with the new flack jacket.He couldent help but laugh at the
sight befor him.

Foccising on the job at hand ,curseing as she tryed to ajust the jacket that Doverty now insisted she wear
on every mission."It dosent feel right damed thing".Her head snaped up "What you laughing at!,
"Sorrie,I shouldent laugh, NO You shouldent now please leave.
Let me help!" Flack jackets need to be fitted properly so as not to restrict your movement in the feild"
"If you must"Kat glared at him.
Colonel Hunter took the jacket and placed it squarely on her shoulders,Fixing the laces so that they followed the curve
of her spine,turning her to face him he then started on the straps,moveing up to the zipper,his hands at
her waist he placed one hand inside the jacket so as not to catch her skin.

His hands were warm his fingers ruff ,as they slid past her breast,Catching her breath ,Kat watched as
Colonel Hunters hands mooved along her skin.She closed her eyes "This is to much!" It felt good her skin tingled
she thourght that she had,her feelings under control,"This was tourcher!"
"Hows that feel"?,Oh god help her," Wondeful" her voice bearley a wisper,correcting herself she added
"Fits perfect,thanks",Colonel Hunter noticed that his fingers lingerd too long,
"This woman was intoxicating" he steped back knowing to well that if he dident he might just kiss her ,
god knows he wanted to.

Quickly changeing the subject,"Its dangerouse out their!
"Dangerouse!"she forced a breathy sigh,"Mayby I should just wonder off to my lab and work around with
expolsives,I'm shaw that would be a lot safer!"Sarcasem,dident suit her at all.
"Thats not what I ment!,"Then tell me Colonel Hunter what did you mean?"
"I was trying to say Be carefull thats all,I'd hate to loose you, the boys here have become fond to you and
I dont wish to wish to see you hurt,You will be alone on this mission with no help from the Base"

"Or you!, "Colonel Hunter I owe you my life and I'll always remember that !"she protested ,a lump caught in her throught,
she dispised the huskyness in her voice, clearing her throught she continued, I've seen how explosives
in the wrong or in-experianced hands can do,I'm awear of the dangers of my job!,and dont bring up the past.
I'll never let myself be courght out like that again!",setteling her nerves,and takeing a deep breath she went on
quietly,"I'm sorry if I snapped,","I undestand all to well that if I'm caught,that Doverty and all thoughs in the
NSA will denie my very egsistance ,I'm no fool Colonel Hunter ,and I do! know whate I'm doing!"
Seeing through her anger he saw that she was a little scared this was her first solo mission after all

A mixture of alarm and pleasure rippled through her they cared about her safty,he cared!
her voice low,"We all have our reasons for doing whate we do!", so lets just forget about all this
and let me get on with the job.With that she pushed past him,and headed for the door.

Colonel Hunters hand landed heaverly on her shoulder,he spun her around,an involantary step placed her within
inches from his nose,she caught his stare!,Her arm in his firm grip,he'd never laid a hand on her in
anger befor,He knew she was a strong and very capable woman. pulling her arm,"Please I need to get my
pack, and Doverty whants to see me befor I go!"

Colonel Hunters mouth was on hers his,kiss was demanding but gentle, he moved closer pulling her to him he felt her
responce,soft yelding, wanting... Kat!."THE Ospray LEAVES IN TEN MINITS.
"DAM he realy did hate that thing" He droped his hand from her arm,"Be careful, Kat".
" I'm in no hurry to die,I'm always carefull but thanks just the same",Kat turned,grabbing her bag ,a little
confused had that realy hapend?...
She was sitting in the Ospray her mind spinning,"get it together Girl!" growling at herself it was
just a kiss. She'd kissed plenty of men in her time.So why did this one rattle her so much?
I'll be landing soon,I need to get over this.
Kat was to go in under cover as a personal assistant to one of the leaders of a munitions dealer ( smugglers),
her job was to find the depo destroy it and get all the intel on the people involved in the sales.
Four months Past....
It was late at night her boss hade requested that she stay behind and help with some extra work that he had
for for her.
Walking into her office, was the man she called Boss!The head of opperations.She'd spent the parst sixteen
weeks working for this man,he was a womaniser! God she dispised him. He an octopuss all hands!
An overbearing man who used his possision to get whate he wanted,unfortunatly at this moment he
wanted her!
This playing personal secratary was wearing thin.He placed his hand on the small of her back,
every mussle in her stiffend her reflexes twiched,she wanted to deck the pig.(steady girl dont blow this know!)
"Come"he sneeried,(she'd guess it was ment to be a smile),"Let me show you the heart of this business I'm
shaw you will be impressed!",Your've proven to me that you are the person I've been looking for,your
knowlage of computers and numbers is out standing.If you play your cards write I can garentee that this job
could be verry rewarding for us both.
Kat felt sick, She knew egzactly what he ment by Playing cards! Sleeze,I'd rather die first befor I would let
him any were nere me!
They came to a small door,nothing special she thourght!,she watched as he enterd a sercurity code,
(this looked like a closet!),now she was a little worried what was he planing to do?
The door opend it led to a small corradoor,The stench was unbearable,the smell a mixture of blood,sweat
and death filled the air.
Kat thourght she was going to pass out. Cells lined one wall,"Who are theise people?"
she tryed desperatly to hide the disssgust in her voice, " Traiters" dont worry your self with them",
was his reply.He spat in their direction.At least a dozen people,some women!
She could feel her anger rise,
"Come!",he grabed her arm pushing her forward, into another room at the end of the hall.
Thank god!,no wonder she couldent find it,the room was small though well set out,
computers lined one half of the back wall,the heavy door slamed shut behind them Kat flinched,
"No need to worrie Your pritty head lass as i said earlier I can make you a verry rich lady.
He steped towards her his breath was foul,and he was all over her.Kat screamed out,
he just laughed,"this Room is Sound proof my pritty, no one can hear you!
He crused her to his chest,He was a large man who thourght he had that to his addvantage.
How wrong he was. Kat with all her training and agillaty removed his grip swiftly,pushing him away
"I said NO!,he was angery, Swinging hard,Kat ducked,all he hit was air.His back now to her she took
advantage of the moment . A lifeless body now at her feet,Kat knew she had to move fast.

Quickly hacking into the computers sending all intel back to Base,Finding the codes to the Cells Kat
oppend them as she left, releasing the prisners,no one saw her, they scatted heading for the carpark
she had laid the charges earlier when she'd had the chance,now all she had to do was acctivate them.
"their thats done!",leaving the building she moved to a safe distance,"Free" "no more tweed suit she'd hated
that dress it was itchy and hot ,she now wore the black suit,this was more like it smooth and cool on her
skin,the flack jacket,thanks to Colonel Hunter fitted perfectly. The fire filled the sky with smoke.the detination had gone
off without a hitch,she'd tacken out a fuel depo just six weeks ago"Now all that was left is to blow the
munitions depo!" Then she could go home! ,HOME! she laughed! it sounds good.

Looking out the window of the Ospray Kat watched as the night sky was lit up ,the colours Crimsen
the black smoke a dark contrast to the red of the flames.A satersfide smile curled at her lips.She'd done it
her first mission was a success.

At the debreifing Kat stood ,wearie and tierd
Doverty was extreamly pleased to have her back in one peice,pleased that the mission had gone so well
he knew to well that she wouldent like the next bit of information that he had for her.
He explaind to her ,that two cervillians had been found dead that night,the officials had blamed them for
the explosions,an act of Terrerisam!.
Kat trembled with anger knowing full well she had killed them,her anger turned to shock as it dawned on her.

"Kat",Doverty broke into her thourts,"It's not your fault!,you were'nt to know,remember
if you hadent helped the others hey too would be dead.Dont dwel on it!", dissmised , You'll have a meal
deliverd to your quarters,now get cleaned up and some rest,you deserve it go!" "Thank you Sir I will.

She walked towards the showers,slowly removeing her jacket she tossed it, totaly missing the chair,
slamminginto the wall,she dident care the shower was the only place she wanted to be,"I'll pick it up latter!"

After her shower Kat walked in to the dinning area the smell of food in the air, her stomach
grumbled she moved towards the inviting arromers.

Colonel Hunter stood in the doorway of their quarters,as he watched her walk across the floor,He was so glad to see
her back, theise last few months had been quiet and he had to addmit, non eventfull since she left,she truly
was a sight for sore eyes,the last time they had been together was the night she had left the same night he
had kissed her,How would she react now when she saw him?" He dident regtett the kiss, it had brought back
to life a part of him wich he had thourt was dead! "But how would she react ?"

Not knowing if she was hungry or not she sat ,"I'm so tired , I can't eat,maybe I should
just go to bed!"She sudenly realised she wasent alone,for a split second she thourght she was back at that
building,the hairs on the back off her neck prickeld.
The chair went skidding across the floor,"Kat sprung into action her nerves were a weck,she had him by the
throught,"You make one wrong move and I will kill you!,"Kat!", "Its me Colonel Hunter!,She'd scared the life out of him,
"whote the hell hapend to you out their?"
She was trembling as she held him,releasing him so fast that he moved backwards trying to regain his feet
"Nothing!",nothing hapend!" "Don't lie to me! I can see it in your eyes,
if I hadent spoken,I think you may well have tryed to kill me! Tell me what happend to you?"
"I'm just a little over tierd,thats all I'm fine, at least I will be when I've had some rest".
"Kat?"
"Dont ask ,you know I am not aloud to talk about this" her voice was no more than a silent wisper,a plea",
"Please dont ask me again",
His heart was skiped,whot the "Hell" had happend to her?she was a bundle off nerves,"First thing in the
morrning,he would see Doverty!
Kat was watching Colonel Hunter as he rubed his neck,"That was a pritty strong grip you have their,remind me never
to get you angery"smileing, Kat moved to stand infront of him "promise me you will never sneek up on me
again ,while your at it". "Thats a Promise!"

Kat lifted her hand and placed it on Colonel Hunters neck,she noticed that a large
welt was vissable were her arm had been," I could have killed you!"I'm sorry",
Colonel Hunter saw the hurt in her eyes,the single tear .He couldent help himself,Kissing her
were it sat,slowly working more kisses down her face on to her lips.Her responce was breath tacking
her lips warm on his own,he pulled her closer,He! neaded her closer,a damp rob was all that stood between
them,as his hand slid up onto her skin he could feel her trembling,her hand was around his neck,holding
him close,as the palm of his hand moved over her nipple,Her voice low,trembling
Colonel Hunter please "This is insane",we souldent be doing this!",

"Then stop me!"his own voice betraying how he felt,"Tell me to stop and I will!"
She said nothing as his mouth was now at her breast,he had her back to the wall,"Pease Colonel Hunter",
His mouth was so warm on her skin,and she wanted him.
As he lifted her in to his arms , she looked in to his eyes,she could see a hunger in him,
A little scared off what was to come.
The pound of his own heart was all he could hear as he took her lips with his own.
Colonel Hunter asked "Just say the word and you can leave!She looked in to his eyes,the desire that lay within him flared
Fighting her own want she titend her robe,kissed him,and left!
Stuned he watched her leave,he wanted her,but he would wait,when she was readt to come to him,
it would be without reservation,without regret. He would have her ,body and sole she would be his and his
alone. He wanted to protect her,love her!
With the risks that woman takes she needs a protector,smileing to himself " I need a shower... a cold one!
Stripping he headed off.


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XyZspineZyX
10-22-2003, 12:33 PM
Must apolagise for all the colenal hunters used spell check and hit wrong button when i down loaded..Hope this isent to hot to handle ..I did tone it down a bit../i/smilies/16x16_smiley-happy.gif

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XyZspineZyX
10-22-2003, 08:42 PM
can you give a summary of what it's about?

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XyZspineZyX
10-23-2003, 03:18 AM
They are two top of the line NSA who first meet by accedent.The woman badly wounded after a mission was sabutarged.(she'd been betrayed by one of her own,who? she would find out later!).

Kat is forced down when blown off course during a storm their Hawk dammaged, they land on what they thourght to be a deserted island.Only to find them selves surrounded by a Group of Net Cells (soldiers that would usualy be used as back up )

The hawk captured the crew removed and Hunter is tacken to a high sercurity area where Colt (who is the colenal and highest ranking soldier on the island).He prosseds to mend the wounded man ( Kat is dressed in covert Blacks and wears a small microchip which changes the pitch of her voice makeing her sound more male than Female,Not even the men she works with Know she's a woman!)

Years later she is captured (by her own people) Forced to under go Experimentl Procedures.Colt finds out about her through a mutual Aquantents.And sets out to Rescue her...when No one would...The old antage being if captured you dident egzist!
When she is foun her memmory of him has been whiped clean ( the goverment call this Re-programming,its how they control their more important Agent Forcing them to become something their not!)


Basicly They become friends,who remeet for a couple of missions.The book finishes when she is Posted on the Island as a Professor of Pyrotecnics.This is her day job so to speek!



The book is based on two NSA agents who are forced to work together In the begining they dont tend to get on to well,Both highly traned in their chosen feilds,their personalitys clash constantly only after the colenal Saves the life of Hunter dose she realise that not all men are not Back stabing trying to force her to quit what they see as a mans world

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XyZspineZyX
10-23-2003, 03:24 AM
see even my descriptions go on for ever the passage i chose is towards the end after she has been assingned to the island Hay even if no one else enjoys it ..at least im enjoying doing it!

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XyZspineZyX
10-23-2003, 03:25 AM
It was pretty good /i/smilies/16x16_smiley-happy.gif

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XyZspineZyX
10-23-2003, 03:39 AM
It is good but is it a romance or action?
And the first mission is two lines of text... It needcs to be described more clearly.
I will set up a thread for my star Wars story. see how descriptive I am? particularly at the Obi Wan fight....

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XyZspineZyX
10-23-2003, 04:23 AM
is this plans for a novel or just a fanfic?

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XyZspineZyX
10-23-2003, 10:36 AM
It was a good read. It does need some work though. A bunch of spelling errors and a little more detail couldn't hurt. Also the story skips around a bunch and I felt that it focused a little to much on Kat being a female. I know her gender and that a woman can have problems fitting into a male dominated unit but it seemed to focus on her being hit on and badgered by the guys just a tad to much. Maybe not too much but their needs to be more detail and events that spread those parts out more evenly. I also felt that she was a little too excepting of Hunter's first passes at her, Maybe it's because time had passed so quickly in the story but it seemed strange to me. Sorry if it sounds like I didn't like it, I'm just trying to help. By posting this in public I figure you were ready for other people's judgment. Like I said it was a good read. I am not trying to come off as rude but maybe you should hand out a few copies and have them critiqued. It's just that the spelling was really bad. It almost looks like you are not used to writing in English or are not used to typing. Sorry if this came off offensive but I really did like the story, the little details about Kat reading Hunters lips through the glass was cool and the first mission was neat. If you have some more I'll read it. If your interested I could point out a few words that you managed to spell incorrectly on a regular basis.

XyZspineZyX
10-26-2003, 06:02 AM
Its both action and romance for a bit of spice

My first mission acctualy consists of over 400 pages and scanes over just 4 weeks!,so far I only wrote a small amount as it dose go into a lot of Description,from the Experaments preformed down to the people who acctualy work on her it gets pritty gory in places as i tend to describe the wounds.( they experaments are both mental and body related.inclouding being subjectet to vareouse gas's and cold showers folowd by a dose of electric shock therapy if she miss behaves..( which she dose continualy.)they keep her bound via a shackle wich is on a pully system ..another way to hold her down while the experiments are preformed.

the story has been accepted for publishing alreay the spelling has been corrected for them of couse!
and I accept all critasisam as long as it isent to offenseve!



Nebucadnezar wrote:
- It is good but is it a romance or action?
- And the first mission is two lines of text... It
- needcs to be described more clearly.
- I will set up a thread for my star Wars story. see
- how descriptive I am? particularly at the Obi Wan
- fight....
-


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XyZspineZyX
10-27-2003, 11:34 AM
cool,good luck
am i entitled to a free copy now? /i/smilies/16x16_smiley-very-happy.gif

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XyZspineZyX
10-27-2003, 11:38 AM
dark-shadows wrote:
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- the story has been accepted for publishing alreay
- the spelling has been corrected for them of couse!
- and I accept all critasisam as long as it isent to
- offenseve!
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What Publishing house if I may ask?

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XyZspineZyX
10-27-2003, 10:54 PM
When will it be published and where?
Are you gonna need proofreaders?

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10-28-2003, 02:01 PM
SKULLS_Hawk wrote:
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- dark-shadows wrote:
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-- the story has been accepted for publishing alreay
-- the spelling has been corrected for them of couse!
-- and I accept all critasisam as long as it isent to
-- offenseve!
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- What Publishing house if I may ask?
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I've had 2 offers but am not aloud to say who as yet am waiting on the best offer..so cant say as yet.I've got 2 proof readers an a typist working on my spelling as it is attrosiouse!.may need a 2nd oppinions though later on once the book is in its green form..(befor print).but have had a few offers of this already.

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10-28-2003, 02:23 PM
What's the book called?

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10-28-2003, 04:24 PM
Can we all get free copies?/i/smilies/16x16_smiley-happy.gif

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XyZspineZyX
10-28-2003, 04:27 PM
if not i would buy it, and then can i get ya to sign it?

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XyZspineZyX
10-28-2003, 10:44 PM
Thats great, keep us posted.

XyZspineZyX
10-29-2003, 10:02 AM
belive it or not i havent decided on a name as yet

1.Silent Salution

2.When Two Cells Collide

3.Shadows in the night- a silent salution.


I'm leaning towards 1 and 3 at the moment.

I was going to use my internet name as my writters name.

.Any Ideas will give the best one a mention in the dedications!

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XyZspineZyX
10-29-2003, 10:56 AM
I think #3 is a really good name. It sounds like something I would see on the shelf in a book store close to the Clancy books. Thats my vote.

XyZspineZyX
10-29-2003, 12:51 PM
yea # 3 sound good,


it would be cool to see our fourm name in it,and will it also have a picture of you in it too?

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XyZspineZyX
10-29-2003, 04:09 PM
you could dedicate it to "The Splinter Cell forum members"/i/smilies/16x16_smiley-happy.gif

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XyZspineZyX
11-03-2003, 06:10 AM
Aj6627 wrote:
- you could dedicate it to "The Splinter Cell forum


Your onn... I like that idea as it was the game that got me going! /i/smilies/16x16_smiley-happy.gif /i/smilies/16x16_smiley-happy.gif /i/smilies/16x16_smiley-wink.gif




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XyZspineZyX
11-03-2003, 09:48 PM
well do it then/i/smilies/16x16_smiley-wink.gif
Adn when is this book coming out?
And can we get some Advanced Readers Copies?/i/smilies/16x16_smiley-wink.gif
That's my 2 cents for today on this/i/smilies/16x16_smiley-happy.gif

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XyZspineZyX
11-09-2003, 03:53 AM
so what is the Title officially?
And how is getting it published coming?

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XyZspineZyX
11-20-2003, 11:07 PM
how is it coming and do you klnow yet when it will be published?

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